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Jan 02, 2017 05:21AM

147483 REGINALD BONES BOOK 2 WILL BE RELEASING 1/27/17!

5.0 out of 5 stars PHENOMENAL ONCE AGAIN MR BANE
By Ria – Reading Is Our Satisfaction Blog on December 23, 2016
Verified Purchase

Reviewed by Maria for Reading Is Our Satisfaction Blog

The first book that I read by Lucian Bane was Dom Wars, since then I have continued to follow his scribblings and read every other book he has penned. His words, descriptions and characters just drag you into the story and keep you there. You don’t want to fnd an escape, you want to remain in the world that he creates and just soak it all up. Reginald Bones is another one of those superb masterpieces that he throws out there for his readers to immerse themselves in. Not only does he spin his web like a spider, but he traps you in it, until he is ready to let you go.

Reginald Bones was unlike any story that I have ever read. A masterful web of mystery, intrigue and psychological twisting. This is the story of Reggie and Bones, two men sharing the one body, for a reason yet to be determined. I only know that when Lucian does reveal all, it is going to be one almight mind twisting reason. The fact that they share one body is rather bizarre, but it works – at times you completely forget this important fact of the story. There are definite differences between the two, once you comprehend what is actually going on, you realise that they are two completely different sides of the one man. A man, who is struggling with life in such a way, that any psychiatrist/psychologist would just love to study.

The one thing that Lucian does brilliantly is the conversations that Reggie and Bones have with each other – you would swear on a bible that they are two men carrying on a typical “man chat”. There were times that I simply had to put my book down so that I could finish laughing – it was that good. the one liners, the wit and all the sarcasm are definitely traits that Lucian has and he has brought these out in Reggie and Bones. In a word – the man is a genius. Oh, and who can forget the shower scene – that will always remain a classic in my eyes – hot and very very pantie melting – Lucian certainly knows how to bring a HOT scene into the mix!

But there is a third character to this story. Winter Rose Brown. A young woman living with heart wrenching guilt over the death of her brother, Sebastian. Atonement is what she is looking for and what she hopes to find through the “brothers”, but she might just get more than she bargained for. Quite ironic really, when Reginald falls in love her and Bones hates the very sight of her – this leads to some very interesting interactions.

In his own inexplicable way, Lucian has given his readers a thrilling suspense story that will keep hem on the edge of their seats. From a graveyard to a basement, the ride is beyond belief. Never have I read a book like this before and I expect, that when the series is over I never will again. It is totally insane just how magnificent this story is – one man, two minds, one woman – both loved and hated at the same time. It is amazing just how Lucian’s imagination works.

Brilliant introduction to a psychologically thrilling series that will have you wanting to read it over and over again. The more you read it, the more you begin to understand just how much of a complex story it really is. Now all that’s left to do is wait for Part Two. Thank you Lucian for the best book that I have had the pleasure of reading during 2016.

If only I could give it more than a FIVE STAR rating.
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Reggie! (1 new)
Dec 31, 2016 01:02PM

147483 December 30, 2016
Goodreads Review: Reginald Bones – by Shelli
rated it, it was amazing 5 out of 5 stars


Oh my goodness, I can’t even! What did I just read? Whatever it was, it was pure genius!! I couldn’t wait for this book to come out, I remember when I first heard about this book he was writing, and the concept was so original and unusual, I wasn’t sure how he would work it all out. He made it work!!

This book is definitely different, it’s original, it’s FUNNY, and it defies categorization. Yes, it’s kind of a romance…and a little suspense and mystery…some angst, alot of snark…I loved it! How can you not love the story of two men living in one body, as different as night and day, fully conscious and aware of each other, to the point of arguing and sniping at each other? It’s kind of multiple personality, but not completely. And make one personality hate women, and the other fall in love with a woman with a tormented past? It was genius!

I’ve read all of Lucian’s books to date, and they just keep getting better. I can’t wait for the next book, I have so many questions I want answered, plus I just want some more of Bonesey’s hilarious snarkiness!!

