Jess’s Comments (group member since Dec 13, 2021)

Jess’s comments from the Beta Reader Group group.

Hi!
I am working on my very first novel. I've had the idea since high school and over the last few years I have been working up the courage to actually write it instead of just talking about it. Anyway, I am in need of some encouragement and motivation!
I have the beginning of the story mostly done (again just first draft so it is messy as hell) but I am SO stuck on the middle portion and where to go from here. I have somewhat of an idea how the first book will end (i'm thinking it will be a trilogy) and I have a lot of ideas for the 2nd and 3rd books but I am so stuck on this first one!

I posted the first four chapters on fictionpress and haven't gotten anything which I expected. Let me know if you are interested I could send you the link or a google doc!

Keira and Callie are two very different people. Callie is a human, and Keira is not. Keira is on a mission to find her missing friend in the human world. Callie is a pharmacy tech hating her job & life. When harpies mysteriously appear in the human world, Keira and Callie must work together and find out they are more similar than they think.