Lily’s answer to “Have you written any virgin heroes I can check out?” > Likes and Comments
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Thanks for the info! It would be great to read a virgin hero! Not that you are asking for advice but… consider making him vulnerable & unsure. I have read VHs who give multiples, flip positions & know how to use their hands, their first time out! I feel like… that is not close to realistic & if I wanted to read about someone so skilled there are 1000s of “rakes” to read. And since he is the one “losing it” it would be great if it was through his POV. What is HE thinking and feeling? Again, not that you asked. Just excited!
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Nov 23, 2021 05:56AM
Thanks for the info! It would be great to read a virgin hero! Not that you are asking for advice but… consider making him vulnerable & unsure. I have read VHs who give multiples, flip positions & know how to use their hands, their first time out! I feel like… that is not close to realistic & if I wanted to read about someone so skilled there are 1000s of “rakes” to read. And since he is the one “losing it” it would be great if it was through his POV. What is HE thinking and feeling? Again, not that you asked. Just excited!
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