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The Experiment of Dreams
Benjamin Walker's lifelong career of testing experimental drugs and medicines, as well as participating in fascinating sleep-related studies, has come to an end. A new and lucrative job opportunity is offered to Ben, working on a project named Lucy, a machine capable of reading and recording a person's dreams in intimate detail. All is finally going well for Ben . . . until strange dreams of a town named Drapery Falls begin to plague him, and memories once hidden begin to reveal themselves. The doctors and staff onboard team Lucy are not who Ben thinks they are, and Mr. Kalispell will stop at nothing to keep Ben's emerging memories buried for good. Ben is put on a collision course that will bring him to the brink of total insanity, and perhaps even death. At the heart of it all, Ben's worst enemy is his own mind, and he must confront his past in order to save his future. The twist and turns in The Experiment of Dreams will keep you guessing, down to the very last line.
290 pages, ebook
First published February 26, 2014
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Brandon Zenner
13 books229 followersBrandon Zenner is an American fiction writer and an Amazon best selling author. His short fiction has been published in both print and online publications, the first being submitted when he was 19 years old. THE EXPERIMENT OF DREAMS, his debut thriller, has reached Amazon's best seller list many times. His second novel, WHISKEY DEVILS, was a winner in the Global Ebook Awards. THE AFTER WAR, a post-apocalyptic thriller, was a semi finalist in the BookLife Prize in Fiction, a contest run by Publishers Weekly. His genres of choice are thrillers, crime, dystopian, and science fiction.
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November 13, 2015
”For centuries, artists have attributed their masterpieces to dreams, yet so much of our dreams remain shrouded in mystery, forgotten. Now, both artists and ordinary people will be able to record their compositions in full detail. We could have their art created, painted, framed and delivered. Not only are we creating whole new fields of science, but also an entirely new genre of art will emerge. Sleep art…”
I keep a white pad on the nightstand by my bed because every so often I have a dream that is so vivid, so interesting that as soon as I wake up I know I have to jot down my impressions or by the time I’m in the shower all that I remember of that dream will simply float away with the hot mist. Wouldn’t it be nice if our minds supplied us with a URL that we could use to get back to where the memory of a dream is stored? I’ve had whole plots of short stories handed to me by a nighttime muse. The mind does amazing things when the clutter of our awake lives has been temporarily shuttered in the attic or discretely swept under the Persian rug.
Benjamin Walker is a professional guinea pig. He lets science use his body and mind for experimental purposes. He has a particular gift for sleep studies, especially studies involving dreams. While asleep, his mind opens up like a rare orchid. He drinks too much. Tragedies from his past weigh on him like wet cement. Even the studies he participates in that used to excite him are now becoming redundant and dull.
The timing couldn’t have been more perfect for Dr. Peter Wulfric to approach him with a new invigorating study involving dreams. With the way his brain works, he is the perfect candidate for the research they are needing to do. The study is funded by a reclusive millionaire named Timothy Kalispell. The end game is to build a machine that can record people’s dreams.
The implications and applications for a system that can download your dreams to your PC every night are staggering to think about. If Steve Jobs were still alive, he would be gobsmacked that he didn’t think of it first.
The machine is called Frequency Responding Lucid Transmitter, or Lucy for short.
They fly Ben all over the world and have him look at art, not just look at art, but basically scan art into his mind. St. John the Baptist, Salvator Mundi, Evening Landscape with an Aqueduct, Baptism of Christ, The Raft of the Medusa, Mona Lisa, and Man in a Hat Gazing Upwards, all are, for lack of a better term, downloaded into his brain. Kalispell has an obsession with art and wants to use Ben’s brain and Lucy to reproduce exact copies down to the finest details of the world’s most compelling art.
It works.
The nanobots floating around in Ben’s bloodstream that help record everything from him into Lucy are not passing out of his body, but replicating. He is starting to have dreams that are not his own. He is starting to remember things that he couldn’t possibly know. He begins to lose a grip on what is real and what is just pieces of dreams.
He was no longer attempting to decipher between what was real and what was dream.
”At times, his vision became fuzzy, like looking through a piece of smoky glass. Other times his vision cleared to see everything in such vivid detail that the image seemed burned in his retina, and grew brighter with his pulse. The sparkling array of dazzling colors spread to the periphery of his vision, slowly encompassing everything he saw. The colors were jagged, with patches of grey and black, and soon he wasn’t sure if he could count his fingers if he held his hand before his face.”
Who needs science, after all, when you are experiencing the world so vividly that there is no need to understand why?
As Ben becomes more destabilized, it becomes more and more clear that the past he has been avoiding is now part of the present, and he must reenter the muddy canvas of his troubled life to have a chance at a future. People he trusted with his life turn out to be part of a conspiracy of deception that leaves Ben precariously balanced on the edge of self-destruction or just as close to salvation.
I must say Brandon Zenner has penned a story that certainly resonated with me. What if we could harness the creative powers of our dreams? The optimist in me is thrilled with the possibilities. Even a boring accountant from Hoboken could capture the last sparks of creativity remaining in his gin soaked brain cells and create something beautiful. We would all see the world inside our heads differently. We would marvel again at what we are capable of. The pessimist, of course, sees the applications for evil. It could be used as yet another way for us to be exploited by governments or corporations. The last vestiges of privacy that we have would be peeled clear to the core of the onion. We would stand naked before them with not one thought exclusively our own.
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I keep a white pad on the nightstand by my bed because every so often I have a dream that is so vivid, so interesting that as soon as I wake up I know I have to jot down my impressions or by the time I’m in the shower all that I remember of that dream will simply float away with the hot mist. Wouldn’t it be nice if our minds supplied us with a URL that we could use to get back to where the memory of a dream is stored? I’ve had whole plots of short stories handed to me by a nighttime muse. The mind does amazing things when the clutter of our awake lives has been temporarily shuttered in the attic or discretely swept under the Persian rug.
Benjamin Walker is a professional guinea pig. He lets science use his body and mind for experimental purposes. He has a particular gift for sleep studies, especially studies involving dreams. While asleep, his mind opens up like a rare orchid. He drinks too much. Tragedies from his past weigh on him like wet cement. Even the studies he participates in that used to excite him are now becoming redundant and dull.
The timing couldn’t have been more perfect for Dr. Peter Wulfric to approach him with a new invigorating study involving dreams. With the way his brain works, he is the perfect candidate for the research they are needing to do. The study is funded by a reclusive millionaire named Timothy Kalispell. The end game is to build a machine that can record people’s dreams.
The implications and applications for a system that can download your dreams to your PC every night are staggering to think about. If Steve Jobs were still alive, he would be gobsmacked that he didn’t think of it first.
The machine is called Frequency Responding Lucid Transmitter, or Lucy for short.
They fly Ben all over the world and have him look at art, not just look at art, but basically scan art into his mind. St. John the Baptist, Salvator Mundi, Evening Landscape with an Aqueduct, Baptism of Christ, The Raft of the Medusa, Mona Lisa, and Man in a Hat Gazing Upwards, all are, for lack of a better term, downloaded into his brain. Kalispell has an obsession with art and wants to use Ben’s brain and Lucy to reproduce exact copies down to the finest details of the world’s most compelling art.