Everyone should buy this book and read it, it’s great!!
Dec 29, 2016 04:36PM

147483 Amazon Review: Reginald Bones – by Annie Walsh
5.0 out of 5 stars An interesting and unique story that I didn’t want to put down!
By Annie Walsh on December 26, 2016
Format: Kindle Edition

Reginald Bones is a real page turner that will make you a Lucian Bane fan if you aren’t already one. This psychological thriller contains two men, Reginald and Bones, inhabiting the same body in a way that is intriguing and cleverly written. The story flows so well that you actually forget they share the same body and see them as completely separate characters. Their dynamic is riveting and at times quite humorous as you witness their banter. Things get very interesting when the author throws into the mix a woman that is desired by one and loathed by the other. Reginald and Bones are masterfully created to complement and challenge one another. You simultaneously get to experience Reginald realizing his feelings for this woman while Bones is literally whispering in his ear how disgusted he is. The author really does a fantastic job creating anticipation while giving you heated moments, lustful encounters and gut-wrenching despair. He dangles the promise of revealing secrets while stringing you along through the lies, deceit and desperation of his characters. I would highly recommend this book and I am anxiously awaiting the next installment.
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Dec 28, 2016 03:42PM

147483 December 27, 2016
Amazon Review: Reginald Bones by Azz
5.0 out of 5 stars Captivated by the voices within, a must read
By Azz on December 26, 2016
Format: Kindle Edition

Reginald Bones

Maybe death doesn’t have to be the end …. maybe death could be just the beginning … maybe, just maybe, it can save you … be prepared to be amazed, hold on tight, it’s a fast ride !

Everyone has that inner voice, we all have that voice in the back of our mind, the part of us that offers countenance to our inner thoughts and musings and sometimes we listen to that voice to let it guide us.

Reginald Bones is no different, he has an inner voice it offers no countenance. Bones, the voice at direct odds with him, in every way. Pulling from him, everything he will not allow and yet Bones cannot be denied, he is an intuitive soul.

Reggie is a man sheltered from the normality of life and yet he deals with the most harshest of our emotional spectrum. Death … producing the ultimate emotion, the ultimate sadness, stripping us bare, revealing our need.

Winter Rose … captured in a life she detests, doing things that she hates, for the love of her brother, the love that keeps her returning to his soul, where upon we encounter the revelation of the connection between her and her brothers death. Exposed, we come to understand the vile pain she deserves, deserving the bitter side of life, the wretched shadows of her soul pull her ever deeper and closer to Reggie or would that be closer to Bones ?

This clever concept of the voice within being able to take primary lead and yet take a back seat at other times is quite genius in this psychological thriller. Can Iove grow from the darkness within ? from the deepest recesses of our mind ? Do we need to be broken to understand the fractured ? To accept, that, which once divides us actually binds us ? This story reaches into the mind and raises many questions. An intense read, which brings you MORE of the inner mind of Lucian Bane.
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Dec 27, 2016 03:59PM

147483 December 26, 2016
Amazon Review: Reginald Bones – by Maria Ria Alexander
5.0 out of 5 stars PHENOMENAL ONCE AGAIN MR BANE
By Maria Ria Alexander on December 23, 2016
Verified Purchase


The first book that I read by Lucian Bane was Dom Wars, since then I have continued to follow his scribblings and read every other book he has penned. His words, descriptions and characters just drag you into the story and keep you there. You don’t want to fnd an escape, you want to remain in the world that he creates and just soak it all up. Reginald Bones is another one of those superb masterpieces that he throws out there for his readers to immerse themselves in. Not only does he spin his web like a spider, but he traps you in it, until he is ready to let you go.

