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Eden's Omegaverse #1
Broken
This version of Broken was re-edited and uploaded in March 2025.
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Can a former slave find true love?
--------------------------------------------------Aiden, immersed in grief after the death of his husband, receives a call from his cousin, who works in the police force. The man asks him to provide refuge for an abused omega, a victim of an illegal slave auction who fell into the hands of two criminals. His life was an unending torment until the police rescued him.
Lake is hurt, guarded and keeps his distance. Can he ever find happiness again? An unexpected twist of fate stands in the way of Lake's slow and steady healing, uniting Lake and Aiden with a bond stronger than trauma and forcing them to confront a biological compulsion that cannot be resisted.
And Lake's past may bring them even greater danger…
Broken is an omegaverse MM romance, the first installment in Eden's Omegaverse series, portraying the healing journey of a young omega who crosses paths with his destined alpha, a former popstar. It unfolds as a tale of love cemented by a powerful bond, holding the potential to heal the most profound scars, both physical and mental.
Main
- Omegaverse
- Fated Mates/True Mates
- Hurt/Comfort; Healing from Trauma
- The Main Character has Scars
- Two Musicians
- Conflict with Local Menaces
- Body Healing
- Body Transformation into a Form with Superhuman Strength (but no full shifters)
- Mating Sounds Between Alphas and Omegas
- Nesting
- Marking the Neck
- Irresistible Pull Between True Mates
- Moderate Age Gap (12,5 years)
- Body Size Difference
- Protective, gentle Alpha
- Traumatized, guarded Omega
- True Mate's rejection element
- Healing, intense heat
- HEA
The book includes a glossary of basic omegaverse terminology.
More details related to this version of omegaverse can be found in the Series Info, check it to make sure if Eden's type of omegaverse is what you like.
Content One character is a victim of physical and s*xual violence/s*xual slavery in the past, scenes of dub-con s*x driven by biological instincts specific to omegaverse, violent scenes, fight scenes, bullying scenes, mpreg present in the bonus chapter.
It is recommended to read a free sample of the book before making a purchase. Always ensure that your purchase decisions are well-informed.
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Can a former slave find true love?
--------------------------------------------------Aiden, immersed in grief after the death of his husband, receives a call from his cousin, who works in the police force. The man asks him to provide refuge for an abused omega, a victim of an illegal slave auction who fell into the hands of two criminals. His life was an unending torment until the police rescued him.
Lake is hurt, guarded and keeps his distance. Can he ever find happiness again? An unexpected twist of fate stands in the way of Lake's slow and steady healing, uniting Lake and Aiden with a bond stronger than trauma and forcing them to confront a biological compulsion that cannot be resisted.
And Lake's past may bring them even greater danger…
Broken is an omegaverse MM romance, the first installment in Eden's Omegaverse series, portraying the healing journey of a young omega who crosses paths with his destined alpha, a former popstar. It unfolds as a tale of love cemented by a powerful bond, holding the potential to heal the most profound scars, both physical and mental.
Main
- Omegaverse
- Fated Mates/True Mates
- Hurt/Comfort; Healing from Trauma
- The Main Character has Scars
- Two Musicians
- Conflict with Local Menaces
- Body Healing
- Body Transformation into a Form with Superhuman Strength (but no full shifters)
- Mating Sounds Between Alphas and Omegas
- Nesting
- Marking the Neck
- Irresistible Pull Between True Mates
- Moderate Age Gap (12,5 years)
- Body Size Difference
- Protective, gentle Alpha
- Traumatized, guarded Omega
- True Mate's rejection element
- Healing, intense heat
- HEA
The book includes a glossary of basic omegaverse terminology.
More details related to this version of omegaverse can be found in the Series Info, check it to make sure if Eden's type of omegaverse is what you like.
Content One character is a victim of physical and s*xual violence/s*xual slavery in the past, scenes of dub-con s*x driven by biological instincts specific to omegaverse, violent scenes, fight scenes, bullying scenes, mpreg present in the bonus chapter.
It is recommended to read a free sample of the book before making a purchase. Always ensure that your purchase decisions are well-informed.
294 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 19, 2025
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About the author
Eden West
21 books66 followersBorn in Poland to a Polish-Ukrainian family, specializes in hurt-to-comfort gay romances and erotica. Eden loves art, hiking and reading. Despite not being a native English speaker, Eden loves to use this language to tell romantic and steamy stories.
What sets Eden's books apart? They are filled with eccentric, intense characters, obsession, and possessiveness, along with plenty of awkward confessions. Expect peculiar dialogues, relationships with unusual dynamics, and always positive endings!
Eden does not shy away from exploring the fringes of what is acceptable in regard to unusual body types, not necessarily neurotypical personalities, and even slight body fetishization.
All Eden's books are intended to be relaxing in the end. Eden focuses on the personality and uniqueness of the portrayed characters, delving into their souls and exploring their distinctive paths beyond stereotypes.
Stay tuned, as Eden has seven books written and waiting in line to be published, spanning genres such as gay romance, omegaverse, and trans women romances!
Eden's partner assists with ideas and editing, so you may refer to them as a duo hiding under the shared pen name.
Feel free to check Eden's Instagram 'edenwestauthor' for news and premiere info.
What sets Eden's books apart? They are filled with eccentric, intense characters, obsession, and possessiveness, along with plenty of awkward confessions. Expect peculiar dialogues, relationships with unusual dynamics, and always positive endings!
Eden does not shy away from exploring the fringes of what is acceptable in regard to unusual body types, not necessarily neurotypical personalities, and even slight body fetishization.
All Eden's books are intended to be relaxing in the end. Eden focuses on the personality and uniqueness of the portrayed characters, delving into their souls and exploring their distinctive paths beyond stereotypes.
Stay tuned, as Eden has seven books written and waiting in line to be published, spanning genres such as gay romance, omegaverse, and trans women romances!
Eden's partner assists with ideas and editing, so you may refer to them as a duo hiding under the shared pen name.
Feel free to check Eden's Instagram 'edenwestauthor' for news and premiere info.
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February 18, 2024
I had the opportunity to read an early ARC, and I truly loved Eden's take on the omegaverse.
It felt fresh, with palpable OV typical elements that I adore in this type of stories, such as nesting, mating sounds, neck marking and the pull between fated mates, along with unexpected elements like healing through sex! (The Joining)
The story revolves around Aiden, a lonely and depressed widower who is asked to provide a home for a traumatized young omega named Lake.
Lake appears almost feral, like a frightened animal, upon first entering Aiden's house. He hardly speaks, and when he does, it's quite terse. However, unbeknownst to them, they are fated mates, and the pull between them forms a bond in an unexpected way.
Fate can be so cruel, Lake. It has hurt you over and over. Then it brought us together, but you're broken and can't be mine.
In the backdrop of their story, another plotline unfolds involving people from Lake's past, who still may have some influence over them and could potentially destroy their slowly growing happiness.
I particularly enjoyed the sex scenes between the two characters; they felt very believable to me, capturing Lake's struggle with trauma and Aiden's almost angelic patience. He really is "the good alpha" in the story. This is a strict t/b story.
The book is written in a style typical of Eden, albeit with a third-person narrative POV. So, if you haven't enjoyed Eden's style in the past, you may not be swayed to like this one either :D
However, if you don't mind Eden's peculiarities, this book might be a hit for you.
I had so much fun reading it, and I appreciate that Eden also shows Aiden's and Lake's future, while tying up all the plot threads with happy conclusions. The book felt very wholesome to me, and Aiden's protectiveness, love, and patience for Lake melted my heart.
Overall, it's a very nice debut in the omegaverse subgenre for Eden.
It felt fresh, with palpable OV typical elements that I adore in this type of stories, such as nesting, mating sounds, neck marking and the pull between fated mates, along with unexpected elements like healing through sex! (The Joining)
The story revolves around Aiden, a lonely and depressed widower who is asked to provide a home for a traumatized young omega named Lake.
Lake appears almost feral, like a frightened animal, upon first entering Aiden's house. He hardly speaks, and when he does, it's quite terse. However, unbeknownst to them, they are fated mates, and the pull between them forms a bond in an unexpected way.
Fate can be so cruel, Lake. It has hurt you over and over. Then it brought us together, but you're broken and can't be mine.
