Hi it is gaber11979 and weikm back for our second review.
Summary: In this book Steve goes to the mines. There he meets up with the skeleton king who challenges them to a battle for knowledge. Bob fights him and wins at the price of his right arm. It turns out that the skeleton king lied, however there was a secret tunnel under the throne. That tunnel leads to an ender portal. No one knows how to activate it so they leave.
One complaint: The one complaint we have is that the Steve acts like an eight year old. This would be ok but he is an adult so... He just needs to use more advanced language. Like stomach rather than tummy.
Requests: We would like for you to add 2 characters who are brother's named Kyrian and Hunter. Kyrian will be a ninja ( But we would prefer a night wing) and Hunter will be a thief ( Or assassin). We also request that these characters be vampires ( see below)
Ideas: One idea we have is too add vampires. Vampires were created by Dr Z. Vampires gain super strength and speed, the ability to turn into a bat, and suck the strength of other people. Vampires powers are weaker in sunlight or around redstone. Vampires powers grow weaker the longer they go without feeding off someone (This might be a problem but they can only feed on prisoners) btw feeding off ppl does not kill them. Vampires can also turn one other person into a vampire. Also add tier two necromancer.
Favorite reviewers: Everyone!
Thank for your time STN continue to write and shine like a golden flame in the darkness.
PS Can our characters side with the Fortress while all the other vampires side with Dr Z
Speachless. I don't know what to say, my brother's name is Nicholas Robert Gibbs and everyone calls him Gibbles. Connection with the story! I wish it was a little longer, but great as always! Keep up the hard work!
In my opinion i think this book is so amazing! But that's not surprising to me at all because he has really never done a bad book! I loved it! If your into Minecraft, Skeletons, and Mysterys, then please do consider trying out this book! STEVE PAGE: Hey Steve, it's Ava Unicorny! I didn't know your into fitness! And your right about Steve in the books diet! Probably overweight Steve is! Not you though. Lol. Your books are really grate and I understand how busy you really are and why the books late and some of your books are short, I finished this book in two days, (on travel) but I think you should take more time on your amazing books! Don't stop doing what you love even if your parents don't understand why you do it! Welp, That's Ava Unicorny9 Out! See ya soon!
I've been seeing a lot of hater reviewers lately. Theres a difference between critics and haters. Example: A critic. People like me. Review to give feedback on how to make the series better and help the author. Hater: someone who either Doesnt read the book and is rude to the author or someone who says "your books suck go die haha". Sometimes also trolls, just looking for attention. Now, I just wanted to get my point across. Also, some haters will say "anyone who likes this is dumb lol." Ive actually seen reviews like this. Its ok to make HELPFUL reviews. But you cant just be mean to the author and his/her reviewers. I don't think this is ok.. Like, are you aware that some young kids and reviewers can actually feel bad from hearing this?? And then they might stop reading the series they love because of this. Also, everyone likes different types of books. So if your a hater, stop telling different people what to like.. Man, reviews are becoming a social media place. I feel like people arent even bothering to actually leave a good or real review. 😐
Review-
Ok. Not too impressed. Not one of your better books. But still kinda ok.. Not really minecraft anymore though.. I mean, in real minecraft, when spiders are hit with fire enchanted weapons🔥 they take a while to fully burn and die. And even with the strongest weapon, they take more than 1 hit to kill. Unless you put on a mod or crit them.. But steve didnt say it so.... Not much to say about this book, so goodbye world UwU
I mean like it was good but you spent too much time on the battle I don't have many complaints also, I figured out pixel animation and I'm currently trying to animate book one but I might stop and just animate some fight scenes what do you think say if you have a request for a fight scene at EmeraldEmmitt@gmail.com
It's super funny and awesome especially the meatier strike😎 So I think you should do this um thing So Sindy is in a ambulance and then she farts and Alex blames it on steve and Steve agrees😁
I LOVE your books so much!!! Plz I had a cool idea, I want Cole to make a plane/glider maybe a new villager comes to the fortress And has a glider and Cole improves it. Just a suggestion 😉