Sophie ’s Comments (group member since Dec 29, 2024)

Sophie ’s comments from the poetryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy group.

Damon (Hitaus again mates :P) wrote: "This one I have decided to title:

"The Boat and the Needle."

Which may change XD







The skin lies taught, the face so gaunt, a pallid, sickly sallow.

Lips drawn back, a hideous grimace, dark..."

oh wowza.... thats so good

Autumn wrote: "I've always liked art

The way you hold the pen or brush watching the colors bleed onto the page

But that was before everything

I've always liked to eat I loved ice cream cookies and chips

B..."

this is so sad...

she'll come back eventually... she could be dealing with stuff

a range of creative to relieved to stressed, it really depends

Violet (Rev's Version) wrote: "I look in the mirror and give myself a smile
I am a flawless girl with perfect style
My teeth aren’t crooked, I have a beautiful face
I always carry myself lightly with grace
I have the perfect bo..."

🥺 I want to cry after reading this

l i z [save the sharks❗] ˖𓍢ִִ໋🌊🦈˚˖𓍢ִ✧˚. wrote: "

The Fall Of Icarus



They knew this would happen. It had to. They always said it would. Don’t fly too high, the sun will melt your wings. But they don’t understand. They will never under..."

is this a reference to something in Greek mythology?

I just wrote a hate poem and I'm just now realizing "that's it I hate her" is the lamest ending possible

Belle₊˚⊹♡ wrote: "☆ lingering screams. 𓇢𓆸

Even when you fall
I’ll still be there for when your tall
I’ll be by your side through it all
Let your dazzling starlight shine through the cracks on the wall
Your past ..."

this is so sweet!!

This is bad but I wrote it in a moment of great joy and a feeling of being at ease so I wanted to share it

I live for times like these
when all is calm
and life is sweet

I want to cry
shed tears from the beauty of life
all I'm thinking is "Why?"

Why all this for me?
for such a flawed human?
for life, joy is key

In times like these,
there is joy
I have no pleas

Violet {Rev’s Version} wrote: "Sophie wrote: "that is so sad!!!!

what song was it?"

Call your mom by Noah Kahan!"

I'll have to listen to it sometime

Lond wrote: "“but alice..this isn’t wonderland“
if he’d told me beforehand,
that this was madness,
but i was lost in the vastness,
such a perfect place,
traps hidden from a daunting maze,
lost in my own head,
m..."

thats so good!!

I just had a great idea! in appreciation to poetry, there should be a poem of the week (POTW) by a famous writer! I was thinking we could do "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe of "Will There Really Be A Morning?" by Emily Dickenson

Lond wrote: "that’s me the problem starter,
i should be like them, smarter.
but i’m not, i start issues,
cause fights, harbor their argues.
thats me it always is,
spawing more problems from the abyss.
why don’t..."

I love this!!!!

that is so sad!!!!

what song was it?

thank you!

I love the sun
I love the shower
both are sweet
Each have power

I love the rose
I love the thorn
It takes each to make
a bloom in the morn'

I love the day
I love the night
Both are calm
and filled with might

I love the water
I love the fire
They both keep life
from being dire

I love death
I love life
both are important
to resolve strife

I love the land
I love the sky
on both does
ev'ry soul rely

Deep as ruby
cool as ice
"ev'ry action
has a price"

Bright as emerald
light as stars
bottle it up
in a jar

Calm as moonlight
"stay serene"
life is not fair.
"don't be mean"