Under The Sun Every Day Just Comes & Goes discussion
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Please be sure to read the warning before you read the poem. Thanks. :Phttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
It's called holidays.
Poem Title: “Untitled Verse”Incomparable wound weeps through a parable
Barrenness I bear into the unbearable
I read the pale sadness from the unreadable
My mind starts breeding from the bare unbreedable
Spirit sails into the rare unavailable
My sanity's raid on the unassailable
It’s my broken sore mending the unbreakable
A deep shaken hollow from the unshakeable
Munia Khan©2012
Nothing Left Of MeLiving in a world of lies
Addicted to the way we crash
But it’s all about the flames
Too bad they never last
Our time is escaping
Nothing left but a grain of sand
We’re such a stunning disaster
Everything moving, faster and faster
Lost in the darkness
Oxygen is running out
I cannot breathe, not even shout
The world is spinning, closing in and turning black
Living in a world of lies
Addicted to the way we crash
But it’s all about the flames
Too bad they never last
Grasping for some control
It’s all too much to bear
Tearing at the seams
How can this be fair
All that you are, every single inch
My soul is crying out
Devoured while aroused
Go ahead destroy me, just a little more
Dying in a world of lies
Addicted to the way we crashed
But it was all about the flames
Sad they couldn’t last
There’s nothing left to say
Cuz there’s nothing left of me
Watching you walk away
It was the end of me
Richard wrote: "Mine: You Belong to Me
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."
I liked Mine better. The whole "I am yours-this I swear, You are mine-I Won't share" Awesome line.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."
I liked Mine better. The whole "I am yours-this I swear, You are mine-I Won't share" Awesome line.
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Thank you Brandon for your kindest words.And I agree with "Champion" Richard's 'Mine' lines are awesome.
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So are you still going to have competitions after this one?
@Nate
Hmm?
@Oxy
Well I figured new group new rules.
Hmm?
@Oxy
Well I figured new group new rules.
Champ nvr mind..I misread Richard's post. I thought he said would. *head Desk*
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Well... new group does lead to new rules... but this isn't just any new group. It is the combo of Wheels and Spiral. And Spiral came with competitions.
@Oxy
Are you going to change the name to Under the sun or leave it with Spiral Architect?
Are you going to change the name to Under the sun or leave it with Spiral Architect?
I don't think I have anything worth entering.
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Sure you do...
@Boss
Blah!
@Champ
I'll change it... next month.
that seems to be your theme tonight Richar
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I was just bustin on you. (Pay back from when I didn't post the poll in WOTW) ...though you have 2 other mods that could have done it. tsk tsk slackers the lot of you.
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Rule 2)
A. Please only enter your own work.
B. As long as you wrote it I don't care when you wrote, if it has to do with the theme of the contest enter it.
C. I don't care what it is, whether it be a poem, a short story, a chapter of a book your writing, a verse of a poem, a song, or whatever. Again as long as you wrote/made it please by all means enter it.
Rule 3) Nothing too sexually graphic. Please be considerate to our younger members.
Rule 4) When voting time comes around NO VOTING FOR YOU OWN WORK. That is kind of like... cheating.
And the Final Rule (For now) Please Name your work. Only so when voting time comes I have something to call it when I write up the poll. Thank you and the best of luck to you all!
*NOTE*
When it comes to themes it is whatever the theme makes you think of. Like angels make some people think of hope while others think of God, and others just good people. I personally always think of Armageddon... dunno why...
One million people equals a million ways to see the world.
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Due to my hatred for the holidays I decided there will be no theme this month. Post what ever the hell you want.