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The Waking Land #2
The Memory of Fire
Magic. Romance. Revolution. The sequel to the bold and gorgeous The Waking Land.
Jahan Korakides is the hero who saved the life of the crown prince in battle, helped win the revolution in Eren and earned the heart of Elanna, the legendary Wildegarde reborn.
But Jahan Korakides is also broken; haunted by memories of the woman who experimented on him and his brothers as children. So when the empire threatens war in retribution for Elanna's illegal sorcery, Jahan leaves Eren to negotiate with the emperor on Queen Sophy's behalf. But the world he left has changed - riots rock the city of Ida, his brother is missing and the crown prince refuses to speak to him.
Jahan's only hope of success seems to lie with the rebels in Ida. Yet, if he joins them, he will merely spur on the war he's desperate to avoid, and risk revealing himself as a sorcerer.
And then the witch hunters arrive at court, bringing Elanna in chains.
Jahan Korakides is the hero who saved the life of the crown prince in battle, helped win the revolution in Eren and earned the heart of Elanna, the legendary Wildegarde reborn.
But Jahan Korakides is also broken; haunted by memories of the woman who experimented on him and his brothers as children. So when the empire threatens war in retribution for Elanna's illegal sorcery, Jahan leaves Eren to negotiate with the emperor on Queen Sophy's behalf. But the world he left has changed - riots rock the city of Ida, his brother is missing and the crown prince refuses to speak to him.
Jahan's only hope of success seems to lie with the rebels in Ida. Yet, if he joins them, he will merely spur on the war he's desperate to avoid, and risk revealing himself as a sorcerer.
And then the witch hunters arrive at court, bringing Elanna in chains.
449 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 17, 2018
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Callie Bates
6 books265 followersCallie Bates is a writer, harpist and certified harp therapist, sometimes artist, and nature nerd. When she’s not creating, she’s hitting the trails or streets and exploring new places. Her debut fantasy novel, THE WAKING LAND, is forthcoming from Del Rey Books in 2017.
She is represented by Hannah Bowman of Liza Dawson Associates.
She is represented by Hannah Bowman of Liza Dawson Associates.
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June 4, 2018
2.5 of 5 stars at The BiblioSanctum https://bibliosanctum.com/2018/06/04/...
Writing a negative is never easy, and there are certain books that make me feel extra crummy about it because I know the problem lies solely within me and not in the book itself. The Memory of Fire is a perfect example. It has a decent premise, a well-written story not marred by any serious technical problems, and it is also sequel to a debut I really enjoyed last year, called The Waking Land.
So then, why didn’t I enjoy this second volume, especially since it continued to expand the overall series arc by exploring many of the same world-building and magical themes from the first book? The main reason: a different main character. Instead of carrying on with the story through the eyes of Elanna Valtai, the wonderful star of the previous novel, The Memory of Fire changes tack and approaches things from the perspective of her lover, Jahan Korakides—whom I’m nowhere near as fond of. In fact, I came to downright detest him in the first book, as I found his personality to be incredibly dull and his romance with Elanna emotionally flat. As far as I was concerned, Jahan was little more than a distraction and an excuse for a romantic side plot, so I can’t say I was all that thrilled when I started the book only to discover that not only was he the focus of the sequel, we were actually getting the entire story from his point-of-view.
That being said, I was more than willing to give this novel a chance to change my mind. Learning about a character’s background and the experiences that helped shaped him can do wonders to alter existing perceptions, and I was hoping this book would warm me up to Jahan. We weren’t introduced to him until well into The Waking Land, and as a result, readers knew relatively little about his past and origins, except that he was a nobleman from Ida, and that unlike Elanna, he’s had a good grasp on his magical abilities since he was a child.
In The Memory of Fire, we get to find out exactly how Jahan developed his powers. The story takes us back to his homeland after he and Elanna’s time in Caeris is cut short by news that the empire of Paladis is planning an invasion. With Elanna’s powers exhausted from trying to restore the land, Jahan is forced to return to the court where he grew up to try and negotiate peace with the emperor.
But in Paladis, Jahan faces many challenges. With magic being outlawed and punishable by death, he must keep his powers under wraps, especially now that his friend Prince Leontius has turned his back on him, taking away any form of royal favor or protection. Worse are the political games he must play, as old enemies try to undermine the throne and threaten to reveal Jahan as a sorcerer. Returning home also means confronting his past and the painful memories of what happened to his family. Jahan is still plagued by memories of the manipulative witch Madiya, who secretly trained him and his brothers in magic—and caused a lot of emotional damage while doing it. Now her ominous messages to him are making it more difficult to focus on his mission, putting him in danger of being exposed.
I confess, I had really hoped reading a book from Jahan’s POV would change my impressions of him and make him more favorable in my eyes, but unfortunately, that just didn’t happen. I tried, I really tried. But far from getting me to get over my dislike of him, I think this novel merely exacerbated it, because I constantly found myself wishing we were still following Elanna–which isn’t fair, I know, since this is supposed to be Jahan’s chance to shine. To be honest though, his story just wasn’t anywhere near as interesting to me, especially since a good chunk of the first half was dominated by tedious political talk and the protagonist’s own fits of self-flagellating whining as he berates himself over and over for leaving his brothers in the hands of Madiya. Look, dude, you did what had to be done. Move on, and let’s get to some action already.
Thankfully, we saw the story pick up in the second half. The Memory of Fire is not only darker, but it is also more melancholy in tone compared to The Waking Land. It’s a good thing, I think, because this gives the series a bit more gravitas and shows it in the process of maturing into something greater. However, I don’t know if this is enough to overcome my ennui and lack of interest for most of this novel. I’m still rather apathetic towards Jahan, because he never really captured my attention the way Elanna did in the previous book. With her, the connection came effortlessly, in contrast to the narrative of this one, which tried a bit too hard to push Jahan upon the reader and, ironically, only served to drive me farther away.
Changing protagonists midway through a series is always a huge gamble, even if the story does require a different point-of-view in order to move forward. Callie Bates took the chance, and unfortunately, it didn’t pan out too well for me, though I’m sure it will work out just fine for plenty of others. In fact, if you enjoyed Jahan’s character in the first book, then there’s an excellent chance that you will enjoy The Memory of Fire. If you didn’t though, then your experience may be more touch and go. At this point, I’d still very much like to continue the series because the author is such a great writer, plus I love the world and the magic in these books. But if the story doesn’t return to Elanna, or at least focus more on her again, then I might have to reconsider. I guess we’ll just have to wait and see.
Writing a negative is never easy, and there are certain books that make me feel extra crummy about it because I know the problem lies solely within me and not in the book itself. The Memory of Fire is a perfect example. It has a decent premise, a well-written story not marred by any serious technical problems, and it is also sequel to a debut I really enjoyed last year, called The Waking Land.
So then, why didn’t I enjoy this second volume, especially since it continued to expand the overall series arc by exploring many of the same world-building and magical themes from the first book? The main reason: a different main character. Instead of carrying on with the story through the eyes of Elanna Valtai, the wonderful star of the previous novel, The Memory of Fire changes tack and approaches things from the perspective of her lover, Jahan Korakides—whom I’m nowhere near as fond of. In fact, I came to downright detest him in the first book, as I found his personality to be incredibly dull and his romance with Elanna emotionally flat. As far as I was concerned, Jahan was little more than a distraction and an excuse for a romantic side plot, so I can’t say I was all that thrilled when I started the book only to discover that not only was he the focus of the sequel, we were actually getting the entire story from his point-of-view.
That being said, I was more than willing to give this novel a chance to change my mind. Learning about a character’s background and the experiences that helped shaped him can do wonders to alter existing perceptions, and I was hoping this book would warm me up to Jahan. We weren’t introduced to him until well into The Waking Land, and as a result, readers knew relatively little about his past and origins, except that he was a nobleman from Ida, and that unlike Elanna, he’s had a good grasp on his magical abilities since he was a child.
In The Memory of Fire, we get to find out exactly how Jahan developed his powers. The story takes us back to his homeland after he and Elanna’s time in Caeris is cut short by news that the empire of Paladis is planning an invasion. With Elanna’s powers exhausted from trying to restore the land, Jahan is forced to return to the court where he grew up to try and negotiate peace with the emperor.
But in Paladis, Jahan faces many challenges. With magic being outlawed and punishable by death, he must keep his powers under wraps, especially now that his friend Prince Leontius has turned his back on him, taking away any form of royal favor or protection. Worse are the political games he must play, as old enemies try to undermine the throne and threaten to reveal Jahan as a sorcerer. Returning home also means confronting his past and the painful memories of what happened to his family. Jahan is still plagued by memories of the manipulative witch Madiya, who secretly trained him and his brothers in magic—and caused a lot of emotional damage while doing it. Now her ominous messages to him are making it more difficult to focus on his mission, putting him in danger of being exposed.
I confess, I had really hoped reading a book from Jahan’s POV would change my impressions of him and make him more favorable in my eyes, but unfortunately, that just didn’t happen. I tried, I really tried. But far from getting me to get over my dislike of him, I think this novel merely exacerbated it, because I constantly found myself wishing we were still following Elanna–which isn’t fair, I know, since this is supposed to be Jahan’s chance to shine. To be honest though, his story just wasn’t anywhere near as interesting to me, especially since a good chunk of the first half was dominated by tedious political talk and the protagonist’s own fits of self-flagellating whining as he berates himself over and over for leaving his brothers in the hands of Madiya. Look, dude, you did what had to be done. Move on, and let’s get to some action already.
