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THIS IS AN ORIGINAL NOVEL. :)

One...two...three...four...
I can’t breath. My hair swirls around my face, it’s green: like seaweed.
...five..six...seven...
It’s so cold, it hurts. And it’s misty. I can’t see.
...eight...nine...
Oh my God. I can’t breath. Help me. Oh my God: help me! Someone! I can’t breath. I can’t...
...ten.

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