Failure to Make Round Rotis: Poems on rebellion, resilience and relationships

by Mehak Goyal

In this powerful debut collection, Mehak Goyal writes vividly of the experiences of young Indian women today. She explores the doubt that you carry while adulting, the toxic relationships you chase because you deem yourself unworthy, the guilt and insecurity that haunts you when you finally find that deserving love, the tug and pull of love and hate with yourself, the dark reality of arranged marriage and the unfair expectations and casual discrimination that women face every day.

Every poem will resonate. Every line will draw blood.

Genres: Poetry

216 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 18, 2023

Reviews

[Shreemanti · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" by Mehak Goyal is a delightful collection of poems that encapsulates profound themes using simple yet impactful language. Despite its concise length, this book manages to convey a range of emotions and messages that linger in the reader's mind.

One of the striking features of this collection is its unique format. The poems are succinct, often consisting of just a few lines, and they conclude with a single thought-provoking line. It's a format that catches you off guard, leaving you contemplative and intrigued. The illustrations complement the poetry beautifully, adding an extra layer of depth and whimsy to the verses.

As suggested by the title, the book primarily explores the challenges and struggles women face in a patriarchal society. It boldly addresses issues related to gender bias and inequality, offering a fresh perspective on these deeply ingrained problems. Each poem is like a small yet powerful rebellion against the prevailing misogyny, making the reader pause and reflect on the stark realities of our world.

While the dominant theme revolves around feminism, "Failure to Make Round Rotis" also touches on other relatable aspects of life. It delves into the complexities of 'Adulting,' a phase that many readers will find themselves nodding along with in agreement. Another theme explored is 'Growing Up,' which resonates with anyone who has navigated the challenging journey from childhood to adulthood.

This collection is an excellent choice for those seeking a brief yet impactful read. It's a book you can easily pick up and finish in one sitting, yet it will leave you pondering its messages long after turning the last page. In its brevity, "Failure to Make Round Rotis" delivers valuable life lessons and encourages readers to reflect on the world around them.

[Astha Vyas · Rating 3 out of 5]

“Failure to Make Round Rotis” is a collection of poems that scans through the experiences of young Indian women. The poems seem honest and relatable, and they meander through a wide range of topics, from relationships and self-doubt to societal pressures.

I was particularly intrigued by the title which is a metaphor for the challenges that Indian women face in trying to live up to the expectations of their families and society.

Poems in this collection, explore similar themes. In “The Arranged Marriage,” the speaker describes the anxiety and fear that she feels. In “The Body,” she writes about the pressure to conform to society’s beauty standards. While in “The Mother,” she reflects on the sacrifices that her own mother made.

This book offers a perspective on the experiences of young Indian women. Goyal’s poems are honest and they offer a voice to those who are often silenced.

The heart of the book is in the right place, and the poems capture emotions in a way that is relatable. Mehak’s use of imagery and symbolism is particularly effective, and she creates a vivid and memorable portrait of the experiences of young Indian women. Although, some poems were unique but I feel, a lot of them lacked character.

Overall, this book is a decent collection of poems that is sure to resonate with readers of all backgrounds.

[Aditi Debnath · Rating 5 out of 5]

Mehak Goyal's poetry collection, "Failure to Make Round Rotis," emerges as a potent exploration of the challenges women encounter in their everyday existence. This literary work not only candidly exposes the harsh realities women face but also serves as a source of empowerment, motivating younger generations to assert themselves.

Within this collection, the poems unflinchingly delve into topics such as relationships and family dynamics, portraying a raw and honest portrayal. The author notably underscores societal expectations that burden women when they fall short of making perfectly round rotis. Furthermore, the book sheds light on the complexities of married life, the adjustment to a new environment, and other pertinent issues.

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" undeniably serves as an inspiration to many. Its standout quality lies in the author's fearless expression of truth. I wholeheartedly recommend this book to a wide readership.

[Mugdha Mahajan · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Mehak Goyal's 'Failure to Make Round Rotis' feels like a colorful journey through what it's like to be a young Indian woman. Her poems are like windows into the messiness, worries, and victories of life. Some, like 'The Playlist,' hit you in the feels, capturing the music that makes life special. 'A Woman's Lexicon' is like a cool rhythm, talking about how society sees women. Goyal's take on bad relationships feels real, like looking in a mirror and finding freedom.

What makes this collection cool is how Goyal turns normal stuff, like not making round rotis, into deep thoughts about life's little flaws. 'Failure to Make Round Rotis' isn't just a bunch of poems; it's a fun, personal trip through the crazy ride of growing up. Mehak Goyal's energy jumps off the pages, making it a must-read if you want a poetic friend for life's awesome, messy journey."

[Emi Kyndiah · Rating 4 out of 5]

Failure to make round rotis 4/5

My favourite lines --
Chasing strangers-
A smile plastered across my face
Searching for kindness, friendship,
Or even a ticket in the lottery of love.

Failure to make round rotis is a debut poetry book by Mehak Goyal. It is a collection of poems on rebellion, resilience and relationships. There are 8 sections of poems which vividly describes the lives of women right from her childhood years upto a point where she becomes an adult woman.
Each and every poem resonates and seems a delight to read about. My favourite ones are
Lottery of love
Loneliness
A toast to introverts
Garden &
Adulting
There's also the most aesthetic illustrations I've seen in a while, especially in a book! As a young Indian woman, I felt like the author penned down the experiences of each and every young Indian woman out there in a judgemental society we live in .

I believe this book evokes every emotions , thus making it such a profound and impactful read.
This is one poem book which I'll always recommend to all of my fellow young Indian woman.

[Gaurav Jaiswal · Rating 5 out of 5]

Failure To Make Round Rotis by Mehak Goyal is a beautiful collection of poetry that explores themes of growth, healing, and empowerment, particularly from a woman's perspective. Mehak's minimalist style and evocative language make her poems accessible and relatable, touching on subjects like love, self-acceptance, and resilience. The poems in "Failure to Make Round Rotis" are raw and honest, and they offer a glimpse into the lives of young Indian women. It written in a simple, accessible style. Author's use of everyday language makes her poems relatable to a wide audience. It is a thought-provoking and important read for anyone who wants to understand the experiences of young Indian women today. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys poetry or is interested in the topic of gender equality. But this book is a must read for every women out there.