It works.
The nanobots floating around in Ben’s bloodstream that help record everything from him into Lucy are not passing out of his body, but replicating. He is starting to have dreams that are not his own. He is starting to remember things that he couldn’t possibly know. He begins to lose a grip on what is real and what is just pieces of dreams.
He was no longer attempting to decipher between what was real and what was dream.
”At times, his vision became fuzzy, like looking through a piece of smoky glass. Other times his vision cleared to see everything in such vivid detail that the image seemed burned in his retina, and grew brighter with his pulse. The sparkling array of dazzling colors spread to the periphery of his vision, slowly encompassing everything he saw. The colors were jagged, with patches of grey and black, and soon he wasn’t sure if he could count his fingers if he held his hand before his face.”
Who needs science, after all, when you are experiencing the world so vividly that there is no need to understand why?
As Ben becomes more destabilized, it becomes more and more clear that the past he has been avoiding is now part of the present, and he must reenter the muddy canvas of his troubled life to have a chance at a future. People he trusted with his life turn out to be part of a conspiracy of deception that leaves Ben precariously balanced on the edge of self-destruction or just as close to salvation.
I must say Brandon Zenner has penned a story that certainly resonated with me. What if we could harness the creative powers of our dreams? The optimist in me is thrilled with the possibilities. Even a boring accountant from Hoboken could capture the last sparks of creativity remaining in his gin soaked brain cells and create something beautiful. We would all see the world inside our heads differently. We would marvel again at what we are capable of. The pessimist, of course, sees the applications for evil. It could be used as yet another way for us to be exploited by governments or corporations. The last vestiges of privacy that we have would be peeled clear to the core of the onion. We would stand naked before them with not one thought exclusively our own.
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June 3, 2018I ordered this because the concept sounded interesting. The writing and characters are really dull, though. I'm quitting at page 70 -- friends, lemme know if it becomes more interesting later and maybe I'll pick it up again.
January 23, 2015
I really enjoyed this book. The initial hook for me was the fact that it’s a psychological thriller about dreams. Maybe I liked it better than most because of the whole dream premise. I spent seven years religiously recording my dreams until I felt I had a good handle on my dream themes. I’ve even had a few short lucid dreams over the years.
The book opens like this:
We meet Ben, who has a lot of emotional baggage and unhealthy coping mechanisms. He wallows and does the minimum to get by in life, void of drive and ambition.
He has worked as a dream lab guinea pig for years. He signs up for an ultra-secret project that will pay a lot of money.
He knows he should be worried about some red flags and warning signs, but has this “what the hell?” attitude and chooses money over caution.
Each time he works on the secret project, he gets paid gobs of money to do some tests and sleep. He is whisked away to other countries to view art and dream. Ben pushes away his misgivings,
while the reader waits for the sinister other shoe to drop….
I reeled at a reveal in the book, which never ever happens to me . I always have a plethora of theories and enjoy watching the tumblers fall into place. When this particular reveal was dropped, I felt the shock run throughout my body.
I was dumbfounded and and loved it! .
The pacing was perfect for me. I could easily picture what was happening throughout the book. The writing and words on the page faded to the background as the book absorbed me. The author is good giving you an image of a character or place indirectly.
There are many examples like this throughout the book. Other authors might describe this man’s looks colorfully but still directly. The way this author paints a picture has much more finesse. There’s also this vibrant imagery of Ben seeing Paris for the first time.
There were plenty of twists and turns in this book that kept me guessing. Toward the end it even gets gritty and violent, showing the range of the author’s writing style.
I had a couple of gripes, but nothing that will change my 5/5 stars.
Thank you so much Netgalley for a free digital copy to review.
The book opens like this:
Ben cut across the empty parking lot of the Annapolis Foundation for Sleep Research, picking at the dried paste plastered to his scalp where the electrodes had been attached to his head the previous night. He enjoyed an odd sense of pleasure in removing the paste, like finding pockets of sand buried deep in his hair after a day at the beach.
We meet Ben, who has a lot of emotional baggage and unhealthy coping mechanisms. He wallows and does the minimum to get by in life, void of drive and ambition.
He has worked as a dream lab guinea pig for years. He signs up for an ultra-secret project that will pay a lot of money.
He knows he should be worried about some red flags and warning signs, but has this “what the hell?” attitude and chooses money over caution.
Each time he works on the secret project, he gets paid gobs of money to do some tests and sleep. He is whisked away to other countries to view art and dream. Ben pushes away his misgivings,
while the reader waits for the sinister other shoe to drop….
I reeled at a reveal in the book, which never ever happens to me . I always have a plethora of theories and enjoy watching the tumblers fall into place. When this particular reveal was dropped, I felt the shock run throughout my body.
I was dumbfounded and and loved it! .
The pacing was perfect for me. I could easily picture what was happening throughout the book. The writing and words on the page faded to the background as the book absorbed me. The author is good giving you an image of a character or place indirectly.
In the rush, he didn’t realize he had put on an old shirt that was too small for his growing girth, and when he sat, he was cautious not to pop a button.
There are many examples like this throughout the book. Other authors might describe this man’s looks colorfully but still directly. The way this author paints a picture has much more finesse. There’s also this vibrant imagery of Ben seeing Paris for the first time.
The sounds of the city flooded in: the mumble of words and laughter coming from the nearby bistros along the sidewalk; the cars speeding by on the rond-point; horns blaring; music emanating from somewhere, everywhere. It was indecipherable to Ben, a jumble of noise as thick as soup, and yet beautiful and poetic…The air was alive, electric, as smooth and delicious as the fluidity of the French language itself.
There were plenty of twists and turns in this book that kept me guessing. Toward the end it even gets gritty and violent, showing the range of the author’s writing style.
I had a couple of gripes, but nothing that will change my 5/5 stars.
Thank you so much Netgalley for a free digital copy to review.
January 26, 2015
What a ride! The Experiment of Dreams was a fast paced exciting read. This is EXACTLY why I say authors are the true rock stars of the world . The imagination and detail that went into creating this thriller truly blew my mind.
We are introduced to Ben. A depressed man who had lost his wife and has never recovered from her loss. To make ends meet he participated in studies at the hospital. When the Dr. he has worked for and with for years retired he was offered an opportunity to participate in a privately funded study that would allow his dreams to be recorded. From there the twists and turns are masterfully conducted. I read every line of this book with rapt attention and couldn't put it down one I was halfway through.
I'd never heard of Brandon Zenner but his is name I'll be looking for as I'm scanning books to read, hopefully for years to come. Smart, intense, and suspenseful. Highly recommend.
A huge thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the advanced copy in exchange for an honest review
We are introduced to Ben. A depressed man who had lost his wife and has never recovered from her loss. To make ends meet he participated in studies at the hospital. When the Dr. he has worked for and with for years retired he was offered an opportunity to participate in a privately funded study that would allow his dreams to be recorded. From there the twists and turns are masterfully conducted. I read every line of this book with rapt attention and couldn't put it down one I was halfway through.
