Robin’s Comments (group member since Nov 24, 2023)

Robin’s comments from the Beta Reader Group group.

Up and coming actress, Becca Young, has landed her dream role playing the 1950’s actress, Audrey McNeil When something about the script just doesn’t feel right, she leaves sunny California for foggy London to find the answers for herself.
Will has been dreaming of the same girl for as long as he can remember. Now she just walked into his life for real. Of course she would come when he’s only been given a month to live. Is it even fair to try and get to know her when he won’t be around for long?
When Becca is gifted Audrey’s personal journal, she learns of the girl the world didn’t know. Of a lonely orphan and the tragic love story never shared. Meanwhile, Will is having dreams and visions of things he should never know.
Can two souls find each other again to save the theater where they first met, or is it just a delusion? Can they find a Christmas miracle before its too late?

Complete draft at 88k from experienced author looking for betas. Bonus points if you’re British 😜 comment here or email me at RobinRhodenWrites AT gmail DOT com. TIA