[Cheshta Abrol (xshadesoflife) · Rating 4 out of 5]

PLOT: This book is a collection of poems about resilience, rebellion and relationship.


REVIEW: ● This is the first poetry book I read that actually had way too many poems but, the time spent on reading them, was worth it.
● There were poems I didn't relate to but, there were many that made me read them twice or thrice. Those poems struck my heart like a bullet and remained seated for a very long time. That's the kind of impact this book gives.
● The poems challenge so many social stigmas our society blatantly lays upon us; each one characterized for a particular stage of life. The hypocrisy, the contradictions, the injustice, the oppression, all were way to visible in the way the poems were depicted. The illustrations were a cherry on top of the cake.
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Overall, there were poems I enjoyed more than the other and there are poems I am going to revisit because of their relevance but, above all that, I like how the poet wove the poems in the metaphor of day to day mundane chores and, that's why, the title is very interesting and apt.

[The Biblioraptor (Ankit) · Rating 3 out of 5]

The other day, I read a post saying that the modern (Indian) poetic landscape was a sparse one. What I hope the person meant is that since everyone is a poet, in our times, there are not many voices that actually stand for something. But if that is not the case, it would make me very worried about the current state of affairs in the department of readers. Over the past month I had the chance to read Mehak Goyal’s bestselling debut book, Failure to Make Round Rotis: Poems on Rebellion, Resilience and Relationships (2023). I think it is a good time to put things into perspective as I review Goyal’s poetry, in this post.

Let me begin by drawing up a very brief (somewhat feminist) history of Indian poetry in English, following which, one might be able to view how Goyal fits into and fares in this setting:

The roots of Indian poetry in English can be traced back to the early 19th century when British colonizers introduced English education to India. The earliest Indian poets in English were often products of this educational system. Henry Louis Vivian Derozio, a teacher at Hindu College in Kolkata, is considered one of the pioneers. His poems, like “The Fakeer of Jungheera” and “To India,” challenged the prevailing social norms and advocated for Indian self-awareness and liberation from colonial oppression. Toru Dutt, another similarly inspired and impactful poet, was a pioneer among Indian women poets writing in English. Her collection Ancient Ballads and Legends of Hindustan (posthumously published in 1882) showcased her exceptional talent in blending Indian and Western themes post her return to India from Europe, brimming with mythological references.

The Bengal Renaissance, a cultural and intellectual movement in Bengal, played a significant role in shaping Indian English poetry. Rabindranath Tagore was a towering figure of this period. His collection Gitanjali won him the Nobel Prize in Literature in 1913, introducing Indian poetry in English to a global audience. Around the same time, we see the emergence of women poets like Sarojini Naidu and Kamala Das, though the latter would go on to write for much longer. Naidu’s poetry often celebrates India’s cultural heritage, like that of Tagore.

Post Independence, Indian poets in English began to explore new themes and styles. Kamala Das emerged as a fearless voice of female sexuality and identity in the post-colonial era. Her works, such as “The Sirens” and “The Sunshine Cat,” delve into themes of love, desire, and the struggles of being a woman in a patriarchal society. Gauri Deshpande explored somewhat similar themes of feminism and modernity; the inner conflicts and complexities of women’s lives in post-independence India.

The 1970s witnessed the emergence of a feminist movement in India, and this was mirrored in Indian Poetry through Imtiaz Dharker and Eunice de Souza. They explored themes of gender inequality, domesticity, and body politics. Eunice de Souza’s poem “Marriages are Made” humorously critiqued the institution of marriage, offering a sharp feminist perspective.

Rushdie’s Midnight’s Children marked a turning point in Indian literature; though a novel, its lyrical prose remains akin to poetry. Rushdie’s success inspired a generation of Indian writers to experiment with language and form. Poets like Arundhati Subramaniam, Meena Alexander, among others, emerged during this period. Arundhathi Subramaniam’s poems touch upon spirituality and personal growth, while Meena Alexander’s work explores the immigrant experience and the complexities of identity.

The 21st century has witnessed a flourishing of Indian poetry in English with a focus on identity, globalization, and cultural fusion. Poets like Meena Kandasamy, whose collection Touch explores caste and gender issues, and Tishani Doshi, known for her evocative and feminist poetry, have gained international recognition. Sampurna Chattarji explores themes ranging from mythology to contemporary social issues. Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni is known for her narrative poetry and her exploration of the immigrant and diasporic experience. Many contemporary Indian poets writing in English, often incorporate elements from their native languages and experiment with form and style, as well.

In the mid-2010s as a result of the increasing use of social media platforms like Instagram for creative expression, writers began sharing short, bite-sized poems that were easy to consume in the fast-paced world of social media. This form of poetry, aptly termed ‘instapoetry,’ became particularly popular among younger generations who were drawn to its simplicity and relatability.

Rupi Kaur, a Canadian poet and artist of Indian descent, is often considered to be a forerunner of instapoetry. Her debut collection, Milk and Honey (2014), became a bestseller and introduced a new generation of readers to poetry through social media. Poets such as Lang Leav, Atticus Poetry, and Amanda Lovelace gained popularity.

Somewhere among these varied forms and themes, lies Mehak Goyal’s poetry. In her book Failure to Make Round Rotis, she experiments with style, form and illustrations, very reminiscent of the instapoetry tradition. Goyal attempts to put into poetry, the trials and tribulations of a modern woman, her falling out with “tradition,” or at least whatever the conservative part of the society thinks of it as, and the weight of expectations. Poems like “Report Card”, “My Façade”, and “Her Requirement for Groom”, focus more on context and form, to convey meaning, while some others rely on straightforward sentences broken haphazardly. What is common in them is the angst of a female.

Like many female poets who write modern confessional poetry, Goyal too follows Kamala Das in spirit and Rupi Kaur in form. What I mean by that is that she pens the Indian experience into a universal format.

Despite the aforementioned merits, Goyal’s poetry falls flat in more instances than when it successfully stirs the readers’ hearts and minds. The simplistic lines lack much stylistic sophistication, which makes them somewhat tasteless and one is faced with a poem that just anyone may replicate. As a result, there is little that can be called a “signature” of Mehak Goyal’s poetry. In addition, there are many poems that seem to repeat themselves, either in meaning or in form, throughout the book. For example, “Report Card” and “Result Card” could have benefitted from some editing, as well as the book itself. I personally feel that a poetry collection that exceeds a hundred pages either attempts to say too much, or has nothing significant to say.