I'd never heard of Brandon Zenner but his is name I'll be looking for as I'm scanning books to read, hopefully for years to come. Smart, intense, and suspenseful. Highly recommend.
A huge thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the advanced copy in exchange for an honest review
November 17, 2017
Promising idea that fell short. The cover with the picture frame looked intriguing along with the books blurb but the execution fell short of expectations. The story was choppy and didn't flow. Too many instances it felt like information was an afterthought and was just thrown in, adding to the lack of flow to the story. The ending was too contrived and had too many "twists" that were also contrived and were not even necessary.
February 13, 2015
I received this from netgalley in exchange for an honest review
The first half of this book was alright. The premise was kind of cool, even if there were some huge plot holes. But the second half of the book just went bonkers. All the other reviews have talked about the plot twists... and there were certainly plot twists a plenty; but they were strange and disjointed and seemed to have no bearing on the first half of the story at all! The first half of the book is sci-fi, the second half is a bad attempt at a thriller? Like I said, It was a really interesting concept - but it didn't translate well. Zenner's writing was extremely simplistic, and full of clichés, and you could actually tell were he was inserting bits of research. Unfortunately I can't really recommend this book, it was just too poorly written and had too many plot holes.
The first half of this book was alright. The premise was kind of cool, even if there were some huge plot holes. But the second half of the book just went bonkers. All the other reviews have talked about the plot twists... and there were certainly plot twists a plenty; but they were strange and disjointed and seemed to have no bearing on the first half of the story at all! The first half of the book is sci-fi, the second half is a bad attempt at a thriller? Like I said, It was a really interesting concept - but it didn't translate well. Zenner's writing was extremely simplistic, and full of clichés, and you could actually tell were he was inserting bits of research. Unfortunately I can't really recommend this book, it was just too poorly written and had too many plot holes.
May 29, 2014
I was really looking for something different to read and boy howdy did I find it in this book.
Say hello to Benjamin Walker. A man who suffers from severe migraines . He has become a trial drug testing junkie. When his drug trial comes to an end . Ben is offered a very lucrative opportunity to help out in a trial called Lucy. Which he happily signs up for
Along comes Sophia will she be able to help him with his migraines, and help get him over his loss of his wife Emily. Life is good for Ben right now. Until the a mysterious town keeps popping up in his dreams. People aren't who they seem to be and no one is going to help him . He is on a collision course with insanity. Will anyone help him come back from the edge. Will he survive confronting his past in order to save his future . I sure hope so
If you ever have been intrigued by what the mind can do and comprehend. This is the book for you. The way Brandon takes through the agony of what Ben is going through , the agony of loosing his wife at such a young age. The not being able to let her go. The twists and turns in this novel will take you one way then do a 180 and go in the other direction. You see the frailties of humans along with the greediness of big tech firms . Its kind a scary how easily they can get their way into the lives of people.
You can't trust anyone in this book . poor Ben can't even trust his own mind at one point as the doctors push him to the brink of insanity. They don't help him when his memories start to surface about a small town. Ben is a lost trapped soul, that these men are just using to further their ideals and their greed.
This is a great first novel for this gentleman. But I am hoping it will not be the last, This book has such a good plot with some great turns and sub plots. The characters are so well written , you can feel their angst and you know you just want to help Ben come back from the edge.
Trust me when you read this book you will not know who to trust and really isn't that part of the fun. Admit it ladies, we all love a great mystery. I know I do .
So if you like the book of Micheal Crichton, this is the book for you . It has all the intrigue and mystery that involve the tech world, Check this book out please cause I will say it is one that should be read. This I hope is the first of many books from this author .
May 23, 2015
When Sage contacted me and asked me if I would be interested in being part of this blog tour, I immediately recognized the cover of the book, something that I had purchased sometime last year, but hadn't had a chance to read yet. Since it was something I had planned to read anyways, I went ahead and said yes. And I'm glad that I did. And irritated with myself for waiting so long to read this.
I enjoyed this book. It was an interesting story line, the main character (Ben) captivated my attention (especially the emotions that he had about the death of his wife) - when the story line changes from just a guy seeing a new doctor, I kept reading and reading. Now, there were parts where things were a little far-fetched, where the writing needed some help (a second edit would be a wise decision), but all-in-all the story was good, different, and I enjoyed reading it. I would also read more from this author - I love the way he describes things, the detail that he adds.
I enjoyed this book. It was an interesting story line, the main character (Ben) captivated my attention (especially the emotions that he had about the death of his wife) - when the story line changes from just a guy seeing a new doctor, I kept reading and reading. Now, there were parts where things were a little far-fetched, where the writing needed some help (a second edit would be a wise decision), but all-in-all the story was good, different, and I enjoyed reading it. I would also read more from this author - I love the way he describes things, the detail that he adds.
February 17, 2016
Disclaimer: This book was given to me for free from netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
I REALLY enjoyed this one. It build the tension up perfectly, great characters, and when shit came down it really came down. The fucking plot twists too. And great use of unreliable narrator, because there were lots of "what is really happening?"
I recommend this one highly.
I REALLY enjoyed this one. It build the tension up perfectly, great characters, and when shit came down it really came down. The fucking plot twists too. And great use of unreliable narrator, because there were lots of "what is really happening?"
I recommend this one highly.
May 24, 2014
When dreams can manifest into reality
This is a great plot with many sub-plots and I was fortunate to be able to read this story after it had been well edited and republished. Now it truly is fascinating and keeps the reader glued to the pages.
Basically, Ben Walker, who suffers extreme migraines, which apparently also give him this unusual brain, is discovered by scientists Dr. Peter Wulfric and others, who use him as their guinea pig. Ben is a young man, recently widowed from Emily whom he adored, and he became a drunk, short on funds and worked part time as a bartender. There is a machine whose short name is Lucy that can take Ben’s dreams when he is dreaming and produce physical replicas. Ben’s unique ability is that when he sees an object like a painting, he can study it to the extent that when he sleeps, he can call on his mind to recall in his dreams what he saw. Lucy reproduces what his mind sees. Timothy Kalispell is an extremely rich man and his weakness is that he wishes to own all of the masterpieces in the world. He can do this by the reproductions from Ben’s mind and so Ben is sent all over the world to study and then dream these masterpieces, including famous sculptures.
The problem is that Ben is also given intravenously a serum to help stimulate his brain cells, but as with all things, the serum drives Ben into a type of insanity and totally disabling migraines. This plot is much more than just scientific fantasy as there are several mysteries involved and they only reveal themselves in certain instances, leaving the reader puzzled and searching for the whys and wherefores.
The characters are well developed, the story is well-written, and although it does have a flair of being somewhat like Michael Crichton’s books, this story is as much or more complex. I truly enjoyed it and can recommend it those readers who like this genre.
This e-book was given to me free for an honest review.
This is a great plot with many sub-plots and I was fortunate to be able to read this story after it had been well edited and republished. Now it truly is fascinating and keeps the reader glued to the pages.