Thankfully, we saw the story pick up in the second half. The Memory of Fire is not only darker, but it is also more melancholy in tone compared to The Waking Land. It’s a good thing, I think, because this gives the series a bit more gravitas and shows it in the process of maturing into something greater. However, I don’t know if this is enough to overcome my ennui and lack of interest for most of this novel. I’m still rather apathetic towards Jahan, because he never really captured my attention the way Elanna did in the previous book. With her, the connection came effortlessly, in contrast to the narrative of this one, which tried a bit too hard to push Jahan upon the reader and, ironically, only served to drive me farther away.
Changing protagonists midway through a series is always a huge gamble, even if the story does require a different point-of-view in order to move forward. Callie Bates took the chance, and unfortunately, it didn’t pan out too well for me, though I’m sure it will work out just fine for plenty of others. In fact, if you enjoyed Jahan’s character in the first book, then there’s an excellent chance that you will enjoy The Memory of Fire. If you didn’t though, then your experience may be more touch and go. At this point, I’d still very much like to continue the series because the author is such a great writer, plus I love the world and the magic in these books. But if the story doesn’t return to Elanna, or at least focus more on her again, then I might have to reconsider. I guess we’ll just have to wait and see.
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June 3, 2018Jahan Korakides showed up in the first book, The Waking Land. He saved Crown Prince Leontius in battle, helped win the revolution in Eren, and matched up with Elanna Valtai, heroine of the previous book, and a powerful sorceress in touch with the land.
This is Jahan’s book. He doesn’t see himself as a hero at all. He sees himself as a failed mage, haunted by memories of the sorceress who experimented on him and his brothers as children in her effort to train powerful sorcerers.
When the empire threatens war in retribution for Elanna's illegal sorcery, Jahan leaves Eren to negotiate with the emperor on Queen Sophy's behalf. But the capital has changed since the days he lived there. People are talking revolution, the emperor broods on his throne mistrusting everyone except the witch finders who seek and kill sorcerers, his much younger empress, and his second son and daughter (a pair of nasty articles pretty much like awful Princess Loyce and Denis in the first book). Jehan has to hide his sorcery, of course, but his secrets alienate all his old friends, who seem to regard him as a traitor.
Meanwhile one of his brothers is missing, and oh yes, the sorceress he ran away from keeps calling him mentally.
Things slowly go from bad to worse—and then the news comes that Elanna has been captured, and is slated for execution.
I thought the first book, in spite of a few problems, a bravura first novel that kept the pages turning. The pacing in this second book was even more intense, with the stakes, and the magic, inexorably building to a powerful climax. Bates does a terrific job with emotionally scarred Jehan, whose memories were tampered with, and who struggles to find his own moral center. At times it was difficult reading his determinedly morose POV, but Bates did an excellent job contrasting Jehan with other characters.
Except for the evil and princess, who were one-dimensional nasties much like the late and unlamented Loyce and Denis, Bates does a great job with complex characters, including other villains. Jehan’s friends are even more interesting. So, too, are the discussions of magic, power, and government. The details are vivid, and the worldbuilding gaining in complexity as well.
The first person present tense was a lot more gracefully handled in this book. Altogether a great summer read, leaving me looking forward to the next book in the series.
Copy provided by NetGalley
This is Jahan’s book. He doesn’t see himself as a hero at all. He sees himself as a failed mage, haunted by memories of the sorceress who experimented on him and his brothers as children in her effort to train powerful sorcerers.
When the empire threatens war in retribution for Elanna's illegal sorcery, Jahan leaves Eren to negotiate with the emperor on Queen Sophy's behalf. But the capital has changed since the days he lived there. People are talking revolution, the emperor broods on his throne mistrusting everyone except the witch finders who seek and kill sorcerers, his much younger empress, and his second son and daughter (a pair of nasty articles pretty much like awful Princess Loyce and Denis in the first book). Jehan has to hide his sorcery, of course, but his secrets alienate all his old friends, who seem to regard him as a traitor.
Meanwhile one of his brothers is missing, and oh yes, the sorceress he ran away from keeps calling him mentally.
Things slowly go from bad to worse—and then the news comes that Elanna has been captured, and is slated for execution.
I thought the first book, in spite of a few problems, a bravura first novel that kept the pages turning. The pacing in this second book was even more intense, with the stakes, and the magic, inexorably building to a powerful climax. Bates does a terrific job with emotionally scarred Jehan, whose memories were tampered with, and who struggles to find his own moral center. At times it was difficult reading his determinedly morose POV, but Bates did an excellent job contrasting Jehan with other characters.
Except for the evil and princess, who were one-dimensional nasties much like the late and unlamented Loyce and Denis, Bates does a great job with complex characters, including other villains. Jehan’s friends are even more interesting. So, too, are the discussions of magic, power, and government. The details are vivid, and the worldbuilding gaining in complexity as well.
The first person present tense was a lot more gracefully handled in this book. Altogether a great summer read, leaving me looking forward to the next book in the series.
Copy provided by NetGalley
June 5, 2018
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My Thoughts
While I really enjoyed The Waking Land , it was not without issues for me. I was honestly a bit surprised to be contacted regarding The Memory of Fire. But I am so thankful I was! This is a stellar example of a sequel exceeding its predecessor in the best of ways. And I love nothing more than discovering an author who can take a series and successfully grow and improve it, which is exactly what happens in this beautiful addition to the story.
The skinny..
Following The Waking Land, we are offered a new perspective through the eyes of the nobleman, Jahan. Continuing to conceal his own sorcery he returns to capital in an effort to assist Elanna’s quest to obtain a peace treaty with a land where magic is punishable by death. During his efforts, he is also torn in a battle to save his younger brothers from Madiya, the very woman who raised and tormented them through a series of experiments intended to strengthen their powers. Now, facing his past and a potential war, Jahan must choose to embrace the one thing he has also concealed, his magic.
What I appreciated..
Jahan’s story offers the reader a new and engaging take on Elanna’s journey, providing incredible insight into their relationship and the challenges they encounter.
There is a new layer of complexity added to the magic system and politics that can only be understood through the revelation of Jahan’s backstory.
The thorough exploration of the witch hunters and their methods add another welcomed level of depth to the growing plotline.
A strong supportive cast of characters (such as Firmina, the empress) are of significant value to the story and equally interesting.
World building is immersive, expanding what was created within The Waking Land and taking the reader on a new journey of political intrigue.
Callie Bates seems to have found her voice within The Memory of Fire, and it flows with an incredibly inviting ease that transports the reader effortlessly.
Challenges some may encounter..
I really cannot think of many aside from the fact that this is Jahan’s story. So if readers are hoping to explore Elanna more, they will not do so here. For myself, this was an appreciated change of pace.
The Memory of Fire is a beautiful expansion of a promising story that delivers something rich and captivating. The author’s decision to switch perspectives proves to be ultimately rewarding and satisfying. Putting it down is likely to be the biggest challenge readers will encounter.
*I would like to thank Del Rey for this advanced copy. This review is my own, unbiased and honest opinion.
☕Pairs beautifully with a nice spiced chai blend.☕
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
My Thoughts
While I really enjoyed The Waking Land , it was not without issues for me. I was honestly a bit surprised to be contacted regarding The Memory of Fire. But I am so thankful I was! This is a stellar example of a sequel exceeding its predecessor in the best of ways. And I love nothing more than discovering an author who can take a series and successfully grow and improve it, which is exactly what happens in this beautiful addition to the story.
The skinny..
Following The Waking Land, we are offered a new perspective through the eyes of the nobleman, Jahan. Continuing to conceal his own sorcery he returns to capital in an effort to assist Elanna’s quest to obtain a peace treaty with a land where magic is punishable by death. During his efforts, he is also torn in a battle to save his younger brothers from Madiya, the very woman who raised and tormented them through a series of experiments intended to strengthen their powers. Now, facing his past and a potential war, Jahan must choose to embrace the one thing he has also concealed, his magic.
What I appreciated..
Jahan’s story offers the reader a new and engaging take on Elanna’s journey, providing incredible insight into their relationship and the challenges they encounter.
There is a new layer of complexity added to the magic system and politics that can only be understood through the revelation of Jahan’s backstory.
The thorough exploration of the witch hunters and their methods add another welcomed level of depth to the growing plotline.
A strong supportive cast of characters (such as Firmina, the empress) are of significant value to the story and equally interesting.
World building is immersive, expanding what was created within The Waking Land and taking the reader on a new journey of political intrigue.
Callie Bates seems to have found her voice within The Memory of Fire, and it flows with an incredibly inviting ease that transports the reader effortlessly.
Challenges some may encounter..
I really cannot think of many aside from the fact that this is Jahan’s story. So if readers are hoping to explore Elanna more, they will not do so here. For myself, this was an appreciated change of pace.
The Memory of Fire is a beautiful expansion of a promising story that delivers something rich and captivating. The author’s decision to switch perspectives proves to be ultimately rewarding and satisfying. Putting it down is likely to be the biggest challenge readers will encounter.
*I would like to thank Del Rey for this advanced copy. This review is my own, unbiased and honest opinion.
☕Pairs beautifully with a nice spiced chai blend.☕
June 17, 2018
Having read "The Waking Land", the first book in this series by Callie Bates, I was very excitable about the prospect of securing an advanced review copy of "The Memory of Fire" to read and review. When my prayers were answered I was over the moon!
I have to say, I enjoyed this more than the first one although some of the issues with the "The Waking Land" are still present in this sequel. My main criticism is that the plot is overly intricate with a lot happening and a large cast of characters meaning it takes a good amount of brainpower to keep them all straight in your head. There are a significant number of characters on the periphery too, all with minor parts in the plot and who's development is limited. They are difficult to form attachments to as a consequence. With regard to the ending, I would've expected to have been given more knowledge of The Witch Hunters by the author, seen as they are an integral part of the way the book concludes.
