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400 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published January 21, 2014
"I'm beginning to miss the old Isa," he grumbled, "the one who deferred to her husband."
She grew solemn. "I hope not. She was the one who didn't believe in you when she should have. Who didn't stand up for herself."
- loc 1645
"...And you're right -- you aren't the same woman. But I'm not the same man, either."
Sadness spread over her face. "No, you're not." She seized his hands as her eyes met his. "There was always a darkness in you, and I accepted that because i knew it came from your service in the war. But you were never hard, as you are now. What happened to make you so hard?"
He stiffened. "My wife deserted me, that's what happened. I was left to pick up the pieces and be accused of--"
- loc 1356
Victor has never stopped looking for her whenever and wherever he could, his love for her now subsumed by his desire to bring her to justice for her crimes and to have revenge on her for breaking his heart. So when he learns that the subject of his investigation is a woman who has a talent for making paste jewellery… well, to say he’s keen to get started is an understatement.
While the story, once it gets going after this, is well-paced with a plenty of sexual tension between Victor and Isa and a devious twist on the part of Isa’s scheming relatives towards the end, the way things were set into motion was so contrived that it continued to annoy me throughout the rest of the novel, which was a shame, because it really isn’t a bad book.
The distrust that naturally exists between Victor and Isa and the conflict it causes between them is not strung out unnecessarily; so by around the halfway point, all has been confessed and they realise that they had both been pawns in the scheme to steal the royal jewels. But that doesn’t mean that everything in the garden is rosy, because although they have talked about the things that separated them, they are both nurturing deep-rooted suspicions which mean that they continue to hold back snippets of important information from each other.
On the one hand, I could understand their reasoning, but on the other I wanted to smack them both and tell them to work it out and move on!
I felt that the characterisation of both leads – and Victor especially – was rather thin. I was about halfway into the book and realised that I didn’t have much of a sense of who he really was. Of the two, Isa was probably the most well-rounded, and I liked the way that the timid young woman we meet at the beginning has become so much more independent and self-confident. But Victor remained fairly two-dimensional throughout the book; he was so consumed by resentment and suspicion that I often felt that was all there was to him. I can understand that this may have partly been because Isa doesn’t really know him, and that perhaps the author’s intent was for the reader to find out about Victor’s past when the heroine does (and if you haven’t read the previous book, then there will be gaps that need filling in) – but if that is the case, it’s very frustrating.
The fact that the protagonists are already married affords the author the chance to put in a couple of steamy sex-scenes fairly early on, but it did seem a bit of a stretch that the pair - who have been apart for almost ten years and who were married for only a week - would jump into bed so quickly, especially with so many unresolved issues between them. (And also that they would have such good memories about how much great sex they had in that one week of marriage ten years ago!)
When it comes down to it, I did enjoy When the Rogue Returns, but it had too many weaknesses for me to be able to rate it more highly. With some books, there are elements of characterisation or plot or emotional content that are so strong that it’s possible to overlook or underplay faults, but I’m afraid that wasn’t the case here. The elements that worked – the re-building of the trust between Isa and Victor, the side-plot involving the very sweetly nerdish Baron Lochlaw and the machinations of Isa’s evil relations – weren’t quite good enough to erase my memories of the massive coincidence at the beginning and the lack of depth in the characterisation.
If you’ve read the first book in the series, and are someone who likes to read each book in a series, then I’d say you’ve nothing to lose by reading this one as it’s certainly an engaging read. But if you you’re thinking of picking this one up as representative of the series, I’d advise reading When the Duke Desires first as I thought it was a much stronger book.
He’d been so stupidly in love that he would have believed anything she told him.