Basically, Ben Walker, who suffers extreme migraines, which apparently also give him this unusual brain, is discovered by scientists Dr. Peter Wulfric and others, who use him as their guinea pig. Ben is a young man, recently widowed from Emily whom he adored, and he became a drunk, short on funds and worked part time as a bartender. There is a machine whose short name is Lucy that can take Ben’s dreams when he is dreaming and produce physical replicas. Ben’s unique ability is that when he sees an object like a painting, he can study it to the extent that when he sleeps, he can call on his mind to recall in his dreams what he saw. Lucy reproduces what his mind sees. Timothy Kalispell is an extremely rich man and his weakness is that he wishes to own all of the masterpieces in the world. He can do this by the reproductions from Ben’s mind and so Ben is sent all over the world to study and then dream these masterpieces, including famous sculptures.
The problem is that Ben is also given intravenously a serum to help stimulate his brain cells, but as with all things, the serum drives Ben into a type of insanity and totally disabling migraines. This plot is much more than just scientific fantasy as there are several mysteries involved and they only reveal themselves in certain instances, leaving the reader puzzled and searching for the whys and wherefores.
The characters are well developed, the story is well-written, and although it does have a flair of being somewhat like Michael Crichton’s books, this story is as much or more complex. I truly enjoyed it and can recommend it those readers who like this genre.
This e-book was given to me free for an honest review.
June 2, 2014
This is one of those books that absolutely blows me away. It had so many twists and turns that it kept me on te edge of my seat. I would have never guessed at the ending. Loved it!
April 10, 2015
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One lesson to be learned from this book: If there's this shady trial going on that's trying to recruit you and the reward is far too big: don't trust it, it must be a trap.
Benjamin earns his money by participating in all kinds of trials, usually sleep pattern tests and sleep deprivation studies. Now I don't know how it works in this field, but it's very unlikely you can pay your bills from participating in clinical trials for drug development, or so I'm told. Anyway, Benjamin gets an offer he can't refuse, that allows him to travel the world and look at paintings. A lot.
The book started really interesting. Although it's clear from the beginning that something is off, it takes quite some time to get to know exactly what. That however, is also where its weakness lies. The whole point of experiment, it didn't make sense to me in the end. Which was a shame, because I was really liking it. Another thing that bothered me, it was tied together to closely. Everything was connected, and although it took me some time, the revelation at the end was expected.
But it was a fast and entertaining read. I would read the author's next book.
Thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for providing me with a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!
One lesson to be learned from this book: If there's this shady trial going on that's trying to recruit you and the reward is far too big: don't trust it, it must be a trap.
Benjamin earns his money by participating in all kinds of trials, usually sleep pattern tests and sleep deprivation studies. Now I don't know how it works in this field, but it's very unlikely you can pay your bills from participating in clinical trials for drug development, or so I'm told. Anyway, Benjamin gets an offer he can't refuse, that allows him to travel the world and look at paintings. A lot.
The book started really interesting. Although it's clear from the beginning that something is off, it takes quite some time to get to know exactly what. That however, is also where its weakness lies. The whole point of experiment, it didn't make sense to me in the end. Which was a shame, because I was really liking it. Another thing that bothered me, it was tied together to closely. Everything was connected, and although it took me some time, the revelation at the end was expected.
But it was a fast and entertaining read. I would read the author's next book.
Thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for providing me with a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!
April 15, 2015
Went downhill fast at the end
I really wanted to like this book. I loved the premise, the characters were fairly well drawn, and though the writing was stilted and far from smooth, it was readable. Lots of misused words (pouring instead of poring comes to mind) and very awkward phrasing. The plot was a bit herky-jerky, but since I liked the idea of it so much, I could put up with that. But after the cabin scene, the book plunged into the realm of one star. Page after page of explanation, even clumsy psychological analysis of Ben and his refusal to move on after Emma's death, then more pages of explanation about what had 'really happened.' I felt as though I was reading Cliff's Notes or a seventh grader's book report. I am nearly always a generous reviewer and I don't hesitate to give four or five stars but this book was a serious letdown. I skimmed the last ten percent of the book, something I very seldom do, just because it was so ridiculous and tedious. I wish the writer would start over and do this plot justice, but I sure cannot recommend it as it stands.
I really wanted to like this book. I loved the premise, the characters were fairly well drawn, and though the writing was stilted and far from smooth, it was readable. Lots of misused words (pouring instead of poring comes to mind) and very awkward phrasing. The plot was a bit herky-jerky, but since I liked the idea of it so much, I could put up with that. But after the cabin scene, the book plunged into the realm of one star. Page after page of explanation, even clumsy psychological analysis of Ben and his refusal to move on after Emma's death, then more pages of explanation about what had 'really happened.' I felt as though I was reading Cliff's Notes or a seventh grader's book report. I am nearly always a generous reviewer and I don't hesitate to give four or five stars but this book was a serious letdown. I skimmed the last ten percent of the book, something I very seldom do, just because it was so ridiculous and tedious. I wish the writer would start over and do this plot justice, but I sure cannot recommend it as it stands.
March 19, 2019
This book is different than most that I read (and I read a wide variety of books). It is an interesting concept with cutting edge futuristic medical-related technology as well as a mystery/psychological thriller. There were some grammatical errors in my kindle version of the ebook. The author does occasionally use flashbacks which is not my favorite style of writing and he also gets quite descriptive at times.
The main character is interesting, but the last part of the book seemed rushed and abrupt. There were some extremely engaging parts to the book and there were other instances where it seemed to drag. However, there were enough interesting twists and turns to keep me interested in finishing it.
The main character is interesting, but the last part of the book seemed rushed and abrupt. There were some extremely engaging parts to the book and there were other instances where it seemed to drag. However, there were enough interesting twists and turns to keep me interested in finishing it.
July 4, 2014
The fact that this book was written by a debut novelist still shocks me! Maybe Mr. Zenner had a lot of writings work done and decided to get this one published I don’t know about that but I do know that this book really packs a punch and is quite an intelligent one that kind of ties up all loose ends (but you have got to note them because they are not all thrown at you. Some need to be noticed and understood.)
The story follows Benjamin Walker, a depressed man with a troubled past and living a life nothing short of a zombie (sleep deprived, not eating much and very tired and out of it). This man is shown a path that might earn him some easy money and during which he also gets acquainted with a pretty French lady who doesn’t quite seem like a person from reality but rather a perfect fantasy.
The easy job that earns Ben lots of money turns out to be dangerous. I know it seems obvious it ends up that way but you would never guess exactly which way it turns dangerous. When it does turn dangerous the story starts getting most interesting. The way Mr. Zenner manages to weave in major details and incorporate ideas of how our mind works for dreams and how our body and brain works in complex situations is just amazing. He manages to convey everything by just few sentences because what was said already stays in our head and after further revelations it all becomes self explanatory.
The last few chapters are quite fast and exciting and might make you want to skip a few details just so you can keep the pages turning. I strongly advise against that. This book needs your attention and if you manage to note every little thing that happens you would find out how in the end it all ties up beautifully and you would appreciate the book much better. You would never guess the ending and most definitely not the amazing twist!