Okay, now on to the positives! I thought Bates was extremely bold and brave to dedicate most of "The Waking Land" to Elanna and her development. Here, the POV changes and the story is told from Jahan's perspective. I really enjoyed this aspect as I think sometimes when a story is already very "busy", to change the POV between different characters throughout a book can make it even busier. I appreciated the paranoid undertone to proceedings as you never knew who you could trust, a feature I love and primarily see in crime thrillers. It was also a hell of a lot darker than the series first. Some of Jahan's previous behaviour is explained by learning his history and I appreciated getting his backstory. Bates has created two contrasting main characters in Elanna and Jahan - Elanna is vivacious and strong, Jahan's story is a much sadder one which has a knock-on effect on his thought processes and the way he lives his life.
I feel that there is plenty more life left in this tale and the finale certainly leaves open the possibility for a third book in the series. I would definitely pick up the third title to learn more about Elanna and Jahan and follow them on their adventures in this fresh and vivid world.
A final note - this is absolutely a book that requires you to have read the first in the series as the plot follows on from what happened previously and won't make a lot of sense to those who attempt to try it as a standalone title.
Many thanks to Hodder & Stoughton for an ARC. I was not required to post a review and all thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
I have to say, I enjoyed this more than the first one although some of the issues with the "The Waking Land" are still present in this sequel. My main criticism is that the plot is overly intricate with a lot happening and a large cast of characters meaning it takes a good amount of brainpower to keep them all straight in your head. There are a significant number of characters on the periphery too, all with minor parts in the plot and who's development is limited. They are difficult to form attachments to as a consequence. With regard to the ending, I would've expected to have been given more knowledge of The Witch Hunters by the author, seen as they are an integral part of the way the book concludes.
Okay, now on to the positives! I thought Bates was extremely bold and brave to dedicate most of "The Waking Land" to Elanna and her development. Here, the POV changes and the story is told from Jahan's perspective. I really enjoyed this aspect as I think sometimes when a story is already very "busy", to change the POV between different characters throughout a book can make it even busier. I appreciated the paranoid undertone to proceedings as you never knew who you could trust, a feature I love and primarily see in crime thrillers. It was also a hell of a lot darker than the series first. Some of Jahan's previous behaviour is explained by learning his history and I appreciated getting his backstory. Bates has created two contrasting main characters in Elanna and Jahan - Elanna is vivacious and strong, Jahan's story is a much sadder one which has a knock-on effect on his thought processes and the way he lives his life.
I feel that there is plenty more life left in this tale and the finale certainly leaves open the possibility for a third book in the series. I would definitely pick up the third title to learn more about Elanna and Jahan and follow them on their adventures in this fresh and vivid world.
A final note - this is absolutely a book that requires you to have read the first in the series as the plot follows on from what happened previously and won't make a lot of sense to those who attempt to try it as a standalone title.
Many thanks to Hodder & Stoughton for an ARC. I was not required to post a review and all thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
June 5, 2019
3.75 Stars
The Waking Land, first book in this series introduced us to Elanna Valtai, a teenage heroine who was enjoyable to read, and Jahan, a character who, as can be seen in my review of the previous book, I had reservations about. Whereas The Waking Land was all told from Elanna's POV, The Memory of Fire is Jahan's POV, a brave change of course for a second book. (Audiobook listeners who recall Erin Spencer's narration as Elanna in the first book will have Andrew Eiden narrating this book as Jahan.)
As the book opens, Elanna has exhausted herself and her powers trying to wake the land and restore agricultural fertility to villages in Eren. Jahan is called back to Paladis and we are introduced, through his painful memories and intrusive communique from a witch by the name Madiya (I kept thinking of Medea), to his painful history. Jahan and his younger brothers Rayka and Lathiel have all had their minds and their magic manipulated by Madiya. The damage done to their family has resulted in Jahan suffering lasting trauma and self-doubt. Madiya, using a combination of drugs and what can only be seen a coercion and torture, has sought to make Jahan resistant to the witch hunters, who use bells to seek out those with magic. The tone of the bells disables the magician and from the opening scenes of the book we know that from early childhood, Jahan is as familiar with their use as he is with his own struggles to use magic in his homeland. (In contrast how to his magical ability flows when he is with Elanna in Eren.)
While I was interested in finding out more about Jahan's history, I found that I missed Elanna's bright voice. (I have to say that overall, Bates' prowess at the first person POV writing has improved since the first book.) This is a much darker book than the first entry in the series, because Jahan has had a much darker life. The political intrigue that awaits Jahan back in Ida is fast and thick, as he finds Lathiel addicted to opium, Rayka missing, his friend Prince Leontius on the outs, and all the usual fear of discovery should he or his brothers be revealed as sorcerers. Add to that Emperor Alakseus, who was less than thrilled with a Caveadear magically waking the land in Eren, having Elanna captured and dragged before him for draining of her power and execution. (He doesn't give a damn about kidnapping a subject from another country, dragging them before his throne and sentencing them to death for something that was legal in the country they were kidnapped from.) In attempting to protect her, Jahan himself is revealed as a sorcerer.
Some of the lackluster manner of Jahan that I felt in the first book is now clearly understandable after reading his history in this second book. His tendency to despair (in contrast to Elanna's resilience) made the middle portion of the book drag a bit but the last third of the book is full of action, as things must be put aright in Paladis. It is also full of Elanna and Jahan working in synchrony and ultimately I have decided I like them together. Jahan is a different character when Elanna is around.
This book's final chapter and epilogue provide a clear opening for a third book in the series. Bates has created a world that is fresh and characters who have plenty more life in them. I will definitely pick up the next book to see what trouble Elanna and Jahan get into next. I do have to say that I hope it will be Elanna telling us about it, however. The comparative vivacity of her POV just makes for an easier read.
I received a Digital Review Copy of this Book from Del Rey and NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
The Waking Land, first book in this series introduced us to Elanna Valtai, a teenage heroine who was enjoyable to read, and Jahan, a character who, as can be seen in my review of the previous book, I had reservations about. Whereas The Waking Land was all told from Elanna's POV, The Memory of Fire is Jahan's POV, a brave change of course for a second book. (Audiobook listeners who recall Erin Spencer's narration as Elanna in the first book will have Andrew Eiden narrating this book as Jahan.)
As the book opens, Elanna has exhausted herself and her powers trying to wake the land and restore agricultural fertility to villages in Eren. Jahan is called back to Paladis and we are introduced, through his painful memories and intrusive communique from a witch by the name Madiya (I kept thinking of Medea), to his painful history. Jahan and his younger brothers Rayka and Lathiel have all had their minds and their magic manipulated by Madiya. The damage done to their family has resulted in Jahan suffering lasting trauma and self-doubt. Madiya, using a combination of drugs and what can only be seen a coercion and torture, has sought to make Jahan resistant to the witch hunters, who use bells to seek out those with magic. The tone of the bells disables the magician and from the opening scenes of the book we know that from early childhood, Jahan is as familiar with their use as he is with his own struggles to use magic in his homeland. (In contrast how to his magical ability flows when he is with Elanna in Eren.)
While I was interested in finding out more about Jahan's history, I found that I missed Elanna's bright voice. (I have to say that overall, Bates' prowess at the first person POV writing has improved since the first book.) This is a much darker book than the first entry in the series, because Jahan has had a much darker life. The political intrigue that awaits Jahan back in Ida is fast and thick, as he finds Lathiel addicted to opium, Rayka missing, his friend Prince Leontius on the outs, and all the usual fear of discovery should he or his brothers be revealed as sorcerers. Add to that Emperor Alakseus, who was less than thrilled with a Caveadear magically waking the land in Eren, having Elanna captured and dragged before him for draining of her power and execution. (He doesn't give a damn about kidnapping a subject from another country, dragging them before his throne and sentencing them to death for something that was legal in the country they were kidnapped from.) In attempting to protect her, Jahan himself is revealed as a sorcerer.
Some of the lackluster manner of Jahan that I felt in the first book is now clearly understandable after reading his history in this second book. His tendency to despair (in contrast to Elanna's resilience) made the middle portion of the book drag a bit but the last third of the book is full of action, as things must be put aright in Paladis. It is also full of Elanna and Jahan working in synchrony and ultimately I have decided I like them together. Jahan is a different character when Elanna is around.
This book's final chapter and epilogue provide a clear opening for a third book in the series. Bates has created a world that is fresh and characters who have plenty more life in them. I will definitely pick up the next book to see what trouble Elanna and Jahan get into next. I do have to say that I hope it will be Elanna telling us about it, however. The comparative vivacity of her POV just makes for an easier read.
I received a Digital Review Copy of this Book from Del Rey and NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
September 14, 2019
3.5 stars
June 7, 2018
Jahan's book???? YEEESSSS!!!
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Loved the first book, LOVED this second book.
I love Jahan, he's so interesting and broken.
I couldn't put this book down. I devoured it in days.
And now I can't wait for the third book.
In fact, I think I need to re-read both of these SOON!
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Loved the first book, LOVED this second book.
I love Jahan, he's so interesting and broken.
I couldn't put this book down. I devoured it in days.
And now I can't wait for the third book.
In fact, I think I need to re-read both of these SOON!
