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Elizabeth Bennet has led a quiet life in Hertfordshire. Longbourn, her home since birth, hardly feels welcoming given the less-than-loving treatment bestowed by her stepmother, half-sisters, and more recently, her most beloved stepsister, Jane. With plans to partake in the season with their mother’s family, Elizabeth and Mary anticipate the moment when they can go where they are wanted. When three handsome gentlemen arrive, Elizabeth discovers that appearances are not everything, and a handsome face does not readily reveal the qualities—good or bad—that lie within.
Fitzwilliam Darcy did not come to Meryton to fall in love. Despite his best efforts, the beguiling sister of Bingley’s latest angel fascinates him, drawing him in with her fine eyes and pert opinions. Every natural feeling protests against uniting the Darcy name with someone so beneath him, and he flees Hertfordshire before he falls further under her spell. Fate has other plans, and despite his best efforts, Elizabeth is thrown in his path once more. But all is not as it seems, and when Elizabeth’s true circumstances are revealed, Mr. Darcy must decide if he can become a man worthy of her or lose her to another.
In this low-angst, sweet and clean Pride and Prejudice variation, Elizabeth’s fortunes and connections grant her a brighter future, and Darcy must endeavor to deserve her.
Fitzwilliam Darcy did not come to Meryton to fall in love. Despite his best efforts, the beguiling sister of Bingley’s latest angel fascinates him, drawing him in with her fine eyes and pert opinions. Every natural feeling protests against uniting the Darcy name with someone so beneath him, and he flees Hertfordshire before he falls further under her spell. Fate has other plans, and despite his best efforts, Elizabeth is thrown in his path once more. But all is not as it seems, and when Elizabeth’s true circumstances are revealed, Mr. Darcy must decide if he can become a man worthy of her or lose her to another.
In this low-angst, sweet and clean Pride and Prejudice variation, Elizabeth’s fortunes and connections grant her a brighter future, and Darcy must endeavor to deserve her.
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Published March 10, 2025
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March 11, 2025
All is not what it seems.
“Oh, no,” he murmured. “What have I done?” (quote from the book)
Ms. Stratton has a very active imagination. In this latest book, Mr. Thomas Bennet has been married twice. The first to the love of his life and the second, well, let’s just say the polar opposite. How both marriages come about are rendered in the first several chapters. He also has two daughters, Elizabeth and Mary, from his first wife, and two from his second, Catherine and Lydia. His second wife was a widow with a small daughter, Jane. So, all five are accounted for. But not all are well connected or wealthy. This is where life for Elizabeth and Mary is less than ideal. Thank goodness for their uncle and his family to at least try and make up for the failings of their father and the cruelty of their stepmother.
“I was true to myself and my convictions, she reminded herself sternly. If he cannot love me as I am, then I must not lose my heart to him.” (quote from the book)
I devoured this book. There was much that I enjoyed:
1) How the book started with a younger Mr. Bennet meeting his first wife.
2) How Mr. Bennet wound up married again.
3) The better connections for Elizabeth and Mary.
4) The little tweaks to canon.
5) Lady Catherine’s share of the conversation.
6) Mr. Collins unique tweak – but in essentials the same.
7) Jane’s twist in the story.
8) Lydia’s twist in the story.
9) Charlotte’s twist in the story.
10) A family connection to someone less than admirable.
11) Reference to two of Jane Austen’s characters from two of her other books.
12) How Elizabeth holds true to herself.
However, there were some things that took a bit of the spark out of my full enjoyment.
1) A bit more ‘telling than showing’ which takes away from the emotive aspect in this novel.
2) I wish some of the middle was tighter so there was more time between Elizabeth and Darcy to build on their relationship as we came to the end. I felt they didn’t have enough page time. Nor for that matter did some of the other couples.
3) Kitty’s twist in the story. But this probably is more a personal feeling for me than anything. I hate to see her be ‘used’ in the way she was to close out a thread in the story. (though I was expecting it)
4) The Epilogue. Now I don’t always need one as some stories end quite well without them. That said, I do like them. However, this one I found insufficient. I wanted more on what became of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. They are central to this particular story. Of course, I wanted more on the other couples as well.
I still thoroughly enjoyed the story and highly recommend it. Ms. Stratton certainly creates some wonderful variations!
I received a free copy of this and am voluntarily leaving my review.
“Oh, no,” he murmured. “What have I done?” (quote from the book)
Ms. Stratton has a very active imagination. In this latest book, Mr. Thomas Bennet has been married twice. The first to the love of his life and the second, well, let’s just say the polar opposite. How both marriages come about are rendered in the first several chapters. He also has two daughters, Elizabeth and Mary, from his first wife, and two from his second, Catherine and Lydia. His second wife was a widow with a small daughter, Jane. So, all five are accounted for. But not all are well connected or wealthy. This is where life for Elizabeth and Mary is less than ideal. Thank goodness for their uncle and his family to at least try and make up for the failings of their father and the cruelty of their stepmother.
“I was true to myself and my convictions, she reminded herself sternly. If he cannot love me as I am, then I must not lose my heart to him.” (quote from the book)
I devoured this book. There was much that I enjoyed:
1) How the book started with a younger Mr. Bennet meeting his first wife.
2) How Mr. Bennet wound up married again.
3) The better connections for Elizabeth and Mary.
4) The little tweaks to canon.
5) Lady Catherine’s share of the conversation.
6) Mr. Collins unique tweak – but in essentials the same.
7) Jane’s twist in the story.
8) Lydia’s twist in the story.
9) Charlotte’s twist in the story.
10) A family connection to someone less than admirable.
11) Reference to two of Jane Austen’s characters from two of her other books.
