song writers group..... thing!!!!! discussion
post your songs i wanna read them
COOL!MY SONG
heelo there
cant you see me
i am standing right next to you
what is that
are you drinking
but your only 16
chorus:
y cant u be normal
be normal
tell me wats rong
y cant u see wats
happening!
just get out b4 u get told off
by mum
soz that was gay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'll post my song "Scream Out Loud" later when i am more awake. even coffee isn't helping right now!
i have one but it kinda sounds like a poem though
uh... no here i will show u now ok?
ok here goes:We live and we die every day and night,
We also have a friend, who's embrace is so tight.
His name is Fear,his days never complete,
Clouds surround him,bringing rain snow and sleet.
We cower and cry when he knocks at our door,
He brings Hell with him compainons forever more.
Well that's all i got so far. how do u like it?
i think its really good. nice work. lol i am writing alot right now. i am like trying to finish them all its kinda hard though but it feels good. i think i might finish this summer though.lol
kool. i may have more in a few days from now ok?
awesome! keep me posted.lol
it looks really good.
goodluck
it looks really good.
goodluck
thx i will keep ya posted. oh by the way i added u as a friend. is that ok?
Ill post my songs and a poem....
Your The Reason by: Arvind H.
In a world i depend, in a way i don't descend. For all that you've done to me, i don't even know if i care.......But-i-do-i-don't-stop-thinking-about-you. I don't know if i don't care but if you know who i am. I'm lost, i lose, I'm never gonna give up on you. Because your the only one for me, the only one in my heart....the whole in my heart doesn't matter any more, as long as I'm with you. i don't ever think of anything else only you.
you the reason I'm doing good in school, your the reason I'm not dead, your the reason that i don't hate my life and haven't run away! i don't even stop thinking of you, what can i do to cheer you up, what can i do to make you feel better i don't know. you haven't seen me in the real world. No don't stop i don't want you to leave your the only one for me........
Mile Long By: Arvind H.
For all that you know, i could be there, right in front of your door. I don't know you anymore. just life is ready to handle me. i cant breathe, cant see, cant be who i want to be with, cant be with you, can see your face, your pretty face, cant breathe next to you smelling like cinnamon. with you i cant see but i know were I'm going. with you i cant breathe but I'm still alive, miracle. With out you I'd die off, like a dead man in space with no helmet for air.
Don't stop were you are keep on walking, the mile's not over yet. but we will finish together. i don't Care if the reservations are dead i don't care if my flowers die or even if the chocolate goes bad, as long as I'm with you, ill live. with or without i cant stand it. oh oh i cant stand it. go off have a good time, just be safe and don't fall down..again
back to top
In a world i depend, in a way i don't descend. For all that you've done to me, i don't even know if i care.......But-i-do-i-don't-stop-thinking-about-you. I don't know if i don't care but if you know who i am. I'm lost, i lose, I'm never gonna give up on you. Because your the only one for me, the only one in my heart....the whole in my heart doesn't matter any more, as long as I'm with you. i don't ever think of anything else only you.
you the reason I'm doing good in school, your the reason I'm not dead, your the reason that i don't hate my life and haven't run away! i don't even stop thinking of you, what can i do to cheer you up, what can i do to make you feel better i don't know. you haven't seen me in the real world. No don't stop i don't want you to leave your the only one for me........
Mile Long By: Arvind H.
For all that you know, i could be there, right in front of your door. I don't know you anymore. just life is ready to handle me. i cant breathe, cant see, cant be who i want to be with, cant be with you, can see your face, your pretty face, cant breathe next to you smelling like cinnamon. with you i cant see but i know were I'm going. with you i cant breathe but I'm still alive, miracle. With out you I'd die off, like a dead man in space with no helmet for air.
Don't stop were you are keep on walking, the mile's not over yet. but we will finish together. i don't Care if the reservations are dead i don't care if my flowers die or even if the chocolate goes bad, as long as I'm with you, ill live. with or without i cant stand it. oh oh i cant stand it. go off have a good time, just be safe and don't fall down..again
back to top
For all that you see
Is just an illusion
For all that you mind
Is just your delusion
But for me i cant see
For you beauty blinded me
I cannot see your face
Oh, your beautiful face,
From love to death
Is all i need
Then i wake up, starting with a frown,
I say to myself
"WHERE ARE YOU!??!"
Is just an illusion
For all that you mind
Is just your delusion
But for me i cant see
For you beauty blinded me
I cannot see your face
Oh, your beautiful face,
From love to death
Is all i need
Then i wake up, starting with a frown,
I say to myself
"WHERE ARE YOU!??!"
im soooooo bored.....AHHHHH PENNYWISE
*hides in the corner* CLOWNS SCARE ME....."NO CLOWNS NO CLOWNS NO CLOWNS NO CLOWN NO" AHHHHHHH.....:*{
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NU UH.....THE LIVE IN THE DRAINS OF OUR SHOWERS AND HAVE BALLOONS SO IF YOU POP THEM A PERSONS HEAD WILL ROLL OUT *CURLS UP IN A CORNER*.....AHHHHH NNNNNNNIIIIIICCCCCCKKKKKKK
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........sorry i always worry people but........AHHHHHHHHHH CLOWN......SAVE ME
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um hwuasfyhqwukdhwoudhuja wtf is that
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o ok.......like this khflhfkluyxktdfgchtraaegdstj65i9750887sxx
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here's my song, it's not really good, Title-I Know
I know you see me, standing there,
but can't you look for a moment, please.
