LitRPG Forum discussion

Hi folks!

Completely forgot to post it here, but I wanted to see if anyone was interested on providing some feedback on the first book in our upcoming portal fantasy/crafting LitRPG - Darkness Named!

This book has a queer cis woman as the protagonist, who is disabled and a woman of color. If these things don't interest you, please feel free to pass!

The system is inspired by survival crafting games like Don't Starve and 7 Days to Die, but also by augmented reality mobile games like Pokemon Go. It is a portal fantasy, and the creature design and worldbuilding takes a lot of inspiration from the Pacific Northwest.

We are looking for feedback on the game system, the character and plot, and anything else that isn't grammar because that'll (hopefully) be caught in the final pass. There is a bit of a short turn around (looking for feedback by next Sunday, June 23rd) so we can keep everything rolling towards an August release date.

If you are interested, please feel free to comment on this post, or message us privately with your Discord handle, or email address - and be sure to tell us what format you'd like. We look forward to hearing your feedback!

Thanks a bunch,
Robert and Kristen of Riley S. Keene

Sounds like just the thing. PM me, and I'll give you an email address, and I can have it back in a day or two after I get it. Epub would be best, but I can handle just about any format you can generate.

Interested (love LitRPG/GameLit), sounds like a different take, which is not a bad thing @ all.

Would be interested, shouldn't take but a day or so to read, unless it is one of those 600+ page behemoths, if so 2 to 4 days to read (at max).

.mobi or .epub works.

Ah i'm sorry i just saw this. Good luck with your book.