In the backdrop of their story, another plotline unfolds involving people from Lake's past, who still may have some influence over them and could potentially destroy their slowly growing happiness.
I particularly enjoyed the sex scenes between the two characters; they felt very believable to me, capturing Lake's struggle with trauma and Aiden's almost angelic patience. He really is "the good alpha" in the story. This is a strict t/b story.
The book is written in a style typical of Eden, albeit with a third-person narrative POV. So, if you haven't enjoyed Eden's style in the past, you may not be swayed to like this one either :D
However, if you don't mind Eden's peculiarities, this book might be a hit for you.
I had so much fun reading it, and I appreciate that Eden also shows Aiden's and Lake's future, while tying up all the plot threads with happy conclusions. The book felt very wholesome to me, and Aiden's protectiveness, love, and patience for Lake melted my heart.
Overall, it's a very nice debut in the omegaverse subgenre for Eden.
February 21, 2024
ARC review. 4.5 **** rounded up for creativity.
Quite a book, despite the author's peculiar style, I enjoyed it.
The author wasn't kidding; there's a ton of animal-like stuff happening. 😂 The ABO (alpha beta omega) population can hear heartbeats, sniff people's pheromones, rejuvenate each other through sex, make chirping sounds, and even telepathically link up. They even build nests and extend fangs to mark necks.
The book almost dips into the fantasy genre, especially with how this society started. Picture this: only men left on Earth after an epidemic, and then unexpected, mysterious genetic intervention creating this whole society.
I loved that omegas aren't just the bottom of the social ladder; they're precious. There are special government organizations to protect them, which is nice. But, you know, there are still bad guys out there who want to cause trouble, because some things never change.
What's good is that it's not just omegas getting sold in illegal auctions. Alphas and betas are in trouble too, so the government's got their hands full trying to shut these auctions down.
Lake, the omega MC with scars, gets saved from slavery - he was bought in one of those auctions.
Aiden, a gentle alpha giant at 6'8", dedicates his life to healing the broken, devastated omega.
The story doesn't really have any other big plots besides the healing process and these two becoming True Mates. There's some background drama with a quasi-mafioso family and a few fights with alphas, but it's mainly about the love story between a widower and an ex-slave, which is why I take away half a point off my rating. There is also a lot of sex. 😂.
The book ends super sweet, pink and HEA.
Definitely, it's a solid book with great attention to detail and an interesting backdrop.
Quite a book, despite the author's peculiar style, I enjoyed it.
The author wasn't kidding; there's a ton of animal-like stuff happening. 😂 The ABO (alpha beta omega) population can hear heartbeats, sniff people's pheromones, rejuvenate each other through sex, make chirping sounds, and even telepathically link up. They even build nests and extend fangs to mark necks.
The book almost dips into the fantasy genre, especially with how this society started. Picture this: only men left on Earth after an epidemic, and then unexpected, mysterious genetic intervention creating this whole society.
I loved that omegas aren't just the bottom of the social ladder; they're precious. There are special government organizations to protect them, which is nice. But, you know, there are still bad guys out there who want to cause trouble, because some things never change.
What's good is that it's not just omegas getting sold in illegal auctions. Alphas and betas are in trouble too, so the government's got their hands full trying to shut these auctions down.
Lake, the omega MC with scars, gets saved from slavery - he was bought in one of those auctions.
Aiden, a gentle alpha giant at 6'8", dedicates his life to healing the broken, devastated omega.
The story doesn't really have any other big plots besides the healing process and these two becoming True Mates. There's some background drama with a quasi-mafioso family and a few fights with alphas, but it's mainly about the love story between a widower and an ex-slave, which is why I take away half a point off my rating. There is also a lot of sex. 😂.
The book ends super sweet, pink and HEA.
Definitely, it's a solid book with great attention to detail and an interesting backdrop.
February 21, 2024
This is the third book I read by Eden and I'm totally enchanted. I am so in love with Eden's stories. They're so beautiful, all with unique plots, full of original elements that I have never found in other books and the writing is so special.
Aiden and Lake's story captivated me from the very beginning. Aiden is a fascinating character, assertive but sweet and attentive. And Lake.. he's so broken as the title says, scarred in body mind and soul. It's like he's shut down but Aiden lights life up in him again. His life has been terrible, but Aiden has suffered too. Their connection is so intense, their touches are magical, in fact I think my favourite part of the book is the first half because seeing how they discover what they are for each other was like an explosion. Although the last part is so sweet and romantic and it really touched my heart, their love is immense.
I also want to say the very first thing I fell in love with is the cover, it's stunning. As well as the images of Aiden and Lake in the book. They both are so beautiful.
I was extremely interested and impressed by the glossary included. This book is perfect for those who have never read omegaverse or don't know much about it.
Aiden and Lake's story captivated me from the very beginning. Aiden is a fascinating character, assertive but sweet and attentive. And Lake.. he's so broken as the title says, scarred in body mind and soul. It's like he's shut down but Aiden lights life up in him again. His life has been terrible, but Aiden has suffered too. Their connection is so intense, their touches are magical, in fact I think my favourite part of the book is the first half because seeing how they discover what they are for each other was like an explosion. Although the last part is so sweet and romantic and it really touched my heart, their love is immense.
I also want to say the very first thing I fell in love with is the cover, it's stunning. As well as the images of Aiden and Lake in the book. They both are so beautiful.
I was extremely interested and impressed by the glossary included. This book is perfect for those who have never read omegaverse or don't know much about it.
February 20, 2024
3.9 ****
The book tells the story of Lake, a former slave whose life was very tragic. Gladly, his past is not shown on page. It's only mentioned that his own father sold him into the hands of two psychos. Only after he is saved by the police - he is offered the chance to live with a failed ex-pop star who is a widower, mourning the loss of his husband.
Aiden takes Lake under his wing and gives him space to heal and relax. He is very caring and protective, but not overwhelming; he is also very respectful. I appreciated the space he gave Lake to heal and his kindness.
Lake, on the other hand, is guarded and seems almost shy, but that's just his defense mechanism; underneath, he is really a sweet and strong person.
They have a 13-year age gap (19 and 32), but it's not an overwhelming difference, especially since they can rejuvenate themselves (yes!).
The story focuses on the healing journey, and I appreciated the author's attention to detail and well-done plotline, especially regarding the alpha fighting situation.
Beware! There are a lot of elements that are very animalistic:
- marking their necks with retractable fangs
- nesting (a very strong element!)
- making special mating sounds
- fated mates (here called "true mates")
- the scent of the true mate is called Allure
- knotting, mpreg
- telepathic link
- ability to heal and REJUVENATE via sex (a pretty strange concept for me :) )
- alpha going into a supercharged fighting mode was so COOL!
The mix of these elements in Eden's book makes it a pretty strong omegaverse book, with a fresh take on many aspects typical for OV world building.
Especially unique are the levels of "mateship"
- low-mates,
- half-mates,
- high-mates,
- and true-mates.
It depends on genetic compatibility, which was a new concept for me.
The book also includes a glossary of Eden's omegaverse, explaining even the genesis of the tri-gender society(I rarely see this in OV books).
There is gender fluidity described between betas and other subgenders. Very creative :)
What else?
I'm already quite familiar with this author's style, so I knew what I was offered :D.
I must say the story is balanced better than the previous one by this author, and the pace is more even. I also enjoyed the 3-person narration.
Aiden's peculiar character
The main character is also pretty different from other characters in Eden's books; he is not bratty and sarcastic like the other MCs were.
Aiden is very serious and almost official, almost stiff.
It has some reflection in the way dialogues are created. Aiden is very careful around Lake, being cautious about what he says, and it may come out as stilted and formal. But it's pretty coherent throughout the whole book, so I guess it was the Eden's idea for this character to behave like that, a bit old-fashioned, with love confessions and very pompous sentences.
The author is not a native speaker, but as I've already gotten used to Eden's style, I don't find it off-putting.
Why 4 not 5?
What makes me take away one point is again the same as previously: a very narrow plotline, encapsulated, focusing on two main characters. There were some side characters, but they had no meaning, so it was a one-on-one type of story. I wish Eden experimented more with introducing more characters and more locations into their books, as it creates the effect of not being invested enough in the subplots, only focusing on MCs.