12) How Elizabeth holds true to herself.
However, there were some things that took a bit of the spark out of my full enjoyment.
1) A bit more ‘telling than showing’ which takes away from the emotive aspect in this novel.
2) I wish some of the middle was tighter so there was more time between Elizabeth and Darcy to build on their relationship as we came to the end. I felt they didn’t have enough page time. Nor for that matter did some of the other couples.
3) Kitty’s twist in the story. But this probably is more a personal feeling for me than anything. I hate to see her be ‘used’ in the way she was to close out a thread in the story. (though I was expecting it)
4) The Epilogue. Now I don’t always need one as some stories end quite well without them. That said, I do like them. However, this one I found insufficient. I wanted more on what became of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. They are central to this particular story. Of course, I wanted more on the other couples as well.
I still thoroughly enjoyed the story and highly recommend it. Ms. Stratton certainly creates some wonderful variations!
I received a free copy of this and am voluntarily leaving my review.
March 16, 2025
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars.
The circumstances of the Bennet family are most important as they so differ from the family in canon. First of all both this Mr. and Mrs. Bennet have been married before and have children from their first marriage. Jane is not a Bennet but a Younge, although she is called Miss Bennet throughout most of the story. Elizabeth and Mary are the product of Mr. Bennet's marriage to the daughter of an earl. So they have not only connections but also rich dowries. Catherine and Lydia are the product of this second marriage for both. However, you must read to learn of just how Mr. Bennet was trapped into this second marriage while he was still in the throes of mourning his first wife's death!
Jane is, at first, much like the Jane we know from canon. However, a summer spent in London with the Gardeners has her returning home to Longbourn a different and not-so-nice person.
So Darcy in coming to Netherfield with Bingley has all the prejudices we know of from canon. Yes, he is drawn to Elizabeth but again fights that inclination. And we, again, eventually have his bad proposal.
Lady Catherine is not as we know her. Collins is a very handsome man with all the behaviors, (including stepping on toes during dancing) that we see in P&P. Lydia does NOT fall for Wickham...this was an interesting twist!
You almost have to laugh when Darcy finds Elizabeth walking in Hyde Park and assumes she has traveled from Gracechurch Street as he does not know of her connections to a peer.
I was disappointed with the ending including the epilogue. I wanted more interaction...more romance at the end.
Overall I did enjoy this story. Kept turning pages wanting to see when Darcy would finally learn of Elizabeth's true situation.
The circumstances of the Bennet family are most important as they so differ from the family in canon. First of all both this Mr. and Mrs. Bennet have been married before and have children from their first marriage. Jane is not a Bennet but a Younge, although she is called Miss Bennet throughout most of the story. Elizabeth and Mary are the product of Mr. Bennet's marriage to the daughter of an earl. So they have not only connections but also rich dowries. Catherine and Lydia are the product of this second marriage for both. However, you must read to learn of just how Mr. Bennet was trapped into this second marriage while he was still in the throes of mourning his first wife's death!
Jane is, at first, much like the Jane we know from canon. However, a summer spent in London with the Gardeners has her returning home to Longbourn a different and not-so-nice person.
So Darcy in coming to Netherfield with Bingley has all the prejudices we know of from canon. Yes, he is drawn to Elizabeth but again fights that inclination. And we, again, eventually have his bad proposal.
Lady Catherine is not as we know her. Collins is a very handsome man with all the behaviors, (including stepping on toes during dancing) that we see in P&P. Lydia does NOT fall for Wickham...this was an interesting twist!
You almost have to laugh when Darcy finds Elizabeth walking in Hyde Park and assumes she has traveled from Gracechurch Street as he does not know of her connections to a peer.
I was disappointed with the ending including the epilogue. I wanted more interaction...more romance at the end.
Overall I did enjoy this story. Kept turning pages wanting to see when Darcy would finally learn of Elizabeth's true situation.
February 3, 2025
I quite liked it.
The book sounded intriguing and so I wanted to read the book, fortunately because it was really good although I don't like Elizabeth getting ab*sed by Mrs Bennet but in this case it was well done and Elizabeth doesn't cower in a corner but stands up for herself.
As it is stated, Elizabeth is rich because she has a different mother. Mr. Bennet's first wife was from the first circles, peerage even. But not only Elizabeth, also Mary. Both share the same father and the same mother. Both are rich, a fact which the current Mrs Bennet despises because her perfect Jane (from her first marriage) has next to no dowry. In fact, Mrs Bennet despised everything about Elizabeth and Mary.
This book has everything you want or need in a story. Handsome men with different characters, poverty, wealth, drama, angst, romances, ab*se, friendship, and family. Not to mention the plot twists.
Though one thing annoyed me a bit, Ms Stratton wrote down the entire Bath scene from the Pride and Prejudice BBC Mini Series 1995, why not another idea not written by someone else for a mini series? I think there was also another scene from P&P 1995.
Otherwise, I really do recommend the book.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The book sounded intriguing and so I wanted to read the book, fortunately because it was really good although I don't like Elizabeth getting ab*sed by Mrs Bennet but in this case it was well done and Elizabeth doesn't cower in a corner but stands up for herself.
As it is stated, Elizabeth is rich because she has a different mother. Mr. Bennet's first wife was from the first circles, peerage even. But not only Elizabeth, also Mary. Both share the same father and the same mother. Both are rich, a fact which the current Mrs Bennet despises because her perfect Jane (from her first marriage) has next to no dowry. In fact, Mrs Bennet despised everything about Elizabeth and Mary.
This book has everything you want or need in a story. Handsome men with different characters, poverty, wealth, drama, angst, romances, ab*se, friendship, and family. Not to mention the plot twists.
