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"So home you'll run from our racing ships, by god,
all as corpses--see, you death-defying Trojans?
Never sated with shattering war cries, are you?
Nor do you lack the other brands of outrage,
all that shame you heaped on me, you rabid dogs!
No fear in your hearts for the quaking rage of Zeus,
the thundering god of host and welcome stranger--
one day he'll raze your lofty city for you.
You Trojans who stole away my wedded wife
and hoards of riches too--for no reason, none--
my queen of the realm who hosted you with kindness.
And now you rampage on among our deep-sea ships,
wild to torch our hulls and kill our heroes--well,
you'll be stopped, somewhere, mad as you are for combat!
Zeus, Father Zeus, They say you excel all others . . .
all men and gods, in wisdom clear and calm--
but all this brutal carnage comes from you.
Look how you favor them, these reckless Trojans,
their fury always in uproar--no one can ever slake
their thirst for blood, for the great leveler, war!
One can achieve his fill of all good things,
even of sleep, even of making love . . .
rapturous song and the beat and sway of dancing.
A man will yearn for his fill of all these joys
before his fill of war. But not these Trojans--
no one can glut their lust for battle!"
So he cried
and staunch Atrides stripped the gear from the corpse
and heaving the bloody bronze to eager comrades
swing to attack again, frontline assault.
(lines 713-741)
There is so much pain, passion and anger evident here and the poetry is wonderful at evoking the changing moods.

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I suspect you have told us which translation you are reading, Sue, but which one is this?

Thx, Sue. Was just too lazy to go searching or to try matching to my copy.

It almost evokes sympathy in me for Menelaus, who I perhaps have always held accountable as a contributor to his wife's susceptibility to Paris.
You Trojans who stole away my wedded wife
and hoards of riches too--for no reason, none--
my queen of the realm who hosted you with kindness.
And now you rampage on among our deep-sea ships,
wild to torch our hulls and kill our heroes--well,
you'll be stopped, somewhere, mad as you are for combat!
But didn't Menelaus help instigate the travels to Troy to wage war?


Don't know for sure, but I believe Agamemnon was older brother and questions of family honor and responsibility were at stake. Not going to go researching, but will watch for information.


When Helen ran off with Paris (thanks to Aphrodite's meddling), Menelaus' older brother, Agamemnon, formed an army and called upon the Greeks to honor their commitment to defend Menelaus.
In some versions of the story, some of the Greeks tried to get out of their promise. Odysseus pretended he was a field worker when the Greeks came looking for him; Achilles was disguised as a young girl. Once their identities were discovered, they all got on their ships and sailed off to Troy. Few of them lived happily ever after.

Zeus had disguised himself as a swan (he was always disguising himself or generating a fog so Hera couldn't see his philandering). He swooped down and raped Leda. Out of their union Helen was born.
Helen's sister, Clytemnestra, married Agamemnon. With her lover's help, she murdered Agamemnon when he came home from Troy because he had sacrificed their daughter, Iphigenia. That's why he is so distrusting of women when Odysseus meets him in the underworld in the Odyssey.
A beautiful poem by W. B. Yeats' captures the rape of Leda. It is one of my favorite poems.
https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/l...


OOPS! Did you really mean the logic implied in that sequence, Sue, i.e., that being a girl was inconsistent with heroism?
Is hiding rather than fighting always not heroic? (My mind jumps back to the deep acrimony of the days of the Vietnam War, when a number of Americans fled rather than engage in what they considered an unjust war. I still carry that with con and pro feelings.)
Here is one description from a story of Achilles:
"The core myth of Achilles on Skyros as presented in ancient sources was thus. Rather than allow her son Achilles to die at Troy as prophesied, the nymph Thetis sent him to live at the court of Lycomedes, king of Skyros, disguised as another daughter of the king or as a lady-in-waiting, under the name Pyrrha "the red-haired", Issa, or Kerkysera. There Achilles had an affair with Deidamia, one of the daughters of Lycomedes, and they had one or two sons, Neoptolemus and Oneiros.. Since another prophecy suggested that the Trojan War would not be won without Achilles, Odysseus and several other Achaean leaders went to Skyros to find him. Odysseus discovered Achilles by offering gifts, adornments and musical instruments as well as weapons, to the king's daughters, and then having his companions imitate the noises of an enemy's attack on the island (most notably, making a blast of a trumpet heard), which prompted Achilles to reveal himself by picking a weapon to fight back, and together they departed for the Trojan War. In some versions, Deidamia dressed as a man followed him."
"Not existing in Homer's epic poem Iliad, the episode is written down in detail in some later versions of the story, particularly the Achilleid by the Roman poet Statius." From Wikipedia, Achilles on Skyros.
Achilles is such a story of a mother attempting to keep her son alive. Thetis seems to have been ferocious. Besides dipping Achilles in the River Styx by the heel to protect him, there is another story of her attempting to "fire-proof" her children, unfortunately killing them in the process until another goddess intervened.

And I definitely agree that not fighting can be the heroic choice. I was in college as the VietNam War peaked in the late 60s and the question of leaving the country, becoming a conscientious objector, etc were discussed constantly though they were publicly derided.

Often I am simply so struck with the poetry that I want to comment.
Sue, I think it's great you are commenting -- sharing reactions and insights is exactly what the discussion forum is for! And none of us know all the back stories -- commenting opens up discussion and often leads to members sharing what they know, which helps everyone.

I am really loving all the new details I am picking up that I likely never knew!

I thought you reacted marvelously to my rather abrupt reaction to your comments, Sue. I love it when discussions here go deeper than the surface; in fact, anyone who knows me has some sense of the too many hours I spend trying to help (provoke?) that to happen. Once in awhile (maybe more often than I know?), I goof. I hoped that my "OOPs" would signal that it hadn't come across to me that you fundamentally were in sync with what I read in your words, which was really what I was asking behind my response. Your response confirmed my guess, but you might have taken an entirely different tact and laid into me. It has happened -- and I've had to deal.
And, yes, here we are pretty much restricted to words and emoticons. But we do also sometimes "get to know" each other a bit, too. Thank you for being here and engaging in that, Sue. Kris says it well @17.
You, and others, may find this article about Lauren Collins and her memoir When in French: Love in a Second Language at least tangentially relevant to our discussions here about words, translations, meaning, and even identity. https://www.vogue.com/article/when-in...
I learned about Lauren Collins in her January 1, 2018, interview of Leïla Slimani in The New Yorker. I am not familiar with any of Collins' other work, like "Degrassi: The Next Generation" (2001), "Kroll Show" (2013) and "Take the Lead" (2006).
