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message 1: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Rule 1) One entry per person per contest

Rule 2)
A. Please only enter your own work.
B. As long as you wrote it I don't care when you wrote, if it has to do with the theme of the contest enter it.
C. I don't care what it is, whether it be a poem, a short story, a chapter of a book your writing, a verse of a poem, a song, or whatever. Again as long as you wrote/made it please by all means enter it.

Rule 3) Nothing too sexually graphic. Please be considerate to our younger members.

Rule 4) When voting time comes around NO VOTING FOR YOU OWN WORK. That is kind of like... cheating.

And the Final Rule (For now) Please Name your work. Only so when voting time comes I have something to call it when I write up the poll. Thank you and the best of luck to you all!

*NOTE*
When it comes to themes it is whatever the theme makes you think of. Like angels make some people think of hope while others think of God, and others just good people. I personally always think of Armageddon... dunno why...

One million people equals a million ways to see the world.


message 2: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Who even choose wind anyway? I think I need a new system for this...


message 3: by Nate (new)

Nate yep, its called you're the mod you pick the topic. jk


message 4: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
But I don't wanna!!


message 5: by Nate (new)

Nate that's your prerogative too.


message 6: by Nate (new)

Nate its October why not something with blood and gore? Creepy or haunting? idk, wind could work.


message 7: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Hmmm... Fine....

Or new theme is... Genocide.


message 8: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (last edited Oct 03, 2012 06:32PM) (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Seriously Brandon? Its just an Idea? The inspiration can come from anywhere... though I understand perfectly. Somethings I just can't write about. But remember they are meant to be fun...my 'genocide' thing is going to be about, Christianity...


message 9: by Nate (new)

Nate Richard wrote: "Hmmm... Fine....

Or new theme is... Genocide."


lol Yeah I got that word confused with genuflect once..while in church.

Mass murder, church - get it? ...well it was funny when it happened!


message 10: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
@Brandon
I completely understand.


@Nate
Awesome.


message 11: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Quiet Movie’s on

We warriors start our march
Our king has decreed
The Holy cities shall be saved
Purged of the filth
That lies within
Unbelievers living in sin

Months we march
And stomp across
Vast oceans of sand
The first city
In our sights
We listen to
The man of god
As he tells us what to do

“Do not worry,” He says,
“About killing these
Creatures and their spawn.
It is God’s will
That these heathens
All die.
Now as instruments
Of the lord our God
Strike down these demons
And take back
The Holy cities.”

God by our side
We scale the walls
We ram the doors
We invade the city
The demon soldiers
Die by our holy blades

The city is ours
But the carnage doesn’t end
We keep killing
Even after they surrender
People dying in masses
Women and children
We slaughter
Our swords
Cut them down
All the same

It is then I realize
We are not
Doing God’s will at all
This genocide…
The sweet whisper
Of the devil


message 12: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Come one people... Genocide!


message 13: by Nate (new)

Nate I think its a bust. Don't feel bad, writing groups are hard to keep alive.


message 14: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
I won't give up... yet.


message 15: by Munia (new)

Munia Poem Title : "Halloween I Am"

Hello! This is the last night of October speaking

Ghoulish costumes and Jack-O -Lantern is what I’m seeking

Hobgoblins, ghosts, witches all are freaky freaking

I parade around the neighbourhood when kids are tricking

Trick or treating, bob for apples anything will do

Beg for soul-cakes when skeletons say–“BOO”!

Instead of turnips the perfect pumpkin carved

Candy Factory, Creepy Cupcakes: are you all starved?

Black cats drink water breaking superstitious dam

So,Beware!Spooky grim night Halloween I am!


Munia Khan©2012


message 16: by . (last edited Oct 29, 2012 08:01PM) (new)

. | 10 comments Do You Hear Um…

Do you hear um
hear the thump thump thump n
Do you hear um
hear the drum drum drum n

A faint pounding pulse in the ear
so low you’re not sure if it’s real
but you’re starting to fill with fear
your body starts to buckle
an overwhelming need to kneel

Can you feel their beat
as they’re come n down the street
Can you feel their beat
feel the weight of their deceit
Can you feel their beat
feel it burn with white hot heat

Driving you slowly forward
an urge that just won’t be denied
a movement that’s not quite there
something so subtle but catches the eye
is this just a trick, an illusion of the mind
on this you decide, truth of it too much to bear

Do you see um
see the evil that’s before you
Do you see um
see the darkness that is coming into view

Such a distance between you
close enough to touch in the next
shadows prodding, poking, nudging
the cold and emptiness take hold
there’s no turning back now
no, it’s too late for that
once you see them
they’ve already taken you.

~Cristy Quinn


message 17: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
four more hours...


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