I know that you know i exist,
but can't you do this?
Catch when I'm falling,
Don't let me fall to the ground.
I need you to catch me so that i won't fall all the way.
be by my side when I'm down, okay?
can't you even think straight for a moment?
But I'm asking even though
I know so.....
I know, that you know I'm there,
standing in the rain.
And I know, that you don't belong over there,
Cuz I know.
And I know all about you,
Cuz I know.
And I know when you're down,
Cuz i know.
So,
Catch me when I'm falling,
So so I don't hit the ground
I need you more than you need me,
how do i know?
because i know......
THIEFWhat did I do
It won't matter now
Cause you already left
And forgot to leave my heart
CHORUS:
Oh you little thief
Stealing out hearts
It didn't matter anyway
Mine was already scarred
Take what you want
Break me to pieces
It can't be that bad
It can't be worse
*CHORUS*
Scarred
Already
Scarred
Already
*CHORUS*
*gets dark*
What did I do
Do
What did I do
Do
What did I do'
Do
My heart is gone!
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B-A-N-A-N-A-S
lolz cuz of dat song im able to spell bananas
lolz that song is how i learned how to spell bananas and when i forget how to spell is i just ding that song in my head... lolz
hey guys i ahve a song. it is still in progress but i think it is finished. wanna hear it?
allrighty then here goes:We're born into this world careless and free,
But one fear is one we cannto see.
It sits at our side every day and night,
Your friend, neighbor,or anybody in sight.
It consums us when we bicker and fight,
Ripping, killing, and destroying has it's own plight.
It's reign of terror on us is so tight,
Our level of fear shoots up to a new height.
The path it creats is only one way,
We follow it both left&right sides all in one day.
But we follow one path the most,
Just like a car who travels the coast.
The left side of oblivion it is apply named,
Come one, come all, i'll tell of it's devious fame.
We walk on it every day like it is part of our moral being,
It's like second nature to such as walking and breathing.
'Tis true we ocassionaly decide to wonder astray,
But everyday worries sends us back on our way.
People also walk on the rightof it or seldom if all,
They've finally conceived that it would lead to their downfall.
This road we take has many exits along the way,
Death,Despair,&Darkness many of which we cannot say.
When it's time to decide the way, remember what i've said,
Either way you or I go, we will still wind up dead.
So, how so u like it?
I went through a period of writing really out there but ultimately annoying and shallow songs. Here are the lyrics to the most interesting one/ It is called "Noam Chomsky doesn't think very much of me"I'll arise into the sky
her skin is magic, but it'll be dust
in a few years, it'll all be dust
her flesh is magic, but it'll be dust and i'll be dust
and we'll all be dust
but theres just one small tiny flaw to your plan
what about the semen sample
that the cops will find
all across her windshield?
how do you explain that?
there's no way to explain that?
It's getting dark outside
so i'd better draw the curtains
or someones gonna come and rape me
with a length of pipe
with a length of drainage pipe
oh, who would wish that upon me?
could it be my wife? could it be my drainage wife?
she's still alive, after all these years
she's still alive, after numerous letters of complaint
she's still alive, after extended campaigns against the city council
she persists in being alive,
and does she not have anything drier, just a little drier
than a chardonnay?
does she have nothing drier, or a little piece of wire or a chardonnay?
and does she-
Noam Chomsky
doesn't think very much of me
no he doen't think much of people like me
who only use his name
to appear more intelligent
and use it in contexts
where it is completely
irrellevant.
I wouldn't wish that upon anyone,
so why'd you wish it on me?
why'd you wish it on me?
Greer *music is my lifeforce, and so are people* wrote: "wow thats good"It's unbelievably stupid. But thanks anyway. I have a myspace at www.myspace.com/screenburn if anyone's interested.
This is in progress!!!but in progress only!!!
Racing!
In the moonlight!
Racing!
In the sunlight!
Racing!
In the light of the day (ay-ay-ay)
The chariots have left,
the horses have thundered
the horses have thundered
through!
chorus and some of the first verse!
Yanky Doodle went to town riding on a rocket got his head stuck in the door and die of dehidration...
Joshua wrote: "Yanky Doodle went to town riding on a rocket got his head stuck in the door and die of dehidration..."
^^ funny
Millions of thoughts raced through
my head as you gently told me I
love you, cant get away from all
the things that you said to me, my
heart started beating way to fast you
made me forget everything in my
past, my heart is happy with the
joy of love now this is all I have to
say
lately I cant get you off my mind and
I want it to stay that way days go by
and I cant think of anyone but you,
keep me close keep me by your side
don’t let me slip away, tell me its alright
when I cant be alone and need someone
to be with, say it always don’t let me go
away
always and forever that’s what you said
I know that you meant it too,
let me know what what’s on your mind
be completely honest don’t stay away
don’t hold back anything from me, im
ready to listen to whatever you have to
say to me
lately I cant get you off my mind and
I want it to stay that way days go by
and I cant think of anyone but you,
keep me close keep me by your side
don’t let me slip away, tell me its alright
when I cant be alone and need someone
to be with, say it always don’t let me go
away
you always know what to say, you can
take my breath away, captured my heart
don’t let it go, I wanna be there with you
always, I cant fall in love with anyone
else but you, I know its true, that I love you
too always know im thinking of you.