Line’s Comments (group member since Nov 10, 2014)

Line’s comments from the Free book editing/beta reading group.

I am writing on a Romance Novel with a bit of erotica in it and I am looking for someone to go through it and make sure I didn't make stupid mistakes and misspellings.. (I am Danish but writing in English)

P.S.
I am out in good time as I am planning to be finished in January.

The BLURB is here:

If you grew up in a alcoholic home..
Dated guys as evil as your drunken dad..
And never heard a kind word from the people who SHOULD love you..
Could you change your path?

My name is Nikki Rosso and I am scarred, I am shy and I am no one but I am about to start a fight against my past in hopes of finding myself but if I will ever win is a question not even I dare to ask.

He had been my rock, my only friend but would he stand by me even when I had to take a stand against his best mate?

Nathan Mathews had a past, he was talented, he was tattooed and he was every woman's dream but though every woman wanted into his pants none ever stayed around for long.
I was soon to learn why..