For any person fascinated with dreams and their meanings and the possibility of viewing one’s dream this book is a total treat. If you want a nice laid back read go try a romantic comedy because this is all fast and furious. Take your time, it might drag a little in one or two chapters but once you are on the track there is no stopping you from getting to the awesome ending!
The story follows Benjamin Walker, a depressed man with a troubled past and living a life nothing short of a zombie (sleep deprived, not eating much and very tired and out of it). This man is shown a path that might earn him some easy money and during which he also gets acquainted with a pretty French lady who doesn’t quite seem like a person from reality but rather a perfect fantasy.
The easy job that earns Ben lots of money turns out to be dangerous. I know it seems obvious it ends up that way but you would never guess exactly which way it turns dangerous. When it does turn dangerous the story starts getting most interesting. The way Mr. Zenner manages to weave in major details and incorporate ideas of how our mind works for dreams and how our body and brain works in complex situations is just amazing. He manages to convey everything by just few sentences because what was said already stays in our head and after further revelations it all becomes self explanatory.
The last few chapters are quite fast and exciting and might make you want to skip a few details just so you can keep the pages turning. I strongly advise against that. This book needs your attention and if you manage to note every little thing that happens you would find out how in the end it all ties up beautifully and you would appreciate the book much better. You would never guess the ending and most definitely not the amazing twist!
For any person fascinated with dreams and their meanings and the possibility of viewing one’s dream this book is a total treat. If you want a nice laid back read go try a romantic comedy because this is all fast and furious. Take your time, it might drag a little in one or two chapters but once you are on the track there is no stopping you from getting to the awesome ending!
August 11, 2014
this book had a fairly interesting premise, but executed it poorly. the idea was that someone invented a way to view and copy people's dreams. for some reason, this was viewed in the book as a life changing invention that would change humanity forever. therefore, its invention, experimentation and very existence was cloaked in intrigue. none of the reasoning behind it made a bit of sense to me. i had hopes that the book would improve as it went along, but my hopes were dashed in the last chapters when the characters went into long, boring explanations of how and why everything happened the way it did, rather than letting the plot points be organically told in the story. in all, the book is all right as a diversion, but as writing, it was disappointing.
December 5, 2015
SPOILER FREE!
Review originally posted on Aoibh Reads
Ben Walker's life ended with the death of his wife. Passing his days with alcohol, he earns extra money by being test subject to new drugs and sleep related studies due to his migraines and ability to lucid dream.
When offered a new job to be a part of a highly paid, top secret experiment, to test a machine that can record and playback dreams, Ben can't resist the financial benefit.
With the added perk of being able to travel the world with his job, Ben soon meets Sophia, the first woman that has caught his eye since his wife's passing. But not all is what it seems. Ben is being watched and kept in the dark about a lot of things. When one of Ben's dreams sparks panic and outrage, the truth begins to unravel, and Ben is put right in the path of danger.
Woooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!
I downloaded this book from BookBub as I love psychological thrillers or novels surrounding dreams and experiments. After falling into a lull of reading NA Romance, I chose this to break up the cycle and WOW! It reminded me why I love these type of books so much.
Story: The plot in this is so original and fascinating. The idea of Lucy - the dream recording machine - is amazing and the amount of scientific explanations for everything in this make it so believable and plausible. From the start the reader is thrown into a whirlwind of drama and suspense, not knowing when the dangers will present themselves. I love anything to do with how the mind works and this novel really explores the nitty gritty about dreams and the states of mind. It's actually unsettling to read about how easily one can fall victim to their own mind.
Ben: Immediately I felt for Ben; his tragic past and his lethargic and vulnerable state made me care and worry for his safety. With the added uncertainty and untrustworthy vibe from the Dr, Iain etc, I was constantly on the edge of my seat waiting to see what they'd do. Zenner has gone into such great but precise detail with describing the tortured and depressed mind of Ben, suffering still with the loss of his wife and how he coped, or failed to cope, with her death.
Writing: I'm a big fan of the writing in this. I really got the sense every single word was chosen specifically, like in poetry, rather than just in a haphazard method of writing in a stream of consciousness. The level of description, even in basic passages is astounding and so emotive, but it doesn't lull. I was never tempted to skip a paragraph like I normally would. The story often jumps back in time as more is revealed to the reader and I liked how this was displayed subtly;
Rather than stating "X years ago...". Great examples permeated the novel of perfect "show not tell" execution.
Ending: The last 30% of this flew by and was filled with shocking twists. I don't know many times I shouted "Oh. My. God!" when finishing this. Not only was there a surprising ending, it was wrapped up so well that it didn't feel like the story just ended.
Overall:
The Experiment of Dreams has made it onto my favourites list. From the beginning to the end it's a complete rollercoaster of suspense. There's so many little twists incorporated and it's not a predictable read in the slightest!! Definitely a stand out novel.
See more of my reviews here
Review originally posted on Aoibh Reads
Ben Walker's life ended with the death of his wife. Passing his days with alcohol, he earns extra money by being test subject to new drugs and sleep related studies due to his migraines and ability to lucid dream.
When offered a new job to be a part of a highly paid, top secret experiment, to test a machine that can record and playback dreams, Ben can't resist the financial benefit.
With the added perk of being able to travel the world with his job, Ben soon meets Sophia, the first woman that has caught his eye since his wife's passing. But not all is what it seems. Ben is being watched and kept in the dark about a lot of things. When one of Ben's dreams sparks panic and outrage, the truth begins to unravel, and Ben is put right in the path of danger.
Woooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!
I downloaded this book from BookBub as I love psychological thrillers or novels surrounding dreams and experiments. After falling into a lull of reading NA Romance, I chose this to break up the cycle and WOW! It reminded me why I love these type of books so much.
Story: The plot in this is so original and fascinating. The idea of Lucy - the dream recording machine - is amazing and the amount of scientific explanations for everything in this make it so believable and plausible. From the start the reader is thrown into a whirlwind of drama and suspense, not knowing when the dangers will present themselves. I love anything to do with how the mind works and this novel really explores the nitty gritty about dreams and the states of mind. It's actually unsettling to read about how easily one can fall victim to their own mind.
Ben: Immediately I felt for Ben; his tragic past and his lethargic and vulnerable state made me care and worry for his safety. With the added uncertainty and untrustworthy vibe from the Dr, Iain etc, I was constantly on the edge of my seat waiting to see what they'd do. Zenner has gone into such great but precise detail with describing the tortured and depressed mind of Ben, suffering still with the loss of his wife and how he coped, or failed to cope, with her death.
Writing: I'm a big fan of the writing in this. I really got the sense every single word was chosen specifically, like in poetry, rather than just in a haphazard method of writing in a stream of consciousness. The level of description, even in basic passages is astounding and so emotive, but it doesn't lull. I was never tempted to skip a paragraph like I normally would. The story often jumps back in time as more is revealed to the reader and I liked how this was displayed subtly;
"A younger Iain Marcus and Michael Bennet approached Drapery Falls in the dead of night..."
Rather than stating "X years ago...". Great examples permeated the novel of perfect "show not tell" execution.