Another gaping flaw, as is the general case with instapoety, is its heavy reliance on illustrations. Illustrations are always a welcome addition, but an accessory is what they can be at most. Poetry is meant to be conveyed through words, and I say that without being a poetic puritan.

The one redeeming factor that I emphasize is that these poems are easily accessible to a very wide audience, and they might even please those least interested in poetry as a genre. Goyal’s borderline prosaic verse is a great place to start. With no requirement for reading between the lines, even an amateur may fully grasp what is meant for them. For the more experienced, I would recommend picking up Jeet Thayil, Ranjit Hoskote, Nirupama Menon Rao, Meena Kandasamy, or Tishani Doshi.

That said, I often end up stating that some books are not meant for everyone, but contrarily, I have found a book this time that I can say is for everyone. I think that is a win enough in any poet’s book.

[Muskan Gupta · Rating 3 out of 5]

'Failure To Make Round Rotis' is a decent poetry collection that captivates the reader attention right from its title to the highly relatable poems that unravels, celebrates, challenges different facets of life women go through everyday.

This extensive poetry collection that was divided into eight sections, has done a commendable job in depicting the poems as part of core memories and experiences of every woman's life in her trajectory from childhood years to an innocent young girl and to an adult.

To cite an example, in a poem named 'First Prize' a young girl who's eager to show her tennis game prize, a golden trophy to her parents, finds out they're busy with their own lives and she clutches the trophy to sleep but the next morning she feels..
'...while my parents rush for their morning jog.
My school bus honks.
I stare at my golden cup one last time,
its gleam not reaching my eyes.'

These simple lines are enough to describe the need for emotional presence of parents, how even winning the world might seem pointless when they're not able to celebrate it with loved ones.

The subtle writing like this in this collection makes one take deepdive into their own life, confront the experiences and emotions that were once buried within.

The displeasing thing was the writing could've been polished, some poems were too abstract and failed to make their point, which disturbed the flow of reading. In addition, the collection lacks a certain lyrical fluidity that makes poetry alluring.

The abstract yet meaningful illustrations throughout the book are a cherry on top, making this book a worthy companion in one's book collection.

Overall,in a world where one can find a good book to read anyday, 'Failure To Make Round Rotis' is a rare example of a book that reads us.

[noorthebookworm · Rating 5 out of 5]

FAILURE TO MAKE ROUND ROTIS: Poems on rebellion, resilience and relationships.

for those who feel the urge to overcompensate for their failure to make round rotis.
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"The knowledge of cooking doesn't come pre-installed in a vagina."--
#chimamandangoziadichie
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The title itself gives a fair idea about the theme of the content. Yes, it's feminist but not anti 'anything' or anyone or any gender. It's more of musings of the writer, like a published journal of the author which has been penned in a lyrical, prose & poetic form. It depicts the entire journey of the author, her struggles, pain, thoughts..through various stages of her life. It's personal, it's heart rending & will make you teary eyed but at the same time, it's inspiring & gives a warrior vibe of fighting back for yourself. This book has the capability to leave a long hangover with some poems and daunting thoughts which are going to haunt forever.
Each section is demarcated by twin black pages which helps in ease of access and/or come back to for rereading. Some poems have become my favorite but the black & white illustrations by shikhargaur are the icing on the cake. They are so perfect. This is definitely going to be one of my bedside table book.
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Prologue: ice lolly recipe
It gives the perfect warm up to what is to follow.

Medal of Participation
The first poem "fly" eiterates how a mother gives wings to her daughter. The section made me emotional right in the beginning itself.
"Privilege" reminded me, how privileged some people are to have a dad.
"Report card" made me smile because my parents never applauded nor scolded whether I got an A or E.
"Exam boards" made me clinch, reminded me how my son had a similar experience at the hands of an unkind, impatient, aggressive teacher.
"First prize" reminded me of a classmate at school whose parents were not even there to have breakfast with her or send/check her tiffin. I felt really sad thinking what she had to go through.
I loved "how to lose gracefully", teaching values at a young age are so important.
I loved "bully". Sharing an excerpt;
"That was really mean.
Does that make you feel
better about yourself?"
"The fall" is one poem which each child of the present generation needs to read.
"My crowned childhood" made me nostalgic.
"The couch" was beautiful.

Adulting

The bottle of promises

Lottery of love

Wallet of happiness

How to do laundry

The Indian matchmaker

A woman's lexicon

Epilogue: one door closed

I can keep on praising this book but for space of writing. It's relatable, brings back memories, hidden emotions & is nostalgic.
The language is simple & the writing style, easily comprehendible. The thoughts are absorbing, melting like butter on a warm toast.

Totally recommend it.
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[Sameer Gudhate · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" by Mehak Goyal is a remarkable debut collection that delves into the poignant experiences of contemporary Indian women. With her vivid and evocative prose, Goyal fearlessly explores themes of love, relationships, societal expectations, and the complex journey into adulthood.

Through a series of powerful poems, Goyal offers an unapologetic portrayal of the challenges faced by young Indian women. She delves into the intricacies of love, self-doubt, and the weight of societal norms, especially in the context of arranged marriages. Her poetry serves as a social commentary, shedding light on gender disparities and the sacrifices women are often compelled to make.

Goyal's writing style is both compelling and emotive. Her words resonate on a profound level, capturing the thoughts and emotions of countless women. With each piece, she invites readers to walk alongside her on a journey of self-discovery and empowerment.

The collection intricately weaves themes of identity, empowerment, and societal pressures. Goyal's exploration of these themes prompts readers to reflect on their own experiences and challenges the norms that have long been accepted.

The poems carry a strong emotional weight, inviting readers to empathize with the struggles faced by the characters. Goyal's ability to evoke empathy and resonance through her words is a testament to her skill as a poet.

The authenticity and rawness of Goyal's writing is a notable strength. Her ability to address profound themes with honesty and clarity creates an immediate connection with readers. While the collection is emotionally charged and thought-provoking, it might benefit from a broader range of perspectives to offer a more comprehensive exploration of the themes.

