Writing Passionates discussion

Okay, so its kinda like WAY complicated. sooo there's this world, and its in like the future . . . and its in the pov in this girl who knows this guy who is from the past (he can time travel, bcuz he has like . . . a time traveling device) and she wrote the book to warn ppl what would come in the future . . . so like the adults (all of them) took this drug that is "foolproof" that would make them like smarter and stuff and stronger bcuz who doesn't want that you know? then it has this side affect that makes them think they know answers to things but they are like wrong. so they figure that most of the crime in the world is from ppl in their teenage years, so basically they try to lock up/kill all the teens in the world.

uhhh . . . yah, it sucks.

*reads description three times until her slow brain comprehends the whole thing*
lol. mmkay i think it would be cool, but it would require a lot of explanation. no, i don't think it sounds too much like other books. sounds purty good. i would read it.

thanks . . . i think. its all REALLY confusing. its like every sci fi book i've ever read all in one . . .

rlly? haha what books are YOU reading?

well its like a lot of things incorporporated from like teen sci fi

like what?

well like there is some unwind in there, and like . . . other books. i guess you can't really tell when its written like that. in my head its like that though.

oh ookaay

yeah. and its actually MORE complicated than that. and there is all this random crap that i put in so it makes somewhat sense.

yay. i like crap.

lol. me too!

yeah i write a lot of it!! yay

omg we could be twins! (well not really at all . . . but w/e.)

i really need to plot out the story though . . .

O.o yeaahhh ... NO. lolz.

hmm yeah i need to do some outlining too. i tried it yesterday, and it was an epic fail. the only thing on the page is a stupid little stick-figure drawing of max with a psycho-looking face, plus i drew a picture of a pig and wrote 'THIS PAGE HAS BEEN INFECTED WITH SWINE FLU', and i wrote "EDGE EDGE EDGE" down the side of the page a bunch of times. yeah, i'm so productive.

:D Seth, I think it's okay. Don't know what you're worried about, but even though it does sound like the book Found.

I think it's a cool idea. But, just one thing. If she was a kid talking about the future/warning them, wouldn't most people not believe her/think she's crazy? Since no one believes in time machines?

@cali; is that by Margaret Peterson Haddix?

Seth wrote: "Okay, so its kinda like WAY complicated. sooo there's this world, and its in like the future . . . and its in the pov in this girl who knows this guy who is from the past (he can time travel, bcuz ..."

sounds a bit confusing, but still i think it would be good :D

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "O.o yeaahhh ... NO. lolz.

hmm yeah i need to do some outlining too. i tried it yesterday, and it was an epic fail. the only thing on the page is a stupid little stick-figure drawing of max with a ..."

LOL!!!!!! you're funny. heehee :D

omg sella is BACK!!!!

lol yeah Amy it is.

oh okay. :) I've read that book before.

ever watch Doctor Who
its on the BBC
yeahh lol sounds just like it a little bit
its a great show =]]

I think it sounds good but yeah there would have to be a lot of explaining because its so complicated but I would definitely read it:) let me know if you finish it:D

Yeah, watch Dr. Who on BBC America and be sure to make yr story waaay different.
:)

Seth wrote: "Okay, so its kinda like WAY complicated. sooo there's this world, and its in like the future . . . and its in the pov in this girl who knows this guy who is from the past (he can time travel, bcuz ..."

Dude the girl from future meets the guy from the past sounds a lot like my idea and the rest of it so un-original it's original!!