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message 1: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) | 25 comments I am writing a book and some people tell me it sounds too much like twiluight, others say it sounds only a little like twilight and some say it sounds nothing like twilight..... why does everyone think just because it is about vampires that its about twilight? what the crap?.. anywho i just wanted your comments on it.... thanks

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 2: by Amy (new)

Amy (kelairyy) | 137 comments I don't think it sounds like Twilight so far... I don't know why people think it does, since you haven't even really talked about vampires that much yet (besides the dreams).


message 3: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) | 25 comments Thanks.. it worried me...


message 4: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
yeah just cuz it's about vamps doesn't automatically mean it's like twilight. ppl just jump to conclusions sometimes ... :P


message 5: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) its not like twilight. People are just jump to conclusions sometimes :P


message 6: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) | 25 comments thank you vera much


message 7: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
Kyle wrote: "its not like twilight. People are just jump to conclusions sometimes :P"

that's exactly what i said ... ? lol


message 8: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
If it includes vampires, it is nothing like twilight. :D

Twilight doesn't have vampires. Just confused, blood-hungry mermaids.`


message 9: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
I love you Roni!!! :) Well I mean I like Twilight, but that was awesome. I don't think that they are real vamps either.

But anyway. I don't think it sounds like Twilight. Whenever something gets huge its hard for people not to make comparisons. Don't sweat it. If you keep on writing then it could be ten times better than Twilight :]


message 10: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) I really liked it and you write soooooooo much better than meyer. So don't worry!!!!


message 11: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Haha, seth, my friend was the one who first called them mermaids... and she also thinks that James is gay and loves Edward and is jealous of bella so that's why he tried to kill her. She also said that Bella is a necrophiliac. :)


message 12: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) | 25 comments Thank you vera much i feel soooooo much better ^^


message 13: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
Roni, tell your friend that I love them :)


message 14: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
LOL


message 15: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
GREAT. Well sorta. Hbu?


message 16: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) | 25 comments mine is pretty Good i dont think we've eva talked but chup ^^


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