June 29, 2018
he Memory of Fire by Callie Bates is The Waking Lands book 2. The story starts out as a flashback to give some additional back story and is written from Jahan Korakides perspective rather than Elanna Valtai's from book 1. I think a lot of liking this book is your opinion of the character whose head you are in. If you like Jahan then this book gives you more of him and really fleshes out the character and the world Ms. Bates creates.
Overall The Memory of Fire by Callie Bates is a good continuation of the series and adds details to the story, continuing to build and creates an alternate POV to develop and see things from
(I voluntarily reviewed an advance review copy of this book I received for free from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for my open and honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.)
Overall The Memory of Fire by Callie Bates is a good continuation of the series and adds details to the story, continuing to build and creates an alternate POV to develop and see things from
(I voluntarily reviewed an advance review copy of this book I received for free from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for my open and honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.)
June 13, 2018
Review courtesy of All Things Urban Fantasy.
Political intrigue is heart of THE MEMORY OF FIRE. Jahan has spent his life concealing his magic and laughing off consequences. Once he returns home Jahan learns that his homeland, Ida, is prepping for its own revolution and his friends aren’t interested in his help. As he re-enters Ida’s politics, Jahan moves from the King’s Court, to the student underground, and finally to the Witch Hunter’s jails.
THE MEMORY OF FIRE does suffer from the same faults in the first book. The novel is overstuffed with characters and plot. Although many minor characters have some form of character development, it’s hard to become attached to them. Another issue is that, for all the warfare and revolutionary acts, the author has become trigger shy with her own characters. The death of Finn in the first novel was affecting and its consequences have reached into THE MEMORY OF FIRE. For all the violence in the novel, none of it felt permanent. I also would have loved more information about the Witch Hunters, since so much of the final plot relies on their history.
The relationship between Jahan and Elanna also carries into THE MEMORY OF FIRE. The relationship is long-distance but there’s never a hint that the love between the two waivers. In Eren, Elanna is the powerful steward of the land. Even just the mention of her, sets fear into the Idaen’s that fear magic. Jahan may want to protect Elanna, but he’s always willing to let her stand on her own.
THE MEMORY OF FIRE is an amazing follow-up to The Waking Land and proves that revolution cannot be localized. Just as magic awoke in the first novel, so has political change. It was interesting to have a novel from Jahan’s perspective, especially since Elanna’s story wrapped up so neatly in the first novel. I can’t wait to see how The Waking Land series will continue to address the spread of magic and how it disrupts the status quo.
Sexual Content: Moderate sex scene
Political intrigue is heart of THE MEMORY OF FIRE. Jahan has spent his life concealing his magic and laughing off consequences. Once he returns home Jahan learns that his homeland, Ida, is prepping for its own revolution and his friends aren’t interested in his help. As he re-enters Ida’s politics, Jahan moves from the King’s Court, to the student underground, and finally to the Witch Hunter’s jails.
THE MEMORY OF FIRE does suffer from the same faults in the first book. The novel is overstuffed with characters and plot. Although many minor characters have some form of character development, it’s hard to become attached to them. Another issue is that, for all the warfare and revolutionary acts, the author has become trigger shy with her own characters. The death of Finn in the first novel was affecting and its consequences have reached into THE MEMORY OF FIRE. For all the violence in the novel, none of it felt permanent. I also would have loved more information about the Witch Hunters, since so much of the final plot relies on their history.
The relationship between Jahan and Elanna also carries into THE MEMORY OF FIRE. The relationship is long-distance but there’s never a hint that the love between the two waivers. In Eren, Elanna is the powerful steward of the land. Even just the mention of her, sets fear into the Idaen’s that fear magic. Jahan may want to protect Elanna, but he’s always willing to let her stand on her own.
THE MEMORY OF FIRE is an amazing follow-up to The Waking Land and proves that revolution cannot be localized. Just as magic awoke in the first novel, so has political change. It was interesting to have a novel from Jahan’s perspective, especially since Elanna’s story wrapped up so neatly in the first novel. I can’t wait to see how The Waking Land series will continue to address the spread of magic and how it disrupts the status quo.
Sexual Content: Moderate sex scene
July 2, 2018
I thought that The Memory Of Fire was better than The Waking Land, the first book in the series. I totally fell in love with Jahan in this one, he was such a wonderfully flawed protagonist.
This one continues where The Waking Land left off so definitely read that one before this one. I liked the switch of narrators because it allowed for a greater exploration of the world. It was so interesting to learn more about the political situations. I also loved that Jahan struggled so much with his magic before finding his own path. Even though the romance wasn’t the focus of the book, I was still rooting for them!
There is pretty much non-stop action in this one, which kept me glued to the pages far past my bedtime. However, Bates does an excellent job of maintaining the pace while still developing the characters and political situation fully. I also liked how Jahan came to terms with the traumas in his past. There was one scene at the end that gave me chills because it showed how much he’d grown as a character.
I’d recommend this one for fantasy fans looking for a book with treacherous politics, magic, and likable characters.
*Disclaimer: I received this book for free from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
This one continues where The Waking Land left off so definitely read that one before this one. I liked the switch of narrators because it allowed for a greater exploration of the world. It was so interesting to learn more about the political situations. I also loved that Jahan struggled so much with his magic before finding his own path. Even though the romance wasn’t the focus of the book, I was still rooting for them!
There is pretty much non-stop action in this one, which kept me glued to the pages far past my bedtime. However, Bates does an excellent job of maintaining the pace while still developing the characters and political situation fully. I also liked how Jahan came to terms with the traumas in his past. There was one scene at the end that gave me chills because it showed how much he’d grown as a character.
I’d recommend this one for fantasy fans looking for a book with treacherous politics, magic, and likable characters.
*Disclaimer: I received this book for free from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
June 30, 2018
I received this book for free from Publisher in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
The story took off shortly after the last book had ended. Although Elena was successful in leading her people of Caeris and Eren, sorcery is still against the law across the lands. Most especially in Paladis where she hopes to have a peace treaty with. But it has been decided that it will be Jahan who will attempt at being the peacemaker. The biggest hurdle is that sorcery is still outlawed and harsh punishments are given out to those who practice magic.
I automatically picked up this book without reading the blurb simply because I enjoyed the last instalment. So, I was surprised to find out that The Memory of Fire is in Jahan’s POV. Not necessarily a bad thing. It was actually a pleasant surprise. Truth be told, I enjoyed Jahan’s POV more than Elanna’s. I enjoyed hearing his points of view, his past, and his hidden powers. He truly took the spotlight and won my heart over.
Bates did a good job making this book even more interesting than the last instalment. It was full of betrayals, secret powers, and finding long lost families. I especially enjoyed the rebellion against the emperor and witch hunters. There’s something about defeating evil and seeing what they deserve.
My only complaint is that the first 20% was slow for me and it took me a bit to remember this world but that could’ve been on me. I also wish the romance was a bit stronger. Overall, it was a good read. I’m excited to see what Ms Bates has installed for her readers.
*ARC provided by publisher
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December 16, 2022
4 Stars
I liked this one much more than the first book. The main character is Jahan, who was my favorite character in the first book, and we get a better picture of the fantasy world, and some pretty cool magic.
I liked this one much more than the first book. The main character is Jahan, who was my favorite character in the first book, and we get a better picture of the fantasy world, and some pretty cool magic.
May 11, 2018
When I read the first book of this series, Elanna was the main character and the focus was on her strengths, her weaknesses, her growing magic, and her relationships with her country, it's citizens and with her romantic interest, Jahan. With her being the center of attention characters such as Jahan, while important as they were to Elanna in The Waking Land, I didn't grow as attached to them as I did to El. I found Jahan to be stoic, secretive, and quick with the grin and the flippant response to deflect any attention away from himself. And it worked; my feelings for him were relevant only to El's feelings for him. Not the best way to set up the main character for your second novel in a series.
That being said, I knew Jahan was the MC in The Memory of Fire before I started reading, but I knew so very little of the man that it was like starting over. And, truly, this book does start from the beginnings of Jahan's life. He was secretive about his sorcery in The Waking Land, but I assumed it was because it was punishable by death in Paladis. TMOF shows there is more to Jahan's secrecy concerning his magic, his family, and the sorceress who trained him, Madiya.
In the midst of Eren's battle against their bordering countries, Jahan finds himself called back to Ida to find his brothers. He regrettably left them in the hands of Madiya years ago when he escaped her control. Since then he has felt nothing but disgust with himself and hatred toward the woman who made him what he is today, a sorcerer whose magical powers are growing exponentially.
Once in Ida, Jahan meets up with former classmates and friends, and he learns his relationship with Prince Leontius has soured. He finds one brother, Lathiel, but Rayka, the middle one, is still missing. Over and over Jahan mentally kicks himself that his brothers have suffered because he left them, unable to save them. At one point, during an especially angry self-castigation, I myself grew angry and yelled at the book, "Does this man have no joy in his life at all???"
I calmed down but it still made me wonder if I wanted to read 200 more pages of a guy tormenting himself to death. Then, a main element of the story changed and Jahan had more to worry about than his brothers and his multiple failings, imagined or not. Jahan's reconnection with his university chum, Pantoleon, adds a spark to the morose sorcerer. And, while the countryside of Eren gave Jahan a source of magical strength that Paladis does not, he discovers there are other ways to power his sorcery. Some fascinating, some deadly.
Throughout the story, Jahan has serious trust issues with pretty much anyone from his childhood. There is so much treachery and backstabbing and betrayal that I had trouble trusting anyone either. His childhood was so sad. His family is a destructive mess. The sorceress keeps trying to reconnect with him and she is the least trustworthy of them all. Jahan might crack wise and toss a quick grin to be charming or deflect attention, but these actions made me feel so sad for him. The boy needs a reboot on his life.
