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General A&A Discussion > Character story line:Journey or flashbacks

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message 1: by T.W. (new)

T.W. Barton | 13 comments When reading a series how do you prefer to learn about the main character?

Take a series like Harry Potter. It starts at his child hood and moves from there.

Then you have a series like Jack Reacher where you get flash backs.

I'm writing an action/thriller and have started from the beginning to show the journey of the character and what made him into the character I want him to be. I worry that readers may be less interested in the journey and more about the action.


message 2: by Jim (new)

Jim (jimmaclachlan) The examples aren't comparable. The first is a coming of age story, the other is an action-thriller from an adult POV. Do you want to write a book of discovery & learning or of action? You can do a bit of both the way Herbert handled Paul in Dune. It's your choice.


message 3: by Feliks (new)

Feliks (dzerzhinsky) 'Dune' is a good example. Otherwise the industry wisdom is always to 'hook' your readers early. And its a pretty strong argument. If you let the reader see that you are deliberately taking them on a detour, it can be very offputting. I once halted reading a very well-written spy novel for just this very reason, it was just too blatant.


message 4: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Literary Adrenaline Junkie (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 5150 comments Mod
I like a combination of devices. Dialogue, flashbacks, reveals. Nothing too predictable.


message 5: by Graeme (new)

Graeme Rodaughan I think flashbacks should be handled very carefully and sparingly. The risk with a flashback is that you break the narrative flow.

Mind you, I do find reading stories which jump around in time to be difficult to follow.


message 6: by Lee (new)

Lee Sherred (leesherredauthor) | 13 comments I tend to start the first chapter as a prologue, normally years in the past where an event that's key to the story, and characters, occurred.


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