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" is a compelling collection that brings to light the voices of young Indian women. Goyal's courage to delve into societal complexities and address them head-on is commendable. The collection prompts conversations and contemplation, making it a relevant and impactful read.

Mehak Goyal's "Failure to Make Round Rotis" is a thought-provoking debut that navigates the journey of young Indian women with honesty and insight. Through her evocative poetry, she creates a space for essential discussions on gender, relationships, and societal norms. This collection is a testament to Goyal's ability to craft impactful narratives that resonate long after the final page is turned.

[Chandra Sekhar · Rating 4 out of 5]

Failure to Make Round Rotis is a collection of poems by Mehak Goyal that explores the experiences of young Indian women. The poems are raw and honest, and they tackle a wide range of topics, including love, relationships, family, gender, and societal expectations.

Goyal's poetry is both beautiful and thought-provoking. She has a gift for capturing the complexities of the human experience, and her poems are often both funny and heartbreaking. In "Failure to Make Round Rotis," for example, Goyal writes about the pressure that Indian women face to be perfect homemakers. She describes how she feels like a failure when she can't make perfectly round rotis, and how she feels like she's letting her family down.

Another poem, "The Arranged Marriage," explores the complex emotions that can surround an arranged marriage. Goyal writes about the fear, excitement, and uncertainty that she felt when she was first engaged to be married. She also writes about the pressure to conform to traditional gender roles, and how she felt like she had to give up her own dreams in order to please her family.

Failure to Make Round Rotis is a powerful collection of poems that will resonate with anyone who has ever felt like an outsider or who has struggled to fit in. Goyal's poetry is a reminder that we are all imperfect, and that it's okay to not be perfect. It's also a reminder that we are not alone, and that there are other women out there who are going through the same things that we are.

I highly recommend Failure to Make Round Rotis to anyone who is looking for a thought-provoking and moving read. It is a book that will stay with you long after you finish reading it.

Here are some of the things I loved about the book:

The writing is raw and honest. Goyal doesn't shy away from difficult topics, and she writes about her experiences with vulnerability and authenticity.
The poems are relatable. Goyal's poems capture the experiences of young Indian women in a way that is both universal and specific.
The poems are thought-provoking. Goyal's poems will make you think about your own experiences and the world around you.
Overall, I thought Failure to Make Round Rotis was an excellent book. It is a collection of poems that will stay with me long after I finish reading it. I highly recommend it to anyone who is looking for a thought-provoking and moving read.

I can give 4/5

[Harshita · Rating 3 out of 5]

Failure to Make Rotis is a collection of micro tales and poems.
These poems are based on themes like Marriage, Adulting, love, and many more themes.

Most poems revolve around a woman's POV, where she fails to meet society's expectations. The poems are interesting, and the illustrations are there, making the book visually appealing.

Mehak has used a cocktail of literary devices like conceit, apostrophe, metonymy & synecdoche and many more to give her poems a variation.

Each poem triggered a particular emotion, and I would love to discuss some of them with you.

There were poems that a broken heart can relate to (Memories), some which lovers can literally dedicate to their partner to express their love (If it weren't for you), and some that questioned our actions (friends, Start-up).

But let me get honest with you, while some poems resonated with me, there were a few where I felt Mehak had just written about matters from a stereotypical mindset, and I was not okay with that. Keeping in mind the changing mindset today, poets and authors can change how people perceive things, and I wish Mehak had thought about that when writing some of her poems. On this note, I want to mention two poems that really disappointed me, and I couldn't help bust discuss them with you.

Mehak has written a poem titled 'How to write a feminist bestseller'. My first instinct was I wished the author had read better books before stereotyping the bestsellers in her poem. There are some really beautiful books out there that do not match the 'feminist bestseller' description mentioned in the poem.

There was yet another poem titled 'result card', which made me see a lot of red flags there. While the poet tried to talk about depression and suicide, I was left fuming at the poem's starting point. Being someone who has been through depression and has come out of it, this poem left me fuming. A person does not go into depression because they didn't get the branded clothes they wanted.

As I read the last poem and closed the book, I felt that Mehak has the ability to write so much more from her personal experiences...Something real, something different, something that can compel us to think about a change we want to see.

[Dholakia · Rating 5 out of 5]

The first thing that got my attention was the title. I think it is meant to attract attention. I love to read poetry and I was hooked first on the title and then its blurb. So, I had to read this debut collection by Mehak Goyal. “Failure To Make Round Rotis: Poems on Rebellion, Resilience and Relationships” as the name suggests narrates the experiences of young women and articulates their thoughts on these experiences.
Girls, women, ladies, however, one may address them, have been on a receiving end since God knows when. Their upbringings tell them to do certain things, to abstain from doing certain things, and they are judged at every instance. If the girls cannot make round rotis, people think something is wrong with them and they will even blame their mothers. The title cannot be better to convey the feeling of anger, and frustration the women have been feeling over the centuries. They have lived under constant fear and insecurity.
But time is changing, albeit slowly. Poems like these are meant to be a wake-up call for all – both men and women. Everyone whatever may be their gender should be treated with utmost respect and as a fellow human being. Everyone deserves a chance to be loved, to be with someone who respects them and accepts them as they are. These poems cover the rainbow of emotions as may be experienced by these girls at different points in time. The book is presented in different parts and each part has a theme, like childhood, adulating, love life, relationships, and marriage, among other things. The poems are presented in easy language and in a manner which appeals to the readers. The title of the poems, the illustrations accompanying the poems, and the vivid description of life events are some of the points which make these poems stand out.
Last but not least, A Woman’s Lexicon which is the last segment of the book is quite something. She has touched upon so many subjects and every subject has been dealt with deftly. I was in awe of the clarity of her thoughts and the shock value of some poems. The author has a vivid imagination and has her way with words. I am happy that I got a chance to read this book. It was a thought-provoking read and books like these should be read widely. Don’t miss this one.

[Review with Sohini · Rating 4 out of 5]

Figuring out a woman has been described as the toughest job for anyone out there. Thousands of memes and posts talk so much about women, but reality hits differently.

I picked up a book called “Failure to make round rotis”. The very apt title to describe a woman by society is that if she fails to manage the kitchen then there is no means for her existence. Not only men but also different sectors of women think the same. I was unable to figure out the reason behind such a title but after reading and realizing each of the pages it was pretty clear.

