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(For now we can ignore Rule 3, since no one seems intrested so far!)
Sadly calling her friends wasn't an option. At this time of the year everyone was scrambled around the globe. At least she'd get a lot of postcards for her collection.
When Lisa reached the Street, she had to stop and stare for a moment. The street wasn't empty anymore, but something seemed to be wrong about the guy standing in front of her house now.
Sadly calling her friends wasn't an option. At this time of the year everyone was scrambled around the globe. At least she'd get a lot of postcards for her collection.
When Lisa reached the Street, she had to stop and stare for a moment. The street wasn't empty anymore, but something seemed to be wrong about the guy standing in front of her house now.
(really? I wouldn't describe halfway dying as something wrong with him! LOL)
Ok, that was creepy. Lisa's thoughts were spinning. What to do? She slowly went to the guy, checking if he might be only a halucination, but he wasn't. He was full with blood, but when she decided to pull off his shirt in order to look closer, she realised that in fact the blood wasn't even his.
Ok, that was creepy. Lisa's thoughts were spinning. What to do? She slowly went to the guy, checking if he might be only a halucination, but he wasn't. He was full with blood, but when she decided to pull off his shirt in order to look closer, she realised that in fact the blood wasn't even his.
(Haha how cute! XD But nothing even happened yet! lol)
Lisa just looked at him dumbly. When she had recovered from the shock, she managed to say:"That's actually supposed to be my line. Where did all the blood come from?!" The guy looked from her to the shirt and suddenly looked like he was about to faint again. At least he didn't seem to be a cold-blooded killer.
Lisa just looked at him dumbly. When she had recovered from the shock, she managed to say:"That's actually supposed to be my line. Where did all the blood come from?!" The guy looked from her to the shirt and suddenly looked like he was about to faint again. At least he didn't seem to be a cold-blooded killer.
(It would be sad, if you wouldn't even read your own book! At least you wrote part of it XD )
He looked at her, confused. Lisa took a deep breath and said: "Alright. We might have started the wrong way: I'm Lisa Chase. And who are you? Maybe I can help you somehow?" She couldn't possibly let him disappear on her, he might faint again in this heat and he'd probably need some new clothes, too.
He looked at her, confused. Lisa took a deep breath and said: "Alright. We might have started the wrong way: I'm Lisa Chase. And who are you? Maybe I can help you somehow?" She couldn't possibly let him disappear on her, he might faint again in this heat and he'd probably need some new clothes, too.

He looked up at me with a startled expression. After a moment that seemed to take forever to pass, he replied "Tyler." The expression in Tyler's eyes was so vulnerable Lisa couldn't help but feel sorry for the guy.
After an awkward pause Lisa decided to take Tyler inside, where it was a little bit cooler since her parent's just recently had installed an ar conditioner. Her parent's were both workaholics and not taking a single vacation over summer, but at least cared for Lisa's well-being.
Tyler sitting on her favourite couch, it was the most comfy one around here, seemed kind out of place. Lisa just couldn't explain why.
Tyler sitting on her favourite couch, it was the most comfy one around here, seemed kind out of place. Lisa just couldn't explain why.

He stayed silent and looked around the room, as if he was trying to memorize it. Lisa went into the kitchen, grabbed a towel, wet it, and took it to Tyler. She held it out to him. Tyler just looked at her hand like he didn't know what to do, so Lisa started to dab at his arms, trying to wipe away some of the blood that was on him.

(Why did she need so many towels for cleaning the blood up? At first I thought you were going for something like "They were cleaning and cleaning and cleaning, but the blood never came off" XD)
Tyler looked up and caught Lisa staring at him and her cheeks suddenly flushed. She really had to start acting normal, but what was normal in this situation? Lisa decided to confront him directly again, even though it hadn't worked last time either: "So, Tyler, how did this happen?"
But before he could answer, they heard a disturbing noise from upstairs.
Tyler looked up and caught Lisa staring at him and her cheeks suddenly flushed. She really had to start acting normal, but what was normal in this situation? Lisa decided to confront him directly again, even though it hadn't worked last time either: "So, Tyler, how did this happen?"
But before he could answer, they heard a disturbing noise from upstairs.

Lisa almost stopped breathing, when she heard the noise again. It was clearly coming in their direction. She had to force herself to breath slowly to calm her beating heart. What exactly was in her house? And what had she gotten herself into, when she helped Tyler?


Then..........a scraping noise sounded.
Lisa's head whipped up, and she ignored Tyler's alarmed glare as she squeezed past him to stare down the hall.
Lisa realised a breath, she didn't know she was holding. The hall was a mess, but in the middle of it sat her cat. "Luna! What are you doing again?", Lisa said and tried to catch the cat, when she heard the scraping noise again. Directly above her head.


Lisa looked shocked, but managed to run outside. "Are you alright? What was that thing?!" Tyler moaned, but managed to answer: "Just give me a minute and I'll probably be alright again.." Lisa looked at him in disbelief, that had probably been the longest sense-making sentence she ever heard him say!

"After I saw that thing? I'd probably believe you anything.". Lisa said matter of factly. Taylor sighed. "Alright, I'm a werewolf!" Lisa looked at Taylor in utter disbelief, but he ignored her and continued: "I did something bad.. Something REALLY bad. That's why they are hunting me now."
(Alright, it was a hairy creature, so first thing that comes to my mind is a werewolf XD)
(Alright, it was a hairy creature, so first thing that comes to my mind is a werewolf XD)



Lisa sighed. "So what do you expect me to do now? Maybe want to kill me since I already know too much?", she said trying to copy Taylor's sarcasm as best at possible.
Suddenly he looked really seriously at her and added: "if you talk to much, that might be my only option."
Suddenly he looked really seriously at her and added: "if you talk to much, that might be my only option."

He was probably way too fast and strong for her to outrun him. So what was she supposed to do? She started to shiver, even though it was still sunny outside. She was scared. Lisa looked at Tyler, who now seemed to be kind of dangerous, and took a cautious step back before she said:"You really would kill someone, who just saved your life, when you were bleeding to death?"

Lisa was still in shock, being dragged inside by Tylor, but managed to whisper: "I'd still save you.." He only laughed at her though, as if some stupid human would ever be able to overcome her own survival instinct. He didn't like killing people, but he prefered a dead body over a talking witness. Right after he had dragged Lisa inside a small storeroom, the doorbell rang and a male voice shouted:"Lisa, are you there?" Lisa's eyes widened:"That's my neighbour Will.."
Rules:
1. Everyone is allowed to participate. :)
2. Never write more than 5 sentences at a time.
3. Wait for at least 2 people to post, before you write something again. (If only 2 people participate we might change this rule lol)
4. The main theme is "Summer" please stick to this.
5. Try to answer essential questions like "Who is the main character?", "What does he/she like?", "What makes this summer special? Why is it pleasant/unpleasant?" etc.
6. Have fun! :)
For now there is no time limit, but since it's a summer themed story it would be nice to finish it before the end of August. :)
The story starts like this:
The sun was burning brightly, the streets were empty and even the birds had stopped chirping. To make it short: The most boring day ever.