Reginald Bones was unlike any story that I have ever read. A masterful web of mystery, intrigue and psychological twisting. This is the story of Reggie and Bones, two men sharing the one body, for a reason yet to be determined. I only know that when Lucian does reveal all, it is going to be one almight mind twisting reason. The fact that they share one body is rather bizarre, but it works – at times you completely forget this important fact of the story. There are definite differences between the two, once you comprehend what is actually going on, you realise that they are two completely different sides of the one man. A man, who is struggling with life in such a way, that any psychiatrist/psychologist would just love to study.

The one thing that Lucian does brilliantly is the conversations that Reggie and Bones have with each other – you would swear on a bible that they are two men carrying on a typical “man chat”. There were times that I simply had to put my book down so that I could finish laughing – it was that good. the one liners, the wit and all the sarcasm are definitely traits that Lucian has and he has brought these out in Reggie and Bones. In a word – the man is a genius. Oh, and who can forget the shower scene – that will always remain a classic in my eyes – hot and very very pantie melting – Lucian certainly knows how to bring a HOT scene into the mix!

But there is a third character to this story. Winter Rose Brown. A young woman living with heart wrenching guilt over the death of her brother, Sebastian. Atonement is what she is looking for and what she hopes to find through the “brothers”, but she might just get more than she bargained for. Quite ironic really, when Reginald falls in love her and Bones hates the very sight of her – this leads to some very interesting interactions.

In his own inexplicable way, Lucian has given his readers a thrilling suspense story that will keep hem on the edge of their seats. From a graveyard to a basement, the ride is beyond belief. Never have I read a book like this before and I expect, that when the series is over I never will again. It is totally insane just how magnificent this story is – one man, two minds, one woman – both loved and hated at the same time. It is amazing just how Lucian’s imagination works.

Brilliant introduction to a psychologically thrilling series that will have you wanting to read it over and over again. The more you read it, the more you begin to understand just how much of a complex story it really is. Now all that’s left to do is wait for Part Two. Thank you Lucian for the best book that I have had the pleasure of reading during 2016.

If only I could give it more than a FIVE STAR rating.
Dec 26, 2016 04:02AM

147483 Lucian Bane's Blog
December 24, 2016
Amazon Review: Reginald Bones – by Aura Matei
5.0 out of 5 stars THIS IS A MUST READ!
By Aura Matei on December 23, 2016


I received this book in exchange of my honest review. Thank you so much!

OMG this book was INSANE!!!! I love it and I need more, so much more!!

Reginald Bones is a different book with a topic that will blow your mind and make your imagination work really hard. One awesomely-sexy body that contains two opposite personalities, each one with its desires and lifestyle; darkness and light, good and bad mixed in one sweet package.

All good, until they start talking at the same time. That’s when the problem appears .In the beginning it was a little difficult for me to understand them and see them separately but when I did see the differences between them I was amazed. It made me curious to actually see that kind of behavior and analyzes it. Crazy, huh?

As if that wasn’t enough, their life changes dramatically when a woman crosses their path. One of them wants her, the other hates her and then the real fun starts!:)

An original story like I have never read and it is crazy beautiful. I liked the writing style, it’s catchy and addictive and I loveee it! The end was shocking making me eager to read the next book.

One thing it’s for sure: this author knows how to write sex scenes. My God, they were so intense and twisted. I can’t say enough words to explain how much I enjoyed this book. It has everything : gorgeous cover(seriously , that guy looks exactly like I imagine Bones, hot and bad ), awesome story and the ending will make you want to scream for more!

I will surely read many more books written by this talented author and I highly recommend it!
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Dec 21, 2016 05:57PM

147483 Donna wrote: "Holy cow! I'm speechless. Hated to have to go to work and put book down. Truly great work Lucian. Can not wait for next part. Thank you"
Thank you so much!

Lucian
Dec 21, 2016 05:57PM

147483 Carolina wrote: "OMFG!!! I am blown away. Will read the entire book on Thursday again. No interruptions.

Lucian Bane you have a gift, please, please, please never stop writing. This is your best story !!!!!

Will ..."

Thank you so much! It was a blast delivering.

