C.W.’s Comments (group member since May 02, 2019)

C.W.’s comments from the What is your fantasy? group.

I need to check this out!

I agree DJay. And in a book with mutants, werewolves, vampires, gangs and creatures, trying to make a human character fascinating is difficult. But I think I was able to drip feed some intruge about the MC through the main series, as well as grounding a little of his goals and personality in the prequel.


(Reminder: READ THE SEQUEL DJAY!) :)

Well you're in luck Alan because my next prokect after the one I'm currently on will be Cyberpunk!

Alan wrote: "I'm down for just about anything as long as it's about the fiction and not the erotica.

There are a couple authors now I don't even bother reading any of their new work simply because the main ch..."

Very aptly put, Alan. I will always strive to put stories and characters before anything else. I think some authors also lean too hard into the 'long-running series' and just end up running out of things for their MC to do apart from meet new women and have sex, which can get fairly tiresome.


Book 2 of the after-skirmish is on it's way to being done and all members of this group are entitled to review/beta read copy.

Thanks Aedan!

So far I've only released books in the After-Skirmish series which are post apocalyptic with harem elements. The next book is going to be in the series and I should have that out soon.

But going forward I have made a start on a Steampunk Pirate book, a Cybperunk Thriller and a Psychological Horror. They will all involve sexual content but I'm thinking of expanding a lot before returning to the post apocalypse.

Are there any other genres or settings you want to see more of in erotic fiction?

DJay wrote: "C.W. wrote: "Hey fellas! Good to see you both again.

I haven't been reading much because I'm working on the After-Skrimish Book 2 (Plenty more Sil!) but maybe you guys can give me some recommends ..."

Oh yeah The No-Zone! It's a very short read at only 81 pages and it's made up of 3 short stories. I think you and wolf will really like it. Plus I want you both all caught up for when I send you an ARC of the next in the series :)

And I would totally read that blog Deej.

Hey fellas! Good to see you both again.

I haven't been reading much because I'm working on the After-Skrimish Book 2 (Plenty more Sil!) but maybe you guys can give me some recommends to read?

I don't suppose anyone here has read Conquer by Aron Stone?

My Post Apocalyptic Harem novel is finally finished and is going through the final edits. I'm uploading a couple chapters over time onto 'Royal Road' if you could follow the book there and leave some feedback that'd be great!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/260...

Hello guys, I know I don't post here a lot but that's mainly because I've been working on my Debut Book! It's a Post-Apocalyptic Harem adventure, and if anyone can find time in their busy reading schedule I'd be happy to send you some of the first few chapters to Beta-Read!

It's sort of insulting. it preys on the 'stereotype' of loser nerds who want female attention but can't get it. So the place this pathetic person at the center of a harem so it plays upon the fantasy of the supposed readers.

i.e. "If this loser can get 6 elven demon women to want him, I can too!"

My harem novel is nearly finished by the way!

Steven wrote: "No they remain very schlockey and very tongue in cheek with lots of in jokes for someone familiar with trash '80s pop culture. Not a bad read, but not something that I would put at the top of my re..."

forced humor AND 80s popculture? Sounds very ready player one to me!

Steven wrote: "I have enjoyed the Arena series by Logan Jacobs so far. And I have enjoyed the Stavin Dragonblessed series by Loren K. Jones. I am a huge David Weber and L. E. Modesitt Jr. fan."

Are the Arena Books all fairly tongue in cheek or do they become more serious?

Steven wrote: "I have read the first three books in the Succubus Lord series and they have been ridiculously silly. The last book I ended up skimming a bit, so I am not sure if I am going to pick up book #4 just ..."

The cover art is so good it keeps making me want to try them, but I'm almost certain I'd be dissapointed.

I would encourage you to read 'Without Law' by Eric Vall, only because it's so awful it's kind of fascinating. It could be re-realeased as a 'how to to write a harem' and I'd buy it.

Steven wrote: "I have read one book by Misty Vixen, the Sex & Survival: The Complete Trilogy - A Post-Apocalyptic Erotica. I found the writing to be meh, and most of the sexual situations not really to my liking...."

Have you read all of the Eric Vall books? Me and wolfgar were discussing the lack of quality outside of the summoner series.

Wolfgarr wrote: "DJay wrote: "Wolfgarr wrote: "Currently reading.. 2 different series.
Hellcats: The Complete Trilogy (This is frankly a pure sex fantasy in a science fiction setting. 95% sex 5% story..It is hones..."

Can i ask what you think of the sequels (book 2 and 3?)

Just a heads up. Mike Truk is really showing some chops with this new book.

Wild Wastes is still my favourite Harem (psuedo Gamelit) book. It was the literal reason why I got Kindle Unlimited and its the source of inspiration for the book I'm writing now. Even people who despise Harems consider Wild Wastes to be high quality.

It's almost a perfect Harem. Interesting female characters, well written sex and action scenes and a very versatile world to build adventure from.

However the following books (2 and 3) are just ridiculous. The main character goes from 3 well established 'wives' to dozens and dozens and dozens where you cant remember anyones fucking name. And they are just birthing machines for his endless amount of children. It took a grounded power fantasy and just made it unbearable.

I have a strong feeling that Randi didn't actually want to write sequels, but just did so anyway because of how ridiculously popular the first book was.


Thoughts?

Wolfgarr wrote: "So every once in a while i come across a book description that just makes me laugh my ass off. Here is a example of what i mean.

From Good intentions by Elliott Kay

"WARNING: “Good Intentions” c..."
I remember this one!

I think someone did a harem book descripition that was in a Donald Trump impression, I'll try and find it.