Though one thing annoyed me a bit, Ms Stratton wrote down the entire Bath scene from the Pride and Prejudice BBC Mini Series 1995, why not another idea not written by someone else for a mini series? I think there was also another scene from P&P 1995.
Otherwise, I really do recommend the book.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 4, 2025
A Pride and Prejudice variation where the Bennets are a family welded together by misfortune, with only Elizabeth and Mary the daughters of Bennet's first marriage to the daughter of an Earl, and all with varying financial situations. But what will become of them as they grow up, and will meet the Bingleys and Darcy at Longbourn and in town.
An entertaining and well-written story with its cast of varied characters, some unlikeable.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
An entertaining and well-written story with its cast of varied characters, some unlikeable.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 11, 2025
I’m a big M J Stratton fan and I’m also a fan of the “Elizabeth is not, or is more than” a Bennet trope. This story had some noble relations for Elizabeth and Mary (who are not Fanny Bennet’s daughters). Their uncle, an Earl, did an admirable job attempting to take care of them and see to their needs in spite of their father’s neglect and Mrs Bennet’s hostility towards them. The story also featured a poorly behaved Jane, although she really wasn’t a bad person.
I wished there had been a bit more chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy. Elizabeth spent the entire book hiding her true origins from him so of course they couldn’t develop an honest relationship. I did like the story, just would have preferred more romance.
I wished there had been a bit more chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy. Elizabeth spent the entire book hiding her true origins from him so of course they couldn’t develop an honest relationship. I did like the story, just would have preferred more romance.
August 1, 2025
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This variation positions Elizabeth and Mary Bennet as daughters of Thomas Bennet and Lady Olivia, daughter of the Earl of Elmwood.
Their passionate love match came to an abrupt end when Lady Olivia died in childbirth. Thomas is left with a broken heart and two very young daughters.
Unfortunately, Thomas turns to drink and neglects his family and estate for several months. Brother in law, Viscount Mavery tries to get through to him, with little success.
In such a state, Bennet was vulnerable and finds himself taken advantage of by a solicitor called Gardiner. Thus, he agrees to marry Gardiner's widowed daughter, Fanny Younge.
Life at Longbourn is changed forever.
Their stepmother does her best to exclude them, diverting funds to her own children.
Fortunately, the Earl ensures they have the education, appropriate to their rank.
By the time Mr Darcy and Mr Bingley arrive in Meryton, Elizabeth is counting down the days until she and Mary go to London for the Season.
So Darcy starts off haughty and superior, but then has to do a swift pivot when he discovers Elizabeth's fortune and connections.
Add into the mix a foolish, but very handsome Mr Collins who has the ladies of Longbourn, all-a-flutter.
An enjoyable read, with a mixture of amiable and unpleasant characters and enough time to understand why they behave as they do.
Folly, romance and a bonus, Lady Catherine is nice!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
This variation positions Elizabeth and Mary Bennet as daughters of Thomas Bennet and Lady Olivia, daughter of the Earl of Elmwood.
Their passionate love match came to an abrupt end when Lady Olivia died in childbirth. Thomas is left with a broken heart and two very young daughters.
Unfortunately, Thomas turns to drink and neglects his family and estate for several months. Brother in law, Viscount Mavery tries to get through to him, with little success.
In such a state, Bennet was vulnerable and finds himself taken advantage of by a solicitor called Gardiner. Thus, he agrees to marry Gardiner's widowed daughter, Fanny Younge.
Life at Longbourn is changed forever.
Their stepmother does her best to exclude them, diverting funds to her own children.
Fortunately, the Earl ensures they have the education, appropriate to their rank.
By the time Mr Darcy and Mr Bingley arrive in Meryton, Elizabeth is counting down the days until she and Mary go to London for the Season.
So Darcy starts off haughty and superior, but then has to do a swift pivot when he discovers Elizabeth's fortune and connections.
Add into the mix a foolish, but very handsome Mr Collins who has the ladies of Longbourn, all-a-flutter.
An enjoyable read, with a mixture of amiable and unpleasant characters and enough time to understand why they behave as they do.
Folly, romance and a bonus, Lady Catherine is nice!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 23, 2025
This was an interesting story with Jane from Mrs. Bennet’s first marriage, and Elizabeth and Mary from Mr. Bennet’s first marriage. I thought the changes to the Bennet family were interesting.
I struggled to believe that the truth of Jane, Elizabeth, and Mary’s parentage was such a closely held secret in Meryton. That seemed farfetched.
I also felt the story lacked romance between Darcy and Elizabeth, mostly because she spends all her energy trying to hide from him the fact that her uncle is an earl, and she has a respectable dowry. Why the subterfuge? It definitely lowered my opinion of this Elizabeth. As soon as she detected any interest from Darcy, the right thing to do would have been to be honest.
I struggled to believe that the truth of Jane, Elizabeth, and Mary’s parentage was such a closely held secret in Meryton. That seemed farfetched.
I also felt the story lacked romance between Darcy and Elizabeth, mostly because she spends all her energy trying to hide from him the fact that her uncle is an earl, and she has a respectable dowry. Why the subterfuge? It definitely lowered my opinion of this Elizabeth. As soon as she detected any interest from Darcy, the right thing to do would have been to be honest.
February 19, 2025
Elizabeth lives a quiet life at Longbourn. Over the years she has become accustomed to avoiding the harsh treatment of her stepmother. When, after a stay at town, even her beloved step sister Jane is changed and hostile Elizabeth has enough. Therefore she and Mary, her sister by birth, are eagerly anticipating her season in town to get away from this loveless place. But before they depart some handsome newcomers arrive in the area, leaving the inhabitants of Longbourn in an uproar. And Elizabeth soon realises that not behind every handsome face is a good man with a truthful character.