But I have one extra observation!
What I find especially rare (rare in MM books) is an element of spiritual healing, such as learning to forgive and move beyond resentment or being stuck in victimhood and suffocated by anger. It's not overwhelming, but subtle and balanced. It's rarely seen in such books; usually, there is no forgiveness, only holding on to grudges. Bad parents vs saint kids, evil exes vs present angelic boyfriends, and so on. So many people to hate and nobody to forgive and finally feel free.
Here is presented something truly unique, which elevates the book for me.
As for the first book within the omegaverse, it was promising. I will check Eden's next books for sure.
I had the pleasure of reading an early ARC copy that I received from the author. It's my honest review.
The book tells the story of Lake, a former slave whose life was very tragic. Gladly, his past is not shown on page. It's only mentioned that his own father sold him into the hands of two psychos. Only after he is saved by the police - he is offered the chance to live with a failed ex-pop star who is a widower, mourning the loss of his husband.
Aiden takes Lake under his wing and gives him space to heal and relax. He is very caring and protective, but not overwhelming; he is also very respectful. I appreciated the space he gave Lake to heal and his kindness.
Lake, on the other hand, is guarded and seems almost shy, but that's just his defense mechanism; underneath, he is really a sweet and strong person.
They have a 13-year age gap (19 and 32), but it's not an overwhelming difference, especially since they can rejuvenate themselves (yes!).
The story focuses on the healing journey, and I appreciated the author's attention to detail and well-done plotline, especially regarding the alpha fighting situation.
Beware! There are a lot of elements that are very animalistic:
- marking their necks with retractable fangs
- nesting (a very strong element!)
- making special mating sounds
- fated mates (here called "true mates")
- the scent of the true mate is called Allure
- knotting, mpreg
- telepathic link
- ability to heal and REJUVENATE via sex (a pretty strange concept for me :) )
- alpha going into a supercharged fighting mode was so COOL!
The mix of these elements in Eden's book makes it a pretty strong omegaverse book, with a fresh take on many aspects typical for OV world building.
Especially unique are the levels of "mateship"
- low-mates,
- half-mates,
- high-mates,
- and true-mates.
It depends on genetic compatibility, which was a new concept for me.
The book also includes a glossary of Eden's omegaverse, explaining even the genesis of the tri-gender society(I rarely see this in OV books).
There is gender fluidity described between betas and other subgenders. Very creative :)
What else?
I'm already quite familiar with this author's style, so I knew what I was offered :D.
I must say the story is balanced better than the previous one by this author, and the pace is more even. I also enjoyed the 3-person narration.
Aiden's peculiar character
The main character is also pretty different from other characters in Eden's books; he is not bratty and sarcastic like the other MCs were.
Aiden is very serious and almost official, almost stiff.
It has some reflection in the way dialogues are created. Aiden is very careful around Lake, being cautious about what he says, and it may come out as stilted and formal. But it's pretty coherent throughout the whole book, so I guess it was the Eden's idea for this character to behave like that, a bit old-fashioned, with love confessions and very pompous sentences.
The author is not a native speaker, but as I've already gotten used to Eden's style, I don't find it off-putting.
Why 4 not 5?
What makes me take away one point is again the same as previously: a very narrow plotline, encapsulated, focusing on two main characters. There were some side characters, but they had no meaning, so it was a one-on-one type of story. I wish Eden experimented more with introducing more characters and more locations into their books, as it creates the effect of not being invested enough in the subplots, only focusing on MCs.
But I have one extra observation!
What I find especially rare (rare in MM books) is an element of spiritual healing, such as learning to forgive and move beyond resentment or being stuck in victimhood and suffocated by anger. It's not overwhelming, but subtle and balanced. It's rarely seen in such books; usually, there is no forgiveness, only holding on to grudges. Bad parents vs saint kids, evil exes vs present angelic boyfriends, and so on. So many people to hate and nobody to forgive and finally feel free.
Here is presented something truly unique, which elevates the book for me.
As for the first book within the omegaverse, it was promising. I will check Eden's next books for sure.
I had the pleasure of reading an early ARC copy that I received from the author. It's my honest review.
February 26, 2024
A healing journey of two sweet people just trying to survive.
M/M omegaverse with a broken omega and an alpha in mourning.
Hurt comfort.
Fates mates. Love at first sight.
Animalistic qualities but no full shifts into an animal form. A semi-animalistic shift.
HEA.
Third person point of view.
Male preg.... If it's not your thing the author included the pregnancy themes in the two epilogues, so it can be skipped. But come on, aren't we all here for that?
Not much angst between our main characters, and no third act break up.
🌶🌶🌶. 3/5 for spice.
Strict top and bottom role. Of course alpha on top, Aiden. Omega on bottom, Lake. Though it was suggested they could switch it up. Aiden being an alpha wasn't over the top dominate either, meaning Lake had choices, respect, and trust.
Aiden, our alpha, suffered a tragic lose. His husband died and Aiden has been in mourning for about a year when a relative called asking for him to house an abused omega. Aiden was hesitant but agreed so the omega could be closer to his therapist. The omega, Lake isn't very trusting, with good reason. Lake has been subjected to slavery, he's been through a lot. Yet there is an unmistakable pull between the alpha and omega.
In this universe there are classes of people, much like other omegaverse novels. Alphas, betas, and omegas. Fated mates, heat cycles, certain sounds to be made between such couples, and my favorite, knotting between alphas and omegas.
Aiden and Lake discovered they are true mates, or fated mates. This thing between the two of them becomes harder and harder to ignore. Alphas and omegas have the ability to heal each other if they are mates, and our omega, Lake is badly scarred, and our alpha, Aiden is widowed. Aiden is head over heals for Lake, but they have to take things a little slowly with Lake's past and with some new enemies coming forth.
They get their hard fought happily ever after though... God I love it.
M/M omegaverse with a broken omega and an alpha in mourning.
Hurt comfort.
Fates mates. Love at first sight.
Animalistic qualities but no full shifts into an animal form. A semi-animalistic shift.
HEA.
Third person point of view.
Male preg.... If it's not your thing the author included the pregnancy themes in the two epilogues, so it can be skipped. But come on, aren't we all here for that?
Not much angst between our main characters, and no third act break up.
🌶🌶🌶. 3/5 for spice.
Strict top and bottom role. Of course alpha on top, Aiden. Omega on bottom, Lake. Though it was suggested they could switch it up. Aiden being an alpha wasn't over the top dominate either, meaning Lake had choices, respect, and trust.
Aiden, our alpha, suffered a tragic lose. His husband died and Aiden has been in mourning for about a year when a relative called asking for him to house an abused omega. Aiden was hesitant but agreed so the omega could be closer to his therapist. The omega, Lake isn't very trusting, with good reason. Lake has been subjected to slavery, he's been through a lot. Yet there is an unmistakable pull between the alpha and omega.
In this universe there are classes of people, much like other omegaverse novels. Alphas, betas, and omegas. Fated mates, heat cycles, certain sounds to be made between such couples, and my favorite, knotting between alphas and omegas.
Aiden and Lake discovered they are true mates, or fated mates. This thing between the two of them becomes harder and harder to ignore. Alphas and omegas have the ability to heal each other if they are mates, and our omega, Lake is badly scarred, and our alpha, Aiden is widowed. Aiden is head over heals for Lake, but they have to take things a little slowly with Lake's past and with some new enemies coming forth.
They get their hard fought happily ever after though... God I love it.
February 26, 2024
What can I say, I myself am like the writer, English is not my native language, but the story touched something inside me that I do not understand. I cried twice and laughed a lot, and my heart beat strongly. The world that the author created is very wonderful, and the details are even more wonderful, and all the explanations are about Alpha, Omega, and Beta. I am very excited about the rest of the books in the series. Thank you 💜💜💜🦋🦋🦋💙💙
February 26, 2024
True Mate overuse was too much
It was fine. I enjoyed it for the most part.
It seemed like the author needed to remind us that they were indeed TRUE MATES every other paragraph, the more it went on, the less interesting I found the book.
It also seemed like the author couldn't decide if the alphas name was Aiden or Aidan and I found it distracting. But Lake was sweet and deserved all the love.
