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Claire
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May 13, 2013 04:13PM
I can feel it. My life is at risk. These people chasing me, they feel... Bad. I don't know why they want me... Can't everyone
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((Sorry! Pressed the wrong button :/)) feel things like me? Why else would they want me? I hope they don't think I'll do anything for them, though. I made a promise to my mama that I'd never, ever, ever use my feelings to do anything for anybody. She made me pinkie promise and everything, but I think that eight years old is too old for pinkie promises anyway.Mama says that feeling things is different, but I don't think so. She's just jealous that she doesn't feel anything anymore. Not after papa went away. Now she doesn't even feel me give her hugs...
I hope these men don't hurt mama. I don't care if they hurt me... Just not mama. She's been hurt enough.
Chloe :D smiley face! wrote: "PS. Liane and Anastasia, if you were about to start a new contest, go ahead. We can have 2 or 3 going on at the same time."Actually, it's fine. It probably wouldn't have been done otherwise. :)
Chloe :D smiley face! wrote: "So... I'm taking a little liberty as the owner of this group and starting a new contest. Winner gets bragging rights and gets to pick the next topic as before. A boy is being chased... what is ch..."
Also, I hope you don't mind, Chloe, that I extended the deadline, just so people could have more time to enter. :)
Yeah it is interesting,Claire. : )I ran for my life.I could hear their footsteps coming closer.Now you might be wondering who am I and who's they?I am Trein.I'm 14 years old.I have special powers.I can transform into anything,and turn invisible.Apparently the people behind me are people who take away magic power.I ducked into an alley and out of nowhere a hand held my shirt,and pulled me back.I turned.I was in a room with a girl.She had long black hair and blue eyes.She was beautiful.To distract myself,I looked at the surroundings.There was 6 beds,6 tables,4 light bulbs,and a closet.
(I'll continue it later.)
Chloe :D smiley face! wrote: "@Claire It's interesting"Thanks :) (I think) Also thanks (I think) to Alex :)
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Cassie 'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood
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wow that was really good meiyu!! maybe you could write more and put it under your thing.
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Cassie 'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood
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:) yeah, you should!!
Jared ran like a bullet through the crowd on Chicago's Michigan Avenue. He collided with people and sent shopping bags flying in all directions, shouting apologies over his shoulder. His labored breath came in white puffs, and the icy wind stung his hot cheeks. Demons were chasing him, the demons of his incompetence, the way he could never finish what he started, his stupidity, and his biggest fear: having nothing left to care about.
Jared rounded a corner precariously and barely avoided knocking over an old lady walking her dog. He arrived at Union Station and burst through its glass doors, then he leaped down the steps two at a time, stumbling on the last one. He caught himself and rushed into the waiting area.
He saw a girl in a red jacket sitting patiently on a chair with a suitcase next to her, reading a magazine.
For a few infinite moments he could only stare at her, breathless and disheveled, then he said her name like a prayer. "Megs. MEGS!"
The girl lifted her curly brown head and a slow smile split her face a second before Jared gave her a bone-crushing hug.
She missed her train. Neither of them minded very much.
((Eh, I wrote that too quickly. Sorry if it doesn't make sense :P))
I'm so happy all these people are entering.Oh, Samantha; that was lovely. I grinned at the end of it.
Your welcome,Claire!Nice stories everyone! :D
(Continuation)I looked back at the girl."Thanks for saving me.Who are you?"I asked."Your welcome.My name is Sarah."said Sarah."What are your abilities?"asked Sarah."I can transform into anything and turn invisible."I said."Mmm."said Sarah looking at me critically.Suddenly she began chanting some strange words.I began to glow with a purple light.Sarah gasped and stumbled backwards.I stopped glowing."What?What happened?Are you ok?"I asked worriedly."You-you-You're a Kaviser!"Sarah said."W-What's a Kaviser?"I asked.Sarah kept mumbling.I just caught pieces-power-not safe-discuss."We have to discuss this with Jerden."said Sarah."What are you talking about?Who's Jarden?"I asked.Sarah ignored me."close your eyes."She ordered."I'm gonna take us somewhere."I wanted to ask where,but I thought it best to be silent first.I closed me eyes.sarah chanted again.This time,I felt I pain in my stomach.I also felt as if i was being pulled somewhere."Open your eyes."Sarah ordered,after the feeling of pain subsided.when I opened them,I could not believe what I was seeing.
"Woah."I said.
(Cliffhanger!My story is bad.)
I'm gonna enter. I will post mine soon; this weekend hopefully because of my busy state exams.
Ok,Reader The Fish.Good luck in your exams! :DThanks,Meiyu! :D Yours too!
Alex wrote: "Ok,Reader The Fish.Good luck in your exams! :DThanks,Meiyu! :D Yours too!"
thanks ;)
Give me a couple more hours...I still need to edit mine the. Post it!
No I missed it... I've been sick this 2 whole days and needed to finish a science report. Oh well...I was looking forward to it, but hopefully next time.
Oh! Well dang. Thanks for judging and good job to everyone else, you guys are great writers.
Congrats!!!Awesome story. Short but full of emotion.
Chloe :D smiley face! wrote: "Samantha Anne wrote: "Jared ran like a bullet through the crowd on Chicago's Michigan Avenue. He collided with people and sent shopping bags flying in all directions, shouting apologies over his sh..."Chloe, I can't message you until you accept my friend request. What if I just make the contest myself?