Fitzwilliam Darcy's aim in coming to Netherfield was certainly not to fall in love. But that is exactly what has happened. To escape the fine eyes of the enchanting Elizabeth Bennet the flees to London only to encounter her there again.
Will Darcy give in to his longing for Elizabeth's company and conquer his sense of duty? What will he do when Elizabeth's true circumstances are finally revealed? And does Elizabeth even return his regard?
The story was very well written by the author MJ Stratton. I always like her variations very much and this one was no exception. Elizabeth's most important realization is that not every good looking person is handsome on the inside and outside.
There were some dramatic chances in some characters compared to the original story. Most of the characters are now more likeable and helpful for Darcy and Elizabeth.
One of my favourite changes was certainly that Mr Collins is a handsome guy in there. When one additionally thinks about his character that combination is really funny and leads to some changes in the story. But you will need to read for yourself.
Mrs Bennet is one who changed for the worse, she is not just silly, she is hostile and not a motherly figure for Elizabeth and Mary. Only for her own daughters she has affection. I am really sorry for Elizabeth and Mary to grow up in such a loveless surrounding. I'm glad that they are, despite the circumstances, able to grow into worthy, caring ladies.
Due to the loveless surroundings, the change in character of some people and of her circumstances Elizabeth is more attentive and not so easily fooled by a handsome face. I like that very much. Due to this there are not too many things standing between Darcy and Elizabeth when he finally proposes to her, many things have already been clarified.
Also, due to the changes in character that I already mentioned, most of Darcy's relatives are really supportive to the match between Darcy and Elizabeth and he gets much support and encouragement. I like that very much, it is refreshing because normally there is at least one relation who is strictly against Darcy marrying Elizabeth and tries to interfere.
There are no real villains in the story to stand in the way of ODC, Elizabeth and Darcy must overcome their pride and prejudice and learn to value the other for their true character.
If you like to know how a changed Bennet family and the prospect of a season in town for Elizabeth and Mary alters the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth you should read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it
I received a free copy of the book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Fitzwilliam Darcy's aim in coming to Netherfield was certainly not to fall in love. But that is exactly what has happened. To escape the fine eyes of the enchanting Elizabeth Bennet the flees to London only to encounter her there again.
Will Darcy give in to his longing for Elizabeth's company and conquer his sense of duty? What will he do when Elizabeth's true circumstances are finally revealed? And does Elizabeth even return his regard?
The story was very well written by the author MJ Stratton. I always like her variations very much and this one was no exception. Elizabeth's most important realization is that not every good looking person is handsome on the inside and outside.
There were some dramatic chances in some characters compared to the original story. Most of the characters are now more likeable and helpful for Darcy and Elizabeth.
One of my favourite changes was certainly that Mr Collins is a handsome guy in there. When one additionally thinks about his character that combination is really funny and leads to some changes in the story. But you will need to read for yourself.
Mrs Bennet is one who changed for the worse, she is not just silly, she is hostile and not a motherly figure for Elizabeth and Mary. Only for her own daughters she has affection. I am really sorry for Elizabeth and Mary to grow up in such a loveless surrounding. I'm glad that they are, despite the circumstances, able to grow into worthy, caring ladies.
Due to the loveless surroundings, the change in character of some people and of her circumstances Elizabeth is more attentive and not so easily fooled by a handsome face. I like that very much. Due to this there are not too many things standing between Darcy and Elizabeth when he finally proposes to her, many things have already been clarified.
Also, due to the changes in character that I already mentioned, most of Darcy's relatives are really supportive to the match between Darcy and Elizabeth and he gets much support and encouragement. I like that very much, it is refreshing because normally there is at least one relation who is strictly against Darcy marrying Elizabeth and tries to interfere.
There are no real villains in the story to stand in the way of ODC, Elizabeth and Darcy must overcome their pride and prejudice and learn to value the other for their true character.
If you like to know how a changed Bennet family and the prospect of a season in town for Elizabeth and Mary alters the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth you should read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it
I received a free copy of the book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 6, 2025
4.5* rounded up.
I thought that this was a wonderful story with just the right amount of angst, and with sense kicking in for all parties after some internal debate. Again, the author has come up with a unique plot for our beloved Pride and Prejudice characters. The dialogue is intelligent and witty, enhancing this story's pace and my interest in the plot progression. I pictured a couple of the characters here as Ken and Barbie dolls— aesthetically pleasing, but ultimately rubber-brained. One of the themes that the book explores is judging a book by its cover. With C&C's lovely cover, the story definitely reflects this theme.
I thought that this was a wonderful story with just the right amount of angst, and with sense kicking in for all parties after some internal debate. Again, the author has come up with a unique plot for our beloved Pride and Prejudice characters. The dialogue is intelligent and witty, enhancing this story's pace and my interest in the plot progression. I pictured a couple of the characters here as Ken and Barbie dolls— aesthetically pleasing, but ultimately rubber-brained. One of the themes that the book explores is judging a book by its cover. With C&C's lovely cover, the story definitely reflects this theme.
June 30, 2025
Evil stepmother - Evil Stepsisters!!
Oh My this is a Jaff/Cinderella fantastic tale!
This is quite a different version. Mr Bennet’s marriage to a daughter of an Earl changes everything!
A true love of the deepest measure.
Elizabeth was born first but when Mary is born tragedy steals this perfect love.
Poor Mr Bennet is so heartbroken he can barely look at the babies. He buries himself in the bottle and gets dragged into a sham marriage with Gardiner’s widowed sister and her daughter Jane.
