LinSpinner’s review of The Great Frontier: In the Beginning (Th3 Reborn: Mature, #1) > Likes and Comments
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Would you be willing to help me make it better? Most felt it was worth the read but some like you felt the beginning lacked something more exciting. I tried to up the interest in the beginning but obviously for you I failed. It seems you want to help... Do you?
What more did you want to know that I did not explain? Knowing that would be very helpful... Sorry for the clumsy beginning, this is my first book.
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Nov 04, 2024 02:04AM
Would you be willing to help me make it better? Most felt it was worth the read but some like you felt the beginning lacked something more exciting. I tried to up the interest in the beginning but obviously for you I failed. It seems you want to help... Do you?
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What more did you want to know that I did not explain? Knowing that would be very helpful... Sorry for the clumsy beginning, this is my first book.
