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"A Closed and Common Orbit" Finished Reading *Spoilers*
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The Jane23/Jane/Pepper sections gave me so much feels. So much. And I just wanted to hug and hug her.
I wished for more of Blue and Pepper/Blue's relationship - I felt everything related to Blue was pushed to the side and waved at.

And so love that Pepper gets to raise someone much like the person who raised her. I love how these 'misfits' built a family.

YEs! :-D

I'm very excited for Record of a Spaceborn Few, although I think the pub date just changed from January to June?

Chambers writes really interesting characters, though, so it redeemed itself in some ways for me.
I really just wanted another Firefly-esque adventure. Which leads me back to the book search.


I liked Jane's chapters and the ending enough to make up for it.
Like J.w., I think I might have preferred a continuation of The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet.
Anna wrote: "I'm very excited for Record of a Spaceborn Few, although I think the pub date just changed from January to June?"
Ooh, I hadn't seen that the title was announced.

I'm trying to adopt "stars," ....
I loved it. I loved watching both 'Jane' and Sidra get stronger and figure out how to come into their own. I would have liked some more fleshing out of Blue and of other ideas & characters, and if there had been more of that, maybe the chapters wouldn't have flickered by so fast that I kept having to work to reorient myself (I don't watch tv or movies, so I'm not used to rapid scene changes and event sequences). But most members of the general public, of casual readers, probably appreciate the tight focus and generally fast pace.

I just love the idea that most people, of most species, try to get along, try to be good and helpful, but aren't necessarily heroic, but are still interesting. Watching Jane and Lovelace find their places in the Galaxy was an engaging, heartwarming, *and* fascinating experience.
I also love the bits of philosophy. For example, why do so many people like to read mysteries and thrillers, 'finding bad things happening to people to be entertaining?' Consider (view spoiler) (Of course Chambers says it better.) And why do some people think their culture or race is 'superior?' Consider (view spoiler) (I may not be summing Chambers exactly on that; read the book for yourself.)
Chambers' writing style is also effective. Neither the humor nor tension are forced, but arise naturally. She's mastered the craft of making the text flow so easily & beautifully that this reader didn't even consciously realize the joy of reading along until, oh, gosh, the book is over; I must buy a copy so I can reread it at my leisure.
I'm recommending this one to even more of my friends and family than I did the first.

I was pleasantly surprised by this book. I wasn't a big fan of The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet. But, I was pulled into A Closed and Common Orbit rather quickly.
I did find the Jane segments more interesting and engaging than Sidra sections. However, I liked how the two stories ran in parallel, yet there were that were in contrast: human with AI nurturer vs AI with human nurturer and innocent, yet mature human child vs "adult" AI with childlike innocence.
I was disappointed that this was the winner of the sequel poll, but now I am glad. I really enjoyed it.


Agreed. But they weren't "children" per the Enhanced. They were slaves.

I agree, though I can see the focus was tightly pulled onto Sidra and Pepper. Maybe in a later book in the series?
It does seem like the series will have very disparate themes and styles. Well, based on the two we've seen, anyway!

I miss the scope of the first book, following different people and aliens throughout various situations. While we got some of that here, I just couldn't get quite as into the more focused and contained story. Perhaps because, like others, I started to find the Sidra sections a bit draggy...
It was interesting, though. At first I liked the Sidra sections better, but I eventually shifted my position and sometimes found the Sidra sections to be a distraction from what I felt was the more interesting/poignant story.
By the end I became very invested in the story of recovering Owl - though I wish we'd seen a bit more of Owl once she was rescued because I think it would've been interesting to get some of her adjustment from her perspective.
I also agree that I'd like to see more Blue, though I understand why it focused more on Pepper and Sidra because of the similarities in their stories - but that's exactly why I think the ending would've benefited from seeing some of Owl's adjustment.
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I think my biggest issue, really, is that since it was such a contained story I feel like it could've gone a bit deeper into the philosophy and psychology of the characters than it did. It touched on some great ideas - like how all cultures are aggressive and destructive, but, much like the first book, it would introduce some philosophical ideas and then sort of just let them drop off as the story moved on.
I forgave the first book a bit more for this trend because there was a lot going on and a lot of characters, and because one of the points, I felt, in that first book was that there isn't any right answers.
But this one often felt like it had the same "gloss over" problem with the concepts it would raise, but I found it less forgivable precisely because we were only following the two characters, so it should've had the ability to go a bit deeper into the concepts it was exploring.
Like David said - it opted for technobabble too often in place of actual exploration. I mean, I just didn't feel like it really delved into the concepts of seldom and identity nearly as much as it could've considering the story/ies it was telling.
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I don't really find the two books that dissimilar. Both are about the characters and the cultures and the philosophy more than the plot - though the first does end up having more happen with bigger overarching consequences, ultimately.

Jane's story was more poignant, in some ways, of course, but it also covered ground that resembles ground covered by so many other orphan stories over centuries of novels. Sidra's was, imo, more interesting because it was more novel. And I, personally, thought there was plenty of philosophy and psychology... most of it was subtle and left to the reader to interpret and work out for him/her-self, but some of it was totally in our face, too.


