If you need help or critique on a query, please start a new thread with the name of the book/story if you know it, else just name it Query for (insert your name).
Please only post the synopsis/summary/hook part of the query and limit it to around 300 WC.
Feedback/critique: Please, as always, stay polite. Stick to the point, and be as precise as you can. It's fine to say that you don't like it or that you do, but when possible, state your reasons.
Please only post the synopsis/summary/hook part of the query and limit it to around 300 WC.
Feedback/critique: Please, as always, stay polite. Stick to the point, and be as precise as you can. It's fine to say that you don't like it or that you do, but when possible, state your reasons.
Thank you!