So, while I found TMOF to be exponentially darker than TWL and I didn't attach to Jahan as well as I did with Elanna, I do like those two together. They make a good power couple. Literally. They make one another happy and Jahan has more interesting and productive things to focus on when he's with her. And their combined wizardry is stunning.
The magic is strong, the world building is intricate without being too confusing, and I do like the direction this series is taking. The ending is not a cliffhanger, but it does let you know the third book will have yet another main character, one we already know, to narrate the final chapter of the story. It's a good series, I'm enjoying it and I will pre-order my copy of the final book as soon as it's available. Maybe Jahan will find a little more happiness in the next book. I'm rooting for him.
That being said, I knew Jahan was the MC in The Memory of Fire before I started reading, but I knew so very little of the man that it was like starting over. And, truly, this book does start from the beginnings of Jahan's life. He was secretive about his sorcery in The Waking Land, but I assumed it was because it was punishable by death in Paladis. TMOF shows there is more to Jahan's secrecy concerning his magic, his family, and the sorceress who trained him, Madiya.
In the midst of Eren's battle against their bordering countries, Jahan finds himself called back to Ida to find his brothers. He regrettably left them in the hands of Madiya years ago when he escaped her control. Since then he has felt nothing but disgust with himself and hatred toward the woman who made him what he is today, a sorcerer whose magical powers are growing exponentially.
Once in Ida, Jahan meets up with former classmates and friends, and he learns his relationship with Prince Leontius has soured. He finds one brother, Lathiel, but Rayka, the middle one, is still missing. Over and over Jahan mentally kicks himself that his brothers have suffered because he left them, unable to save them. At one point, during an especially angry self-castigation, I myself grew angry and yelled at the book, "Does this man have no joy in his life at all???"
I calmed down but it still made me wonder if I wanted to read 200 more pages of a guy tormenting himself to death. Then, a main element of the story changed and Jahan had more to worry about than his brothers and his multiple failings, imagined or not. Jahan's reconnection with his university chum, Pantoleon, adds a spark to the morose sorcerer. And, while the countryside of Eren gave Jahan a source of magical strength that Paladis does not, he discovers there are other ways to power his sorcery. Some fascinating, some deadly.
Throughout the story, Jahan has serious trust issues with pretty much anyone from his childhood. There is so much treachery and backstabbing and betrayal that I had trouble trusting anyone either. His childhood was so sad. His family is a destructive mess. The sorceress keeps trying to reconnect with him and she is the least trustworthy of them all. Jahan might crack wise and toss a quick grin to be charming or deflect attention, but these actions made me feel so sad for him. The boy needs a reboot on his life.
So, while I found TMOF to be exponentially darker than TWL and I didn't attach to Jahan as well as I did with Elanna, I do like those two together. They make a good power couple. Literally. They make one another happy and Jahan has more interesting and productive things to focus on when he's with her. And their combined wizardry is stunning.
The magic is strong, the world building is intricate without being too confusing, and I do like the direction this series is taking. The ending is not a cliffhanger, but it does let you know the third book will have yet another main character, one we already know, to narrate the final chapter of the story. It's a good series, I'm enjoying it and I will pre-order my copy of the final book as soon as it's available. Maybe Jahan will find a little more happiness in the next book. I'm rooting for him.
June 9, 2018
3.5 stars! Wow, I enjoyed this so much more than its predecessor. It's from Jahan's perspective, so I suppose I should have seen that coming.
The Memory of Fire delves further into the magic system and political sphere of the world Bates crafts in The Waking Land. It unravels the consequences of Caeris's uprising, and it shows the struggle to maintain a government that accepts sorcery in a world that does not.
I don't know that I'd say it's worth reading the first book just to get to this one. But if you like politically fantasies, and you're patient with giving debut authors a shot, I recommend it.
The Memory of Fire delves further into the magic system and political sphere of the world Bates crafts in The Waking Land. It unravels the consequences of Caeris's uprising, and it shows the struggle to maintain a government that accepts sorcery in a world that does not.
I don't know that I'd say it's worth reading the first book just to get to this one. But if you like politically fantasies, and you're patient with giving debut authors a shot, I recommend it.
June 9, 2018
The Memory of Fire follows directly on the heels of The Waking Land. When the first book in this exciting fantasy ended, the newly freed people of Eren feared the great empire of Paladis would retaliate and sure enough, they are preparing to send their Black Ships to pacify the rebellion and drive magic back out of the land. Jahan is from their, a friend of the Crown Prince, and decides to return as a diplomatic envoy in order to negotiate peace in hopes of avoiding a war.
He has a private mission as well, rescuing his youngest brother from Madiya, the cruel tutor who taught him magic at the cost of many of his memories. He thinks something is amiss with his middle brother as well. However, returning home is a disappointment. His middle brother has fled the military academy and is missing and his youngest brother seems terribly wounded even though Madiya has left.
His return to the court is unsuccessful, the Crown Prince has no time for him and everyone is against him except some rebel friends and his aunt. He is suspected of being a sorcerer, a crime which could lead to life in prison or death. It’s really a mess and to top it all off, there’s an incipient rebellion seeking his leadership, strange allies within the Court that may have ulterior motives, and so much inner conflict, he is half-paralyzed by indecision.
As a second in a series, The Memory of Fire avoids the usual trap of retelling too much of the first book. Bates trusts readers to remember, and if they forget, to just accept the world as it comes along. The liberation of Eren is not reprised. There’s far too much to accomplish in Paradis. It’s fast-paced and exciting. The duplicitous characters are presented with the complexity that means their duplicity is suspected and not out of the blue.
I was frustrated by Jahan at times. He was needlessly indecisive and inconsistent. Clearly, he has great magic but fails to use it to its best effect thanks to bad self-talk. That was the problem with Elanna as well. I hope whoever is the focus in Book Three will not be someone whose paralyzed by doubt. That’s a bit unfair to Jahan, he did not have time to be paralyzed, but he was as much driven by events as driving them. He was acted upon more than taking action on his own unless in extremis.
An interesting complication is Jahan’s particular magic. It consists of reminding materials of their other states. For example, reminding a fire what it was when it was out or vice versa. It is also the antithesis of Elanna’s power and I wonder if that might lead to problems down the road as his power drains life and hers wakes life. There is more than a hint that his power offends her which would be a great development in Book Three, figuring out how his power can function without damage. There are power sources he can employ in Paradis, but what about if and when they return to Eren?
I am eager to read the next in the series. I already have questions and expectations, which goes to show what a successful series Bates has written.
I received a copy of The Memory of Fire from the publisher through NetGalley.
The Memory of Fire at Del Rey | Penguin Random House
Callie Bates author site
Tonstant Weader Reviews The Waking Land.
https://tonstantweaderreviews.wordpre...
He has a private mission as well, rescuing his youngest brother from Madiya, the cruel tutor who taught him magic at the cost of many of his memories. He thinks something is amiss with his middle brother as well. However, returning home is a disappointment. His middle brother has fled the military academy and is missing and his youngest brother seems terribly wounded even though Madiya has left.
His return to the court is unsuccessful, the Crown Prince has no time for him and everyone is against him except some rebel friends and his aunt. He is suspected of being a sorcerer, a crime which could lead to life in prison or death. It’s really a mess and to top it all off, there’s an incipient rebellion seeking his leadership, strange allies within the Court that may have ulterior motives, and so much inner conflict, he is half-paralyzed by indecision.
As a second in a series, The Memory of Fire avoids the usual trap of retelling too much of the first book. Bates trusts readers to remember, and if they forget, to just accept the world as it comes along. The liberation of Eren is not reprised. There’s far too much to accomplish in Paradis. It’s fast-paced and exciting. The duplicitous characters are presented with the complexity that means their duplicity is suspected and not out of the blue.
I was frustrated by Jahan at times. He was needlessly indecisive and inconsistent. Clearly, he has great magic but fails to use it to its best effect thanks to bad self-talk. That was the problem with Elanna as well. I hope whoever is the focus in Book Three will not be someone whose paralyzed by doubt. That’s a bit unfair to Jahan, he did not have time to be paralyzed, but he was as much driven by events as driving them. He was acted upon more than taking action on his own unless in extremis.
An interesting complication is Jahan’s particular magic. It consists of reminding materials of their other states. For example, reminding a fire what it was when it was out or vice versa. It is also the antithesis of Elanna’s power and I wonder if that might lead to problems down the road as his power drains life and hers wakes life. There is more than a hint that his power offends her which would be a great development in Book Three, figuring out how his power can function without damage. There are power sources he can employ in Paradis, but what about if and when they return to Eren?
I am eager to read the next in the series. I already have questions and expectations, which goes to show what a successful series Bates has written.
I received a copy of The Memory of Fire from the publisher through NetGalley.
The Memory of Fire at Del Rey | Penguin Random House
Callie Bates author site
Tonstant Weader Reviews The Waking Land.
https://tonstantweaderreviews.wordpre...
April 1, 2020
pooled ink Reviews:
If you enjoyed The Waking Land then you'll likely enjoy this continuation! Definitely a book in the heart of fantasy :)
Prose spun like soft tendrils of fire chants the tale of a peace about to fall while the bloodthirst of magic, power, and legacy sing to a soul who can just perhaps save them all. Dancing on the edge of darkness Jahan's story grasps onto the light of hope as he fights for family and freedom. If you too are a fantasy fiend on the hunt for your next adventure then I certainly recommend you consider this series!
