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I really really want you to continue this!!!!! Please????????
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I am trying to think of something for chapter 2. I just can't think of anything quite yet. If any of you have suggestions for it that would be great! :)
*******CHAPTER 2*******
-LIZ-
"Don't worry about Rikki, she is just jealous." Kiki said trying to cheer me up. " Jealous of what the fact that I have two friends and she fifty million. Not that I don't love you guys."I said irritated. " Okay, maybe she has more friends, a boyfriend, and her family is the richest people in all of Georgia, but you are way smarter, have better friends,even if there are only two of us, and a family who doesn't try to buy your happiness." Man I hate it when she's right. BLRINGGGGGG!!! "Come On guys lets get out of here." Mary said.
Now let me explain something about me. I grew up in Tybee Island, GA. When I was about 3 my family moved to Athens. I have red hair and silver eyes. My family Isn't the richest. In fact, we are pretty poor. Ok, now that that is out of the way, let's continue.
"Hi Mom! I'm home!" I said as Mary, Kiki, & I came through the door. "Hey Sweetie. How was school." "It was school." Before she could say anything else we darted up the stairs and into my bedroom. Kiki plopped down on my bed and turn on here iPod. She always played the same song. Me and Mary were getting sick of it. " We should start our homework." I said after about a minute of nothing but the music coming from Kiki's iPod. So we pulled out our homework assignment and got to it. In less than two minutes my phone buzzed. It was a text from Rikki.
-LIZ-
"Don't worry about Rikki, she is just jealous." Kiki said trying to cheer me up. " Jealous of what the fact that I have two friends and she fifty million. Not that I don't love you guys."I said irritated. " Okay, maybe she has more friends, a boyfriend, and her family is the richest people in all of Georgia, but you are way smarter, have better friends,even if there are only two of us, and a family who doesn't try to buy your happiness." Man I hate it when she's right. BLRINGGGGGG!!! "Come On guys lets get out of here." Mary said.
Now let me explain something about me. I grew up in Tybee Island, GA. When I was about 3 my family moved to Athens. I have red hair and silver eyes. My family Isn't the richest. In fact, we are pretty poor. Ok, now that that is out of the way, let's continue.
"Hi Mom! I'm home!" I said as Mary, Kiki, & I came through the door. "Hey Sweetie. How was school." "It was school." Before she could say anything else we darted up the stairs and into my bedroom. Kiki plopped down on my bed and turn on here iPod. She always played the same song. Me and Mary were getting sick of it. " We should start our homework." I said after about a minute of nothing but the music coming from Kiki's iPod. So we pulled out our homework assignment and got to it. In less than two minutes my phone buzzed. It was a text from Rikki.
**********CHAPTER 3************
-RIKKI-
My name is Rikki Elaine Parr and this is going to be the best day of my life. "Rikki! Stop writing in your diary and let's go! We are going to be late!" Don't worry about her that is just my sister Evelyn. "Hold your horses! I'm coming!" The car ride to school kept getting more and more uncomfortable. My mom wouldn't stop talking about my ex best friend Liz Green. She is a complete loser. She could use some fashion help too.
"Welcome to homeroom! Where you are sitting will be your permanent seats, so get comfortable." My teacher yelled as soon as the bell rang. I have world history first period. My teacher started rambling about Napoleon or something like that. I wasn't listening. I was busy staring at my boyfriend. Unfortunately right as I started to pass him a note, Liz walked straight into my desk. Causing me to drop the note right in front of Mr.Ross. He picked it up and read to the entire class. It was so embarrassing!
-RIKKI-
My name is Rikki Elaine Parr and this is going to be the best day of my life. "Rikki! Stop writing in your diary and let's go! We are going to be late!" Don't worry about her that is just my sister Evelyn. "Hold your horses! I'm coming!" The car ride to school kept getting more and more uncomfortable. My mom wouldn't stop talking about my ex best friend Liz Green. She is a complete loser. She could use some fashion help too.
"Welcome to homeroom! Where you are sitting will be your permanent seats, so get comfortable." My teacher yelled as soon as the bell rang. I have world history first period. My teacher started rambling about Napoleon or something like that. I wasn't listening. I was busy staring at my boyfriend. Unfortunately right as I started to pass him a note, Liz walked straight into my desk. Causing me to drop the note right in front of Mr.Ross. He picked it up and read to the entire class. It was so embarrassing!
I'm glad I am too. I had writer's block for a while.
They aren't like real chapters they are more like small parts.
I'm really sorry I didn't get to co-write with you! This is really good so far, though!
I have writer's block. so sorry I haven't been posting.
-LIZ-
Blring! That is it my life is officially over. Going back to school means going back to tests, homework, assignments, and worst of all seeing the Major Details again. Who are the Major Details you might ask they just happen to be the popular group at school oh and did I mention they hate me. As I walked into class I just happened to bump into Rikki Evans' ( the leader of the Major Details) desk. She sat straight up, looked over at me and totally freaked out. After class got I went to my locker. As I was getting my books my two best friends strolled up to me. Kiki immediately freaked because I hadn't grown all summer and Mary asked me what I did all summer. Now Kiki and Mary are polar opposites. Kiki has blonde bouncy hair and a bright personality. Where as Mary is a goth that has black hair with jade streaks. We of course talked for a while until Rikki and her minions arrived. " So Liz I see you haven't changed a bit. Does mommy still pick out your clothes." she said as she walked on by. " Man I wish someone would teach her lesson." I said as my fists clenched. " She wouldn't survive a day being like us. If we could switch places trust me I would so take her up on the offer."