The book is a collection of poems. Divided into 8 long chapters consisting of 10-15 poems each. As soon as you open the page from where it begins, you would be directly landing in a completely relatable yet so different atmosphere. The kind of effort the author has put into is reflected in each page. The chapters are in black aesthetic with white liner illustrations which just we're glued to my eyes. Simple realistic drawings on each page describe the inner feeling she must be going through each day of her life. The doubts, baggage, excitement of new experiences, and adulting are explored through the explanations.

The birth of Self-doubts leading to Unworthiness is what draws you back and put you away from your dreams. The guilt and insecurities that appears forward when you want to love or after finally finding the one for yourself. The intimidation to fulfill the expectations of in-laws and their casualties always breaks within you. These poems will be injected until you bleed. The hand tries to grab you from behind out in the streets and lags you underneath your bed.

This book is a bundle of a journey from a baby girl to a grown-up lady then a woman and finally an oldie. There's nothing particular chapter that I would like to mention. Each poem holds different emotions carrying out. So, please read and feel. Not any gender-biased book anybody who knows how to read, can read this masterpiece. I loved the book. Loved her writing. In general the book was a feel-worthy book.

Yes! I've failed to make round rotis and guess what! would be failing in the future as well.

[Kimberly · Rating 3 out of 5]

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" by Mehak Goyal took me on an emotional rollercoaster through her life journey, from childhood to adulthood, using short verses that felt like personal poems written in free verse. However, my experience with this book left me with mixed feelings.

In Goyal's writing, I found moments of genuine vulnerability and introspection that resonated deeply with me. Some of her poems beautifully captured the essence of her emotions, making me feel like I was right there with her on her journey of self-discovery.

On the flip side, I encountered a few verses that left me scratching my head, struggling to make sense of their meaning. These moments of confusion left me wondering about the purpose of the book as a whole. It seemed like the author was experimenting with her writing style, which can be both intriguing and perplexing.

One of the book's challenges for me was its lack of a clear narrative structure. The poems often felt like unfiltered rants about the author's life, which, while cathartic for her, left me feeling disconnected from a coherent story. I couldn't help but wonder if there was a deeper message or theme that I was missing.

Perhaps the most significant drawback of "Failure to Make Round Rotis" was its overall tone. Reading this collection left me with a sense of melancholy. Goyal delved deep into her personal struggles and disappointments, and while I appreciate literature that explores adversity and resilience, the pervasive gloominess in this book left me feeling somewhat depressed.

In the end, "Failure to Make Round Rotis" offers an intimate glimpse into Mehak Goyal's life, told through her personal verses. Some of these verses touched my heart and made me empathize with her journey, but others left me feeling lost and disconnected. The overarching theme of personal struggles and disappointments made this collection quite heavy, and it might not be everyone's cup of tea. Whether this book resonates with you will depend on your preference for poetry that leans heavily on raw emotion and self-expression. For me, it was a mixed bag of emotions that left me pondering long after I had turned the last page.

[Prerna Shambhavee · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" by Mehak Goyal is a poignant exploration of women's lives and struggles that resonates on a deeply relatable level. The book delves into a myriad of themes, seamlessly blending poetic verses with evocative illustrations to create a narrative that is both compelling and emotionally resonant.

The book encapsulates themes like love, affection, adulting, marriage, and self-love, all of which intertwine to form a rich tapestry of the female experience. Mehak Goyal's skillful storytelling captures the essence of these themes with a raw authenticity that makes the reader feel an immediate connection to the characters and their journeys.

One of the book's strongest aspects is its unflinching portrayal of sensitive issues that women often face, including abusive relationships, sexual assaults, and the stifling grip of patriarchy. Author takes the reader on a profound journey through the struggles of these women, showcasing their strength to rise against oppressive forces and societal expectations.

The illustrations in the book play a vital role in enhancing the emotional impact of the narrative. They complement the poetic verses perfectly, creating a harmonious blend of words and images that magnify the book's impact. Each illustration serves as a visual representation of the emotions and experiences that the characters go through, allowing the reader to dive deeper into their world.

Ultimately, "Failure to Make Round Rotis" is a beautifully crafted tapestry of life's struggles and triumphs, capturing the essence of the female experience with empathy and authenticity. Mehak Goyal's storytelling prowess, coupled with the evocative illustrations, creates a book that resonates on both a personal and universal level. This book not only shines a light on the challenges women face but also celebrates their resilience, courage, and the power to break free from societal confines. It's an emotional journey that leaves a lasting impression, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences and those of the women around them.

[Aditya Anand · Rating 4 out of 5]

With its vibrant red cover adorned with exquisite hand-drawn illustrations by Meena Rajasekaran, "Failure to Make Round Rotis" by Mehak Goyal, beautifully designed by Shikhar Gaur, presents an exceptionally powerful and thought-provoking journey.

The allure to pick up this collection of poems is irresistible. Its intriguing title is just the beginning – the book unfolds into eight chapters, accompanied by a prologue and an epilogue. Each chapter reveals an array of poems, their thematic essence hinted at by titles like "Adulting," "Lottery of Love," "Wallet of Happiness," and "How to do Laundry."

Mehak Goyal's poems delve into deeply personal realms, enveloping a variety of emotions. With a powerful narrative style, filled with simple yet powerful words, the author candidly shares her life experiences and memories. Her vivid descriptions often transport readers to envision the unfolding incidents before their eyes. The poems induce chuckles, as seen in pieces like "Meal Plan" and "Panditji," evoke somber introspection through "The Bottle of Promises" and "Catcall, Attack, Harass," and also makes the reader angry with poems like "Arranged Marriage" and "His Requirements for Bride." This literary journey resembles a roller-coaster, filled with emotional crests and troughs. The hand-drawn illustrations adorning each page provide an added layer of depth, amplifying the impact of the verses.

After reading each chapter's poems in their entirety, a second reading accompanied by a focus on the illustrations leads to a more enriched experience.

Poetry wields a unique ability to articulate inner voices effectively. It accomplishes in a few lines what paragraphs & prose may struggle to achieve. As the author shares her perspective and experience, women who have been through the same experiences will find the same palpable and often triggering. Its high time that the misogyny, male-privilege & sexism are called out vocally and an introspection happens so that the societal norms are not biased and restrictive towards women.