While this is technically a sequel it is also a bit like a companion novel in that Elanna's main story is contained in The Waking Land while Jahan's story takes center stage in The Memory of Fire. I really loved getting to dive into Jahan's past as it rises up to threaten his future and the balance of politics and whimsy threaded throughout the plot was fantastic.
Read my FULL review here: https://pooledink.com/2018/05/30/the-...
If you enjoyed The Waking Land then you'll likely enjoy this continuation! Definitely a book in the heart of fantasy :)
Prose spun like soft tendrils of fire chants the tale of a peace about to fall while the bloodthirst of magic, power, and legacy sing to a soul who can just perhaps save them all. Dancing on the edge of darkness Jahan's story grasps onto the light of hope as he fights for family and freedom. If you too are a fantasy fiend on the hunt for your next adventure then I certainly recommend you consider this series!
While this is technically a sequel it is also a bit like a companion novel in that Elanna's main story is contained in The Waking Land while Jahan's story takes center stage in The Memory of Fire. I really loved getting to dive into Jahan's past as it rises up to threaten his future and the balance of politics and whimsy threaded throughout the plot was fantastic.
Read my FULL review here: https://pooledink.com/2018/05/30/the-...
April 14, 2018
I loved book 1 of The Waking Land, so when I saw book 2 furthered the relationship of Elanna Valtai and Jahan Korakides, I was delighted. This time we get Jahan's POV and we learn a great deal about what drives him. In The Memory of Fire, Jahan returns to his hometown of Paladis to try and broker peace but when he arrives he finds that things were not the same as when he left. When searching for his lost brothers, he winds up caught up in a deadly rebellion against the emperor and his magic dampening witch-hunters. In the midst of it all he has to contend with a force from his abusive past. This is a fantastic continuation of Bates' series and I'm desperate to know where she's going to take us in Book 3!
August 28, 2018
Following the events of the first instalment of “The Waking Land” series, the sequel, titled “Memory of Fire” follows the subsequent consequences and remaining tremors from the war in Eren, our protagonist – Jahan Korakides – leaves Eren, and the woman he loves, to negotiate with an emperor threatening war in retribution for Elanna’s “illegal” sorcery.
“Memory of Fire” follows Jahan, who sees himself as a failed sorcerer, who is haunted by memories – and mental callings – of a sorceress who experimented on him and his siblings as children to “create the perfect sorcerer”.
Despite having saved both Eren, and Prince Leontius in a battle prior to the war in the first novel, Jahan faces several changes in the city he once called home – Revolution is the illegal talk of the day, while a mistrusting monarch threatens to seek and kill sorcerers.
While changing the reader’s perspective through those of a different protagonist in the second, and following, novels in a series is a gamble in itself – some authors simply cannot pull it off, I find that learning about Jahan’s character background and experiences that helped shaped him altered my already existing perception that Jahan is not... well, the best or most reliable of persons.
With magic outlawed and punishable by death in Paladis, Jahan continues to keep his powers a secret – even from those he cares most about – as he is forced to return to the court where he is without favour or protection.
Political games are rife in his return, and Jahan must relearn how to navigate these while confronting his past and the painful memories of what happened to his family.
While he does get reunited with his siblings (or does he, really?), Jahan is faced with the immense task of heading a revolution in his old country, while trying to keep sane in the midst of ominous mental messages from his old mentor.
“Memory of Fire” is darker in tone compared to its predecessor, and shows us that the series is maturing into something that could potentially, become far greater than the magic of the land.
While some reviews did not approve of the change of point-of-view in the second novel, I must admit – I liked it.
The world building, which I believe needed the different perspective, continues to be that which to be inspired by, while reminding the reader that as long as the memory of something is there, it can never truly be gone. (If you have read it, do you remember that candle and fire reference throughout the novel?).
Seeing the main character use the phrase that titles their own story is a lovely little easter egg too!
The third (and potentially final) instalment in the series, The Soul of Power, scheduled for publication in 2019 – and will be told out of [Queen] Sophy’s perspective.
After all, going on how the novel ended, can we really say that we know all there is about our Queen?
Based on the gamble Callie Bates took in changing the main protagonist, and the continued stable world building, I’d give “Memory of Fire” 4.5 out of 5 stars.
Book Synopsis:
The land has awoken, and news of magic's rebirth has travelled across the sea. Jahan, a daring noble who has been concealing his powers, is finally ready to stop hiding. Now he returns to the imperial capital, where the use of magic carries a death sentence. There, he must face his dark past, learn to embrace his gifts, and prevent an all-out war across the kingdoms.
“Memory of Fire” follows Jahan, who sees himself as a failed sorcerer, who is haunted by memories – and mental callings – of a sorceress who experimented on him and his siblings as children to “create the perfect sorcerer”.
Despite having saved both Eren, and Prince Leontius in a battle prior to the war in the first novel, Jahan faces several changes in the city he once called home – Revolution is the illegal talk of the day, while a mistrusting monarch threatens to seek and kill sorcerers.
While changing the reader’s perspective through those of a different protagonist in the second, and following, novels in a series is a gamble in itself – some authors simply cannot pull it off, I find that learning about Jahan’s character background and experiences that helped shaped him altered my already existing perception that Jahan is not... well, the best or most reliable of persons.
With magic outlawed and punishable by death in Paladis, Jahan continues to keep his powers a secret – even from those he cares most about – as he is forced to return to the court where he is without favour or protection.
Political games are rife in his return, and Jahan must relearn how to navigate these while confronting his past and the painful memories of what happened to his family.
While he does get reunited with his siblings (or does he, really?), Jahan is faced with the immense task of heading a revolution in his old country, while trying to keep sane in the midst of ominous mental messages from his old mentor.
“Memory of Fire” is darker in tone compared to its predecessor, and shows us that the series is maturing into something that could potentially, become far greater than the magic of the land.
While some reviews did not approve of the change of point-of-view in the second novel, I must admit – I liked it.
The world building, which I believe needed the different perspective, continues to be that which to be inspired by, while reminding the reader that as long as the memory of something is there, it can never truly be gone. (If you have read it, do you remember that candle and fire reference throughout the novel?).
Seeing the main character use the phrase that titles their own story is a lovely little easter egg too!
The third (and potentially final) instalment in the series, The Soul of Power, scheduled for publication in 2019 – and will be told out of [Queen] Sophy’s perspective.
After all, going on how the novel ended, can we really say that we know all there is about our Queen?
Based on the gamble Callie Bates took in changing the main protagonist, and the continued stable world building, I’d give “Memory of Fire” 4.5 out of 5 stars.
Book Synopsis:
The land has awoken, and news of magic's rebirth has travelled across the sea. Jahan, a daring noble who has been concealing his powers, is finally ready to stop hiding. Now he returns to the imperial capital, where the use of magic carries a death sentence. There, he must face his dark past, learn to embrace his gifts, and prevent an all-out war across the kingdoms.
June 13, 2018
*Note, the book cover on goodreads is NOT the bookcover I had (which was SO much better).
The Memory of Fire is the sequel to The Walking Land – which absolutely bowled me over with it's excellence! I waited with so much excitement and anticipation for the book 2.
Again, as with The Walking Land , I love the book cover the author has chosen. Creative, imaginative and mysterious – perfect cover art for the story contained within.
The Memory of Fire was fast paced, exciting and an excellent fantasy book. We were introduced to Jahan Korakides (the Korakos) in The Walking Land book 1, yet his character remained somewhat aloof. The Memory of Fire is Jahan's story, told from his point of view. The Memory of Fire builds Jahan's character. He says he is different from the few present local sorcerers because “he was born to it from birth”. We learn of the evil witch/sorcerer , Madiya, who taught Jahan and his 2 younger brothers from birth, albeit through somewhat traumatic and torturous “experiments”.
The “Legend and Mythology” of Jahan's ancestors:
Mantius > Kyros Korakides was a Britemnosi Lord who fought and claimed the Britemnois Aisles alongside Paladius the 1st. He was murdered by treachery and betrayal (likely by an agent of Paladius?) along with most of the sorcerers. Kyros received none of the riches and titles Paladius promised – neither did his children, (heirs). Paladius then made all magic against the law.
“Mantius was my comfort. My ancestor, the greatest sorcerer of his age, who wore a cloak of black feathers. He had been able to transform himself into a raven.”
Mantius made whole cities disappear and reappear, crossed endless deserts in a day, defeated enemy armies with their own nightmares come to life …..
. . . . THAT is how we've come to be what we are. . . . A shame to Mantius's glorious legacy.
Jahan returns to his homelands of Ida and Paladis to seek a treaty with the Emperor on behalf of the lands of Eren and Caeris. Things have changed greatly in the 6 months he has been gone. Jahan is forced to join in a rebellion, an uprising of his people, against the Emperor and his army. [ no more spoilers, read the book]
Through the course of this book, Jahan's story, we see Jahan Korakides grow, learn, and transform into a much more powerful sorcerer. Grow to be more of an equal to his chosen mate, Elanna Valtai, the Caveadear of Eren and Caeris.
I DO think readers need to read The Walking Land, Book 1, first to fully understand the characters, the significance of things that occur in The Memory of Fire. The world building, legend, mythology and character building was SO immense and powerful in The Walking Land that it set my expectations perhaps too high for any sequel.
While there was a lot of world building and development of new, fascinating characters in The Memory of Fire, it seemed a bit rushed and the new characters, the new lands, myths and legends lack the depth we saw in The Walking Land. I kept waiting for more “legend and mythology” to be built up and explored.
I was left somewhat disappointed in that aspect of the book. IE: I would love for Tirisero The God of Lost Battles to be developed further! The Secret Flame, unified with the deep water. The heart of Tirisero.