It was fine. I enjoyed it for the most part.
It seemed like the author needed to remind us that they were indeed TRUE MATES every other paragraph, the more it went on, the less interesting I found the book.
It also seemed like the author couldn't decide if the alphas name was Aiden or Aidan and I found it distracting. But Lake was sweet and deserved all the love.
August 10, 2024
I’m so just Ugg with this book right now. It could have been an amazing book. The world build drew me in. I didn’t mind all the talk about true mates. It was setting the world up for next books. I understood all of that. What I did have problems with was the writing. Which is not usually an issue for me but totally was with this book. I felt no real emotion from either MCs that connected them. Like Aiden was grieving for a whole year and it was like he forgot he was grieving as soon as Lake came. And we really didn’t get a sense of how Lake was feeling at all. I know the author said English was not their first language and I think or at least it felt like emotions and chemistry got lost in translation. It felt like a computer wrote this honestly. I said to myself while reading, that I felt like this book was AI made and those of us who don’t read AI books are being fooled. There were exclamation marks all over the place where exclamation marks shouldn’t be. I finally had to tap out after the first smexy scene. It was suppose to be this grand thing that happened to true mates and it read so dry, and lacked emotions that I couldn’t keep going.
Dnf 57%
Dnf 57%
dnf
February 27, 2024Dnf at 40%. I liked the beginning a lot but could not stomach the tone change in the relationship development.
August 12, 2024
excellent
I really enjoyed this author take on the ABO trope. They explained their universe so well by the pages that explained this universe’s uniqueness.
Lake was such a well written character and their back story is heartbreaking, Aiden is a fantastic alpha too . Beautiful story with a HEA ending. Looking forward to the next book . Highly recommended
I really enjoyed this author take on the ABO trope. They explained their universe so well by the pages that explained this universe’s uniqueness.
Lake was such a well written character and their back story is heartbreaking, Aiden is a fantastic alpha too . Beautiful story with a HEA ending. Looking forward to the next book . Highly recommended
April 8, 2024
An excellent story and an interesting new universe. I look forward to the next book in this series.
March 22, 2025
The book tells the story of Lake, a former slave whose life was very tragic. Gladly, his past is not shown on page. It's only mentioned that his own father sold him into the hands of two psychos. Only after he is saved by the police - he is offered the chance to live with a failed ex-pop star who is a widower, mourning the loss of his husband.
Aiden takes Lake under his wing and gives him space to heal and relax. He is very caring and protective, but not overwhelming; he is also very respectful. I appreciated the space he gave Lake to heal and his kindness.
Lake, on the other hand, is guarded and seems almost shy, but that's just his defense mechanism; underneath, he is really a sweet but strong person.
They have a small age gap, but it's not an overwhelming difference, especially since they can rejuvenate themselves (yes!).
The story focuses on the healing journey, and I appreciated the author's attention to detail and well-done plotline, especially regarding the alpha fighting situation.
Beware! There are a lot of elements that are very animalistic:
- marking their necks with retractable fangs
- nesting (a very strong element!)
- making special mating sounds
- fated mates (here called "true mates")
- the scent of the true mate is called Allure
- knotting, mpreg
- telepathic link
- ability to heal and REJUVENATE via sex (a pretty strange concept for me :) )
- alpha going into a supercharged fighting mode was so COOL!
The mix of these elements in Eden's book makes it a pretty strong omegaverse book, with a fresh take on many aspects typical for OV world building.
Especially unique are the levels of "mateship"
- low-mates,
- half-mates,
- high-mates,
- and true-mates.
It depends on genetic compatibility, which was a new concept for me.
The book also includes a glossary of Eden's omegaverse, explaining even the genesis of the tri-gender society(I rarely see this in OV books). There is gender fluidity described between betas and other subgenders. Very creative :)
What else?
I'm already quite familiar with this author's style, so I knew what I was offered :D.
I must say the story is balanced better than the previous one by this author, and the pace is more even. I also enjoyed the 3-person narration.
Aiden's peculiar character
The main character is also pretty different from other characters in Eden's books; he is not bratty and sarcastic like the other MCs were.
Aiden is very serious and almost official, almost stiff.
It has some reflection in the way dialogues are created. Aiden is very careful around Lake, being cautious about what he says. But it's pretty coherent throughout the whole book, so I guess it was the Eden's idea for this character to behave like that, a bit old-fashioned, with love confessions and all. The author is not a native speaker, but as I've already gotten used to Eden's style, I don't find it off-putting.
Why 4 not 5?
What makes me take away one point is again the same as previously: a narrow plotline, encapsulated, focusing on two main characters. There were some side characters, but they had no meaning, so it was a one-on-one type of story. I wish Eden experimented more with introducing more characters and more locations into their books, as it creates the effect of not being invested enough in the subplots, only focusing on MCs.
But I have one extra observation!
What I find especially rare (rare in MM books) is an element of spiritual healing, such as learning to forgive and move beyond resentment or being stuck in victimhood and suffocated by anger. It's not overwhelming, but subtle and balanced. It's rarely seen in such books; usually, there is no forgiveness, only holding on to grudges. Here is presented something truly unique, which elevates the book for me.
As for the first book within the omegaverse, it was promising. I will check Eden's next books for sure.
I had the pleasure of reading an early ARC copy that I received from the author. It's my honest review.
(the review is copied from the other edition)
Aiden takes Lake under his wing and gives him space to heal and relax. He is very caring and protective, but not overwhelming; he is also very respectful. I appreciated the space he gave Lake to heal and his kindness.
Lake, on the other hand, is guarded and seems almost shy, but that's just his defense mechanism; underneath, he is really a sweet but strong person.
They have a small age gap, but it's not an overwhelming difference, especially since they can rejuvenate themselves (yes!).
The story focuses on the healing journey, and I appreciated the author's attention to detail and well-done plotline, especially regarding the alpha fighting situation.
Beware! There are a lot of elements that are very animalistic:
- marking their necks with retractable fangs
- nesting (a very strong element!)
- making special mating sounds
- fated mates (here called "true mates")
- the scent of the true mate is called Allure
- knotting, mpreg
- telepathic link
- ability to heal and REJUVENATE via sex (a pretty strange concept for me :) )
- alpha going into a supercharged fighting mode was so COOL!
The mix of these elements in Eden's book makes it a pretty strong omegaverse book, with a fresh take on many aspects typical for OV world building.
Especially unique are the levels of "mateship"
- low-mates,
- half-mates,
- high-mates,
- and true-mates.
It depends on genetic compatibility, which was a new concept for me.
The book also includes a glossary of Eden's omegaverse, explaining even the genesis of the tri-gender society(I rarely see this in OV books). There is gender fluidity described between betas and other subgenders. Very creative :)
What else?
I'm already quite familiar with this author's style, so I knew what I was offered :D.
I must say the story is balanced better than the previous one by this author, and the pace is more even. I also enjoyed the 3-person narration.
Aiden's peculiar character
The main character is also pretty different from other characters in Eden's books; he is not bratty and sarcastic like the other MCs were.
Aiden is very serious and almost official, almost stiff.
It has some reflection in the way dialogues are created. Aiden is very careful around Lake, being cautious about what he says. But it's pretty coherent throughout the whole book, so I guess it was the Eden's idea for this character to behave like that, a bit old-fashioned, with love confessions and all. The author is not a native speaker, but as I've already gotten used to Eden's style, I don't find it off-putting.
Why 4 not 5?
What makes me take away one point is again the same as previously: a narrow plotline, encapsulated, focusing on two main characters. There were some side characters, but they had no meaning, so it was a one-on-one type of story. I wish Eden experimented more with introducing more characters and more locations into their books, as it creates the effect of not being invested enough in the subplots, only focusing on MCs.
But I have one extra observation!
What I find especially rare (rare in MM books) is an element of spiritual healing, such as learning to forgive and move beyond resentment or being stuck in victimhood and suffocated by anger. It's not overwhelming, but subtle and balanced. It's rarely seen in such books; usually, there is no forgiveness, only holding on to grudges. Here is presented something truly unique, which elevates the book for me.
As for the first book within the omegaverse, it was promising. I will check Eden's next books for sure.