[Padmajha [PJ] Me and My Bookshelf · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book commences with a captivating prologue that immediately drew me in. It comprises poetry divided into 8 distinct sections, culminating in a thought-provoking epilogue. Notably, the dedication and a poignant quote by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie caught my attention from the outset.
Navigating themes of rebellion, resilience, and relationships, the poems, as eloquently described by the author, encapsulate a range of subjects. These verses delve into toxic relationships, harassment, superficial friendships, the intricacies of single life, the nuances of social drinking, love, heartbreak, and more.
Through these poems, a compelling narrative emerges, shedding light on the societal perception of women while advocating for embracing one's authentic self in defiance of societal norms. This thematic resonance also lends meaning to the title, emphasizing that even trivial matters like failing to make round rotis aren't catastrophic in the grand scheme of things.
The poems traverse the spectrum from childhood to adulthood, effectively capturing the diverse emotions associated with each life stage. The collection unflinchingly confronts the somber realities of womanhood, yet does so with a remarkably accessible language. Many verses are likely to resonate deeply with readers, creating a strong connection.
Particular poems that stood out include "First Prize," "PMS," "A Women’s Lexicon," "Opinions," and "A Restaurant Monologue." Notably, the accompanying illustrations complement the thematic essence of each poem. A unique feature is a full-page illustration at the beginning of each section, creatively depicting the step-by-step process of making rotis, aligning metaphorically with the collection's exploration from childhood through womanhood.
In summation, this anthology is a commendable collection of poetry that artfully weaves through the intricate tapestries of womanhood. It addresses subjects often relegated to the sidelines as mere female expectations. I would rate it 4/5 stars.

[Bibliomane · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" is a captivating collection of poems that eloquently delves into the unique experiences of young Indian women. The anthology is thoughtfully organized into eight distinct themes, each offering a profound exploration of various facets of a young woman's life, encompassing subjects like relationships, heartache, marriage, and societal expectations.

Within this collection, the poems stand out for their unfiltered and sincere portrayal of the innermost thoughts and emotions of young Indian women. Some verses resonate universally with women from all backgrounds, transcending cultural boundaries, while others seem more intimately connected to the author's own experiences.

The author's remarkable talent shines through as she skillfully weaves a tapestry of these young women's journeys, navigating the unpredictable terrain of childhood, the challenges of adulthood, the relentless grip of insecurities, the haunting burden of guilt, the complex love-hate relationship with oneself, the toxicity of certain relationships, and the beauty of nurturing both self-love and healthy connections with others. Additionally, the collection delves into the intricate dynamics of marriage and the unjust expectations unfairly placed upon women.

Speaking of the book's presentation, the red cover exudes sophistication and draws the reader in. The title, "Failure to Make Round Rotis," is intriguing in itself, offering a glimpse into the overarching themes of the book - the struggles and emotional odyssey of women. The illustrations within the book are not only visually appealing but also complement the poems beautifully, adding an extra layer of depth to the reading experience.

I can surely say that poems within this collection will undoubtedly strike a chord with readers, touching their hearts and igniting reflection. I wholeheartedly recommend "Failure to Craft Perfect Rotis" to anyone seeking a fresh and insightful perspective on poetry, especially those eager to explore the intricate world of young Indian women's lives.

[Jayoti Mondal · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dear sweet sweet friend!

As soon as gods gifted me some time to revel in poetry, I snatched it and spend it reading some poems I came across in a book. This is a short letter and I am writing it quite in haste to talk about this poetry book I have been reading. The book is interestingly named “Failure to Make Round Rotis” and it is penned by Mehek Goyal. Funny how I never came across the poet, given how some of her poems are urgent and striking in nature.
By now, you must find the title as mentioned ‘interesting’. I remember how my initial foray into making rotis was a failure and I can somewhat, make round rotis now but I still remain an amateur when it comes to cooking. I would not be able to cook even if somebody holds me at gunpoint save a few food items. Would Maggi count?

Foolery apart, this book has some poems that were intense. It brought back some memories and invoked some emotions, some residual and some long-hidden ones. I have attached some images for your viewing, and you can see through the annotations and writings that how much I have enjoyed them.
Can you imagine that is a debut collection of poems by the poet? She does a marvellous job at casting images of the experiences young women collect while they live their lives, trying to make something meaningful out of it. She charts her way through the undulating terrains of childhood, adulting, the insecurities faced, the guilts that sink their hooks and never let peace and forgiveness in, the love-hate relationship one has with themself, toxic relationships and of healthy love with oneself and another, of marriage and the discrimination and unrealistic expectations asked from women.
I must say that there are some poems that I did enjoy more than the others and there are some that did not stand up to my liking but as I said, my friend, it is a debut collection and for the starters, she has done a job much commendable at that!
So, if you are in need of poetry and you would like to read someone new, you can start from here.

[Prajwal Shettigar · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Failure To Make Round Rotis" by Mehak Goyal is a striking debut collection of poems that delves deep into the complex lives of young Indian women in today's society. Mehak's words are both poignant and unflinchingly honest, painting a vivid picture of the challenges, doubts, and triumphs that shape the journey of self-discovery and empowerment.

Through a series of evocative poems, she navigates a range of themes, from the uncertainties that come with adulting to the toxic relationships that women often find themselves trapped in due to a sense of unworthiness. The way she skillfully captures the haunting emotions of guilt and insecurity that can accompany the search for true and deserving love, reveals the raw vulnerability that exists beneath the surface.

One of the most striking aspects of this collection is Mehak's exploration of the internal struggle between self-love and self-doubt. Her words resonate deeply as she examines the complex relationship we have with ourselves, shedding light on the tug-of-war between feelings of worthiness and inadequacy.

My favourite poem from the book is “Outlandish Aspirations” which encourages us to have bigger dreams because nothing is impossible. Sharing a few snippets from this poem -
I can’t walk but I want to run.
I can’t articulate but I want to write.
I can’t float but I want to swim.

But I remember yesterday –
I couldn’t stand.
I couldn’t think originally.
I couldn’t get over aquaphobia.

I can,
I want to,
I will.

