Write, Wrote, Written discussion

I don't have any long writing logs to put down but when I am hit with inspiration I stow them away in my brain compartment. I guess i will start writing some of the done in here. Ummm...... I have never shared my writing before but let me know what you guys think. Here's something the hit me this morning when I was getting ready for summer school (Bleh!! Stupid trig regents!)

Dawn was an hour away and we had been marching all night though the biting wind and the razor red sand. Many of my brothers-in-arms have fallen over this voyage across the Red Sands to Morgania. Moagania the foulest place to live. The air there literally burns the lungs and only water there is the one that falls from the sky once a month. I have heard that long ago Morgania was the most beautiful place before The Destruction. Then Madzen came and conquered its lands and turned it into what i gaze upon before me. Slowly his evil will seeped into other lands and they began to decay from the inside out. The people touched by his evil became husks of what they once were. Ghoulish and twisted they fed on the magic of other lands and their inhabitants. Now only a hand full of nations remain and free to fight back.
I have stood guard duty for the past hour even though my feet are killing me and my body is exhausted, but who else will guard my fellow soldiers' backs other than me.......


That is as far as I got there. More to come maybe.

I lift my head with difficulty and stare in horror at the carnage before me. Bodies everywhere most dead but still I hear the moaning and last dying breaths of the few who still linger in life. Then like a candle being blown out the battle field goes silent. Drex! i think as terror flows down me like a river over stones. I have to find my friend. I gather my legs under me and with great difficulty get to my feet. One arm dangles uselessly at my side with blood dripping from a gash in my forearm. Blood drizzles down my head from another injury. I begin stumbling looking....searching for his familiar face and his gold hair.
Just when I feel on the verge of collapse I hear my name whispered. I turn and begin searching the fallen soldiers around and spy his gold hair and brilliant green eyes buried under others. I use what strength is left of me and run to his side. I push the dead off him and drag his to my lap.
"Drex! Drex! Where are you hurt?" I ask trying to keep his dulling eyes on me and searching his body.
"You can drop the act," he tells me. I freeze and stare at him in shock and horror. " Come on, Cal. Don't play stupid with me. We've been friends since we were eight and first put into the army." he rasps out. " You did a beautiful job hiding it but I always knew, Cal." I turn my face away from his gaze and see where his wound is and busy myself compressing it rather than look my best friend in the face and tell him what I truly am.
"Drex please save your energy then when you are better you can chew my ass out for keeping the fact I am a girl from you," I plead to him dropping my deep tone of masculinity. The blood from his wound fills the compress and mixes with the blood on my hands mine and the others I killed today.
"Cal look at me," Drex says before going into a coughing fit that ends with blood drizzling down his handsome features. "I know I am gonna die so tell me this.." More coughing and more blood come, "tell.....me... you real name."
Looking straight into his hypnotic dying eyes I brush back his hair "Calora," I say as tears course down my face and land on his checks.
He looks at my tears and brings a shaky hand to my face brushing away the tears. "That is a pretty name," he says brushing back my hair. "Calora" he whispers before the breath leaves his chest and the light in his eyes dies and his hand falls from my face. "Drex!" I say shaking him. "DREX!" I scream. "Drex..." I plead to his lifeless body. I sit there cradling his body with my one good arm and my one numb arm for ages wishing to die.
And my wish comes when I hear the scratchy voices of the Clandorg. I stay where I am too tired to get up too tired to care what they do to me. Hoping they will pass me but I guess I look to much alive to have that wish granted because next thing I know a taloned hand in in my hair pulling my away from Drex. I fight wishing for my blades, my bow, a rock! Anything to get these maggot infested hands off me. I struggle as best I can even when one of the croons come to make chit chat with me.
"Oh lookie here boys!" it hisses with glee. "A fresh one and still alive," it licks its lips grossly.
"Release me you swine of a whore's pus!" I snarl at it.
"Oh! And it a female! Oh His Lord will be most pleased and will have much fin with this one," he - I decided to call it a he says trailing a hand down my face. Right when his finger nears my mouth I lash out and clamp my jaws over his finger. He begins to howl like the sun is roasting his skin. I clamp down harder even as his black blood pores down my chin and into my mouth. With a gruetest snap I bite his finger off. The clandorg falls back howling his head off and clutching his now three fingered hand. I spit of the finger and blood then smile my most freakish smile. The clandorg pulls himself off the ground and slaps me across the face again and again until I spit out a mixture of his and my blood. "Gag her and bind her hands. This one is a fighter and a Gandion so keep your eye on her and hope she does come free while you sleep."
I try to push myself up but one of the other brutes pushes my down and follows out the orders. Just before Three Fingers disappears from my sight he says cruelly, "Better yet. Just beat her until she passes out and every time she comes back to conscious beat her again." With that he leaves and four big brutes descend upon my tied up form. I would love to say I lasted long and that these guys passed out before me but no I gave into the darkness about ten minutes into the beating.

This whole story will be about Calora but with gaps like earlier because I am just writing what hits be so I will probably go back and write in the blank spaces.

KitKat! Your amazing! I didn't know you could write like that! How come I've never seen any of your other stuff? *Pouty face*

Cause I am shy about my writings. Do you know how long it took me to ask my teachers and friends to read my zombie book I am writing? I took nearly half the year to work up the nerve which also allowed me to write two more chapters in it. I know have successfully written five chapters in it. (Which is the longest I have ever made it in a book I someday plan on finishing)

Lol! Well if its ever finished I will want to read it.

Kay ;P

This is really good! Keep going with it:) I am very excited to see how it resolves.

:[ Thxs!! I will keep working on it!

Is.... is your hair green??

Yup! And purple!! ;P ;P

I too have green hair. Very lovely. Very lovely.

Thxs!!! And Awesome!!!!! I loved having green hair but now I have blue and purple ombre!!!

I want to do ombre but I have no idea how to dye my hair like that..

I just kind of wing it and it turns out ok. But I have curly hair so that hides any mistakes.

I really liked your purple-ish hair, Sora.
I'm dying mine this color like next week:

Oh my. That's really a coincidence because I'll be dying my hair pink and blue like that soon too. I expect to resemble cotton candy.

Mixed girls all look like siblings tbh

It is funny cause my hair was suppose to be blue and pink but the dye leaked or something and my pink turned purple.

I love this so far! I wish I was allowed to dye my hair...