This new Mrs Bennet despises Elizabeth and Mary as they both resemble their beautiful mother. She makes both suffer:(
A more dysfunctional family could not exist!
Though the secret of Lizzy and Mary’s true family are hardly mentioned.
Imagine a devastatingly handsome Mr Collins!! That Lizzy and Mary are ordered to stay away from!
A lady Catherine who adores Elizabeth!
An evil plotting Jane who is anything but sweet and demure!
Unaware of Elizabeth’s exalted relations Darcy makes a cake of himself trying to win her approbation.
A long book with many characters interchanged from their roles in canon. After a rollercoaster ride Darcy sees the error of his ways!
Great story don’t miss it!
Oh My this is a Jaff/Cinderella fantastic tale!
This is quite a different version. Mr Bennet’s marriage to a daughter of an Earl changes everything!
A true love of the deepest measure.
Elizabeth was born first but when Mary is born tragedy steals this perfect love.
Poor Mr Bennet is so heartbroken he can barely look at the babies. He buries himself in the bottle and gets dragged into a sham marriage with Gardiner’s widowed sister and her daughter Jane.
This new Mrs Bennet despises Elizabeth and Mary as they both resemble their beautiful mother. She makes both suffer:(
A more dysfunctional family could not exist!
Though the secret of Lizzy and Mary’s true family are hardly mentioned.
Imagine a devastatingly handsome Mr Collins!! That Lizzy and Mary are ordered to stay away from!
A lady Catherine who adores Elizabeth!
An evil plotting Jane who is anything but sweet and demure!
Unaware of Elizabeth’s exalted relations Darcy makes a cake of himself trying to win her approbation.
A long book with many characters interchanged from their roles in canon. After a rollercoaster ride Darcy sees the error of his ways!
Great story don’t miss it!
March 15, 2025
I rapidly gave up reading this variation which begins with the narrative of Mr Bennet's tragic past followed by the tedious narrative of the girls' childhood. Mrs Bennet is depicted as the caricatural evil stepmother to not one but two Cinderellas. I know P&P is sometimes seen as a variation of the famous fairy tale but I like to think Jane Austen was quite subtle about it, if indeed such was her intention. The boring (in my opinion) and quite expected tale of two mistreated sisters did nothing to endear this reader to Elizabeth and I quit just before the arrival of Bingley in the neighborhood, a solid hour into my reading. I am sure Darcy's appearance spices the story up a bit. The fairy tale quality of this book might also appeal to other readers, or to readers who enjoy variations centered on the dynamics between the Bennet sisters.
July 31, 2025
Excellent narration by Elizabeth Grace.
March 10, 2025
Not exactly a Bennet
The Mr and Mrs Bennet we know were each married before bringing 3 daughters to the family and then having 2 more. Elizabeth and Mary’s mother was the daughter of an earl so they have some lofty if unknown connections and hefty secret dowries. Into this comes all the usual suspects. But many have very different personalities. The interactions between Collins and Wickham made me snicker, Lady Catherine and Anne were wonderful. Darcy as always has lessons to learn and he learns them.
Great story, several sweet romances, and a fun set down for the Orange Harridan!
The Mr and Mrs Bennet we know were each married before bringing 3 daughters to the family and then having 2 more. Elizabeth and Mary’s mother was the daughter of an earl so they have some lofty if unknown connections and hefty secret dowries. Into this comes all the usual suspects. But many have very different personalities. The interactions between Collins and Wickham made me snicker, Lady Catherine and Anne were wonderful. Darcy as always has lessons to learn and he learns them.
Great story, several sweet romances, and a fun set down for the Orange Harridan!
March 21, 2025
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS***
>>Rating: mature teen
>>Angst Level: Frustration with a particular character
>>Source: This was borrowed via KU 3-11-25 and I volunteered to leave a review. Part of the Timeless Love Series [8 books]. I read it twice.
>>Trope[s]: Per the author: They include all my favorites. [1] Elizabeth and Mary are daughters from Mr. Bennet’s first marriage. [2] They are better connected than known. [3] Jane is from Mrs. Bennet’s first marriage, which means she is not a Bennet. [4] A Hot Mr. Collins (I know). [5] A Kind and attentive Lady Catherine (bite my tongue). [6] An Evil stepmother, Mrs. Bennet (of course). [7] Unusual pairing for Mr. Collins. (I did not see that coming. What a hoot.) [8] A deliciously arrogant Mr. Darcy. Good grief! That boy was so smug and conceded that he hated himself. Seriously?
Mr. Bennet’s first wife had died and left him in a dazed melancholy. During a drunken stupor, he was manipulated into marrying the beautiful widow Fanny Younge née Gardiner. Yeah, that Younge family. Her husband had died and she had a young daughter, Jane. Bennet already had two daughters and was convinced that they needed a mother. Imagine his shock and surprise when he sobered and discovered the consequence of his actions.
This is a story in which Elizabeth and Mary have higher connections (nieces of an Earl) and a dowry unknown to many people. Caroline Bingley would weep if she knew. Fitzwilliam Darcy arrived and issued his ungentlemanly insult at the Merton Assembly. If it had only been Elizabeth, she would have ignored him. However, Mary was with her and she took up for her younger sister. Darcy was horrified to be spoken to by a lady who had not been introduced. The war between them was on. What fun. I had to read it twice.
>>Rating: mature teen
>>Angst Level: Frustration with a particular character
>>Source: This was borrowed via KU 3-11-25 and I volunteered to leave a review. Part of the Timeless Love Series [8 books]. I read it twice.
