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Renesmee's story after breaking dawn
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Moody
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Jun 21, 2009 07:54AM

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Christina♥ , ♥super duper lover of TWILIGHT and oh yeah Edward is mine!♥
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I'm only a month or tuwning two here in GR so I'm a bit unaware of what to and not to do.
No it's fine
I read your story and i thought it was really good. I am a bit of a grammer freak and i have to say there were many places where it was redundant, or things were mispelled or uncapitalized but other than that it was really good.
((sorry for the critizims i have OCD when it comes to grammer i always have to correct it, unless it is my own.))
I read your story and i thought it was really good. I am a bit of a grammer freak and i have to say there were many places where it was redundant, or things were mispelled or uncapitalized but other than that it was really good.
((sorry for the critizims i have OCD when it comes to grammer i always have to correct it, unless it is my own.))