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Jul 05, 2024 01:58PM

50920 Thanks for feedback! This story is written from multiple POVs the same way game of thrones is. There is not just one protagonist
Jul 05, 2024 11:27AM

50920 Hey, all! I’ve written a sci-fi cyberpunk book that is in Wattpad and I’m looking for some dedicated people to go read it for me and provide feedback! Here’s the synopsis!

The Shard is a supernatural object hundreds if not thousands of years old.

A war was waged over this object and the power it wields. As a result of this war, one city was severed in two-Sin Capital and Forgotten City. Residents of either are forbidden to interact, but when a thief named Noelle "Elle" crosses paths from Sin Capital with a thief named Kai from Forgotten City, their worlds change for the worst.

Supernatural lusts and abilities, complicated romance, cyborgs, subservience, mystery, and a secret society all weave together in this fast-paced, character-driven first installment by Andrew McMillan.

Sin Capital-is there any recompense

And link!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/3475839...