I had the pleasure of reading an early ARC copy that I received from the author. It's my honest review.
(the review is copied from the other edition)
March 22, 2025
I had the opportunity to read an early ARC, and I truly loved Eden's take on the omegaverse.
It felt fresh, with palpable OV typical elements that I adore in this type of stories, such as nesting, mating sounds, neck marking and the pull between fated mates, along with unexpected elements like healing through sex! (The Joining)
The story revolves around Aiden, a lonely and depressed widower who is asked to provide a home for a traumatized young omega named Lake.
Lake appears almost feral, like a frightened animal, upon first entering Aiden's house. He hardly speaks, and when he does, it's quite terse. However, unbeknownst to them, they are fated mates, and the pull between them forms a bond in an unexpected way.
Fate can be so cruel, Lake. It has hurt you over and over. Then it brought us together, but you're broken and can't be mine.
In the backdrop of their story, another plotline unfolds involving people from Lake's past, who still may have some influence over them and could potentially destroy their slowly growing happiness.
I particularly enjoyed the sex scenes between the two characters; they felt very believable to me, capturing Lake's struggle with trauma and Aiden's almost angelic patience. He really is "the good alpha" in the story. This is a strict t/b story.
The book is written in a style typical of Eden, albeit with a third-person narrative POV. So, if you haven't enjoyed Eden's style in the past, you may not be swayed to like this one either :D
However, if you don't mind Eden's peculiarities, this book might be a hit for you.
I had so much fun reading it, and I appreciate that Eden also shows Aiden's and Lake's future, while tying up all the plot threads with happy conclusions. The book felt very wholesome to me, and Aiden's protectiveness, love, and patience for Lake melted my heart.
Overall, it's a very nice debut in the omegaverse subgenre for Eden.
This review refers to the first edition of the book
It felt fresh, with palpable OV typical elements that I adore in this type of stories, such as nesting, mating sounds, neck marking and the pull between fated mates, along with unexpected elements like healing through sex! (The Joining)
The story revolves around Aiden, a lonely and depressed widower who is asked to provide a home for a traumatized young omega named Lake.
Lake appears almost feral, like a frightened animal, upon first entering Aiden's house. He hardly speaks, and when he does, it's quite terse. However, unbeknownst to them, they are fated mates, and the pull between them forms a bond in an unexpected way.
Fate can be so cruel, Lake. It has hurt you over and over. Then it brought us together, but you're broken and can't be mine.
In the backdrop of their story, another plotline unfolds involving people from Lake's past, who still may have some influence over them and could potentially destroy their slowly growing happiness.
I particularly enjoyed the sex scenes between the two characters; they felt very believable to me, capturing Lake's struggle with trauma and Aiden's almost angelic patience. He really is "the good alpha" in the story. This is a strict t/b story.
The book is written in a style typical of Eden, albeit with a third-person narrative POV. So, if you haven't enjoyed Eden's style in the past, you may not be swayed to like this one either :D
However, if you don't mind Eden's peculiarities, this book might be a hit for you.
I had so much fun reading it, and I appreciate that Eden also shows Aiden's and Lake's future, while tying up all the plot threads with happy conclusions. The book felt very wholesome to me, and Aiden's protectiveness, love, and patience for Lake melted my heart.
Overall, it's a very nice debut in the omegaverse subgenre for Eden.
This review refers to the first edition of the book
March 22, 2025
4.5*
You know, it was actually better than I expected. A simple love story between an omega and an alpha. I don't dive into omegaverse stuff too often, and this one was packed with OV elements, but I loved the overall gentle and sweet vibe, the attention to detail, and how the relationship was built beyond just the True Mate thing.
And can we talk about that ending? Total HEA with a capital H. I'm all about solid HEAs, so that's a big thumbs-up from me.
Note: The review is from the older version of the book
You know, it was actually better than I expected. A simple love story between an omega and an alpha. I don't dive into omegaverse stuff too often, and this one was packed with OV elements, but I loved the overall gentle and sweet vibe, the attention to detail, and how the relationship was built beyond just the True Mate thing.
And can we talk about that ending? Total HEA with a capital H. I'm all about solid HEAs, so that's a big thumbs-up from me.
Note: The review is from the older version of the book
March 14, 2024
Dnf 20%
A bit too cheesy for me. Lines that describe bystanders pointing and exclaiming, "It's the legendary ‘Omega Stun Sound’! They're True Mates!" made the read feel a bit too juvenile/pre-teen fan-fiction-esque for my personal tastes.
If you like campy, telepathically linked, fated pair omegaverse type troupes, this would be a good book for you!
A bit too cheesy for me. Lines that describe bystanders pointing and exclaiming, "It's the legendary ‘Omega Stun Sound’! They're True Mates!" made the read feel a bit too juvenile/pre-teen fan-fiction-esque for my personal tastes.
If you like campy, telepathically linked, fated pair omegaverse type troupes, this would be a good book for you!
March 22, 2025
My rating: 4.5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐✨
It's a relatively short story (around 160 pages?) about a former sex-slave and a washed-up pop star struggling with depression after his husband's death.
Unexpectedly, he gets a chance for change when his cousin calls, asking him to take in a young omega with a tragic past. The boy is a bit wild and distrustful at first, but over time, the ice starts to break, and he slowly warms up to Aiden.
The story is simple but enjoyable. I usually prefer books with dual POVs, but in this case, keeping Lake's feelings a bit of a mystery actually worked well for the story!
It's a relatively short story (around 160 pages?) about a former sex-slave and a washed-up pop star struggling with depression after his husband's death.
Unexpectedly, he gets a chance for change when his cousin calls, asking him to take in a young omega with a tragic past. The boy is a bit wild and distrustful at first, but over time, the ice starts to break, and he slowly warms up to Aiden.
The story is simple but enjoyable. I usually prefer books with dual POVs, but in this case, keeping Lake's feelings a bit of a mystery actually worked well for the story!
January 27, 2025
I liked this book, it was good, it gave me exactly what I wanted.
Lake had been through something horrific and the healing process was taking some time. Moving in with Aiden proved to be the perfect solution.
Aiden had lost his husband but the moment he saw Lake, he couldn't say no.
Fate intervined, they were meant to be.
They helped each other in their own trauma and grief and moved forward was a happy and loving couple
Lake had been through something horrific and the healing process was taking some time. Moving in with Aiden proved to be the perfect solution.
Aiden had lost his husband but the moment he saw Lake, he couldn't say no.
Fate intervined, they were meant to be.
They helped each other in their own trauma and grief and moved forward was a happy and loving couple
December 18, 2024
Being that English is not the authors first language, I'll try not to be too harsh. This felt almost clinical with no character for any of the characters. I was being told facts instead of a story. I got pretty bored around the 60% mark and decided to just skip to the end. I don't feel I missed much.
January 31, 2025
Another totally addictive and beautiful read in Eden West’s version of omegaverse with fated mates called True Mates.
This is my second Eden West book, and I was enthralled by her sweet survivor of abuse Lake, an omega, and his supportive and caring alpha, widower Aiden. They meet when Aiden’s police officer cousin asks Aiden if a rescued sex slave can recover in peace and safety at Aiden’s farm.
What ensues is such a heartbreaking and lovely story of their developing connection and relationship. Lake is so closed off, hopeless, feeling worthless and dirty and used, with physical scars as well as mental trauma, and Aiden is such a gentle, kind and protective safe space and person for him to exist with. They both soon realize they’re feeling a very unusual pull toward each other, and yes, it’s another fated mates/True Mate situation.
Aiden never expected to find love again; he’s still grieving his husband, who died in a car wreck about a year ago. I was so glad the author didn’t demonize the husband or do anything to denigrate the real love and joy Aiden had had with him—that’s so not necessary to show this relationship with Lake is a new chance for Aiden, and one that is even more intense due to the True Mate pull (he and his husband were High Mates, a very good match, though nothing is as strong as True Mates). It was handled well.
I love Eden’s take on alphas and omegas and the different types of mates. She’s created adorable, involuntary sounds and feelings that pull True Mates together, as well as feral protective reactions in an alpha when their omega is threatened. See these sounds and physical reactions and instincts manifest is part of what makes her omegaverse special. She’s also created unique healing powers that exist between True Mates, though honestly, it goes a little far for me in healing scars—the implication is that there’s something wrong with scars that the connection “fixes.” I’d rather embrace scars and the strength they represent, but...I suspended disbelief. The power makes sense given the connections she’s created for True Mates.