Ending: The last 30% of this flew by and was filled with shocking twists. I don't know many times I shouted "Oh. My. God!" when finishing this. Not only was there a surprising ending, it was wrapped up so well that it didn't feel like the story just ended.
Overall:
The Experiment of Dreams has made it onto my favourites list. From the beginning to the end it's a complete rollercoaster of suspense. There's so many little twists incorporated and it's not a predictable read in the slightest!! Definitely a stand out novel.
See more of my reviews here
July 27, 2014
A nice surprise.
There is no pay, those who need an honest opinion most, do not appreciate it. Those who do well, already know it, and never offer thanks. I reviewed over one hundred in the last year and was resolved not to offer any more opinions. Yet, I cannot help but call your attention to this remarkable work. It is captivating, forcing you to think rationally, while you suspend your disbelief. Unlike most science based fiction, it has strong likeable characters, unique semi-bad guys, a believable plot, and a really surprising twist at the end. I expect their could have been stronger motivators than a compulsive attachment to art, but it did open many doors for those with imagination.
Congratulations to Mr. Zenner. A very good first effort that promises much more in the future.
There is no pay, those who need an honest opinion most, do not appreciate it. Those who do well, already know it, and never offer thanks. I reviewed over one hundred in the last year and was resolved not to offer any more opinions. Yet, I cannot help but call your attention to this remarkable work. It is captivating, forcing you to think rationally, while you suspend your disbelief. Unlike most science based fiction, it has strong likeable characters, unique semi-bad guys, a believable plot, and a really surprising twist at the end. I expect their could have been stronger motivators than a compulsive attachment to art, but it did open many doors for those with imagination.
Congratulations to Mr. Zenner. A very good first effort that promises much more in the future.
June 3, 2014
This is truly a psychological thriller that I read in one sitting! I just could not leave it. I had to know what was going to happen. This is one of those books that really takes off about midway and continues straight to the unbelievable ending.
I can honestly say that I hope a machine like Lucy is NEVER created for real-or at least don't let me find out about it!
Does this review seem short-well I can't quite find the words that will not give away the entire story--I want you all to read this!! 5 Star to a great new writer in this genre!The Experiment of Dreams
I can honestly say that I hope a machine like Lucy is NEVER created for real-or at least don't let me find out about it!
Does this review seem short-well I can't quite find the words that will not give away the entire story--I want you all to read this!! 5 Star to a great new writer in this genre!The Experiment of Dreams
May 11, 2014
Brandon Zenner's The Experiment of Dreams was a suspenseful treat.
I was intrigued by Ben's abilities associated with aura migraines and loved the ease at which the technical- medical component was explained throughout.
The characters were well drawn and the action, especially towards the end of the book had me of the edge of my seat.
Add to that, surprises that I never saw coming, a nice love story and an imaginative plot, it made for an informative and exciting read.
I look forward to more from this talented author.
I was intrigued by Ben's abilities associated with aura migraines and loved the ease at which the technical- medical component was explained throughout.
The characters were well drawn and the action, especially towards the end of the book had me of the edge of my seat.
Add to that, surprises that I never saw coming, a nice love story and an imaginative plot, it made for an informative and exciting read.
I look forward to more from this talented author.
May 13, 2014
quite a good story line - enough to keep you reading
March 19, 2018
Thrill by page-turner thrill
What an amazing read. The author does not give you any leads into his twisting plot, which makes them all the more surprising. Ben makes his living as a test-subject at the local hospital. A lucrative but mysterious job surfaces and Ben reluctantly seizes the opportunity.
Lucy is a prototype being tested on Ben to record his lucid dreams and make them a reality for a man who loves fine art and wants to make his own museum.
It's a whirlwind tour and a concept that could become a reality if put into the right hands. Highly recommended!!
What an amazing read. The author does not give you any leads into his twisting plot, which makes them all the more surprising. Ben makes his living as a test-subject at the local hospital. A lucrative but mysterious job surfaces and Ben reluctantly seizes the opportunity.
Lucy is a prototype being tested on Ben to record his lucid dreams and make them a reality for a man who loves fine art and wants to make his own museum.
It's a whirlwind tour and a concept that could become a reality if put into the right hands. Highly recommended!!
January 11, 2017
Thirty-eight-year-old Benjamin Walker is a guinea pig. Since the sudden accidental death of his wife, Emily, he has been living in limbo. He faces each new day marking time until he could find he again in death. For years he has been used for thousands of experiments for Dr. Stuart Wright at the Annapolis Foundation for Sleep Research. He is the perfect myrmidon, as he had no fear, simply because he no longer cared what happens to him. Between these experiments, he works as a part-time bartender. Dr. Wright recommends that Ben contact one of his medical colleague, Dr. Peter Wulfric, for other laboratory tests.
Dr. Wulfric meets with Ben and invites him to his lab in the Hamptons. He discovers that this research was revolutionary as they had found a way to plot, record, and playback dreams. To accomplish this they employ a Frequency Responding Lucid Transmitter, aka LUCY. The pecuniary rewards offered make the whole proposition seem dubious, but Ben was blinded by dollar signs.
I must admit that I was intrigued with the basic premise of this story. I’ve heard that everyone dreams in their sleep. A majority of these dreams are forgotten by the time the person wakes, leading them to conclude that they didn’t dream at all. Many dreams are forgotten shortly after waking and occasionally the memory of a dream stays with you forever.
I could identify with Ben, especially his affinity for books. As I read, I felt myself slowly drowning in details and trivia. Like Ben’s life, the story seems to stand still and simply marking time and filling space. That is until Ben meets Sophia Lorenz in Paris. Suddenly the quagmire of emotion that Ben has been in slowly dissipates. Romance shows its head once again and his future somehow seems brighter. With the introduction of the Vitruvian Machine, the tale takes off in a new and unexpected direction. It is impossible to put this story in one particular category. It is easier to say what it isn’t than what it is.
Dr. Wulfric meets with Ben and invites him to his lab in the Hamptons. He discovers that this research was revolutionary as they had found a way to plot, record, and playback dreams. To accomplish this they employ a Frequency Responding Lucid Transmitter, aka LUCY. The pecuniary rewards offered make the whole proposition seem dubious, but Ben was blinded by dollar signs.
I must admit that I was intrigued with the basic premise of this story. I’ve heard that everyone dreams in their sleep. A majority of these dreams are forgotten by the time the person wakes, leading them to conclude that they didn’t dream at all. Many dreams are forgotten shortly after waking and occasionally the memory of a dream stays with you forever.
I could identify with Ben, especially his affinity for books. As I read, I felt myself slowly drowning in details and trivia. Like Ben’s life, the story seems to stand still and simply marking time and filling space. That is until Ben meets Sophia Lorenz in Paris. Suddenly the quagmire of emotion that Ben has been in slowly dissipates. Romance shows its head once again and his future somehow seems brighter. With the introduction of the Vitruvian Machine, the tale takes off in a new and unexpected direction. It is impossible to put this story in one particular category. It is easier to say what it isn’t than what it is.
June 10, 2014
This book captured me with its fast-paced plot and realistic characters. Reminding me of recent novels by Stephen King, the mystery and masterful use of suspense kept me entertained.