Lucian
Dec 18, 2016 10:00AM

147483 Carolina wrote: "I got it, started reading last night !!!!! HOLLY SHIZBALLS!!!!!!! When I was reading the snippets I knew this is going to be in my humble opinion, Lucian Bane's best story. Reading slowly don't wan..."
THANK YOU that is so awesome to hear!
Dec 17, 2016 03:16AM

147483 Reginald Bones Part One by Lucian Bane
Reginald Bones is now LIVE and getting some great reviews already!
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Solomon Gorge (2 new)
Nov 17, 2016 11:41AM

147483 Solomon’s nightmares – Desecrating Solomon III

Sweat covered his body from the reoccurring nightmares that visited him faithfully every time he closed his eyes. Darkness, pain, water, drowning. And always that monster’s hideous face as he got to work on Solomon’s head with the drill. He’d never forget the hellish scream of the tool. It always echoed at the back of his mind like a sound stain. The white noise that came to fill the silence when he slept.

Desecrating Solomon III available now on https://www.amazon.com/dp/B01MXLPI26/

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Nov 10, 2016 09:36AM

147483 She kept her gaze lowered trying to poke holes in her skin with her nails, scratch the surface off so the evil of who she was, what she’d been made to become, could escape. “My mother …” she licked her lips and tried to pull her hands free of his.

“Don’t,” he whispered, holding them tighter. “Let me be with you in this.”

Chaos’s heart hammered at her instincts. They said don’t dirty him. Don’t let his hand touch the unclean things. Keep him pure, protect him from the darkness in you, around you.

She forced herself to allow him to do what felt so wrong. He just didn’t understand what it was like, that’s all. What it meant to have this evil. Maybe when she told him, he’d understand why she did or didn’t do the things normal people did. “My mother was a good mother,” she began, wanting to keep her name clean. “As was her mother. Grandmother.” She wanted to look him in the eyes but touching him was already too much. “But … Master hurt her. Ruined her. Used her.”

Chaos wrestled with how to tell him that one part that could break everything. The truth hadn’t really surprised her, not about him being her father. Even if he wasn’t her biological one, he was, in every other sense. But now nature was against her too. “Master …”

“Chaos,” Solomon said, but she couldn’t meet his gaze. “Look at me.”

She shook her head, her vision flooding with hot tears. “I am … the offspring … of Satan,” she strained past the weight in her chest.

“What?” he barely whispered. Her eyes shot to his and regret twisted knots in her stomach. “How can you say that?” he said, shaking his head.

Chaos shied away from his pure hands now cupping her face. “Look at me Beautiful, right now.”

The sharp command drew her shameful gaze to his, a re-run deference to a master. He was her master now. She didn’t know how, she didn’t know why. It was a rip in the fabric of logic, her and him. Him, touching the unclean thing, looking upon the dirty things, seeing them and yet …. that look… that look in her angel’s eyes …

Chaos’s breaths came too quickly, hot like fire as she stared into Heaven’s gaze. The love pouring from his stare speared her heart until it pulled and tugged painfully. It seemed to be saying …

“You’re not his,” he whispered. “You were never his. You were always mine.“

His words stole her breath. They bit into her heart and wrapped fingers around the regrets and all the dirty, unforgivable secrets and bound them up in his strong fist. Then slowly, he pulled, drawing an agonizing sob from the deepest part of her.

His arms went around her so tight, pressing her close, commanding it out, commanding all the filthy sins out of her. The love… oh God, the love. It was unlike anything she’d ever felt. The light was searing and beautiful. She couldn’t stop the Hell he ordered out of her.

“Slomooooooooon,” she wailed, gripping him tight to her. She inhaled, deeper than she ever had and took her first breath of life. Then she let it go. She let it go in one loud cry. “Solomon Goooooooooorge.”

