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MONSTER HYDE IN THE HOUSE OF JEKYLL

Blurb of the story to begin with:

Collapsed, face flat on the floor, drooling, from injecting illegal drugs; another of jaws locked, teeth clenched, bordering death! What most people imagine a nightmare is a recurring reality for Larry! Instead of life, as most know it, a lowly existence, a lowlife—Ohio, the buckeye state, Hell's playground, where the existence flourishes. Worn by Larry, a façade of an ordinary man, a figurative Dr. Jekyll if you will; with the night, a junkie, the monster Hyde. The vile and repulsive life of an empty shell and his battle to keep his head above water, one of those, literally. Brushes with death, unlike most any, heard, before, few surviving to tell them.
Events, not as repulsive as they are horrifying; lying along the roadside, run down! Lying beside Larry, instead beneath, a crushed, barely attached leg, spitting out blood and pieces of teeth! A rollercoaster ride, of life, with ups and downs, disastrously coming off its tracks crashing, to the ground, an underground, a living Hell. Thus exposing the secret, horrific underworld most never knew existed—supernatural occurrences, and interventions, with no logical explanations except the spiritual. Trapped in a round room, told, piss in the corner; bad accidents, decisions, and habits have Larry befuddled with what to do. Finally, means for a way out, but the means, unknown and of unexplained origin, at least to most. Very graphic in detail, with darker shades of humor, mustered up from the muck and mire. Seemingly unreal at times, but oh so true. With very little exaggeration, if any at all. Some may find themselves searching through the book for a photo, witnessing what an author like this resembles. That person would be me, Larry Billig. Names and locations changed for obvious reasons. WARNING: Not for the faint of heart or those easily offended.

Hello all! I'm new to the group as of today. I'd like to post parts of my story to see what you all think. I hope I'm doing this right. I will post under "long story".