For right now, I'm just looking for some feedback on the first 3 chapters (maybe 4) for an idea of how the story is going. I'm not looking for grammar critiques or anything on a large scale, just a simple focus on characters (likable or not), dialogue, and story progression. Basically, all I need is to know if I'm on the right track.
For right now, I'm just looking for some feedback on the first 3 chapters (maybe 4) for an idea of how the story is going. I'm not looking for grammar critiques or anything on a large scale, just a simple focus on characters (likable or not), dialogue, and story progression. Basically, all I need is to know if I'm on the right track.
Let me know if you're interested.