****

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Published on November 10, 2016 09:23
See what’s coming with Desecrating Solomon 3

The elevator opened to the third floor and it was like entering an elementary school at Halloween. They were greeted by a main desk, decorated with every manner of festive decor. “We’re here to see Agnes Jones,” Solomon said.

“Visitors?” the serious red-headed woman asked, eyeing him over a pair of thick rimmed glasses.

“Yes ma’am. Of the family. Friends of the family. We called ahead?”

“Yes, I see it,” she muttered, chewing her gum and typing loudly on the key board. “Down that hall on the right,” she nodded in the direction making her orange pumpkin earrings fling about. “Knock before entering, she doesn’t like to be startled. And I’m guessing you know all about her limitations,” she added, eyeing him.

Limitations? “Of course,” he said, not wanting her to stop the visit for some reason.

He held Chaos’s hand tighter and set a casual pace toward her room, wondering if his dad had known about ‘limitations’ and what they were. The smell on this floor was less floral, more medicinal. As they passed rooms, Chaos looked in all of them like a curious child. Solomon did too, just not as obviously. Was like a retirement home on this floor. All older people.

They slowed at the woman’s room and stood before the door, decked out with webs, giant spiders, and goblins. Chaos touched each of the decorations with a soft touch and happy grin.

Solomon found a blank space near the top of the door and knocked.

Strange noises erupted from inside and he knocked louder, wondering if one of her limitations was being deaf maybe. The weird noises seemed to grow louder, like she may have heard. The warbled yelling almost sounded like somebody trying to talk around a tennis ball in their mouth.

He glanced down at Chaos who met his gaze with open curiosity. “Miss Agnes?” he called opening the door slowly. “We’re friends here for a visit?” He entered and saw a woman in a wheel chair hunched over something. The weird sounds were definitely coming from her. She sounded frustrated. Solomon spied something in her lap that she seemed to be wrestling into submission. God, was she tied to the chair?

He made his way toward her, concerned now. “I’m Solomon?”

They both jerked to a halt when the white head snapped toward them. White marble eyes fixed right on them, her toothless mouth pouring those loud, wordless syllables.

Maybe she actually was deaf. The second he though it, a pencil fell to the floor and she let out an angry scream at it, a barking, scolding sound. Her arms waved about, holding Solomon immobile. She had no hands. Her nubs shot out erratically and Chaos ran and picked up the pencil then proceeded to help her grab it between her nubs.

“There now, you’ve got it.” She helped put the tablet straight in her lap. “Are you drawing a picture? I like pictures.”

Solomon stared in disturbed confusion as the woman seemed to peer right at Chaos. “Ahhhhhhh?” The woman held the pencil on the page with one nub then reached for Chaos with the other.

Solomon cringed inside as Chaos took soft hold of the woman’s limb and brought it to her face. “Here I am.” She passed the end of the nub over her face in different areas. “Can you see me now?”

Solomon was speechless. Did they have people like this where Chaos was from? He’d not be shocked if they had. She acted so at home with the woman.

Chaos turned a smile at him and beckoned him over. “Solomon is here,” she announced to the woman who burst out with many syllables, sounds, and mouth movement. Seemed like she was telling him off.

She suddenly grabbed up her pencil between her arms and began to write. Surprisingly well and fast. Astonishing!

“Ah? Ah? Ah?” she said.

“She’s asking something,” Chaos whispered, looking at the paper. “Last name.”

“Gorge,” he said, kneeling next to Chaos before the woman.

She erupted again, more angry syllables, more jerking in her chair and banging her pencil on the tablet before writing again. They read the new word she wrote. “Middle,” he mumbled. “Middle name? Hensley.”

He was suddenly being stared down by a blind woman. The milky color in her eyes was so disturbing that Solomon couldn’t turn away. The white hair bound behind her head stuck up everywhere else like needle spikes, held erect by phantom electric charges in the air. Her mouth hung open a little, the jaw off to the left as her thinning white brows came together in a pissed off looking manner.

