Bisky's Twitterling's Scribbles! discussion

http://www.wattpad.com/story/12010604...

Thriller/Mystery

Detective Ramos is working the late shift when a strange young man walks into the police station. He wants to confess to being a notorious serial killer that they have been working months to catch. The young man only has with him a set of keys, two rings, and a box of crayons. Are these vital clues? evidence of the crimes? or the trinkets of a lunatic? Is he the killer? or some crazy person who thinks he is the killer?

This story isn't as ambiguous as the Liquid Perception one. This is also a writing contest short story. The writing prompt for the contest was "and that was the last time I saw them". I loved the prompt, and started outlining this story the day after I learned of the contest. The story isn't as silly as the title suggests in case you were wondering. :P

That was…one hell of an ending lol Def. fits the writing prompt, very cool! Although, a little dark. Good one ^^

I just got a review from the person who started the contest.

"Wow! This story had me hooked from the very beginning. I loved it so much and had to read it at once-no breaks! I also loved the symbolism behind the crayons and the ending. Awesome."

I cut off the rest because it has spoilers.

@Nicole Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D

Cool!!! that's a nice opening for a review. :) Gotta love reading them. :P

Forgot to post this when it happened, but I won the contest :D

grats! :)

Yay! Congrats!