>>Trope[s]: Per the author: They include all my favorites. [1] Elizabeth and Mary are daughters from Mr. Bennet’s first marriage. [2] They are better connected than known. [3] Jane is from Mrs. Bennet’s first marriage, which means she is not a Bennet. [4] A Hot Mr. Collins (I know). [5] A Kind and attentive Lady Catherine (bite my tongue). [6] An Evil stepmother, Mrs. Bennet (of course). [7] Unusual pairing for Mr. Collins. (I did not see that coming. What a hoot.) [8] A deliciously arrogant Mr. Darcy. Good grief! That boy was so smug and conceded that he hated himself. Seriously?
Mr. Bennet’s first wife had died and left him in a dazed melancholy. During a drunken stupor, he was manipulated into marrying the beautiful widow Fanny Younge née Gardiner. Yeah, that Younge family. Her husband had died and she had a young daughter, Jane. Bennet already had two daughters and was convinced that they needed a mother. Imagine his shock and surprise when he sobered and discovered the consequence of his actions.
This is a story in which Elizabeth and Mary have higher connections (nieces of an Earl) and a dowry unknown to many people. Caroline Bingley would weep if she knew. Fitzwilliam Darcy arrived and issued his ungentlemanly insult at the Merton Assembly. If it had only been Elizabeth, she would have ignored him. However, Mary was with her and she took up for her younger sister. Darcy was horrified to be spoken to by a lady who had not been introduced. The war between them was on. What fun. I had to read it twice.
April 29, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is Book Six in the Darcy and Elizabeth Variations series. This is a low-angst, sweet, and clean story where Elizabeth is wealthy and well connected, and she is not Mrs. Bennett’s daughter. In this story, Jane is bad, and Darcy is repentant.
Elizabeth Bennet has led a quiet life in Hertfordshire. Longbourn, her home since birth, hardly feels welcoming given the less-than-loving treatment bestowed by her stepmother, half-sisters, and more recently, her most beloved stepsister, Jane. With plans to partake in the season with their mother’s family, Elizabeth and Mary anticipate the moment when they can go where they are wanted. When three handsome gentlemen arrive, Elizabeth discovers that appearances are not everything, and a handsome face does not readily reveal the qualities, good or bad, that lie within.
Fitzwilliam Darcy did not come to Meryton to fall in love, but despite his best efforts, the beguiling sister of Bingley’s latest angel fascinates him, drawing him in with her fine eyes and pert opinions. Every natural feeling protests against uniting the Darcy name with someone so beneath him, and he flees Hertfordshire before he falls further under her spell. Fate has other plans, and despite his best efforts, Elizabeth is thrown in his path once more, but all is not as it seems, and when Elizabeth’s true circumstances are revealed, Mr. Darcy must decide if he can become a man worthy of her or lose her to another. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is Book Six in the Darcy and Elizabeth Variations series. This is a low-angst, sweet, and clean story where Elizabeth is wealthy and well connected, and she is not Mrs. Bennett’s daughter. In this story, Jane is bad, and Darcy is repentant.
Elizabeth Bennet has led a quiet life in Hertfordshire. Longbourn, her home since birth, hardly feels welcoming given the less-than-loving treatment bestowed by her stepmother, half-sisters, and more recently, her most beloved stepsister, Jane. With plans to partake in the season with their mother’s family, Elizabeth and Mary anticipate the moment when they can go where they are wanted. When three handsome gentlemen arrive, Elizabeth discovers that appearances are not everything, and a handsome face does not readily reveal the qualities, good or bad, that lie within.
Fitzwilliam Darcy did not come to Meryton to fall in love, but despite his best efforts, the beguiling sister of Bingley’s latest angel fascinates him, drawing him in with her fine eyes and pert opinions. Every natural feeling protests against uniting the Darcy name with someone so beneath him, and he flees Hertfordshire before he falls further under her spell. Fate has other plans, and despite his best efforts, Elizabeth is thrown in his path once more, but all is not as it seems, and when Elizabeth’s true circumstances are revealed, Mr. Darcy must decide if he can become a man worthy of her or lose her to another. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
March 11, 2025
Stratton doesn’t disappoint
This is a story so different from what I expected . The core of P&P is embedded but with changes.
A bit of Spoilers
Well written and in this one is Jane is not a Bennett—
Jane works hard however she slips into a bade place. This Mr Bennett is not someone I respect. He thinks he is doing right by 2 of his daughters but truly is failing all of is daughters. Mrs Bennett is horrible and cruel.
The Gardiners are not as prominent but still the Gardiners are wonderful.
Collins is seeking a wife, handsome, and shallow. He knows his limits but he still is so annoying. Lydia is a surprise and doesn’t marry an officer.
Elizabeth is not so stubborn and not so perfect. Anne de B is healthy and allowed to be herself.
I wish there was more to the story.
This is a story so different from what I expected . The core of P&P is embedded but with changes.
A bit of Spoilers
Well written and in this one is Jane is not a Bennett—
Jane works hard however she slips into a bade place. This Mr Bennett is not someone I respect. He thinks he is doing right by 2 of his daughters but truly is failing all of is daughters. Mrs Bennett is horrible and cruel.
The Gardiners are not as prominent but still the Gardiners are wonderful.
Collins is seeking a wife, handsome, and shallow. He knows his limits but he still is so annoying. Lydia is a surprise and doesn’t marry an officer.
Elizabeth is not so stubborn and not so perfect. Anne de B is healthy and allowed to be herself.
I wish there was more to the story.
February 19, 2025
I just loved this variation. Or I suppose technically it is a vagary since both Mr Bennet and Mrs Bennet are in their second marriage. None the less, this was completely engrossing. I loved it! Lizzy was a little more perceptive and less naive, but sadly still prejudiced while Darcy was a tad less proud, but still suffered from foot-in-mouth disease. Thankfully they all had people around them to help sort them out.