When she reached her nub toward him, he drew back and Chaos laced her fingers in his hands for support. He realized how silly he was being and called on his medical experience, seeing her as a patient and not a freaky horror film old lady.

The awkward molestation began with a stroke directly over the front of his face, not the side, the front. Solomon held his lips together tight while telling himself it was just a little old ladies limb, not a penis.

She suddenly whacked him. “EEEEEEHHHHHHHH! EHHHHHHHHH!”

Solomon scooted out of harm’s way and she went back to the writing thing, hunched over and raging over the tablet. When she was done, she lifted the pencil up, her white eyes wide and mouth a black slash. “UUUUUUUUUUHHH? UUUUUUUH!!!”

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LUCIAN
Nov 10, 2016 09:33AM

147483 She kept her gaze lowered trying to poke holes in her skin with her nails, scratch the surface off so the evil of who she was, what she’d been made to become, could escape. “My mother …” she licked her lips and tried to pull her hands free of his.

“Don’t,” he whispered, holding them tighter. “Let me be with you in this.”

Chaos’s heart hammered at her instincts. They said don’t dirty him. Don’t let his hand touch the unclean things. Keep him pure, protect him from the darkness in you, around you.

She forced herself to allow him to do what felt so wrong. He just didn’t understand what it was like, that’s all. What it meant to have this evil. Maybe when she told him, he’d understand why she did or didn’t do the things normal people did. “My mother was a good mother,” she began, wanting to keep her name clean. “As was her mother. Grandmother.” She wanted to look him in the eyes but touching him was already too much. “But … Master hurt her. Ruined her. Used her.”

Chaos wrestled with how to tell him that one part that could break everything. The truth hadn’t really surprised her, not about him being her father. Even if he wasn’t her biological one, he was, in every other sense. But now nature was against her too. “Master …”

“Chaos,” Solomon said, but she couldn’t meet his gaze. “Look at me.”

She shook her head, her vision flooding with hot tears. “I am … the offspring … of Satan,” she strained past the weight in her chest.

“What?” he barely whispered. Her eyes shot to his and regret twisted knots in her stomach. “How can you say that?” he said, shaking his head.

Chaos shied away from his pure hands now cupping her face. “Look at me Beautiful, right now.”

The sharp command drew her shameful gaze to his, a re-run deference to a master. He was her master now. She didn’t know how, she didn’t know why. It was a rip in the fabric of logic, her and him. Him, touching the unclean thing, looking upon the dirty things, seeing them and yet …. that look… that look in her angel’s eyes …

Chaos’s breaths came too quickly, hot like fire as she stared into Heaven’s gaze. The love pouring from his stare speared her heart until it pulled and tugged painfully. It seemed to be saying …

“You’re not his,” he whispered. “You were never his. You were always mine.“

His words stole her breath. They bit into her heart and wrapped fingers around the regrets and all the dirty, unforgivable secrets and bound them up in his strong fist. Then slowly, he pulled, drawing an agonizing sob from the deepest part of her.

His arms went around her so tight, pressing her close, commanding it out, commanding all the filthy sins out of her. The love… oh God, the love. It was unlike anything she’d ever felt. The light was searing and beautiful. She couldn’t stop the Hell he ordered out of her.

“Slomooooooooon,” she wailed, gripping him tight to her. She inhaled, deeper than she ever had and took her first breath of life. Then she let it go. She let it go in one loud cry. “Solomon Goooooooooorge.”

Desecrating Solomon 1 https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
Desecrating Solomon 2 https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
are out time to catch up!
LUCIAN
Nov 09, 2016 01:34PM

147483 DESECRATING SOLOMON 3
COMING VERY VERY SOON
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The passion in his blue eyes strangled her throat and sucked her in until she floated on the current of its power. But that island inside began to push up, higher, faster, harder. It raced forward and met his iron will with such a clash. Their breaths rushed out, two destinies locked in a staggering struggle.