There’s danger and some violence stemming from the people who abused and enslaved Lake (though his actual abusers are in jail, they have connections outside), and revelations about his family that are heartbreaking. Sold into sexual slavery by his alpha father, Lake had no one on his side until he was rescued by a terrific organization who supports and fights for the rights of abused omegas.
Seeing Aiden’s patience, support, and gentle ways with Lake was just lovely, and seeing Lake gradually open himself and come to trust...and truly desire...Aiden is beautiful. I enjoyed their love story very much. There are strong supporting characters too.
I do wish the author would calm down on the use of ! That style is distracting in a negative way. For me anyway.
HEA, fated mates, omegaverse, romantic suspense elements, hurt-comfort read. Absolutely no others/cheating any of that in any way, entirely safe for me, though TW for one MC having lost a beloved husband—that grief didn’t overwhelm this new relationship and was handled with respect. Highly recommended, and I’ll be reading more in this world.
This is my second Eden West book, and I was enthralled by her sweet survivor of abuse Lake, an omega, and his supportive and caring alpha, widower Aiden. They meet when Aiden’s police officer cousin asks Aiden if a rescued sex slave can recover in peace and safety at Aiden’s farm.
What ensues is such a heartbreaking and lovely story of their developing connection and relationship. Lake is so closed off, hopeless, feeling worthless and dirty and used, with physical scars as well as mental trauma, and Aiden is such a gentle, kind and protective safe space and person for him to exist with. They both soon realize they’re feeling a very unusual pull toward each other, and yes, it’s another fated mates/True Mate situation.
Aiden never expected to find love again; he’s still grieving his husband, who died in a car wreck about a year ago. I was so glad the author didn’t demonize the husband or do anything to denigrate the real love and joy Aiden had had with him—that’s so not necessary to show this relationship with Lake is a new chance for Aiden, and one that is even more intense due to the True Mate pull (he and his husband were High Mates, a very good match, though nothing is as strong as True Mates). It was handled well.
I love Eden’s take on alphas and omegas and the different types of mates. She’s created adorable, involuntary sounds and feelings that pull True Mates together, as well as feral protective reactions in an alpha when their omega is threatened. See these sounds and physical reactions and instincts manifest is part of what makes her omegaverse special. She’s also created unique healing powers that exist between True Mates, though honestly, it goes a little far for me in healing scars—the implication is that there’s something wrong with scars that the connection “fixes.” I’d rather embrace scars and the strength they represent, but...I suspended disbelief. The power makes sense given the connections she’s created for True Mates.
There’s danger and some violence stemming from the people who abused and enslaved Lake (though his actual abusers are in jail, they have connections outside), and revelations about his family that are heartbreaking. Sold into sexual slavery by his alpha father, Lake had no one on his side until he was rescued by a terrific organization who supports and fights for the rights of abused omegas.
Seeing Aiden’s patience, support, and gentle ways with Lake was just lovely, and seeing Lake gradually open himself and come to trust...and truly desire...Aiden is beautiful. I enjoyed their love story very much. There are strong supporting characters too.
I do wish the author would calm down on the use of ! That style is distracting in a negative way. For me anyway.
HEA, fated mates, omegaverse, romantic suspense elements, hurt-comfort read. Absolutely no others/cheating any of that in any way, entirely safe for me, though TW for one MC having lost a beloved husband—that grief didn’t overwhelm this new relationship and was handled with respect. Highly recommended, and I’ll be reading more in this world.
July 9, 2025
This was a nice book with some things that worked out for me and a few others that didn't. Ultimately, I think it did its job in selling the story because it had interesting elements and I ended up liking it as a whole.
The story is about Aiden, a widowed alpha that is contacted one day by a friend and asked to allow an omega under his roof. Lake went through a traumatic experience, and Aiden isn't sure at first, but something tells him he would be able to help. Things turn out very differently than he expected though, when an event makes them realize they're true mates.
I really liked the pairing of a widowed alpha giving himself another chance and an omega that needs help, the hurt/comfort aspect and the respect of boundaries that it wanted to portray were nicely done.
One thing I wasn't a big fan of, although it's more of a personal preference, was the fated mates thing. I'm not that into a sudden strong connection, but I decided to continue because I was very interested in Lake's story. I think Lake's journey was the main force of the book and it left me pretty satisfied, although I also wish the fated mates trope didn't take away part of his organic healing.
Another thing I also would've wanted to be done differently is the exposition from the worldbuilding. While I appreciate that it's shown instead of just told, I wish the explanation was done through dialogue in a more organic way. Some of the writting style, specifically speaking about the abundant use of exclamation marks to make a sentence more impactful, could've been done in a different way too.
Despite some of those technicalities, I still had a good time overall. I liked the comforting aspect that the couple shared, as well as how protective they became towards each other. Despite the insta-connection, they tried to get to know esch other and Lake was given time instead of being pushed, which is the message the author wanted to come across and sucedeed.
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The story is about Aiden, a widowed alpha that is contacted one day by a friend and asked to allow an omega under his roof. Lake went through a traumatic experience, and Aiden isn't sure at first, but something tells him he would be able to help. Things turn out very differently than he expected though, when an event makes them realize they're true mates.
I really liked the pairing of a widowed alpha giving himself another chance and an omega that needs help, the hurt/comfort aspect and the respect of boundaries that it wanted to portray were nicely done.
One thing I wasn't a big fan of, although it's more of a personal preference, was the fated mates thing. I'm not that into a sudden strong connection, but I decided to continue because I was very interested in Lake's story. I think Lake's journey was the main force of the book and it left me pretty satisfied, although I also wish the fated mates trope didn't take away part of his organic healing.
Another thing I also would've wanted to be done differently is the exposition from the worldbuilding. While I appreciate that it's shown instead of just told, I wish the explanation was done through dialogue in a more organic way. Some of the writting style, specifically speaking about the abundant use of exclamation marks to make a sentence more impactful, could've been done in a different way too.
Despite some of those technicalities, I still had a good time overall. I liked the comforting aspect that the couple shared, as well as how protective they became towards each other. Despite the insta-connection, they tried to get to know esch other and Lake was given time instead of being pushed, which is the message the author wanted to come across and sucedeed.
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-POV: third person
-Content warnings:
-Elements:
-Sexual act(s):
-Dynamic:
February 26, 2024
This was an okay read but some parts bothered me too much to give this a higher rating.
Firstly, I am glad the author contained the mpreg element into the bonus chapter. I remember preordering the book because it was an omegaverse story without mpreg (and I am okay with off-page mpreg). I found the OV world-building interesting with using more animalistic features. Though what threw me off was the constant labeling of these sounds.
The hurt/comfort was introduced well but the execution and overall coming to terms with abuse and trauma not so much. This story relies on a "magic dick" energy where sex helps overcome everything. Lake goes from being averse to touch to penetration in a lightning speed. The way Aiden dealt with his trauma at times was also inconsistent. He feels sorry all the time (which is understandable) and then brushes off some of Lake's concerns. Like when they have sex at the start of their relationship and it is a big deal and very stressful for Lake so he talks a lot to maybe not think about his trauma (this is a single POV third-person narration so Lake's POV is omitted)... and Aiden says "Why do you talk so much during sex, Lake? Please, go with the flow." ... ? Really? This is your reaction? And later in the book, suddenly, Lake behaves as if he had not been abused at all. I know it is part of the whole mate thing and healing, but why then have a hurt/comfort book where the hurt just stops existing.
Lake's story is also full of fateful encounters which always make him do something he did not want to. And this lack of choice could've been explored more.
The therapist was... just so insensitive and weird. I'm glad Aiden reacted to him the way he did.
And at one point there is mentioning of Aiden's family and how they will hound him but they do not appear in the book at all (I did not read the bonus chapter).
This was my first book by the author and I think it needs a better editor. Some parts were like from an 18th century novel. And the way the characters talked was so weird - they said something and often even summarized their feelings explicitly... but it was not necessary.
