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Rose ♥, Hair black as the night, skin pale as the moon
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Jul 11, 2017 07:51AM

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Um....a few things
I think it might be a good idea to lay your character out in a proper template so we can see whats what, you have everything kinda jumbled together which makes it hard to tell what part of the profile we are reading. Doesn't have to be fancy just do something like
Name: Lillith Hale
Gender: Female
and so on with godly parent, personality, history and whatnot.
As for the werewolf thing I dont think that works in the universe that we have, we don't have werewolves in CHB so that will have to be changed I'm afraid.
I think it might be a good idea to lay your character out in a proper template so we can see whats what, you have everything kinda jumbled together which makes it hard to tell what part of the profile we are reading. Doesn't have to be fancy just do something like
Name: Lillith Hale
Gender: Female
and so on with godly parent, personality, history and whatnot.
As for the werewolf thing I dont think that works in the universe that we have, we don't have werewolves in CHB so that will have to be changed I'm afraid.