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Kate aka Katniss marie swan (Kate95991) | 6 comments What are your ideas on what she could of done insted of sparkling


I think ther eyes could change into there human eye color


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Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I think they should have made it so their eyes can look like fire.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
.......i dont think the sparkely bit is whats wrong. whats wrong is the rediculous part how she was actin just cause ed left her!!! gosh!!!! what was she thinking?!!??! she has a life without ed too!!


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Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Indeed! That doesn't seem entirely believable!


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
and also kiuristen stewwart should be mad einto a stew


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Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
lol..


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Daniel McMillan (nerdtek) | 27 comments Coolkidrox123 ☯ The Shadow ☯ wrote: "and also kiuristen stewwart should be mad einto a stew"

lol!


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
XD


message 11: by Blood Bone and Muscle (last edited Apr 26, 2013 10:09PM) (new)

Blood Bone and Muscle I think a wash of automatic want, like how the borders of Hogwarts make you believe you've missed an appointment or that you should be somewhere. This want would simply be a spark of greed which makes no sense with the human presence (but whatever). The waves makes you need to walk over and steal whatever is there because it is your deepest, tantrumming desire to have it. What is there is a person, which, when a few feet away, you lose your thoughts to confusion upon; wondering why you took the time to walk up there in the first place.

It's giving the humans a feeling akin to vampire thirst, thus making it ironic.

This is great for a hungry vampire but not great for a hungry vampire standing out in the middle of the street in broad daylight, being mobbed by every individual ten miles radius, all wanting something.

You can't take them all and they can't all see you.


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Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Blood Bone and Muscle wrote: "I think a wash of automatic want, like how the borders of Hogwarts make you believe you've missed an appointment or that you should be somewhere. This want would simply be a spark of greed which ma..."

That's a rather interesting theory, you've got there, BBAM.


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