Throughout "Failure To Make Round Rotis", Mehak doesn't shy away from addressing the casual discrimination and unequal treatment that women are meted out to on a daily basis. Her words are a rallying cry against these injustices, a call to action for a more inclusive and equitable world. Overall, it is a wonderful collection of poetry that not only captures the essence of modern womanhood but also challenges societal norms and expectations.

[Carlos Luis · Rating 4 out of 5]

Poems that wake up your relationships, and make you resilient and a rebel forever.

A significant aspect of poetry is its inherent subjectivity and the challenge of translating personal emotions and experiences. One can notice this excellently done by Mehak Goyal in her poetry collection. It is commendable that this collection explores the experiences of young Indian women, delving into various facets of their lives and addressing topics that can be considered taboo in society.

The book's organization into eight distinct parts provides a clear sense of its structure and thematic progression. The raw and honest nature of the poems, whether relatable or not adds authenticity to the work. The diverse themes and emotions that the poems explore, from childhood to adulthood, insecurities, love, and societal expectations placed on women make the collection thought-provoking.

The poet chooses to use her license to insert a poem with a blank page and just the title, which speaks to the book's ability to convey meaning and emotion through minimalistic yet impactful means. It's a testament to the author's skill in crafting poems that can communicate so much with brevity. The book is a brave piece of literature shedding light on societal issues and challenging norms. The use of imagery and symbolism in the poems adds depth and connects with readers' emotions. The inclusion of illustrations to complement the poems is also a noteworthy aspect, enhancing the overall reading experience.

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" offers a fresh perspective on poetry that can engage a wide range of readers. Given a chance I would start appreciating each of the poems here, but I shall restrict myself and allow you to explore the poetry collection by yourself and come out with your interpretations and experiences. May they wake up your relationships, and make you resilient and a rebel forever.

[Murshidha · Rating 4 out of 5]

Assalamu Alaikum😊,
'Don't expect
understanding
when all you hurt if
anger and contempt' -extracts from the book

Book📗: Failure to make round rotis by Mehak Goyal

Genre 📸: Poetry

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Overall Ratings 🌟 : 4/ 5
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Language : Easy and Elegant
Safemark 💫 : 4/5
(Safemark - It denotes that the safety with the presence of erotic/ over romantic content. 5 denotes the presence no such contents. 4 denotes the minor presence of over romantic stuffs and such)
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🥯 Witness an eloquent debut poetry collection 'Failure to make round rotis'. The poems are mainly based on the different phases on the lives of young Indian women today. Peoms are laid out over 9 chapters such as Medal of participation, Adulting, The Bottle of Promises, Wallet of happiness, The Indian Match Maker and much more.

🥯 Each poem resonates within the mind of the reader with its own individuality. Being a non-poetry person, I could feel the effect of the writings. Covering from the childhood, where we get afraid of the slipper shots to the motherhood phase author had covered most of the poems. Book reflects entities like child hood mischieves, doubtful early adulthood, Mother's true love, worklife, fake relationships and freidnships, embracing love, betrayals, matchmaking damakas and much more. Author had wisely used metaphors to express certain emotions.

🥯 After my grandfather's poems, I could feel a good connection and live emotions in the poetry of this book. One could feel the joy and innocence in the chapter 'Medal of happiness'. One could feel pain and remorse in 'The bottle of happiness'. My personal favourite is 'The Indian Matchmaker', where author hilariously points out the reality(or cruelty in some cases) in Arranged Marriages. If you are new to Poetry genre, 'Failure to make round rotis' might be a good choice.

#QOTD: What do you consider to be a reason of failed Arranged Marriages?

[Poornima · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Failure to Make Round Rotis" by Mehak is a literary gem that shines brightly in the world of contemporary poetry. With a deft hand, the author weaves together a tapestry of emotions and reflections, creating a mesmerizing anthology that delves into the complexities of the human experience. The themes explored within its verses are both universal and deeply personal, touching upon the tender nuances of love, the intricate dynamics between parents and children, the challenges that come with adulthood, the weight of societal opinions, and the recognition of privilege.

What sets this collection apart is its unapologetic focus on the difficulties and problems faced by women. Mehak's words become a powerful voice that addresses issues often left unspoken. Through her poems, she shines a spotlight on the unique struggles and triumphs that women encounter in their lives, offering a poignant and empathetic perspective.

However, the beauty of "Failure to Make Round Rotis" doesn't stop at its profound words. The addition of stunning artwork enhances the overall experience of the anthology. These illustrations are not mere decorations; they are integral to the narrative, adding depth and a visual allure that draws readers further into the world of the poems. The marriage of words and visuals creates an immersive journey for the reader, allowing them to connect with the emotions and stories on a deeper level.

In conclusion, "Failure to Make Round Rotis" is a poetic masterpiece that not only resonates deeply with its readers but also shines a light on the often-overlooked experiences of women. It is a work of art that captivates the senses, both through its eloquent verses and its visually enchanting illustrations. Mehak's collection is a testament to the power of poetry to convey complex emotions and social commentary, making it a must-read for anyone seeking a profound and visually captivating literary experience.

[ANMOL JAUHER]

Mehak's book is a collection of concise and easily digestible poems, yet their impact stretches far beyond the final page. These verses primarily address the pervasive issues of misogyny and patriarchy that women encounter on a daily basis. The poems touch the reader deeply, their emotional weight lingers, refusing to be easily forgotten. They serve as a poignant mirror reflecting the societal conditioning that often compels women to put others' needs before their own, sometimes perpetuating this pattern unknowingly.

The author skillfully illuminates these seemingly subtle instances, which hold significant relevance and relatability for readers. Reading this book was more than just perusing verses; it was an enlightening and thought-provoking journey. It underscores the essential message that women possess the inner strength to challenge and defy the deeply ingrained norms that have held them back. I wholeheartedly recommend Mehak Goyal's collection to anyone seeking a light read that leaves a profound and enduring impact. It stands as a poignant and relatable exploration of the daily obstacles women face, making it a vital read for those who appreciate literature with a profound and empowering message.

Among the poems, those that delve into the mother-daughter relationship touched my heart most profoundly and became my personal favorites. The words within these poems resonated with a deep sense of familiarity and significance, making them truly extraordinary. This book has found a permanent place on my table, becoming a steadfast companion. I often find myself reaching for it, flipping through its pages, and reading at random, and it never fails to brighten my day. It's a comforting reminder that I'm not alone in experiencing the emotions and challenges portrayed in Mehak's book. It serves as a source of solace and a powerful connection for women navigating similar life experiences.