Mr Collins was a surprise! As was Lady Catherine. Such interesting twists to canon. MJ Stratton's story telling and writing was just fantastic.
(Oh my - I sound like Mr Collins - but truly I am sincere in my flattery!).
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Mr Collins was a surprise! As was Lady Catherine. Such interesting twists to canon. MJ Stratton's story telling and writing was just fantastic.
(Oh my - I sound like Mr Collins - but truly I am sincere in my flattery!).
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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April 1, 2025A Pride and Prejudice variation which claimed to be a "Lizzy is not a Bennet" version, although in this case, Jane is not a Bennet.
In this version Lizzy and Mary and Mr Bennet's only daughters from his much-beloved first wife. Mr Bennet, is tricked in marrying his second wife, who brought a little girl (Jane) with her to the marriage. The couple has two more children (Kitty and Lydia, who are relatively close to their cannon version, although Lydia and Lizzy do get closer in the second half of the book.).
Jane goes through a horrid period, but comes through it. Everything turns out relatively well and there are happy endings for everyone (except, arguably, Mrs Bennet and Kitty).
Oh, and Mr Collins is quite different in this version, as is his fate.
In this version Lizzy and Mary and Mr Bennet's only daughters from his much-beloved first wife. Mr Bennet, is tricked in marrying his second wife, who brought a little girl (Jane) with her to the marriage. The couple has two more children (Kitty and Lydia, who are relatively close to their cannon version, although Lydia and Lizzy do get closer in the second half of the book.).
Jane goes through a horrid period, but comes through it. Everything turns out relatively well and there are happy endings for everyone (except, arguably, Mrs Bennet and Kitty).
Oh, and Mr Collins is quite different in this version, as is his fate.
May 13, 2025
Nice read. Elizabeth and Mary are Mr. Bennett's daughters from his first marriage to a daughter of an earl. They have good dowries etc
There are some surprises here
Lady Catherine is not bad. in fact she is god mother to Elizabeth and firmly believes people should marry for Love (unexpected twist on the OG)
Mr. Collins, though same as in Canon in character and intelligence, is very handsome in this version. So much so he actually overshadows Wickham (gasp!!)
Elizabeth is more discerning and though initially impressed with W, catches on his truth pretty fast without anyone enlighten here
E and D interactions are different and make for a good read though we do get Hunsford atrocious proposal (face palm)
There are some surprises here
Lady Catherine is not bad. in fact she is god mother to Elizabeth and firmly believes people should marry for Love (unexpected twist on the OG)
Mr. Collins, though same as in Canon in character and intelligence, is very handsome in this version. So much so he actually overshadows Wickham (gasp!!)
Elizabeth is more discerning and though initially impressed with W, catches on his truth pretty fast without anyone enlighten here
E and D interactions are different and make for a good read though we do get Hunsford atrocious proposal (face palm)
February 17, 2025
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Another great story from MJ Stratton. I loved Elizabeth and Mary’s characters.
A very interesting twist with Jane which I loved too. Mrs Bennet was really mean and manipulative, but it’s a trope I like.
I love variations with Elizabeth having more connections and dowry than in canon. Darcy at the beginning was insufferable, but he learned eventually.
I enjoyed Mr. Collins’ pairing too.
The unique twist on Lady Catherine was great too.
I’m looking forward to another book from this author. She writes very well and her characterization is always very interesting.
Highly recommended.
March 17, 2025
Difficult Family Dynamics
I loved this book. Mr Bennet meet and marries the love of his life but he loses her early. While drunk, he is fooled into marrying Fanny who is the complete opposite of his first wife and he can’t stand her. In this novel, Jane is from Fanny’s first marriage, Elizabeth and marry are from. Bennet’s first marriage, and Kitty and Lydia are from the second marriage; so we still have five sisters but the relationships are very different. I don’t want to give away any details because I feel those are best discovered by read the book, which you won’t regret doing.
Keep writing such wonderful books MJ! I can’t wait for your next one.
I loved this book. Mr Bennet meet and marries the love of his life but he loses her early. While drunk, he is fooled into marrying Fanny who is the complete opposite of his first wife and he can’t stand her. In this novel, Jane is from Fanny’s first marriage, Elizabeth and marry are from. Bennet’s first marriage, and Kitty and Lydia are from the second marriage; so we still have five sisters but the relationships are very different. I don’t want to give away any details because I feel those are best discovered by read the book, which you won’t regret doing.
Keep writing such wonderful books MJ! I can’t wait for your next one.
June 21, 2025
3⭐️
I love this "Elizabeth is not a Bennet" or has great connections trope. But I despair of the amount of time it took for the MCs to meet in this book. And why do some if not most authors skimp on the courting time between Elizabeth and Darcy so that we can see more of them together as a couple. The advantage of a fan fiction is that we get to give our fave characters better endings or endings we want to see. I would assume a lot of people would have liked to see the couple more instead of maybe 20% of the book. And there was no real comeuppance for the antagonists. It just fizzled at the end. The book really screwed the landing with the ending of the book.
I love this "Elizabeth is not a Bennet" or has great connections trope. But I despair of the amount of time it took for the MCs to meet in this book. And why do some if not most authors skimp on the courting time between Elizabeth and Darcy so that we can see more of them together as a couple. The advantage of a fan fiction is that we get to give our fave characters better endings or endings we want to see. I would assume a lot of people would have liked to see the couple more instead of maybe 20% of the book. And there was no real comeuppance for the antagonists. It just fizzled at the end. The book really screwed the landing with the ending of the book.
