Questioning Society discussion

Do you like to write songs? SHare some of your works here, weither they be lyrics, videos, your music etc.

ok.... i will n a cpl min... i have to change classes

Hm... this is one of my better crap-tastic lyrics that I feel up to sharing ^^

Not Mine Yet

I stare at you
Waiting for you to say anything
But you just look away
Leaving me without anything more to say

Everything’s only okay
When you’re near me
I just wish that
You could end up next to me

I hate myself for loving you
I love myself for loving you
Why can’t things be different?
Everything’s so silent
When you’re not here I feel alone
It feels like my loneliness is written in stone
But when you’re around it’s hard to forget
That you’re not mine yet

I wish that you would just say something
I wish that you could teach me how to breathe
I wish that I could hear you speak
You know what words I want you to speak

But nothing’s okay
When you’re not near me
I only just wish that
You could end up next to me

I hate myself for loving you
I love myself for loving you
Why can’t things be different?
Everything’s so silent
When you’re not here I feel alone
It feels like my loneliness is written in stone
But when you’re around it’s hard to forget
That you’re not mine yet

Just don’t forget about me
Just don’t leave me, please

<3

here is a little of 1 of mine.... one of abt 8 sngs in the making.... and that was good

i walk in the shadows, beside you behind you
But... to you i am a shadow, we used to be so close, we used to talk and walk, practically hand in hand, and now look at us
i know when ur mom died, it hurt a lot, and the goverment wouldnt help to pay the cost of the funeral,... i know you dnt understand why it hurts so much,
but...
why do you blame me, and why do you HATE me for her death, i always have a plan, i planned your life from my throne in HEAVEN before your parents were even born, before their parents were born,..........

that was the most boring part of the song.... but i think it alrite

you know you guys can also add these into the poetry contest, cause they're really good!
maybe we should make a lyric contest...

go ahead, ive got more..... im n a band.... and i rite all the music... so... and thank u

Lyrics contest would be awesome! I could go through mine and find the best... How many could we enter, though? I have a lot of favorites x.x

Nice lyrics!

Thanks, assuming you were talking to me ^^

I was. well, I was talking to everybody. But I like yours.