That thing inside her grew hungrier as it dueled with no mercy. She gasped for air when his pain and agony nailed her soul to a hellish floor. Even still, her fate raged with the vengeance of a thousand wronged souls. It wrapped powerful arms around him and slowly, slowly locked him down. Tighter. Hotter. It made him know. It made him feel, taste and understand the justice of what must come.
Nov 01, 2016 04:15PM

147483 Hey everyone!

Goodreads has opened the polls for the Best Books of 2016!
I have entered in to the following categories:
Fantasy-Scribbler Guardian II Scribbler Guardian 2: Seven Sons of Zion

Horror-Desecrating Solomon II Desecrating Solomon II

Children's/Middle-12 Matchsticks by A.C Kret 12 Matchsticks

They have to be written in as they are not showing up on the main link so I would be ever so grateful if you would cast your votes!
Lucian
Would you ever? (18 new)
Oct 28, 2015 05:52AM

147483 What would you do to fix your marriage? Would you attend a class like the ones Lucian and Tara are setting up?

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Fears (10 new)
Oct 05, 2015 12:53PM

147483 Do your fears control your actions? Do you think they control Silence's?

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Mar 20, 2015 09:43PM

147483 Mercy


Jay shuffled on his feet, his face a disgusting mask of pussy. “Man, come on, please. Tommy… he’s the one to do this, I’m no good at this!”

Sade grit his teeth, his need for vengeance plowing through him with every breath, every second now. He needed to punish and demolish, and he needed it now. “Take them!” He shoved the giant dude, pressing the knuckle busters into his chest. “I’m not fucking waiting for Tommy! I’ll kill you right here in this alley if you don’t do it—now!” he roared.

"Alright man!" Jay's beefy hands shot up, trembling before he took the brass knuckles.

“You’re fucking crying?” Sade shook his head in awe. “Jesus you’re a goddamn pussy.”

“I’m sorry man,” he blubbered, fitting the metal weapon onto his fingers, “you know I’m not a coward! But you’re my friend.”

“Then do it!” Sade ripped off his shirt and pounded his own chest and slapped his face. “Fucking tear it up. And if I can recognize myself in the mirror when I wake up?” he aimed a finger at him. “I’m coming—and I’m going to show you how you should’ve done it Jay. You don’t want that, you’re a good looking dude, you don’t want that.”

Jay shook his head rapidly. “I got you man, I got you. I’ll fuck you up good.”
God, he was a fucking blubbering whale—tears soaking his face, fucking little bitch. He was adding the wrong kind of fury to an already fucked up day. And Tommy? That two-ton sack of shit was going to get it. Not being here on this day when he knew the drill, he fucking knew.

“I need the bathroom man,” Jay whimpered.

Sade slammed his fists into the wall of muscle. “Piss in your goddamn pants!” he yelled.
Dec 26, 2014 08:12AM

147483 White Knight Dom Academy is LIVE. We'll start discussions tomorrow morning, enjoy.

Lucian and Tara may have won Dom Wars and the Million--two, in fact--but they didn't realize they'd be the reigning Mr. and Mrs. Dildo USA.

As the new "faces" of the large adult-toy company, they're required to train at least five couples within five years, in the art of Dominance and submission. In addition to selling X amount of Gladiator toys.

Only problem is, Gramma isn't leaving Maplewood, Missouri, which means they'll have to conduct Undercover Operation-Kink in Tara's stuck-up, religious hometown, without getting caught and having the entire family thrown out.

But two million dollars is two million dollars, and Lucian and Tara didn't come all this way to forfeit everything they sacrificed for a few fuddy duddies. So, the plan is to Dom and sub up, find a way to pull this kink-heist off, and collect their winnings. And with the help of his good friend Steve, he's sure they can manage anything. As long as his wife doesn't find out.

US- http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00RGWA6S6

UK- http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B00RGWA6S6
happy Tuesday (14 new)
Nov 21, 2014 06:31AM

147483 Great answers ladies, The answer is your Autobiography have a great day:)
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