Meet Ben, the main character and immediately feel heart broken. A man making his living through testing and sleep experiments, Ben feels every needle prick and remembers the pain of losing his wife. Supplementing his income through the occasional gig as a bartender, he remembers just recently being on top of the world. Married, bar owner and in love with both he was devastated when his wife and bar were taken from him too soon.
Ben’s only friend was his doctor conducting the tests and when he advised Ben their time together was done his world changed for the stranger. Being referred to another doctor for more in depth testing, Ben soon found himself not needing the occasional shift at the bar and exploring the world one grande museum at a time, all expenses paid.
But what goes up must come down and for Ben, it came crashing down hard. No longer sure if he was moving on from Emily or protecting himself from the pain, not knowing if life was reality or a continuation of the dream he was having and with almost constant migraines he was in trouble.
Enjoy this fast paced adventure of dreamland mixed with heartbreaking reality to know how Ben escapes this nightmare.
Thanks for reading,
Sarah Butland
author of Sending You Sammy, Brain Tales – Volume One and Arm Farm
Meet Ben, the main character and immediately feel heart broken. A man making his living through testing and sleep experiments, Ben feels every needle prick and remembers the pain of losing his wife. Supplementing his income through the occasional gig as a bartender, he remembers just recently being on top of the world. Married, bar owner and in love with both he was devastated when his wife and bar were taken from him too soon.
Ben’s only friend was his doctor conducting the tests and when he advised Ben their time together was done his world changed for the stranger. Being referred to another doctor for more in depth testing, Ben soon found himself not needing the occasional shift at the bar and exploring the world one grande museum at a time, all expenses paid.
But what goes up must come down and for Ben, it came crashing down hard. No longer sure if he was moving on from Emily or protecting himself from the pain, not knowing if life was reality or a continuation of the dream he was having and with almost constant migraines he was in trouble.
Enjoy this fast paced adventure of dreamland mixed with heartbreaking reality to know how Ben escapes this nightmare.
Thanks for reading,
Sarah Butland
author of Sending You Sammy, Brain Tales – Volume One and Arm Farm
March 24, 2016
How often do you see dreams that you remember on a morning? How often are those dreams really realistic? How often do you see dream and you realize that you are the one who writes the script for this dream and not your subconscious? For me the answer to all those questions is - too damn often and I'm so tired :)!
Benjamin Walker has seen vivid dreams as long as he can remember and he has also migraines and aura migraines. But he has a good doctor who studies his sleeping problem and over the years Ben has also participated in countless experiences and studies, basically it's more like job for him than just visiting his doctor.
But when his doctor retires he is recommended to turn to another doctor and he is actually offered a new job, a really interesting job, to study world famous paintings very carefully, inch by inch and later dream about them knowingly. With this job he gets to travel and meets new people and everything is good and getting better.
But then the story changes. All of a sudden the whole story is like dream, you can not be sure what is real and what is not. The easy and interesting job is not as easy and harmless as it was at the beginning.
The ending of the story is like taken from a soap-opera handbook, chapter named How to end an intense situation between main characters, with mayor revelations from past.
The story is interesting and the idea behind it was good just the ending was too simplistic.
Benjamin Walker has seen vivid dreams as long as he can remember and he has also migraines and aura migraines. But he has a good doctor who studies his sleeping problem and over the years Ben has also participated in countless experiences and studies, basically it's more like job for him than just visiting his doctor.
But when his doctor retires he is recommended to turn to another doctor and he is actually offered a new job, a really interesting job, to study world famous paintings very carefully, inch by inch and later dream about them knowingly. With this job he gets to travel and meets new people and everything is good and getting better.
But then the story changes. All of a sudden the whole story is like dream, you can not be sure what is real and what is not. The easy and interesting job is not as easy and harmless as it was at the beginning.
The ending of the story is like taken from a soap-opera handbook, chapter named How to end an intense situation between main characters, with mayor revelations from past.
The story is interesting and the idea behind it was good just the ending was too simplistic.
September 6, 2016
I received this ebook from Netgalley for review.
I really enjoyed this novel. The writing was great, with a lot of details throughout that are only explained and tied in at the end – which I love, as if seeds were subtly planted here and there in a greater orchestration of the story, . The plot was fast paced, and I didn’t see some of the twists coming.
I haven’t read much about the actual science of lucid dreaming, but I can imagine how the lines between dreams and reality can begin to blur and meld together, as they did for Ben. I especially loved the scene in which he enters Emily’s painting of the cabin in the woods, and cannot seem to differentiate from then on whether or not he is dreaming or awake, if what is going on is real or not.
I really loved how it ended, the epilogue in particular. It gave me a very eerie feeling, as we are not so far from these kinds of scientific experiments and devices. It really makes you think about the ethics of some of the scientific advancements and how rapidly they’re coming about today, and how they’ll impact our society.
A fantastic, sci-fi/speculative fiction, action-packed read that really makes you think!
I really enjoyed this novel. The writing was great, with a lot of details throughout that are only explained and tied in at the end – which I love, as if seeds were subtly planted here and there in a greater orchestration of the story, . The plot was fast paced, and I didn’t see some of the twists coming.
I haven’t read much about the actual science of lucid dreaming, but I can imagine how the lines between dreams and reality can begin to blur and meld together, as they did for Ben. I especially loved the scene in which he enters Emily’s painting of the cabin in the woods, and cannot seem to differentiate from then on whether or not he is dreaming or awake, if what is going on is real or not.
I really loved how it ended, the epilogue in particular. It gave me a very eerie feeling, as we are not so far from these kinds of scientific experiments and devices. It really makes you think about the ethics of some of the scientific advancements and how rapidly they’re coming about today, and how they’ll impact our society.
A fantastic, sci-fi/speculative fiction, action-packed read that really makes you think!
March 8, 2015
Benjamin Walker makes a living working part-time in a bar and participating in tests involving experimental formulations. When his work in such tests is petering to a close, he gets an offer to participate in a path breaking study that involves digitally recording dreams with extreme lucidity. Ben begins this work that involves a revolutionary device called Lucy that works in tandem with nano particles injected into Ben as a serum to record the dreams. Ben travels to France and Rome studying certain works of art, whose details are captured by Lucy through the dreams.
The story appears to go on like this for about 40% of the book, in a passive but engaging manner. I was wondering where the story is headed and where the excitement is going to come from. I was almost about to give up when the story took a massive turn wrenching me from my complacent reading.
During one of his trips to Europe, Ben dreams about a place called Drapery Falls that puzzles him. At the same time, his handlers controlling the experiment are sent into a tizzy. The story really comes alive! The twists and turns leave you gasping.
Brandon Zenner's writing style is engaging with rich descriptions of places, situations and events. Great book!
The story appears to go on like this for about 40% of the book, in a passive but engaging manner. I was wondering where the story is headed and where the excitement is going to come from. I was almost about to give up when the story took a massive turn wrenching me from my complacent reading.
During one of his trips to Europe, Ben dreams about a place called Drapery Falls that puzzles him. At the same time, his handlers controlling the experiment are sent into a tizzy. The story really comes alive! The twists and turns leave you gasping.