Firstly, I am glad the author contained the mpreg element into the bonus chapter. I remember preordering the book because it was an omegaverse story without mpreg (and I am okay with off-page mpreg). I found the OV world-building interesting with using more animalistic features. Though what threw me off was the constant labeling of these sounds.
The hurt/comfort was introduced well but the execution and overall coming to terms with abuse and trauma not so much. This story relies on a "magic dick" energy where sex helps overcome everything. Lake goes from being averse to touch to penetration in a lightning speed. The way Aiden dealt with his trauma at times was also inconsistent. He feels sorry all the time (which is understandable) and then brushes off some of Lake's concerns. Like when they have sex at the start of their relationship and it is a big deal and very stressful for Lake so he talks a lot to maybe not think about his trauma (this is a single POV third-person narration so Lake's POV is omitted)... and Aiden says "Why do you talk so much during sex, Lake? Please, go with the flow." ... ? Really? This is your reaction? And later in the book, suddenly, Lake behaves as if he had not been abused at all. I know it is part of the whole mate thing and healing, but why then have a hurt/comfort book where the hurt just stops existing.
Lake's story is also full of fateful encounters which always make him do something he did not want to. And this lack of choice could've been explored more.
The therapist was... just so insensitive and weird. I'm glad Aiden reacted to him the way he did.
And at one point there is mentioning of Aiden's family and how they will hound him but they do not appear in the book at all (I did not read the bonus chapter).
This was my first book by the author and I think it needs a better editor. Some parts were like from an 18th century novel. And the way the characters talked was so weird - they said something and often even summarized their feelings explicitly... but it was not necessary.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 28, 2024
Book Review: Broken by Eden West
Eden West’s Broken is a poignant exploration of pain, resilience, and the transformative power of love, set against the backdrop of a richly crafted Omegaverse. The story masterfully intertwines themes of hardship, abuse, healing, and hope, delivering an emotional journey that resonates deeply.
What sets this novel apart is how the Omegaverse framework enhances the narrative. The unique cultural aspects of this genre—such as the dynamics between Alphas and Omegas, the instinctive behaviors like nesting, marking, and the concept of fated mates—provide a fresh lens through which to view the healing process. These elements deepen the emotional connection between the characters and add layers of meaning to their struggles and triumphs.
The two main characters are beautifully flawed, each burdened by their pasts. Their journey toward healing is poignant and raw, and it’s only when they come together that their paths to recovery truly begin. The bond between them, enriched by the fated mate trope, feels inevitable yet deeply earned, making their love story all the more compelling.
West does an exceptional job of capturing the complexity of their emotions, from despair and vulnerability to joy and hope. The authenticity of the healing process is particularly striking—it’s gradual, fraught with setbacks, and deeply human. The Omegaverse dynamics serve not just as a backdrop but as a vital part of the story, illustrating how cultural expectations and instincts can shape and support personal growth.
By the end, you can’t help but root for the characters to find their happiness. Broken is a deeply satisfying read, blending the emotional depth of a healing journey with the immersive world-building of the Omegaverse. Eden West has crafted a tale that’s equal parts painful and uplifting—a testament to the resilience of the human spirit and the redemptive power of love.
Eden West’s Broken is a poignant exploration of pain, resilience, and the transformative power of love, set against the backdrop of a richly crafted Omegaverse. The story masterfully intertwines themes of hardship, abuse, healing, and hope, delivering an emotional journey that resonates deeply.
What sets this novel apart is how the Omegaverse framework enhances the narrative. The unique cultural aspects of this genre—such as the dynamics between Alphas and Omegas, the instinctive behaviors like nesting, marking, and the concept of fated mates—provide a fresh lens through which to view the healing process. These elements deepen the emotional connection between the characters and add layers of meaning to their struggles and triumphs.
The two main characters are beautifully flawed, each burdened by their pasts. Their journey toward healing is poignant and raw, and it’s only when they come together that their paths to recovery truly begin. The bond between them, enriched by the fated mate trope, feels inevitable yet deeply earned, making their love story all the more compelling.
West does an exceptional job of capturing the complexity of their emotions, from despair and vulnerability to joy and hope. The authenticity of the healing process is particularly striking—it’s gradual, fraught with setbacks, and deeply human. The Omegaverse dynamics serve not just as a backdrop but as a vital part of the story, illustrating how cultural expectations and instincts can shape and support personal growth.
By the end, you can’t help but root for the characters to find their happiness. Broken is a deeply satisfying read, blending the emotional depth of a healing journey with the immersive world-building of the Omegaverse. Eden West has crafted a tale that’s equal parts painful and uplifting—a testament to the resilience of the human spirit and the redemptive power of love.
March 20, 2025
DNF 33%
If you don't take this book seriously you will have fun.
Really it was silly with all those "look! this alpha entered super fighting mode" with serious face from grown-ass man or "look! its legendary omega stun sound." I wheezed. or "he made a sound known as Request for protection and was met with sound Request approved". what? lol. you can't communicate with words or it was jab at how often in abo books omegas let out high-pitched sounds and met with alpha's growls?
Overall, the world is interesting. I love omegaverse stories where its not boring contemporary but a world with its own rules.
BUT
The book is written from the alpha's pov and I thought that's why it's so... dry? usually alphas have boring chapters in books because authors portray them as stoic and less emotional, but most likely it was the writing style. (author isn't native english speaker, i know. as you can see from my questionable grammar so am I)
The alpha SAYS he respects the omega, his decisions, feelings, privacy and will give him space, but rarely DOES so.
- for example, watching the omega swimming in the pool through the camera after omega said he isn't comfortable being seen undressed,
- generally watching him through cameras,
- watching omega sleep, then taking his pic...
- insisting that omega accepts expensive ring even tho omega said no the previous day.
who gives gold and platinum ring to someone on their second day of knowing that person? it's not sugar daddy/sugar baby story. its alarming to receive such gifts from weirdo who is supposed to let you heal and recover in his house but instead makes strange advances.
- omega never shared any information about himself with alpha, but alpha either collects it through cameras or takes this info through their "telepathic connection" from omega's head and fills in the gaps with his imagination.
- alpha thinks that everything will be better for omega if alpha hugs him and says "I know everything, I understand everything".
questionable. maybe it will help omega because he will have at least one person to share his burdens and emotions with. but maybe it will cause him to close up more because, again, he didn't share any of his experiences with alpha and yet alpha has the audacity to claim that he knows and understands everything.
- and alpha is a widower, but after 3 days with a new omega, he has already got over his year-long grief about his ex-husband and cries from how much he wants to touch the new omega. literally cries.
If you don't take this book seriously you will have fun.
Really it was silly with all those "look! this alpha entered super fighting mode" with serious face from grown-ass man or "look! its legendary omega stun sound." I wheezed. or "he made a sound known as Request for protection and was met with sound Request approved". what? lol. you can't communicate with words or it was jab at how often in abo books omegas let out high-pitched sounds and met with alpha's growls?
Overall, the world is interesting. I love omegaverse stories where its not boring contemporary but a world with its own rules.
BUT
The book is written from the alpha's pov and I thought that's why it's so... dry? usually alphas have boring chapters in books because authors portray them as stoic and less emotional, but most likely it was the writing style. (author isn't native english speaker, i know. as you can see from my questionable grammar so am I)
The alpha SAYS he respects the omega, his decisions, feelings, privacy and will give him space, but rarely DOES so.
- for example, watching the omega swimming in the pool through the camera after omega said he isn't comfortable being seen undressed,
- generally watching him through cameras,
- watching omega sleep, then taking his pic...
- insisting that omega accepts expensive ring even tho omega said no the previous day.
who gives gold and platinum ring to someone on their second day of knowing that person? it's not sugar daddy/sugar baby story. its alarming to receive such gifts from weirdo who is supposed to let you heal and recover in his house but instead makes strange advances.
- omega never shared any information about himself with alpha, but alpha either collects it through cameras or takes this info through their "telepathic connection" from omega's head and fills in the gaps with his imagination.
- alpha thinks that everything will be better for omega if alpha hugs him and says "I know everything, I understand everything".
questionable. maybe it will help omega because he will have at least one person to share his burdens and emotions with. but maybe it will cause him to close up more because, again, he didn't share any of his experiences with alpha and yet alpha has the audacity to claim that he knows and understands everything.
