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from the The Obscure Reading Group group.
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Thanks to the “Obscure” group for opening the door!


Xenia gets squashed just like all the others; by cunning, malevolent and terrified foxes who use sweet promises and dark threats to get her to go along without a scene, and then how Krantz casually mentions that she should consider herself under arrest when they reach Russian airspace.
I found chapter 8, The Road to Gold to be a fine example of Serge’s exceptional ability to portray the mindset of Kondratiev as he, convinced he will soon get a bullet to his brain, navigates (or is it endures), his last days, right up to meeting with the Chief and the schizoid meeting and seemingly spontaneous reprieve. Such powerful writing.


I’ve not read the introduction nor the second half of the book yet, so we’ll see what transpires.
“Darkness at Noon” certainly has similarities.
I seems that solving the actual murder of comrade Tulayev, seems almost irrelevant at this point; just another brother offed by either the CC, or the Trotskyists, or a reformer. or a jealous husband, who knows? The dark political and criminal Russian tumult that surrounds this act is the story, so far. Serge will certainly continue to befuddle me with vague allusions and a cast of thugs, true believers and lost souls, if souls are allowed. Interesting

Just finished this and I’ve got to say I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it. I am glad this group introduced me to the Stone Raft and Saramago.
The story telling is so rich, with subtle humor sprinkled throughout. The author used the tools of allusion and suggestion effectively; with a “wink and a nod.”
Everything; the migration and rotation of the “peninsula, the dog, the horses, the donkey, the human characters, and the geological issues, the romances, the simultaneous impregnation of all the women of Spain and Portugal, were all just unbelievable enough to keep one invested and interested. The writing style with atypical punctuation was a challenge at first, but allowed ( forced?) me to focus on what was being described or stated. All of this added to the richness of the book.
We were exposed to a lot of Iberian geography, so I reviewed maps of Spain and Portugal; a tour of the peninsula, which seemed to be quite purposeful by Saramago, he wanted us to know about his homeland.
There were, of course, musings about the human experience international politics and of course, a good deal of philosophizing.
Reading the group’s comments and thinking about this book I know there are a lot of subtleties and references which I likely under appreciate. However, I know enough to remain completely befuddled as to the process involved for someone (Saramago) to fold all these ingredients together and create what ends up being a wonderful piece of literature



In “A Confession Found in a Prison in the Time of Charles the Second,” the criminal is approached by bloodhounds while sitting on the site of his victim’s burial, loses his
composure and incriminates himself to the gentlemen he is with. This reminded me of the climactic scene in E.A. Poe’s “The Tell-Tale
Heart,” so of course I looked it up and in fact there is discourse on the influence that Dickens had on Poe, generally and specifically for that famous tale.
So the construct of our obscure book is one that Dickens used to send out literary trial balloons and it appears that both he and his contemporaries used these efforts to further their writings. Fascinating.

I am struck by how well Murdoch adroitly paints the picture of our antihero Charles. It isn’t clear whether he is simply a narcissist, or meets DSM (psychiatric) criteria for Antisocial Personality Disorder, or perhaps even that of Psychopathy?
Murdoch may not have knowledge of the
diagnostic differentiation of these disorders/ traits.
Regardless, Murdoch has Charles thinking and acting in a clearly unhinged manner, far from the manner in which “normal” society behaves.
To me, that is what slowly pulled me along, deeper and deeper into this story even though liking, or empathizing with, the main character is not really an option.

Setting up and masterfully defining Charles (or Chuck) as the narcissist that he is, has been done ever so well (Preserve the ego at all costs and deny reality if that’s what it takes).
I am lead to understand that Murdoch adapts this technique in other works as well.
This is going to get interesting (ugly)!

The tone of the book is very stark, archaic and a little bit dark and pessimistic. The manner in which the author utilized the belief systems (superstitions, religious beliefs?) of the characters to influence the mood and tone of the novel was well done. I thought the author had some wonderfully descriptive passages of the countryside.
As the story developed the reader was left trying to piece together what had happened in the past as well as the relationships between the characters. While frustrating for a “just the facts, ma’am” type of reader, this added to the mystic quality of the book.
I thoroughly enjoyed the detailed discussions of this group, and look forward to future readings, and discussions.