Brandon Zenner's writing style is engaging with rich descriptions of places, situations and events. Great book!
August 12, 2024
A machine capable of recording our dreams has been created: After years of taking experimental medicines and participating in repetitive sleep-related studies, all is finally going well for the test subject, Benjamin Walker . . . until strange dreams begin to plague him and memories once hidden begin to reveal themselves. The doctors and staff onboard the project are not who Ben thinks they are, and the organization will stop at nothing to keep his emerging memories buried for good. At the heart of it all, Ben's worst enemy is his own mind, and he must confront his past in order to save his future. "The twists and turns of the plot will leave your head reeling." (The San Francisco Book Review).
What Amazon reviewers are saying:
"I found myself dropping my kindle in shock at a few points ... It's wonderful."
"... I cannot help but call your attention to this remarkable work. It is captivating, forcing you to think rationally, while you suspend your disbelief."
"Wow! Riveting and twisty! Not at all what I was expecting. Mesmerizing. An awesome read. That'll teach me to try to figure out the plot."
"If you like science fiction and understanding dreams, you will love this book. I've always wanted to remember my dreams in detail and always thought how cool would it be to capture them and re-live them, knowing you were in a dream and knowing you could do anything you wanted. This book combines science with magic and adventure. Good guys and bad guys. Moral dilemmas. My only disappointment is it had to end..."
"The story has plenty of twists and turns that always keep you guessing. The ending was very good, everything was resolved, but then the epilogue threw me for a loop and I'm still trying to figure out what happened (which is awesome)."
"This was such a unique idea, I couldn't put it down. I had to see where it would go next, and throughout the whole story it kept my interest. Clever author. Good job!"
"I loved that I couldn't guess all the twists and turns that kept this story filled with intrigue. The descriptions of lucid dreams was fascinating."
"I am rating Brandon Zenner's first book with 5 stars ("I LOVE IT") because I totally enjoyed reading it and couldn't put it down. It's a thriller/sci-fi with a lot of critical thought throughout. The characters were vividly described and interesting and the plot easy to follow and sprinkled with wicked surprises! Highly recommend this book for anyone who likes suspense."
"I enjoy a good medical mystery that takes current knowledge and makes a leap in a "what if" scenario. Mr. Zenner's book stands tall in this tradition of well written books, along side authors such as Robin Cook and others. He never lost my attention, brilliantly narrated, this story is believable in its detail, and delightful in its characters. Kudos! ... And more please!"
"Ben is a depressed and lonely man whose vivid dreams bring him an opportunity that will change his life ... for the better or for the worse? This techno-thriller explores what can be done to the human pysche, in the name of 'science' and for corporate greed. Thought provoking and hard to put down."
**
Review"Fans of reality-bending sci-fi medical thrillers will find much to savor in this futuristic thrill ride."
-Kirkus Reviews
**
*"*THE EXPERIMENT OF DREAMS was a juxtaposition of genres that will beseech readers to finish the book in one sitting. The twists and turns of the plot will leave your head reeling and possibly questioning your own mental state for a moment. If you are looking for a tempestuous thriller, look no further as this book will surely fill the void."
-**The San Francisco Book Review
"This book brought mystery, danger, romance, and technology all together. It would be amazing if the technology in this book was real. It would change the world."
-Boundless Book Reviews
"This was a solid thriller that kept the reader interested with its characters, settings and creepy dream experiments. Fans of thrillers and mysteries will enjoy THE EXPERIMENT OF DREAMS."
-Portland Book Review
"THE EXPERIMENT OF DREAMS is an absorbing study of how our perception of reality and imagination interact in the subconscious mind. The characters are true to life and the neuroscience is cutting edge yet understandable."
-Indie Reader
"I read. A lot. I found myself dropping my kindle in shock at a few points. Over thirty years of being an avid reader and I can still be surprised. It's wonderful."
-Shawn Remfrey, Literarylitter.blogspot
"I want you all to read this!! 5 Stars to a great new writer in this genre!"
-Mikishope, Book Blogger
About the Author
Brandon Zenner is an American fiction writer and an Amazon best selling author. His short fiction has been published in both print and online publications, the first being submitted when he was 19 years old. THE EXPERIMENT OF DREAMS, his debut thriller, has reached Amazon's best seller list many times. His second novel, WHISKEY DEVILS, was a winner in the 2016 Global Ebook Awards. THE AFTER WAR, a post-apocalyptic thriller, was a semi-finalist in the 2016 BookLife Prize in Fiction, a contest run by Publishers Weekly, a finalist in the 2017 Eric Hoffer Book Award, and a finalist in the Red City Review Book Award. His genre of choice are thrillers, crime, dystopian, and science fiction.
July 2, 2014
A captivating Fringe fiction thriller. Ben leads a solitary life tending bar a few times a week and being paid to partake in medical trials linked to his past history of migraine and sleep studies. He is approached by a private company to take part in controversial trials which uncover things from his past that were hidden from him. The result of this new experimentation leaves Ben unsure of what is real and what he has concocted in his mind.
The fictional technology in this thriller is very original and mind-bending. I was hooked to the story from the start and although some aspects of the story I could see coming a lot of the revelations still kept me on the edge if my seat. Well-written bar a few typos in the mobi file I reviewed, I found this book easy to read, put down and pick up. The characters were adequate, Ben the protagonist being the most complex and you got a grandfatherly feel for Peter Wulfric from the start. The sinister Mr Kalispell is a shadowy villain.
Overall I enjoyed the book and the dramatic conclusion.
The fictional technology in this thriller is very original and mind-bending. I was hooked to the story from the start and although some aspects of the story I could see coming a lot of the revelations still kept me on the edge if my seat. Well-written bar a few typos in the mobi file I reviewed, I found this book easy to read, put down and pick up. The characters were adequate, Ben the protagonist being the most complex and you got a grandfatherly feel for Peter Wulfric from the start. The sinister Mr Kalispell is a shadowy villain.
Overall I enjoyed the book and the dramatic conclusion.
December 27, 2014
REVIEW: THE EXPERIMENT ON DREAMS by Brandon Zenner
An exciting and sensorily vivid and vibrant novel, THE EXPERIMENT ON DREAMS is an adventurous international thriller, as well as deep exploration into the mind and subconscious of one individual. Ben Walker has been an experimental subject for decades, and has become extraordinarily gifted at Lucid Dreaming. He is sought out to be tested in private-sector experimentation with an avant garde device nicknamed "Lucy," which receives and records data of dreams. Ben leaps at both the opportunity, and the payment, only to discover what seems too good to be true, may indeed be true, but not good.
An exciting and sensorily vivid and vibrant novel, THE EXPERIMENT ON DREAMS is an adventurous international thriller, as well as deep exploration into the mind and subconscious of one individual. Ben Walker has been an experimental subject for decades, and has become extraordinarily gifted at Lucid Dreaming. He is sought out to be tested in private-sector experimentation with an avant garde device nicknamed "Lucy," which receives and records data of dreams. Ben leaps at both the opportunity, and the payment, only to discover what seems too good to be true, may indeed be true, but not good.
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