[Anusha Sridharan · Rating 5 out of 5]

“Failure to Make Round Rotis” is a poetic burst of energy straight from the heart of young Indian womanhood.

This collection skims and floats through the chaos of adulting. Mehak doesn’t just pen poems; she throws open the doors to the experiences, insecurities, and triumphs of navigating this wild journey. Reading it felt like chatting with a close friend who gets it – the struggles, the laughs, and everything in between.

Now, let’s talk favourites. “The Playlist”, that one hit differently! It captures the soundtrack of life, those songs that become the backdrop to our joys and heartaches. It’s like she stole a peek into the playlists of our souls. Personal, evocative, and oh-so-relatable.

And then there’s “A Woman’s Lexicon.” Cue the snaps and pauses! This poem is a exploration of multifaceted identity for women, defined for her by the society’s expectations.

Now, onto the parts involving toxic relationships and insecurities. The poems are like mirrors reflecting the messy, complicated nature of love and the battles we fight with ourselves. It’s real, it’s raw, and it’s liberating.

What I appreciate most is Mehak’s knack for turning the mundane into the extraordinary. Failure to make round rotis? Who knew that could be a metaphor for life’s imperfections? It’s this ability to find profound meaning in the everyday that makes this collection shine.

“Failure to Make Round Rotis” is not just a poetry book; it’s a vibrant, personal journey through the whirlwind of young adulthood. Mehak Goyal’s energy leaps off the pages, making it a must-read for anyone looking for a poetic companion in the messy, beautiful adventure of life.

Disclosure: This review is fuelled by personal vibes, lots of energy, and genuine appreciation for Mehak Goyal’s poetic brilliance.

I had the incredible opportunity to meet Mehak during her highly-anticipated book signing event in Bangalore. The experience was nothing short of extraordinary as I had the privilege of engaging in interesting conversations with her.

[Aparna Prabhu · Rating 4 out of 5]

“You are going to bloom no matter where you are planted.”
- Mehak Goyal, Failure to make round rotis

'Medal of Participation' signifies how young girls are conditioned to be content with mediocrity yet strive for excellence in academics. Bully is a poem that portrays how a woman in the prime of her youth gives it back to her perpetrators gracefully in a controlled manner.

'Adulting' implies how the girl in the picture has blossomed into a woman who often challenges authority. She yearns to free herself from the cage of familial ties and fly into the unfamiliar warmth of companionship.

'A Bottle of Promises' is a section dedicated to the ebbs and flows of a relationship. The whirlwind romance dwindles by a whisper of sweet nothings and unkept promises.

The presentation of the verses with lines, indentation, and abstract art is striking. The poems arranged in chronological order narrate a story of a particular phase in a woman’s life dating back to her childhood. The black page between each section indicates how a particular stage has faded away. The poet exhibits her writing prowess in different forms of poetry employing imagery, metaphors, rhyme scheme, and personification to its desired effect. The verses hold an open dialogue with the inner voice in our head, nudging it to shed self-doubt and not bow down to adversities. The anthology is a delectable mix of expressive/reflective poems. The poignant lines defy conventional norms by delving deep into the patriarchal mindset that's polluting the society.

Illustrating a modernist portrayal of a woman, 'Failure to make round rotis' elicit a cycle of emotions that conjures up a storm in the heart of the reader.

[Debabrata Mishra · Rating 4 out of 5]

Title -Failure to Make Round Rotis

Author - Mehak Goyal

Publication - Juggernaut
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The book brilliantly weaves together an array of themes—ranging from pure and tainted love to the complexities of adulting, superficiality and societal expectations. This eclectic mix imbued the work with a deep yet strangely refreshing quality that managed to captivate my attention.

Divided into different distinctive sections, the book's poems might seem disjointed initially, but their eventual coherence delivered a seamless reading experience. This well-executed structure eliminated any potential disruptions and enabled me to absorb the content in a single sitting, which speaks to the book's engagement factor.

While the exploration of the pain arising from misunderstandings rooted in societal expectations and judgments holds a poignant place within the narrative, I found that for individuals, like myself, who've encountered similar real-life situations, this theme could at times verge on appearing somewhat immature or off-putting. However, it's important to acknowledge the diverse range of perspectives that readers bring to any literary work.

The crowning jewel of the book is undoubtedly its epilogue—the concluding poem. This piece skillfully draws together the threads woven throughout the book, bestowing it with a sense of unity and resonance. This poignant connection with the author's emotions compelled me to allocate another half-star to the book's overall rating.

In conclusion, I highly recommend this book for anyone harboring curiosity about poetry. It presents an ideal starting point for those embarking on a poetic journey, allowing them to explore the nuanced interplay of emotions, societal expectations, and personal growth.

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[Dalia (book_o_creativity) · Rating 3 out of 5]

Poetries are powerful. So much so that they can hugely impact the formation of a nation. But some poetries are subtle in their approach yet can carry great meanings. They are the reflection of the poetess' mind that somehow feels relatable. "Failure To Make Round Rotis" is a subtle yet powerful debut collection of poems and verses on rebellion, resilience and relationships. It's a bold portrayal of challenges and experiences Indian women face in this era. In the black and white pages this book spreads more shades of grey. As we go deep inside the book it lays even more aspects of being a women in 21st century.

"Failure To Make Round Rotis" is a poetry collection, that revolve around experiences Indian women face everyday. As the title of the book suggests, it's strongly a female centric pov of today's world where women are either objectified and pointed at or prejudiced, but not only that, it also explores on love, relationships and adulting. When I started reading the book I was quite enjoying it but after some time, it was like a continuous whining. Some poems were good but I was not feeling most of them. With due respect I understand that poetries are intimate to the person writing them but sometimes the bare feelings gets carried away in words. Here the complexities or something in the writing was repeatedly turning me off.

But what I appreciate is the bold approach to put forward something that is uniquely us, the women in the society. The challenges mentioned, the scenarios described are all true from one perspective and but I was missing a bright side. The book is adorned with pretty illustrations, I like poetry books with illustrations and the cover is even prettier. Overall it was an okay read.