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Rowan | 1 comments Shadows on the Wall

There was a time when I was brave
And in the sun I laughed and played
But now I live inside a cave and jump at shadows on the wall.

There was a time when I was kind
And judged a person by his mind
But the truth is faint and hard to find in the shadows on the wall.

There was a time when I was wise
Knew right from wrong, saw through the lies
But now I only hear the cries of the shadows on the wall.

There was a time when I was strong
The nights were short and the days were long
But now I’m stuck inside the song of the shadows on the wall.

There was a time when I was whole
But now I’m cracking, crumbling, cold
My heart is numb, my mind is tolled
My friendship bought, my honor sold
Each shadow an enemy that would see me dead
A haunting nightmare that wakes me in bed
These shadows smirk and tell me I am weak
I try not to listen but still they will speak
Of how they burned my innocence to the ground
And how now my ignorance is all to be found
They shriek in laughter while I shriek in fear
But I won’t let them destroy me

There was a time when I was good
But now I’m scared of all that could
Of all that would, of all that did
The shadows had the highest bid
A flash of light, a puff of smoke
A scream in pain and I was broke
And now I sit inside this cave
Chained by memories I can’t erase
I fly when the shadows tell me to jump
I try to fight back, I kick, scream, and punch
But all that I get are bloody hands
And red stains on the walls while the shadows stand
Then they laugh at my weakness and mockingly say
“You were great in the past but today’s a new day.”

Now I’m no longer brave, kind, or wise
Nor strong or whole, nor good in my eyes
But I’ve still got my blazing, unwavering pride:
The flame that brings these shadows to life.

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Hey guys! This is the first time I've ever posted any of my writing and would love constructive feedback. :)


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