March 11, 2025
I Loved It!!
I absolutely loved this book! The evil stepmother trope is easy to make cliche; however, I always love it when the children involved have adults around them to help counter the harmfulness of said evil parents. Mr B's grief and semi- neglect of his beloved two daughters is believable, his total neglect of his other daughters is reprehensible to me but typical of him as he is depicted originally.
I also loved how Darcy is better able to see his faults because Elizabeth presents them calmly.
I absolutely loved this book! The evil stepmother trope is easy to make cliche; however, I always love it when the children involved have adults around them to help counter the harmfulness of said evil parents. Mr B's grief and semi- neglect of his beloved two daughters is believable, his total neglect of his other daughters is reprehensible to me but typical of him as he is depicted originally.
I also loved how Darcy is better able to see his faults because Elizabeth presents them calmly.
March 14, 2025
Quite enjoyable * Spoilers in review
* A temporarily bad Jane (didn't respond to trauma well -- eventually gets both her groove and Bingley back).
* A close relationship between Mary and Elizabeth
* A kinder though not gentler LCdB
* Darcy isn't exactly cruel, but he's definitely his own worst enemy. His insult at the assembly is kind of worse than the original
Elizabeth and Mary have money from their mother's side (now deceased).
Mr Collins is hilarious. Lydia is better and her arc works.
Wickham is as Wickham does. He gets sent off to the continent after deserting.
* A temporarily bad Jane (didn't respond to trauma well -- eventually gets both her groove and Bingley back).
* A close relationship between Mary and Elizabeth
* A kinder though not gentler LCdB
* Darcy isn't exactly cruel, but he's definitely his own worst enemy. His insult at the assembly is kind of worse than the original
Elizabeth and Mary have money from their mother's side (now deceased).
Mr Collins is hilarious. Lydia is better and her arc works.
Wickham is as Wickham does. He gets sent off to the continent after deserting.
May 31, 2025
Character and Countenance
A lot of character in this story, for sure.
You have a wonderful beginning where Mr Bennet becomes happily married, but sadly she dies with giving birth to her second child, Mary. Then Mr Bennet is tricked into a second marriage before he has even had time to properly mourn her death... And she comes with a child as well...
There is a lot of depth, A evil step mom syndrome, and angst. But there is also love, challenges, and forgiveness.
Great story.
A lot of character in this story, for sure.
You have a wonderful beginning where Mr Bennet becomes happily married, but sadly she dies with giving birth to her second child, Mary. Then Mr Bennet is tricked into a second marriage before he has even had time to properly mourn her death... And she comes with a child as well...
There is a lot of depth, A evil step mom syndrome, and angst. But there is also love, challenges, and forgiveness.
Great story.
July 12, 2025
A good read
I liked almost everything in this book except the very rushed ending. The story as a whole gives plenty of time for us to enjoy the characters and the story itself, with the exception of the ending. That may partially be due to my reluctance to have the story end. I could belabor the point, but enough said. It was a delightful new take on the rich Elizabeth trope with enough twists and turns to keep the pages turning. I enjoy this author very much much and recommend this book highly!
I liked almost everything in this book except the very rushed ending. The story as a whole gives plenty of time for us to enjoy the characters and the story itself, with the exception of the ending. That may partially be due to my reluctance to have the story end. I could belabor the point, but enough said. It was a delightful new take on the rich Elizabeth trope with enough twists and turns to keep the pages turning. I enjoy this author very much much and recommend this book highly!
March 12, 2025
Favorite tropes
Possible slight spoilers...?
This has a few of my favorite tropes dressed up in a well written romp. Ghastly Mrs Bennet, Elizabeth and Mary not Mrs B's children, second marriage for the Bennet parents, and bad Jane. Or rather, misguided Jane. I truly loved her arc in this. This was great fun, and had a few more twists I'm not sharing.
Possible slight spoilers...?
This has a few of my favorite tropes dressed up in a well written romp. Ghastly Mrs Bennet, Elizabeth and Mary not Mrs B's children, second marriage for the Bennet parents, and bad Jane. Or rather, misguided Jane. I truly loved her arc in this. This was great fun, and had a few more twists I'm not sharing.
March 17, 2025
A tale with differences
A number of different pairings make for an interesting tale. Three of the five (nearly) sisters end with non-canon spouses that suit surprisingly well. Changes to characters and circumstances add a different flavor. Best parts? A benign Lady Catherine and well matched Collins and Lydia, of all people. Yes, it works!
A number of different pairings make for an interesting tale. Three of the five (nearly) sisters end with non-canon spouses that suit surprisingly well. Changes to characters and circumstances add a different flavor. Best parts? A benign Lady Catherine and well matched Collins and Lydia, of all people. Yes, it works!
May 5, 2025
A Refreshing rearanging of everything
I found myself rewiring my P&P mode of thinking while reading the book. I became mindful of these characters who had the same names as before...only they were so different thus time. Bravo dear author👍 A really fresh look on things. Loved the book❤️
I found myself rewiring my P&P mode of thinking while reading the book. I became mindful of these characters who had the same names as before...only they were so different thus time. Bravo dear author👍 A really fresh look on things. Loved the book❤️
March 12, 2025
Enjoyable
This was a great book. I found some of it to be a bit more contrived than I prefer & Jane's dramatic change and then reversal was a bit unbelievable; however, I still thoroughly enjoyed this book. Darcy's internal monologue was fabulous.
This was a great book. I found some of it to be a bit more contrived than I prefer & Jane's dramatic change and then reversal was a bit unbelievable; however, I still thoroughly enjoyed this book. Darcy's internal monologue was fabulous.
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