I have been given some great advice from Michael Lewis on how to improve my writing. I have taken everything he has said on board and I am reworking my first novel using his advice and writing techniques. I can't express how much he has helped me, and it's the silly little things that I was doing, which he picked up on straight away. I'm really enjoying working with him on this project. It should be awesome when it's finished.
Thanks again, Michael =)