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Hello everyone! Over the summer I drafted a short paranormal mystery novel. I recently had someone look it over and have implemented her critiques. If someone else wouldn't mind looking it over one more time before I finalize the manuscript that would be much appreciated!

If anyone is interested, please shoot me a message :)

What's it about?

Iesha (In east shade house at...) wrote: "What's it about?"

It is from the perspective of a mother who moves her family into her late father's vacation home in Fall River to find that the history of the house has inspired paranormal activity.