Helena’s Comments (group member since Sep 26, 2018)

Helena’s comments from the Beta Reader Group group.

Hi all! I'm seeking beta readers for my 97k word YA Fantasy novel. I'm willing to swap to beta read your story as well :)

Brief synopsis:
In an East Asian inspired setting, Ame is a monk trained to guide ghosts to the spirit realm. When a ghost of a brutally slain town warns him about a sudden rise of bloodthirsty demons, Ame is anxious to stop them before it’s too late.

After Ihsami witnesses her sister's death at the hands of these demons, she seeks the help of a famed High Monk--Ame's mentor. As Ame and Ihsami fight across the empire to secure her sister's body for resurrection, they uncover something far more sinister beyond the demons—something that could tear the world apart.

Right now, I'm looking for overall reads, nothing super in depth. Basically, if you enjoyed it, liked the characters, would buy it if you saw it sitting on shelves (lol), if anything stands out as weird or odd or confusing, etc. We can discuss more. Thanks!!