Rumor has it there is a 3rd book in this series..... perhaps the author can delve deep and bring forth these mysterious legends and myths in the 3rd book!?
….. anxiously awaiting book 3........
I thank the author for allowing me to read this ARC in exchange for my honest review.
The Memory of Fire is the sequel to The Walking Land – which absolutely bowled me over with it's excellence! I waited with so much excitement and anticipation for the book 2.
Again, as with The Walking Land , I love the book cover the author has chosen. Creative, imaginative and mysterious – perfect cover art for the story contained within.
The Memory of Fire was fast paced, exciting and an excellent fantasy book. We were introduced to Jahan Korakides (the Korakos) in The Walking Land book 1, yet his character remained somewhat aloof. The Memory of Fire is Jahan's story, told from his point of view. The Memory of Fire builds Jahan's character. He says he is different from the few present local sorcerers because “he was born to it from birth”. We learn of the evil witch/sorcerer , Madiya, who taught Jahan and his 2 younger brothers from birth, albeit through somewhat traumatic and torturous “experiments”.
The “Legend and Mythology” of Jahan's ancestors:
Mantius > Kyros Korakides was a Britemnosi Lord who fought and claimed the Britemnois Aisles alongside Paladius the 1st. He was murdered by treachery and betrayal (likely by an agent of Paladius?) along with most of the sorcerers. Kyros received none of the riches and titles Paladius promised – neither did his children, (heirs). Paladius then made all magic against the law.
“Mantius was my comfort. My ancestor, the greatest sorcerer of his age, who wore a cloak of black feathers. He had been able to transform himself into a raven.”
Mantius made whole cities disappear and reappear, crossed endless deserts in a day, defeated enemy armies with their own nightmares come to life …..
. . . . THAT is how we've come to be what we are. . . . A shame to Mantius's glorious legacy.
Jahan returns to his homelands of Ida and Paladis to seek a treaty with the Emperor on behalf of the lands of Eren and Caeris. Things have changed greatly in the 6 months he has been gone. Jahan is forced to join in a rebellion, an uprising of his people, against the Emperor and his army. [ no more spoilers, read the book]
Through the course of this book, Jahan's story, we see Jahan Korakides grow, learn, and transform into a much more powerful sorcerer. Grow to be more of an equal to his chosen mate, Elanna Valtai, the Caveadear of Eren and Caeris.
I DO think readers need to read The Walking Land, Book 1, first to fully understand the characters, the significance of things that occur in The Memory of Fire. The world building, legend, mythology and character building was SO immense and powerful in The Walking Land that it set my expectations perhaps too high for any sequel.
While there was a lot of world building and development of new, fascinating characters in The Memory of Fire, it seemed a bit rushed and the new characters, the new lands, myths and legends lack the depth we saw in The Walking Land. I kept waiting for more “legend and mythology” to be built up and explored.
I was left somewhat disappointed in that aspect of the book. IE: I would love for Tirisero The God of Lost Battles to be developed further! The Secret Flame, unified with the deep water. The heart of Tirisero.
Rumor has it there is a 3rd book in this series..... perhaps the author can delve deep and bring forth these mysterious legends and myths in the 3rd book!?
….. anxiously awaiting book 3........
I thank the author for allowing me to read this ARC in exchange for my honest review.
July 16, 2018
After loving The Waking Land, the first book in this series, I knew I had to read Memory of Fire. It was awesome to get to see what happened after the first story concluded. Elanna remains my favorite character even though Jahan narrates this book. I like Jahan, but I felt more connected to Elanna.
I thought it was interesting that the author touched on opiate addiction, especially considering the fact that it’s such a big issue right now in our country. Jahan remembers being addicted and some of the physical agony of withdrawal (which he experiences at different points in the story) but also the shame of having been an addict. It’s a minor point—this isn’t a tale about addiction or recovery. I just thought it was interesting that it plays a role in the book.
I also found it cool that even though this story is told from the perspective of a young man, it contains a LOT of strong women. Obviously there’s Elanna, the Caveadear who uses powerful magic connected to her land. But there’s also Jahan’s aunt, who sheltered him as a child and never shies away from protecting him, even if it might cost her life. The empress, who seeks to use her position to turn the political tide toward accepting sorcery. Queen Sophy who works tirelessly to unite her people and fend off enemies.
I’m pretty sure I noted this in my review of The Waking Land, but I think this is really more adult fantasy than young adult fantasy. Jahan deals with political issues in his role as ambassador, and while he spends some time sorting out trauma from his childhood, ultimately, the story focuses on him finding his place as an adult in a changing kingdom. I guess you could argue that he revises his childhood relationships (with his aunt, with a childhood friend, etc.) into adult ones, which falls under the YA umbrella. Fantasy seems to be the most flexible in terms of where YA crosses into adult fiction.
At any rate, Memory of Fire struck me with its strong story world and interesting political dynamics. Fans of Song of Blood and Stone by L. Penelope or The Great Library series by Rachel Caine should add this one to their reading lists.
I thought it was interesting that the author touched on opiate addiction, especially considering the fact that it’s such a big issue right now in our country. Jahan remembers being addicted and some of the physical agony of withdrawal (which he experiences at different points in the story) but also the shame of having been an addict. It’s a minor point—this isn’t a tale about addiction or recovery. I just thought it was interesting that it plays a role in the book.
I also found it cool that even though this story is told from the perspective of a young man, it contains a LOT of strong women. Obviously there’s Elanna, the Caveadear who uses powerful magic connected to her land. But there’s also Jahan’s aunt, who sheltered him as a child and never shies away from protecting him, even if it might cost her life. The empress, who seeks to use her position to turn the political tide toward accepting sorcery. Queen Sophy who works tirelessly to unite her people and fend off enemies.
I’m pretty sure I noted this in my review of The Waking Land, but I think this is really more adult fantasy than young adult fantasy. Jahan deals with political issues in his role as ambassador, and while he spends some time sorting out trauma from his childhood, ultimately, the story focuses on him finding his place as an adult in a changing kingdom. I guess you could argue that he revises his childhood relationships (with his aunt, with a childhood friend, etc.) into adult ones, which falls under the YA umbrella. Fantasy seems to be the most flexible in terms of where YA crosses into adult fiction.
At any rate, Memory of Fire struck me with its strong story world and interesting political dynamics. Fans of Song of Blood and Stone by L. Penelope or The Great Library series by Rachel Caine should add this one to their reading lists.
August 14, 2019
Elanna's love interest and only magical ally from The Memory of Fire gets his own pov to tell the next stage in the rebellion against the Paladisan Empire. Jahan underwent terrible experiments as a child to increase his innate magical powers, and since then has spent a great deal of time and effort weaving subtle magics and machinations in order to further his interests and avoid scrutiny. But his participation in Elanna's rebellion puts him back in the spotlight, and this time the crown prince will not defend him.
I liked seeing what Paladis is like--it's this great sorta Renaissance, sorta Roman Empire society, with lots of stories and traditions of its own. The Empress was so close to being my favorite type,
I liked seeing what Paladis is like--it's this great sorta Renaissance, sorta Roman Empire society, with lots of stories and traditions of its own. The Empress was so close to being my favorite type,
February 21, 2019
A fab sequel!
I wasn’t expecting the POV to change, and actually I really enjoyed getting to see events through Johan’s eyes. His history and experience within his kingdom are really interesting.
I did find it frustrating that so many of his old “friends” abandoned him or didn’t appreciate his actions, and wanted a little more resolution there, but it definitely made for good conflict and interesting reading.
I also liked that we got to see El away from Eren and see what she could do elsewhere. And the witch stones and bells were horrible and brilliant.
And the wells! Those are definitely a little bit of an easy fix it but I loved them.
I am really looking forward to book 3 now :)
I wasn’t expecting the POV to change, and actually I really enjoyed getting to see events through Johan’s eyes. His history and experience within his kingdom are really interesting.
I did find it frustrating that so many of his old “friends” abandoned him or didn’t appreciate his actions, and wanted a little more resolution there, but it definitely made for good conflict and interesting reading.
I also liked that we got to see El away from Eren and see what she could do elsewhere. And the witch stones and bells were horrible and brilliant.
And the wells! Those are definitely a little bit of an easy fix it but I loved them.
I am really looking forward to book 3 now :)
May 5, 2018
This is the second book in a trilogy. It follows THE WAKING LAND. Elanna and Jahan are in Caeris and Eren where Elanna is using her magic as the steward of the land to support the rule of their friend Queen Sophy. But Elanna is exhausting herself trying to fix the land and their neighbors are seeing the country as ripe for the plucking. Jahan is determined to go back to Paladis to try to forge a peace treaty with the emperor. While he is there, he would also like to rescue his two younger brothers from the influence of Madiya who has been experimenting on all of them since they were small children in order to enhance their sorcery.
However, magic is a crime in the empire and the emperor is unlikely to forge a treaty with known magicians. Jahan hopes that his charm and her personal relationship with Leontius, the heir apparent, will be enough to sway the odds in his favor. He has previously successfully hidden his magical abilities and plans to continue to do so.
Things have changed in the empire since he has been gone. The revolutionaries who want to have the law changed to allow sorcery are gaining in numbers. They also have the secret support of the emperor's second wife Firmina Triciphes and her cousin Bardas. Leontius has turned away from Jahan. And Leontius's younger brother and sister are undermining him in their quest to take the throne from him. The grand inquisitor Alcibides Doukas also has his eye on Jahan. He would love to prove that Jahan is a sorcerer and is willing to fabricate evidence if proof isn't available.