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I think that's definitely part of it. Sidra just didn't read like a realistic portrayal of AI to me. Or, rather, I guess she just seemed too human with AI trappings - it's kind of read like a standard YA coming-of-age/figuring-out-who-you-are thing and I guess I just figured Sidra would be a little more a-typical in her thought processes and that didn't come across, for me.
ETA: one of the things I really liked about the first book was that aliens and alien cultures were alien. In this one I just felt everyone seemed a bit too human with 'other' trappings, including Tak.
Chris wrote: "I agree with those who liked the Jane plot better. My big problem with the Sidra plot was that I just couldn't buy that an AI would be so neurotic. Then all is well after she gets a hug. Owl's pers..."
I think she was so neurotic because of the first few moments of her reboot. She was being judged by the crew for not being Lovely. It established that pathway for thinking. Also, the hug didn't make her nearly as happy as having ancillary pets.
I think she was so neurotic because of the first few moments of her reboot. She was being judged by the crew for not being Lovely. It established that pathway for thinking. Also, the hug didn't make her nearly as happy as having ancillary pets.

I just love the idea that most people, of most species, try to get along, try to be good and helpful, but aren't necessarily heroic, but are still interesting. Watching Jane and ..."
I also really appreciate Chambers' writing style. I love how she matches the narration of the story to the character e.g. using only the limited vocabulary Pepper had as a child. It really pulled me into the story and added humor and life to the characters. I especially appreciate Jane's use of the word "gross" and when she becomes infatuated with swearing as a teen.

ETA: one of the things I really liked about the first book was that aliens and alien cultures were alien. In this one I just felt everyone seemed a bit too human with 'other' trappings, including Tak.
I can see this. Sidra never came across to me as much more than an angsty teenager who tossed tantrums when people didn't understaaaannnnndddd her needs.
And Chambers had a great chance to deal with the idea of creating something that is sentient and has "feelings" but still treated like inanimate objects and/or pets - Sold or thrown away when ready to move on - but she glossed over that, too.

It is also interesting to see how much there really is IN this book. From these discussion thread comments, everyone seems to have taken something slightly different from this book. For me, what was most compelling was Chambers use of AI characters to explore some of our human issues: body-mind dissassociation and concepts of self and purpose. Good stuff and not too heavy-handed or preachy like many other authors get.

I can't wait to dive into this book and see what kind of reactions and discussions it will spark!

Not sure if I should use spoiler tags as this is a Buddy read, or be more open, since we're in a Spoiler thread. I'm finding the "present" timeline story poignant, especially at the start, and am interested to see how things develop. The "past" timeline story is very interesting, shedding light on a different aspect of the universe.

Ch. 1 (view spoiler)
Ch. 2 (view spoiler)
I can't wait to dive back in!

Chapter 2 (view spoiler)
So far this is grabbing me just as quickly as Small Angry Planet did which is fantastic.


And I didn't think of it that way, but you hit the nail on the head when you said that she let's her scenes breathe.

Anyway, this moment in chapter 9 made me laugh:
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I think I will probably always think of that whenever I come home from now on.
I also thought the events of the previous chapter (view spoiler) were very well done.


Overall, at about 1/3 of the way through (view spoiler)

But... (view spoiler) .
The prose and it's flow are indeed relaxing. I was afraid I wouldn't be able to 'endure' the long streams of uninterrupted conversations and their energetic emotional outbursts (amiable and pleasantly casual as they were, also tiring to concentrate on in the long run), but so far the tone seems far less 'perky' from Angry Planet, much more mellow and controlled. While the general compassion, the captivating world building and cultural/societal/existential topics have stayed the same. I like. (Possibly even more than I did the first one).
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Dang. Hard to mark progress with audio that doesn't give chapter brakes. About 30% in: (view spoiler)

Chambers writing has hooked me instantly again. It feels so emotive and real, and so in depth. I so loved how A Long Way was more about the interpersonal relationships and daily lives of the crew - slice of life is always my favourite part of genre fiction, and Chambers did it so well there. I hope it continues with this one!
Only have enough time right now for ch 1.
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Chambers writin..."
:-* So glad you're here and that the first chapter resonated so deeply with you! Thank you for sharing that!
I loved the relationships between the characters in the first book and especially the explorations of found families (and watching Rosemary fall for Sissix), so I'm definitely also hoping for more of those themes in this book.
Ch. 4 and 5 (I'm at 11% now) (view spoiler)

:-* So glad you're here and that the first chapter resonated so deeply with you! Thank you for sharing that!
♡ That first chapter was so good. Short and sweet, but so so so impactful. Laf is reading A Long Way right now, so hopefully he'll be along soon to join us here for this one.
Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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:-* So glad you're here and that the first chapter resonated so deeply with you! Thank you for sharing that!
♡ That first chapter was so good. Short and sweet, but so so so impactfu..."
Yaaay! I hope he catches up!
Ch.2 (view spoiler)
Agreed on chapter 3 and the closing line.