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Need a Beta Reader for my erotic, romantic thriller.
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I have already had a couple of people read my novel. I'm now just tentatively putting my book out there to a handful of agents.
I appreciate your offer.
Many thanks,
Jaimie.



Let me know if you're interested ok? Anyone else reading this now, could also email me if they would like to beta read my short story please. thanks. email: PSOlivier@gmail.com




I do. I'm actually having two promo days tomorrow and Saturday, so you can pick it up for free. Here is the link:-
http://www.amazon.com/Take-Breath-1-e...
I hope you enjoy it!

I hope you enjoy. ;-)
Ana Kavanagh has not led the most ordinary life. From a child she was placed from one home to another as her mother went through men like some women went through chocolate. Now at the age of 22 she has completed her Bachelor’s degree in Criminal Justice, has a fantastic job as a Crime Analyst and lives and works with a man called Jake Bennett that she cannot shake out of her head no matter how hard she tries. This man has been her obsession since the first day they met, but there is only one major obstacle standing in her way. He’s getting married to her mother.
When her mother Stella decides to suddenly flee once more Ana and Jake are left with his 16 year old son Matthew to try to carry on with life as normal, but an unexpected turn of events pushes them both closer together creating the most intense mind-blowing relationship any of them have ever encountered. The chemistry between them is electric and Jake’s caveman tendencies have Ana both irritated and turned on all at the same time. Unfortunately for them all is not perfect in the Bennett household when a serial killer on the loose seems to have an unhealthy obsession towards Ana. Jake being Captain of Fairfax Country tries his best to keep Ana safe and protected from harm whilst Ana desperately tries to keep a dark skeleton hidden in her closet from leaking out to the ones she loves. Things get worse when Ana discovers a note on her pillow from the killer and the events that unfold from this point on threatens to tear apart their relationship forever.
What do you think?
Many thanks,
Jaimie.