Jahan very reluctantly becomes involved in the revolution and his involvement escalates when the emperor captures Elanna and bring her to Paladis to execute her. This story is epic fantasy at its most epic with political intrigue, magic, treachery and betrayal. Of course it also has romance and daring deeds and characters who perform well above what could be reasonably expected of them.
The story was fast-paced and action-packed. I can't wait for the next book in this exciting trilogy.
However, magic is a crime in the empire and the emperor is unlikely to forge a treaty with known magicians. Jahan hopes that his charm and her personal relationship with Leontius, the heir apparent, will be enough to sway the odds in his favor. He has previously successfully hidden his magical abilities and plans to continue to do so.
Things have changed in the empire since he has been gone. The revolutionaries who want to have the law changed to allow sorcery are gaining in numbers. They also have the secret support of the emperor's second wife Firmina Triciphes and her cousin Bardas. Leontius has turned away from Jahan. And Leontius's younger brother and sister are undermining him in their quest to take the throne from him. The grand inquisitor Alcibides Doukas also has his eye on Jahan. He would love to prove that Jahan is a sorcerer and is willing to fabricate evidence if proof isn't available.
Jahan very reluctantly becomes involved in the revolution and his involvement escalates when the emperor captures Elanna and bring her to Paladis to execute her. This story is epic fantasy at its most epic with political intrigue, magic, treachery and betrayal. Of course it also has romance and daring deeds and characters who perform well above what could be reasonably expected of them.
The story was fast-paced and action-packed. I can't wait for the next book in this exciting trilogy.
June 26, 2018
I was a little bit skeptical when I found out that that second book was told from another character’s point of view. I have a tendency to get attached to characters and I like to continue the story from their point. This book was a pleasant surprise though because I really enjoyed Jahan’s point of view. He is a fascinating character and Bates did a wonderful job developing him in this story. There is a brewing revolution and enough political intrigue to keep the characters hopping. While I enjoyed the story this book was plagued by the same thing that plagued the first book, an overfull plot and cast of characters. While the first book felt rushed to me because to much was shoved in at the end, this one was no different. I think that had the author told her books with alternating points of view instead of trying to do books with completely different characters the might have flowed a little bit better. That being said though, this was still a great book and I highly recommend the series to anyone who likes YA fantasy novels.
June 11, 2018
This review was originally published on http://fictionistmag.com/
Note: This review is for the second book in a series. It does not contain spoilers for this book, but it may contain major plot points from book one.
In The Waking Land, we followed Elanna as she became acquainted with her vast power, learned some new truths about her homeland, and helped to overthrow the government for her people. I was sucked in immediately, and the introduction of several secondary characters (like Jahan Korakides, her love interest) made me love the world even more.
The Memory of Fire is entirely from Jahan's perspective and starts off slightly after book one ended. I'm not going to lie to you. The reason I gave this book four stars is because the beginning is boring. I could only read about a chapter at a time, honestly, without wanting to give up on the book altogether. It doesn't help that Jahan is whiny as hell. But, after Jahan is forced to return to Ida to try to broker peace with the Emperor and find his brothers, it gets way more interesting. Jahan gets distracted from his consistently depressing inner monologue, and things start to happen.
But seriously, the part where Elanna says she loves him and he's like, 'I guess I love her too, whatever' made me want to punch him.
I wasn't particularly interested in Jahan during book one, honestly. I loved Elanna and her natural magic, and Jahan seemed a little out of place. I didn't read up on book two before I started, so I was a little surprised it was entirely in Jahan's perspective (and not in split POVs, as many authors do with sequels). I ended up liking it, though, and it made me understand Jahan as a character. He gets a huge amount of backstory, and once I could look past his angsty, secretive persona I enjoyed his perspective.
Though I had my issues with Jahan's character, I have to say, Callie Bates has somehow avoided the usual sophomore slump of series writing. This book was interesting, well-written and immersive -- just like book one. Usually, I find myself questioning the author a lot during the second book in a series, but I think the lack of split POVs and the focus on Jahan's separate storyline helped Bates a lot here.
Note: This review is for the second book in a series. It does not contain spoilers for this book, but it may contain major plot points from book one.
In The Waking Land, we followed Elanna as she became acquainted with her vast power, learned some new truths about her homeland, and helped to overthrow the government for her people. I was sucked in immediately, and the introduction of several secondary characters (like Jahan Korakides, her love interest) made me love the world even more.
The Memory of Fire is entirely from Jahan's perspective and starts off slightly after book one ended. I'm not going to lie to you. The reason I gave this book four stars is because the beginning is boring. I could only read about a chapter at a time, honestly, without wanting to give up on the book altogether. It doesn't help that Jahan is whiny as hell. But, after Jahan is forced to return to Ida to try to broker peace with the Emperor and find his brothers, it gets way more interesting. Jahan gets distracted from his consistently depressing inner monologue, and things start to happen.
But seriously, the part where Elanna says she loves him and he's like, 'I guess I love her too, whatever' made me want to punch him.
I wasn't particularly interested in Jahan during book one, honestly. I loved Elanna and her natural magic, and Jahan seemed a little out of place. I didn't read up on book two before I started, so I was a little surprised it was entirely in Jahan's perspective (and not in split POVs, as many authors do with sequels). I ended up liking it, though, and it made me understand Jahan as a character. He gets a huge amount of backstory, and once I could look past his angsty, secretive persona I enjoyed his perspective.
Though I had my issues with Jahan's character, I have to say, Callie Bates has somehow avoided the usual sophomore slump of series writing. This book was interesting, well-written and immersive -- just like book one. Usually, I find myself questioning the author a lot during the second book in a series, but I think the lack of split POVs and the focus on Jahan's separate storyline helped Bates a lot here.
May 26, 2020
Lovely. The author is hitting her stride and finding her voice. Less confusing writing than the first in the series. Could picture scenes as in a movie. Can’t wait to finish the series but going to wait a bit.
April 26, 2018
"The Memory of Fire" was an enthralling YA fantasy that continues the world and characters from the first "The Waking Land" novel. However, instead of focusing on Elanna, we get to hear Jahan's story- and it is absolutely as captivating as the first book. The book begins with Elanna and Jahan traveling around Eren/Caeris to win over (and feed) the people- they need to know the Caveadear is alive and wants to help them. However, Paladis will not allow sorcery to go unchecked and sends witch hunters and soldiers to capture Eren/Caeris.
Witch hunters carry special bells and stones which can rob a sorcerer of their power and make them lose their minds. The Caveadear is not exempt from their power- however, Madiya, during her cruel experiments claims to have made Jahan immune to the bells. Luckily, Jahan stops the invading force, but he knows that Paladis will just send more. He offers to travel back to Paladis to barter with the emperor to spare Eren/Caeris, and gets Sophy's blessing to be the official ambassador. Going back also has the added benefit that he hopes to save his two brothers, Rayka and Lathiel, who were also experimented on by Madiya.
As Jahan returns, so much more than he could have expected awaits him- the kingdom is poised for revolution- or maybe even more than one revolution, but all he wants to do is secure freedom for Elanna and the people in Eren/Caeris. Jahan must dig deep within himself to work towards the goals he and Elanna have set for themselves, and the decisions along the way will not be easy.
This book entirely features Jahan, and Elanna takes a backseat. Considering that plus the change in setting, and this book seems like it could be read as a stand-alone. It's been a while since I read the first- which I loved more than I thought I would- and I didn't feel like I needed to go back to know what was happening or to love this sequel! I had a hard time putting this one down, and it was absolutely as enthralling at the first. Jahan is very three-dimensional, and just as in the first, there are so many characters that are built so well you can't help but be caught up in their lives and this unique world.
I will say that the ending did not seem conclusive, and I am extremely curious (and hoping oh so much) if there will be another in this series. This is a really fantastic book, and I can't tell you how much I would suggest you give this series a try if you are at all a YA fantasy lover- it's really amazing!
Please note that I received an ARC from the publisher through netgalley. All opinions are my own.
Witch hunters carry special bells and stones which can rob a sorcerer of their power and make them lose their minds. The Caveadear is not exempt from their power- however, Madiya, during her cruel experiments claims to have made Jahan immune to the bells. Luckily, Jahan stops the invading force, but he knows that Paladis will just send more. He offers to travel back to Paladis to barter with the emperor to spare Eren/Caeris, and gets Sophy's blessing to be the official ambassador. Going back also has the added benefit that he hopes to save his two brothers, Rayka and Lathiel, who were also experimented on by Madiya.
As Jahan returns, so much more than he could have expected awaits him- the kingdom is poised for revolution- or maybe even more than one revolution, but all he wants to do is secure freedom for Elanna and the people in Eren/Caeris. Jahan must dig deep within himself to work towards the goals he and Elanna have set for themselves, and the decisions along the way will not be easy.
This book entirely features Jahan, and Elanna takes a backseat. Considering that plus the change in setting, and this book seems like it could be read as a stand-alone. It's been a while since I read the first- which I loved more than I thought I would- and I didn't feel like I needed to go back to know what was happening or to love this sequel! I had a hard time putting this one down, and it was absolutely as enthralling at the first. Jahan is very three-dimensional, and just as in the first, there are so many characters that are built so well you can't help but be caught up in their lives and this unique world.
I will say that the ending did not seem conclusive, and I am extremely curious (and hoping oh so much) if there will be another in this series. This is a really fantastic book, and I can't tell you how much I would suggest you give this series a try if you are at all a YA fantasy lover- it's really amazing!
Please note that I received an ARC from the publisher through netgalley. All opinions are my own.
May 6, 2025
3.5 rounded up.
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