- and alpha is a widower, but after 3 days with a new omega, he has already got over his year-long grief about his ex-husband and cries from how much he wants to touch the new omega. literally cries.
February 26, 2024
I thoroughly enjoyed this incredibly engaging story!
The author, Eden West, excels at descriptive writing. This emotional story unfolds like a movie in my mind, and is writen with transparent honesty that does not cut corners.
This author's distinctive writing style compliments the subjects of their books.
This most recent release is an omegaverse mpreg story, with expansive brilliant world building, plotlines, and characters.
The main characters are Aiden, a widowed alpha, and Lake, a formerly enslaved omega. They have experienced difficult times, which are written with depth and compassion. Heed the cw/tw in the blurb, and the author's helpful introduction.
The grief, PTSD, trust issues, and character growth Aiden and Lake deal with, are authentically portrayed.
Aiden's patient, considerate and devoted care of Lake is heartwarming. Lake's struggles, courageous steps, along with Aiden's restorative healing, help him to revive his life. I rooted for them all the way!
Ultimately this exceptional book is a well-paced and riveting romance, with fated mates who work for their HEA.
I really appreciated the epilogue and bonus chapter which contains scenes of natural birth, and tender moments with their infant son, including chest feeding.
And, that glossary at the end is impressive!
I am excited to read the next book in this series, and highly recommend this book!
The author, Eden West, excels at descriptive writing. This emotional story unfolds like a movie in my mind, and is writen with transparent honesty that does not cut corners.
This author's distinctive writing style compliments the subjects of their books.
This most recent release is an omegaverse mpreg story, with expansive brilliant world building, plotlines, and characters.
The main characters are Aiden, a widowed alpha, and Lake, a formerly enslaved omega. They have experienced difficult times, which are written with depth and compassion. Heed the cw/tw in the blurb, and the author's helpful introduction.
The grief, PTSD, trust issues, and character growth Aiden and Lake deal with, are authentically portrayed.
Aiden's patient, considerate and devoted care of Lake is heartwarming. Lake's struggles, courageous steps, along with Aiden's restorative healing, help him to revive his life. I rooted for them all the way!
Ultimately this exceptional book is a well-paced and riveting romance, with fated mates who work for their HEA.
I really appreciated the epilogue and bonus chapter which contains scenes of natural birth, and tender moments with their infant son, including chest feeding.
And, that glossary at the end is impressive!
I am excited to read the next book in this series, and highly recommend this book!
July 16, 2024
This one had the potential to be so much better. The mate connection (sensing each other's feelings or sharing pain) of both of the main characters was pretty similar to Strength of the Pack, which was one of my favorite books. The story started well, but unfortunately, it didn't last.
There was a lot of mating ritual that was pretty new for me. I was not sure what to feel about the mating sounds and the fighting mode. I found them cringy but intriguing.
I didn't enjoy the focus of the story. Half of the story focused more on Aiden's feelings and controlling his alpha instincts. And even when the story focused on Lake's acceptance of the bond, it still felt off.
I think it was mainly because the point of view of the story was mostly Aiden. So Lake's situation felt more like a side story. I couldn't grasp Aiden's character as well. In some scenes, I felt like he was a bit forceful and manipulative. He gave me mixed vibes.
I hope we were given more of Lake's POV so we could really feel his healing. Overall, the characters weren't for me.
There was a lot of mating ritual that was pretty new for me. I was not sure what to feel about the mating sounds and the fighting mode. I found them cringy but intriguing.
I didn't enjoy the focus of the story. Half of the story focused more on Aiden's feelings and controlling his alpha instincts. And even when the story focused on Lake's acceptance of the bond, it still felt off.
I think it was mainly because the point of view of the story was mostly Aiden. So Lake's situation felt more like a side story. I couldn't grasp Aiden's character as well. In some scenes, I felt like he was a bit forceful and manipulative. He gave me mixed vibes.
I hope we were given more of Lake's POV so we could really feel his healing. Overall, the characters weren't for me.
March 26, 2025
Re-edited version of Aiden and Lake
This book has been re-edited and while I really really enjoyed the story I do think it could have been edited even more which is the reason I give it four stars not five stars.
Let me explain. Hurt/comfort is one of my favorite genres of story and the ideas behind this are great. There is some good storytelling here with great world building especially if you read the afterwords that give you more detail about what Eden West has developed. My big problem is that there is too much repeating of explanations, feelings, etc. I understand that they are both healing from their own traumas, but at some points it just felt like they were saying or thinking the same thing in almost the same way over and over. It really took me out of the book thinking that I had heard this before and wondering if I had accidentally gone back in the book.
Why did I give it four stars then?
Because the overall story is terrific and well worth reading.
This book has been re-edited and while I really really enjoyed the story I do think it could have been edited even more which is the reason I give it four stars not five stars.
Let me explain. Hurt/comfort is one of my favorite genres of story and the ideas behind this are great. There is some good storytelling here with great world building especially if you read the afterwords that give you more detail about what Eden West has developed. My big problem is that there is too much repeating of explanations, feelings, etc. I understand that they are both healing from their own traumas, but at some points it just felt like they were saying or thinking the same thing in almost the same way over and over. It really took me out of the book thinking that I had heard this before and wondering if I had accidentally gone back in the book.
Why did I give it four stars then?
Because the overall story is terrific and well worth reading.
September 22, 2024
Erotic and intense!!!😍😘😚
Beautifully written! So incredibly in-depth. This world pulls you in and grips you tightly. The characters are so fully fleshed out, it is truly easy to sink into their Omegaverse! And it is quite a ride. I enjoyed the slow burn and this unfolding tale. It disturbs and then settles in your soul. Patience and kindness fill these pages erasing the terrible pain. I really love Eden West's style in all the glorious detail she weaves for the reader. I was ensnared from the first sentences! I had to keep reading. I highly recommend this trilogy to those who want to sink into worlds lovingly constructed!
Beautifully written! So incredibly in-depth. This world pulls you in and grips you tightly. The characters are so fully fleshed out, it is truly easy to sink into their Omegaverse! And it is quite a ride. I enjoyed the slow burn and this unfolding tale. It disturbs and then settles in your soul. Patience and kindness fill these pages erasing the terrible pain. I really love Eden West's style in all the glorious detail she weaves for the reader. I was ensnared from the first sentences! I had to keep reading. I highly recommend this trilogy to those who want to sink into worlds lovingly constructed!
February 24, 2024
4.5*
You know, it was actually better than I expected. A simple love story between an omega and an alpha. I don't dive into omegaverse stuff too often, and this one was packed with OV elements, but I loved the overall gentle and sweet vibe, the attention to detail, and how the relationship was built beyond just the True Mate thing.
And can we talk about that ending? Total HEA with a capital H. I'm all about solid HEAs, so that's a big thumbs-up from me.
You know, it was actually better than I expected. A simple love story between an omega and an alpha. I don't dive into omegaverse stuff too often, and this one was packed with OV elements, but I loved the overall gentle and sweet vibe, the attention to detail, and how the relationship was built beyond just the True Mate thing.
And can we talk about that ending? Total HEA with a capital H. I'm all about solid HEAs, so that's a big thumbs-up from me.
July 6, 2024
I decided to read another book by this author and it was a good choice. Broken is a well paced and very comforting book, with a really heartwarming, beautiful ending.
It's the story of a 20-year-old omega who was a slave to two sickos and was rescued by the police. Aiden, a 30-year-old widower, steps in and decides to help the omega, but in the process discovers an unexpected truth about them. I loved how respectful and sweet Aiden was and loved how Lake grew into himself. Very sweet story.
It's the story of a 20-year-old omega who was a slave to two sickos and was rescued by the police. Aiden, a 30-year-old widower, steps in and decides to help the omega, but in the process discovers an unexpected truth about them. I loved how respectful and sweet Aiden was and loved how Lake grew into himself. Very sweet story.
February 25, 2024
That was a good read, a very sweet and loving relationship, but it could have been shorter for my taste. The second part felt a bit too long for me, but I enjoyed the bonus chapters at the end, especially one of them, which was quite emotional. For this author's start in the Omegaverse trope, it wasn't bad. The glossary was an interesting idea.
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