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Kinda feel like it's just lazily blurting out backstory about his father.




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Did anyone els..."
Raises hand in agreement.
I'm not enjoying this book so far. The plot, characters, and writing really isn't my cup of tea. I made a (slightly salty) review of the first six chapters if you want to know my thoughts. Didn't post it here because it's really long. I'm going to keep reading for the hope that it get's better but usually this doesn't work in my favor.


I'm not sure I'd say I hate her. But because of the stuff mentioned above, it's hard not to see her as primarily a prop.
At the risk of sounding like I'm just wallowing in negativity, does anyone else find the narration uses too many filter words for their tastes? Things like, "I see him coming down the corridor" rather than "He comes down the corridor".
That may just be a pet peeve of mine though.
I find the narrative itself compelling enough. I do want to read on to see what happens next.

I feel like she wasn't around long enough for me to feel anyway about her really

I feel like she wasn't around long enough for me to feel anyway about her really"
I just found her to be very mary-sue. The husband and everyone are absolutely enamored with her and it's stated multiple times by the MC how literally everyone loves her. When she sacrifices herself, because she thinks her husband has some grand destiny (gotta love the chosen one cliches) he just gives up completely and her sacrifice (so far) is in vain. I don't hate her character but she was around long enough to just frustrate me to no end. Hopefully now that she's gone the MC, after he somehow comes back to life because of plot reasons, will be motivated to actually do something with his wife's sacrifice. Now that, I'm excited to see.


It was absolutely manipulative but I feel like that's how all books with a "the cause" organization depict their "soldiers". There are always the revolutionaries that must prove to the reader how important the rebellion is to them by going to any length to see it succeed. I honestly didn't feel anyway about her because I felt like you only get a small depiction of her based on everyone else fawning over everything she does and then it's like boom she's dead

Ah, true, maybe I should wait to see how people feel later lol, because this book is very "Butterfly Effect" with some things and some actions are so far reaching and will keep having consequences pop up. I'm curious to see how you'll feel about everything later.
She totally did fit into that "revolutionary die for the cause" trope, but this was one of the things that I didn't like about this story, I feel like it was... not necessarily far fetched, but it came off as her looking for a sword to throw herself on and the reasoning behind her specific er... "sacrifice" could have come across as "that's a beautiful reason to stand your ground and fight" but I would have preferred to see it over a more substantial issue, for instance getting caught smuggling medicine or stealing food or something.

I agree. I feel like it was just kind of abrupt. Like there really wasn't enough build up to her martyrdom. Also, I didn't understand why she called his dad weak, that was just rude. And can someone please explain to me how they could possibly manage to keep hair wedding rings intact with all the manual labor they do?

YES! It was very abrupt. Maybe I wouldn't dislike her so much if I got to see more of her being a wife and not this rebel manipulator. I never thought about the rings, tbh, I glazed right over it. I would have assumed the suits would keep the safe, but would only apply for Darrow and the other divers, and even then, you're right, that's a biiiiig stretch

And sure, in a scrolling beat 'em up arcade game from that era, a two-second death at the beginning was an understandable plot device. But it seems bad that male novelists are using female characters that way decades later.


It just seemed like such a forced piece of dialogue, rather than something anyone would actually say. Especially because it's already established that Darrow's a somewhat cocky guy with an ego (at least where his work's concerned).
I could totally accept him buying into the propaganda that their terrible lot in life is necessary for the good of humanity. But having him explicitly talk about how it's better to live on their knees?

It just ..."
Oh my god! I completely forgot about that line! I remember laughing so much during that scene in the garden because Eo and Darrow's dialogue was so eye rolling.

It just ..."
I agree I felt like that line of dialogue didn't fit in with the personality type they were giving him. I just can't see someone who is willing to almost have his flesh melted off to win better rations saying he would rather live on his knees.



Ah, the Antigone thing's interesting. I wrote one of my undergrad dissertations on that play. In particular, about whether Antigone would've been regarded as a face or a heel (I actually introduced those pro-wrestling terms within the essay, because I was an awesome and serious scholar).
There's some debate over whether the ancient Athenian audience would've sympathised more with her or with Creon (the ruler she defies). It's possible they would've disliked her, in much the same way a lot of us dislike Eo.


I agree. Darrow is not memorable. Characters are not this story's strong suite, at least not so far, and I'm up to chapter 30. However, the plot is very entertaining and will have you continuing to turn pages.


I think you can really tell that this is a first novel from these chapters. I look forward to seeing his writing get better as we go along.

I would definitely say that both the characters and the author mature as the books go on - the writing in book four is by far the best, and he's (Pierce) talked about how his whole mindset was totally different when he started. He's a very young author - I think he was in his early twenties when he wrote RR....

