I will agree, it's not the best I've ever read. The main point I hated was all the fragments. She tried to make it seem young-adultish. By making the sentences short. And fragmented. And then you had...
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Although I really like one and two, three and four did not cut it for me. Three was just so unrealistic in concept and four seemed like a set-up for the inevitable.
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(Mockery should be evident here.)
Although I really like one and two, three and four did not cut it for me. Three was just so unrealistic in concept and four seemed like a set-up for the inevitable.