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Hi everyone,



The Lost Book of Chaos: How to Divide the World

Just published my first book (self published) under my pen name J.D. Thomas. It's a 650 page epic novel, a mix of science fiction and fantasy.

If anyone wants a copy, I can send as a gift through Mobi, ePub, or a PDF copy. You can leave a comment here with your email so I can send you the copy. Would appreciate reviews, observations, feedback. If you like this book, please buy it on Amazon it's currently on 99cent promo (thanks for those who bought it anyway despite being offered for free).

Here is a description of the book:

In a world where humanity is caught in wars between powers beyond their understanding. A world where science and magic, mythology and truth, angels and gods, and ancient religions and history are one…

The greatest conspiracy in history is that angels continue to live amongst us, sometimes pretending to be gods, sometimes pretending to be humans. They are here, and have been here, since the beginning of time. This is a story of their secret wars. Wars fought in the shadows, and wars fought before our very eyes but hidden in plain sight.

Circa 2000 B.C. After the sky warship—the Tower Ship of Babel—is destroyed, the knowledge to rebuild it is scattered all over the world. These pieces are called the Ten Fragments of the Sephiroth, their location hidden in a book called the Zohar, and no matter what happens these ten pieces must never come together. Because if they do, it will lead us all to the destruction of the world.

Circa 30A.D. It has happened before, and it can happen again. Just as Lucifer destroyed the first heaven in ancient times, now Earth too is in danger. Judas Iscariot, the infamous Betrayer, with the help of the Serpent Dragon of Eden Nacash, must do everything in their power to save the world from self destruction.

But even as the angels battle against each other, and even as humans struggle to survive and rise up with their own power, a greater war rages on. One of such immense scale that even the angels know nothing of it. Battles between two races more powerful than the angels: the High Serpent Prophets, who are the only beings who can stand up against the Slayers, and the Slayers who seek to destroy the True Creator, and in the process destroy them all.

Thanks,

Oliver

copies sent to those who requested,
if anyone else interested send me a message with your email

thanks for all those who rated the book on Goodreads and Amazon, and those who wrote positive reviews

more copies sent! thanks for requesting!

3 more copies sent, anyone else interested just send me your email here or through a message,

thanks for the interest!

Best regards,

Oliver

anyone else interested? just leave your email address here or send me message, thanks!

more copies sent to those who requested, thanks for the interest!

thanks to all those who requested a free copy, and to those who went ahead and bought the book on Amazon anyway! appreciate the support it means everything to an indie author like me.

Warm regards,

Oliver

more copies sent today, anyone else interested send me a message or comment here with your email address,

4 more copies sent, 2 not yet sent as I do not have your email addresses. Please send me a message with your email so I can send there, thanks!

Warm regards,

Oliver

anyone else interested send me a message or comment with your email, thanks!

more copies sent just now, anyone else interested send me a message or comment here with your email address,

the free giveaway is still open, please leave a comment here with your email if anyone else still interested

I could. I'll sent you my email but it may be awhile before I read it.

Hi Iesha, ok I can send to your email :)

several copies sent, anyone else interested leave a comment here with your email. Thanks all for the interest so far, and the feedback.

It is helping me a lot in improving the book. I am back to editing mode again today, some of the initial suggestions were very helpful.