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Iesha (In east shade house at...) (emberblue) | 150 comments Hopefully no one has asked this yet

How do you all deal with changing scenes in your story or novel? Do you just leave a space and start with a new scene or do you go by days[ in which you end one day and start the next]? How do you show when a scene has changed within a chapter?


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Lura (luraj2612) | 113 comments I usually just leave a blank line between sections. Or I'll do a *** in between sections/scenes. Depends on what I'm working on, but don't ask me why I sometimes use one and not the other because I have no idea.


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Alice (alice20) Try this: http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/16/...

It really doesn't matter how long the gap between scenes is. Their difference could be hours, days, weeks, years, etc., as long as you transition them well
To show when a scene has changed, authors sometimes have a blank space in between them (like Lura said). But you could also just write a short, simple sentence at the beginning of a new paragraph if you feel there is no need to completely cut off the previous scene.


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Holli True (hollitrue) | 5 comments I leave a blank line for print and three dots (centered) between scenes for ePub, etc. I typically write three shorter scenes (various timeframes) in a chapter or one long scene. I hope that helps!


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