Steven’s Comments (group member since Dec 30, 2023)

Steven’s comments from the Free book editing/beta reading group.

Hello,

I am a writer of science fiction and mystery novels, and I have completed the first book in my trilogy series, I would like to have some beta readers or critiques if possible.

I wrote the book in my native language and am on my way to translating it. Since English is not my native tone, there may be some errors or inconsistencies in my writing prose so I will be very glad if you can point that out. My translation process has not yet finished, but I can send you the translated part so that you get a sense of what it looks like and I can translate it faster if you are interested and want to know more about it.

The length of the original book is around 100k, but in the translated version, it may get shorter. But I think it is safe to expect a range from 70k
to 75k in terms of its length.

Thank you.

Hi,
I have just completed the first book in my trilogy series. It is about a lost world called Camila trying to find out the origin and its myth along the way. It starts off with Major Lanhardt, a military officer in the southern Camila who got tired of the constant warfare and civil conflicts between the south and the north, so he made a decision to assassinate his kings and the high priest, hoping to end the war, but was instead thrown into a bigger conspiracy that will not only change his life but the lives of his fellow people and the civilization itself.

Please note that I wrote the novel in my native language and the version you are about to see is a translated one. I have not finished translating it, but if you are interested, I can work my way out faster so that you can see the full manuscript.