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After reading this cynical and dark story I need to go find something light, fun and easy to read just so I can wash this book out of my brain. Don't waste your time. Read something better
It somewhat brought back a back flash of the pressure of selling girls scout cookies.


Do you think this type of abuse is more/less tolerated in today's society?


First, after "digesting" it for several days, I still can't figure out what the author's point was. Was he just trying to show that some people are cruel for cruelty's sake? He didn't seem to have a message, other than "mean people stink", which seems pretty obvious (do we really need a book to tell us that?) I can't decide which characters he was condemning and which he was condoning. Although Archie was clearly evil, he never got any come-uppance and was universally considered to be a brilliant, even admired person. I understand that the author wanted to comment on the horrible things the human mind is capable of, but I just didn't see a clearly defined position on right vs. wrong, human nature, or anything else. What I got out of reading this book is "boy, the world sure is a junky place" but certainly no new insight.
Secondly, what's with all the crass talk about womens' bodies and what young men do behind closed doors? It just bugged me. It's a pet peeve of mine when people try to throw in random things they think will shock people, just to try to be "gritty and real." It just seemed so overboard with the foul references. I guess I don't see that as "real" - maybe I'm naive, though. Do teenage boys really act like that? I never was one, but I like to think that most don't. And at any rate, it certainly didn't add anything useful to the story.
I can't say I really liked this book. The concept had potential, but I've seen the same idea carried out much more effectively in other books - Lord of the Flies, for example, or The Wave. I guess I would have liked it better if Jerry had ANY point at all in not selling the chocolates, or even if he could have identified any possible reason that he didn't want to. How can you have a hero that is motivated by nothing more than "uh, I just don't wanna." Not very inspiring.
Well, sorry for the long post. I'm overly opinionated, I know. :)

Although I found parts of the novel to have been brilliantly conceived - particularly the idea that something as banal as chocolate could be the cause of so much violence - the whole thing just didn't come together for me. I wanted to go away with some new insight or having been changed in some way. That just didn't happen.




I whole heartedly agree with Jen and Alisonwonderland's posts. Countless times I asked myself "what's the point?" I didn't feel like the author did a very good job of articulating that. I also felt like the book just ended and while I was glad to be finished, it kind of left me thinking "what? that's it?".
Not a favorite, I wouldn't recommend it. I think the author could've taken this topic and made and great story and instead it's just blah.



I totally agree, Zen (though I haven't read "Stargirl" yet), but I thought the "Chocolate War" was brilliant and I actually gave it five stars. I read it through so quickly, it really engrossed me.
The idea of conformity and what peer pressure can do to people frightens me immensely and the book left me with that feeling of how dangerous it can be when people stand up and don't conform (even when they don't know why they're doing it as Jerry seemed to, at least in the beginning). I also found it very realistic what the bullying did to The Goober, who didn't seem to be able to cope at all with what was going on.
But I think what I got from "Chocolate War" was this sense (once again) of how dangerous power is, especially when it's condoned from up high (i.e. Archie and The Vigils' actions condoned by Brother Leon).It actually made me angry because you can see it all around you and, thus, I found the book quite realistic (or as Zen says, a great social commentary).
Also, perhaps the book didn't speak to many people because it was published some thirty years ago, and the ideas (conformity, peer pressure, corruption, power) have been picked up again and again since then? Just a thought.
I didn't find the level of profanity too bad, and I normally don't like any swearing; some scenes were, of course, a bit gross and I would definitely think about who I'd recommend the book too (I can totally see why the book would have been banned thirty years ago - though these days it's probably not that big a deal anymore).
Sorry for the long post - hope I didn't ramble too much. :)

On the other hand, however, for reasons I can't fully explain, I thought the book was a bit boring.




I just finished the book. I found it was a fast read! I didn't dislike it like a lot of other people. I was disappointed in the ending. I REALLY didn't like not knowing about what happened to people. What happened to the school? What happened to Jerry? Too many questions we were left with.
I felt like I kept waiting for the school to rally behind Jerry. Only ONE person, Goober, was on his side? And none of the other teachers noticed or chose to do anything about the Vigils? That was one of the things that bothered me about the book was that the WHOLE school seemed to be in on being evil.
So other than not knowing what happened to people I really enjoyed the book. I did think sometimes it bounced between characters in the same chapter too many times. But otherwise I could've read it in one day had I not been out of town, I myself couldn't put it down!
I felt like I kept waiting for the school to rally behind Jerry. Only ONE person, Goober, was on his side? And none of the other teachers noticed or chose to do anything about the Vigils? That was one of the things that bothered me about the book was that the WHOLE school seemed to be in on being evil.
So other than not knowing what happened to people I really enjoyed the book. I did think sometimes it bounced between characters in the same chapter too many times. But otherwise I could've read it in one day had I not been out of town, I myself couldn't put it down!

Hi Angie,
actually, not knowing what happened to the school or people bothered me a bit too. However, I've since found out that there is a sequel Beyond the Chocolate War, which I've been meaning to read for some weeks now (still haven't touched it but really want to pick it up now :) ).
I didn't so much mind that the entire school was "against" Jerry, I thought it was quite a powerful way of showing how extensive the abuse of power and control can be and what extremes it can reach. To me it was all encapsulated in the substitute headmaster's exercise of power/control (what was his name again? Brother Leon?) and his ultimate failure as a role model in any sense.

I know how you feel about throwing books against walls. One book I read, the whole book was horrible, then things started getting better. Then, the worst thing in the world happened, and on the last page, the main character says she's going to kill everyone. ??What the heck?? I threw the book on the ground, and stomped on it. :)
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